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Part 8

Today he come home early, his doubts not cleared yet... He don't know why she troubling him, now she is not part of his life... so why now?

Which part disturbing him...? He also not understands.

He never seen geet face ... How much he try to see her, but destiny don't give chance... he sees some childhood pics in family photo album, then some pictures shown by daadi & mom of her teenage group...

He remembered how he goes Hoshiyarpur early only to meet her, and she goes to Amritsar temple ... And At night both meet, talks each other, but at exact time light gone...

Next day, he again tries but her again unavailable to meet with him...

.

Geet : maan

Am sorry

Wo aap so rhe the

Aapko uthana mujhe thik nhi laga

Isliye bina bitaye Delhi chli gyi

Important tha jaana

Mujhe form deposit krna tha

Aur kuch notes pe discuss krne the professor ke sath

Maan : ye sb baad mein bhi ho sakta tha

Mujhe kh deti

Mein kissi se bhi form deposit krwa deta

Geet : maan

Sirf itni baat nhi hai

Wo mujhe nandu se bhi milna tha

Maan : ye nandu kaun hai

Geet : my friend

Senior hai par

Bhut acha hai

Wo fir 1 year ke liye bahar jaa raha tha

Fir na jaane kb baat hoti humari

Wo waha busy ho jaata

Aur mein yaha

Wo jaane se phle milna chahta tha

Aur mein bhi

Isliye chli gyi

Maan : tumhe sbse milna hai

Siway mujhe chodke

Mein Delhi se yaha aaya

Aur tum waha chli gyi

Great

Geet : aapne mujhe batana chaiye tha

Ab maine toh apna pura schedule bna rakha tha

Maan : ha byi

Kaam toh sirf tumhe hai

Hum toh velle hai na

Geet : mera wo matlab nhi tha

Aap galat smjh rhe ho

Maan : geet mujhe is baare mein ab koi baat nhi krni

Geet : bs last baat

Mein kal karan bhai ke sath aa jaayungi

He cut the call...

**********

I love you Alia

I love you a lot

She closed her ears...

Geet : Maan aap mere pati hai

Aapke pyaar pe sirf mera haq hai

Kissi aur ka nhi

.

.

Her phone buzzed...

Geet : hello dad

Dad : aaj tum bhut khush lag rhi ho

Geet : dad iska credit bs aapko jaata hai

Aap meri help nhi krte

Toh mein kbhi itni himmat nhi kr paati

Thanks Dad

Dad : beta Maa baap bs apne bacho ko khush dekhna chahte hai

Aur mujhe bhut khushi hongi

Tum dono firse sath honge

Mujhe toh bs us din ka intzaar hai

Jb tum is ghar mein bahu bnke aayungi

Geet : hmm

Dad : chl ab so jaa

Kaam ke mamle mein tera boss bhut strict hai

Geet : good night dad.

************

Both stands near window and seeing moon...

He talking with someone & felt from far someone seeing him, he sees in this direction & sees someone hiding behind curtains...

He goes in same direction & sees now no one is here...

.

.

He turns to go, suddenly someone tied blindfold on his eyes...

Maan held her hands...

Maan : tum kaun ho

Let me guess

.

Sheila

Right na

Itne mulayam hath ussi ke hai

Geet : acha

Ek din yaha nhi thi

Kitni ladkiyo ke hath pakde aapne

Maan :pakdna toh tumhara tha

Par tumhe idher udhar gumne se fursat ho toh tb na

Geet : acha thik hai

She removed his hand & said "mein jaa rhi hu... Raho us Sheila ke sath"

Before she left, he held her wrist...

Maan : tum yaha mujhse ye khehne aayi thi

Aur ye blindfold kyun

Geet : utar do isse

Ab mujhe aapse koi baat nhi krni

Before both talk more rajji come & geet left...

.

.

Kitne pyaar se sjaya tha maine wo room

Jaha humare bachpan ke sath ki har ek yaad thi

Mujhe ek baar bhi manane ki koshish nhi ki

Aur dobara pucha tak nhi

.

.

Room is really so beautiful... thanks to rajji... jiki wajh se kitni yaadein taaza ho gyi

Kash humare parents ye shaadi beech mein na late

Toh aaj bhi hum sayad dost hote

*********

Geet beta tu ab tak soyi nhi

Geet : massi wo neend nhi aa rhi thi

Isliye socha kyun na chand ko dekh li

Kitni shalinta hai isme

Massi come near to her & caressed on her hair...

Massi : geet beta

Itni der tk jagna tumahri health ke liye thik nhi hai

Aur doctor ne tumhe itni der khade rhehne ke liye mna kiya hai na

Firse back mein pain ho jaayenga

Chlo rest kro

Geet : massi aap tension na lo

Mein bilkul thik hu

**********

note :- i hope now ur some question solved... why maan not recognize geet


see this updates too

MG FF- Mohabbat...ki adhuri Kahani - part 5 on page 71

Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
me first agai
so dad is help her
love geet fighting spirit
waiting for next
Edited by fariya20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part...
so maan father is helping geet...and want them togather...
geet maan se abhi bhi itna payar karti hai?itna sb hone ke bad bhi?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update👏⭐️loved it😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
it's really great part. maan is remembering geet and geet wants maan back in her life. she can's assume any one with him. both are lost in their past. both are separated but something is there which is not allowing them to be separated. waiting for next dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: icskwt

awesome part...

so maan father is helping geet...and want them togather...
geet maan se abhi bhi itna payar karti hai?itna sb hone ke bad bhi?


thanks dear

how she forget him... itne saal jo diye hai is rishte ko
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jayshu17

Superb update👏⭐️loved it😳


thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nishamna

it's really great part. maan is remembering geet and geet wants maan back in her life. she can's assume any one with him. both are lost in their past. both are separated but something is there which is not allowing them to be separated. waiting for next dear


thanks dear

vivaah ka bandhan hai dear adhura hi shi

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update but who is alia kya maan ush se pyar karta hai maan father help geet to come in khurana contruction lovely update

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