INNOCENT FLOWER-UPDATED PT 18 PG 116 ON 18-03-2019 - Page 58

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I think its kind of discontinued now



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Originally posted by: suhaaana

I think its kind of discontinued now




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Excuse me did u vanish again😲

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RECAP

Geet :, what he is doing here papaji KO pata chala toh..

Kritika : you come with me .. No first meet rudra , karan and maan..

Geet : I know him...she said seeing maan and then at the other two.. She smiled sweetly at rudra and greeted him even apologize for her behavior but gave a glare to karan and he even returned the same..

Rudra made a face ..

Rudra : who is the kid here..

Maan whispered

Maan : I think both...

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PART 11

Present

Rudra was shocked hearing Maan's words.Maan never complimented a girl with any type of words but he was calling Geet as kid which made him suspicious.He gave Maan a curious look raising his eyebrows and Maan got conscious.

He cleared his throat and said,"Why r u staring me like that?"

Rudra said simply still staring at him,"Thinking!"

Maan asked,"What?"

Rudra answered,"That how did sun rose west instead of east?"

Maan asked puzzled,"What do u mean?"

Rudra answered,"That how come you are complimenting Geet as a kid,when u always ran far from girls!"

Maan glared with so much intensity that Rudra chuckled and walked away with attitude.

Maan remembered the incident when Karan was quarreling with Geet then Maan had observed her.She was pouting her lips just like a small kid and this made him chuckle softly and when Kritika introduced Geet to him second time then her eyes had turned towards him saying she knows him.From that moment he felt that he knows her from ages.Those intense brown orbs twinkled at him cutely and it made him hard immediately.He felt that and groaned softly and tried to forget that deep brown eyes but he was also aware that till the Manali trip these deep brown eyes gonna haunt him entirely.Rudra tapped him and shouted his name for the trance broke.When he opened his eyes then Rudra saw something which made his mouth hanging open.At the moment,Maan had shown his true feelings.

Rudra asked,"Maan?"

Maan turned immediately and cleared his throat and asked,"Yes Rudra!"

Rudra asked,"What are you doing here?I was calling you from quite time but you weren't answering me!"

Maan ruffled his hairs making it messy and said,"Nothing Rudra,am hungry,let's have breakfast!"

Maan walked faster towards the dining table followed by Rudra who was smirking to himself.Karan noticed this and raised his eyebrows.Rudra nodded telling him that he will tell him afterwards.Handas,Khurana,Singhania,Kundra,Arohi,Pinky had their breakfast.

Rudra asked,"Maan,let's go skiing!"

While Geet answered there,"U go Meera,am not interested!"

Rudra and Meera were concerned and both glared at their fellows.Rudra wanted Maan to be better so he was trying but Maan was stubborn.

Rudra said defeatedly,"Ok,your wish!"

He thought if Maan will be alone then he can solve some problem for he's mourning so much.

Maan looked at him suspiciously and thought,"Rudra never accepts defeat like this!"

Rudra walked towards Meera who was equally disappointed with Geet and was leaving her alone too.Rudra,Meera,Karan,Kritika,Pinky went to sight seeing while Maaneet were left alone in the guest house.After one hour both Maaneet got bored and came outside their rooms.Their rooms were situated opposite side of the guest house.Geet who wrapped her shawl walked towards the Apple orchard and was happy looking at so many Apples dangling from the trees.She wanted to taste it so she went to an Apple tree and tried to get Apple dangling above her but she couldn't.She jumped but it dint reach her.She pouted looking at the Red Apple.

Before she walk away she heard a voice,"May i help you?"

She turned to get that deep chocolate orbs looking at her intently.She blushed cutely looking at him and nodded slowly.Maan smiled and unbottoned his shirt.Geet was shocked and she remembered Varun like that and walked backwards banging her back to the tree feeling scared.Maan came forward and kept his face in front of her face and looked into those deep brown orbs deeply.

He thought,"She's scared of something!"

Geet's eyes welled up and looked at Maan so scared and for a moment Maan's heart cried seeing her so scared.The pain he felt was unimmaginable.He breathed on her face feeling hungry and immediately started to climb the tree just like a Panther.Geet who turned at his movement saw him plucking Apples and throwing downwards to the baskets.She saw him shirtless doing work and she forgot what she felt few seconds back and looked at him with mouth hanging open.She was wondering that few seconds back she was scared but now she's feeling aroused.

Maan came down holding a last Apple for himself and said,"Sorry,i scared you!"

And then he smirked with his charming smile and said,"But i was enjoying looking at your scary face!"

Anger bled in her veins and she slapped him strongly that his lips bled.Maan dint flinch but he dint get angry too.He was so shocked at his deed.His words brought him shocked

Geet said angrily pointing her finger towards him,"Don't come near me!"

Geet picked the basketful of Apples and ran inside the guest house.Maan saw her retreating back perplexed.He bit a bite of Apple looking confused of his behaviour.Here Kritika and Karan once again quarreled for some random girl and Rudra,Meera and Pinky got irritated.

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Here in guest house,both Maaneet were shocked with their behaviour.

Maan's thoughts...

Maan was excercising aggressively remembering her scared.He thought,"Yes,she's stranger to me.Yes,she don't know anything about me.Me too know nothing about her yet why i crossed my limits.May be she thought me some kind of sadist who want to be with lone girls to take advantage.What i have done?I need to talk to her to clear some doubts.I dont even know her.I only know that she's daughter of Mohinder uncle.Damn what have i done!"

Geet's thoughts...

Geet was sitting near the window and was writing a letter to god...

Dear God,

Why i slapped him?To cover up my mistake of drooling him.I know i have broken heart.I can't move on so easily.I have took a promise for myself am not gonna love anyone.Am gonna marry that man who papa gonna select for me.But today i was drooling over him shamelessly and slapped for the mistake he never did!Please god help me in this.Let me move on and forget the incident.Why you trust me when i have behaved like a mistrust person.Sorry god!...Maan!...

Precap-Teaser

Next part gonna come very soon.


Edited by maangeet9387 - 9 years ago
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Yup,i hv posted the links in your gp also it needs admins permission😊
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Originally posted by: maangeet9387



Yup,i hv posted the links in your gp also it needs admins permission😊

OK di
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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wow itne longgg time k baad update 😃
suprb update...
maaneet ko chod k sab sight seeing k liye chale gaye...hmmm tho rudra ko thoda doubt ho th h...maan ne geet ki help ki apple thodne me...maan ko shirtless dekh k geet phle darr gai thi...
oopppsss geet ne maan ko slap kiya...maan n geet dono apne behavior se shocked h ...geet again godji ko letter likh rhi h...
eagerly waiting for nxt update... ab ki baar gayab mat hona

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