THE LOCKET (13) MG FF,new thread link pg 1,COMPLETED - Page 14

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

yaha post kar de Priya... mujhe dekhni hai..😃




Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update.
Geet and samaj seva. Helping people with phata kapda, lol. Very funny.😆

Manish____a. Was fun. Seva at midnight, god. Maan royally screwed.😆

The current track is fine, please tell your story and please no trimming.

Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update dear :)

superb :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
love the update sooo much
omggg love the way geet told sasha that her dress is torn😆😆😆😆
I really hope maan ne yeh suna ho then he will knw that us ki geet abhi bhi nahin badli

like the way tara made wear dress and then the pin😆😆😳😳😳
heyyy yeh pin to bana hi maan se attkne ke liye naa😆😆😆 and pin did it's work
poor maan trying his best to control himself but kya karien phir bhi geet ke charm se nahin bach paa raha😉😉😉😉😉
ufff he is thinking that she has her jadu on everybody in his house😆😆😆
ab kaise bachega poor maan😳😳😳😳 geet ke jadu se


but me little bit scared the way he said she has to face now msk😕😕

omg omggg manishaaa is here 😆😆😆😆 and him saying he can come even in midnight😳😳😳😳 totally lattoo wala dialogue

or how can i forget the way geet put kaala teeka on him😉😉 and he did not noticed her concern😉😉

kitna confusion ki wajah se suffer kar raha hain maan

pls update next part soon
or haan pls continue with the pace as u want it sooo that we can enjoy the story in full way how do u want to write it
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow superb update dear
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
I CANT TELL U HOW MUCH I LOVED THE UPDATE. THE BEST PART IS OBVIOUSLY THE KALA TIKA PART AS I MENTIONED EARLIER.ISS UPDATE KI BAAD MUJHE BHI APNI VOCABULARY THODI UPGRADE KARNI PADEGI.DOLT KE MEANING JAAN NE KELIYE GOOGLE KARNA PADA.AUR MAAN KE LIYE MAIN KIYA BOLUN? GEET KO SATANE CHALE HAIN BUT KHUDKO NEHI PATA KI MANISHA USKI WATT LAGA DEGI. WAITING FOR KHAROOOS MSK.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Geet is really so so innocent
loved her talks with Sasha
Dolt 😆😆😆😆
and her samaj seva
amazing geet
angry Msk
ufff
pls go ahead the way u have planned
would love to see angry msk and innocent geet
but what I would love the most
is when this angry msk will realise his misunderstandings
then how loveful he will become
it will be much more interesting then when these silent lovers will reunite.
loved geet's transformation from a college girl to a businesswoman
geet and daadima's talk were really very professional
loved it
haaiye ab maan ka kya hoga
geet working with him
and his misunderstanding and geet's innocence
so eager for the next part
why do u want to wrap this story in 10 updates??????????????
😕
Edited by maanland - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 56
excellent...
awesome part dear...
sigh cant believe this is Maan...
grrr gadha...
but Geet baby is still the innocent darling...
wow what a change in her attire...
hmmm no wonder Maan is reacting in 2 ways, anger and amazed...
oh ho Sasha has crush on Maan?
and that was so rude of her to talk like that to Geet...
no wonder Tara doesnt like her that well...
thought Sasha will be like the Devu Devu u are my favu, Sasha tamasha and Sasha patasha but yahan tho Maan ki crush nikli...
Naina is so amazed knowing Geet's humility when she heard she does everything for the business and also KM but Sasha is treating her like this...
and Geet haye her innocence is the charming thing here...
she was wondering what does dolt mean...
and Maan was quiet?
idiot...
and what a scene that was...
both on the floor in each others' arms...
Geet's concern about Sasha's dress was absolutely funny...
hahaha Manish-a...
excellent...
Maan should be tormented by Manish-a for all the actions and words he has done and planning to do with Geet and Nakul...
mazaa aayega...
he deserves this...
cont soon dear...

edit
just 10 more parts?
arey Maan just came now and idiot is in the biggest and stupidest misunderstanding...
for all the things he did and doing after coming to KM with Geet and Nakul i wanna enjoy his torment with Manish-a...
and so go with ur plan dear...
Edited by spvd - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lov de updtt ,,,vil cmnt latr,,,,thx 4 updating,,,,😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great and awesome update👏👏
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊

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