THE LOCKET (13) MG FF,new thread link pg 1,COMPLETED - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Zeal-DD

Maan trying to control himself around Geet for Dev's Sake 😆 someone tell this budhu Dusht that She is not Dev's but His ❤️ awww that Kajal part was cutest n amazing... Geet-Sasha Convo was 😆 they both were arguing infront of Maan 😲 seriously both gals lost it ... They gonna work together ❤️ Manish-A agar adhi raat ko 🤣 that was 😆
Loved it amazing pary

Abhi Dusht in training hai...😆
Thanks so much for the comment. It makes me happy when people are enjoying my writing.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anjalisen85

awesome👏👏




maaneet moments r nice😉




maan is surprised to see geet in new awatwr😉




update soon

Thanks Anjali😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazyangel23

you updated :)

it was nice to see geet so excited and cute dress, although if she actually wore that to the office I don't think anyone wud be able to concentrate on their work. and dear geet trying to send a silent msg to maan through the dress.
I totally sympathize with sasha cz im sure all the females on this forum feel the same about maan. he really is an absolute hunk. 😳 and bechara maan, jitni bi koshish karle geet ko avoid nhi kar sakta.
geets actions in this update made me laugh especially: "He looks so handsome close up that I reach under my eyelids and take some kajal in my fingers and apply it to the back of his ears. Haiyee! Kissi ki nazaar na lage!". I can totally imagine her doing this. and then "Sasha, don't mind huh, but your skirt is torn. See even your underwear is showing",😆 I laughed so loudly while reading this that my brother thought I had gone crazy. hamari pyari masoom bambi, thinking to suggest a new fashion store to sasha and getting her a discount. geet jaisa koi nhi ho sakta.
and then manisha entry. he got such a great view. so unfair. bechara maan, cant avoid getting ogled at by females and now males too😊
very well written.⭐️

Hopefully much more to come in this Maan turning Dusht😃 I will try to keep it fun.
Thank you so much for the continued support.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jannat94

amazing update
I love ur writing
U write so perfect... I toh flat on ur skill... Keep going
Waiting 4 ur next part
Update Soon

Thank you so much for the words of praise. This is the first FF so am still learning.😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks so much. I had the songs planned out for so long and this one is one of my personal favorite... I know I say that about almost all, but truly this one is lovely.

I am happy with any SRK song 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: romanceorlove

I am happy with any SRK song 😳

😆 That makes it easy to please you.. I think this was the last SRK song though..
I ended up using a lot of Veer Zaara references here molding the story to Geet's preferences.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update! This is probably my first comment, and I have to say that your writing is amazing. Loved your cheeky way of giving us Maan's description thru Sasha! And Geet putting kala teeka on Maan was perfect! We don't want Sasha's buri nazar on Maan. I truly admire your writing. How do you get such fab ideas?
Waiting for more...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyaniru

Loved the update! This is probably my first comment, and I have to say that your writing is amazing. Loved your cheeky way of giving us Maan's description thru Sasha! And Geet putting kala teeka on Maan was perfect! We don't want Sasha's buri nazar on Maan. I truly admire your writing. How do you get such fab ideas?

Waiting for more...

You broke your silence for me...😳😳
Thank you so much. It made me so happy.
I love Maaneet, so the ideas come from them😃
Please continue your support.
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Posted: 11 years ago
avi maine ek aur vm banayi maneet par mixing two videos
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

avi maine ek aur vm banayi maneet par mixing two videos

yaha post kar de Priya... mujhe dekhni hai..😃

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