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Posted: 11 years ago
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toh geet badi hai bolke usse prblm hai...

superb n beautiful update...

loved it very much...








thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...




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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
awesome story dear
loved the way maan is trying to woo geet😉 and made her accept their relationship
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Posted: 11 years ago
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HI MAHI
JUST FOUND THIS AND FOUND IT FASCINATING
GEET IS 6 YEARS OLDR THAN MAAN AND THINKS THAT SHE IS NOT WORTHYOF HIM
BUT MAAN LOVES HER AND WANTS TO LIVE HIS LIFE WITH HER
BUT STUBBORN GEET KO MANAYE KAISE
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oh my my this is beautiful 😊😊
I am glad that you came back 😊
so maan and geet r married and geet is elder to him hmm interesting pls continue soon 😊
waiting for your other story " mother of his child" too pls update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely story. beautifully written.👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part--4

nai jeena tere baajo
nai jeena,nai jeena,
nai jeena tere baajo
nai jeena, nai jeena,
main tenu samjhawan kii
na tere baajo lagda ji
mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji

tu ki jaane pyaar mera
main karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri

mein tenu samjhawan ki
na tere baajo lagda ji


She snapped back to real world feeling tug on her bangle.She turned her face from road to driver seat where the most handsome man was sitting.To his questioning eyes she replied:thoda aage ja kr left,phir seedha.
She pulled back her hand on which his fingers were playing wid her bangles & kept it on her lap.With irritation she added:kaha tha naa tumhe yahan India k address smjhne men time lge ga,driver ko sath aane dete.
His brown eyes fixed on road,fingers humming with played music & lips stretched in heart stolen smile:acha lagta hai..jb tum rasta btati ho.

His heated indirect actions & Her cold warnfull reactions! Three days had passed of this stubborn war.But still. .
In the glory of morning dy were heading toward puhne for an important buisness meeting.To keep her energy for it she chosed to avoid him.To take out her pocket book-her cell she opened cabinet infront of her.Wid her cell a wrapped box catch her attention.
Maan:tumhare lye hai!
He replied to her expressions;First surprised dn annoyed.Wid teasing innocence:kyun,kya pehle nhi deta tha?

concert ticket,matching clips. . Ofcourse how could she frgt?He watched from corner of his eyes as she unwrapped. .Naah tear da wrapper.
Dressed in peach colour elegent sari & dt rule da world attitude she was looking gorgeous.But when her eyes grew big becoz of da sight inside she became irresistble for him.
After a minute of silence:payal?. to mujhe keyd krna chahte ho?

What a cruel definition of da most romantic jewelery?Instead of harsh tone he patiently replied:keyd nhi. .chahta hun tum azad raho. Phir bhi mere pass.aur iski awaz tumhare hone ka ehsas dilati rhe.

mere dil vich re ke mere dil da haal na jaane
tere baajo kaleyan beh ke ronde nain numane

jeena mera haey marna mera naal tere...
si kar aetibar mera
main karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri

main tenu samjhawaan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji

The whole journey was passed in silence.Finally dy reached the luxourious hotel.The meeting was too organized here,because of da foreign clients were also staying here.A cute teengae boy approached them when he parked da car in its grand parking area.He insisted:sahab taza phool hen le lo. .memsab k lye.
His sympathic state filled their heart wid sorrow.Maan took out a Note from his wallet,enough for his monthly food.His eyes shined wid happiness which made his golden heart lady smile. .A smile he missed terribly:buht shukrya sahb. .ye lo.sb se naii aur taza kali.buht khubsurat hai.
Shaking his head in No,he pulled out a dark red blosom rose from him:mujhe khille hue phool zyada pasand hain.
"khile hue phool zyada jaldi murjha jate hen" wid her answer she stepped out of car & walk away.

changa nai O kitaa beebave changa nai O kitaa beebadil mera torr keve bara pachtayaan akhaanve bara pachtayaan akhaan tere naal jorr ke
sunjiyan sunjiyan dil diyaan galiyaan sunjiyan meriyan baanwanaa
ja teriyan khashboo walon,
lob diyan meriyan saaman
tere bina... haey
ki main karaan door udasi

dil beqraar mera
main karaan intezar tera
tu dil tu yun jaan meri

main tenu samjhawaan ki
na tera baajo lagda ji
haey tu ki jaane pyaar mera
main karaan intezaar tera..tu dil tu yun jaan meri
main tenu samjhawan kii
naa tere baajo lagda ji

No one could stop adoring da talented owners of S&A company.The old were praising da reflection of Sudheer & Rudar skills in their child.Impressive thing of them was deir PARTNERSHIP. .where she stopped he continued,where he thought she reminded,where she hesitate his words gave her strength. Like a Perfect Partner!

Shaking hand wid everyone dy came out of conference room wid a huge satisfied smile on their face.Geet unbelivebly:ek k lye aaey the. .teen contract aur mil gaey.Isnt it amazing?
"yeah its amazing" his words were for da beautiful sight..her happy face.
Getting a glare on his dreamy tone,he tried:celebration to bnta hai naa?
He pulled her along to resturant area.Taking the seat infront of her he asked:kya khao gi?
Staring out of huge glass wall she snapped:pta nhi.
He called waiter & ordered:jo bhi hai menu men sb ek ek plate le aao.
Geet in disbelieve stopped him:nhi. . umm chicken corn soup.
He smiled:do soup aur do cheese sandwiches.
Geet:lunch krte hi wapis chlte hen..sham tk ghar pounch jaeyn gen.
Maan:kyun?deal to kal sign krni hai.dubara aane se behtr hai aaj raat yahen stay kr lete hen.
Geet playing wid her fingers:nhe. .mujhe ghar jana hai.tumhe rukna hai to ruk jao.men kal phir aa jaungi.
He leaned back on comfortable chair:kyun?mere sath rukne men dar lag rha hai?
The waiter approached them wid their desired menu;thankfully.She abruptly picked spoon to taste da soup but he grabbed her wrist:garm hai. .thoda thanda hune ka intezar krlo.wese bhi tumhe aur HOT hone ki zrurt nhe.
She instantly pulled away her hand,luked around worriedly.Before she could open her mouth to drop bomb shells on him Mrs.Punj approached him.
She got up to greet da lady,in early 50.Savita:what a surprise!men tumhe hi call kr rhi thi aur dekho tum yahan puhne men hi mil gai.
Geet smiled:bs busness k lye aayi thi,meeting men thi to cell off tha.kyun?
Savita:mtlb tumhe aaj ka charity function yad nhe tha?jiska invitation mene 2 week pehle bheja tha.
Geet:ooh. .m sorry.
Savita:no excuses,aur jb tum khud yahan ho to tumhe hr haal men aana hai.
Giving a glance to Maan she asked about him wid raising eyebrow.Passing a lump through her throat she answered:My buisness PARTNER.
She looked from corner of her eyes as he remain uneffected infact too busy in eating his sandwich dt he didnt even bothered to gave them a look.A skillful buisness man!

Geet sat down again as da lady disappeared:mere to dimag se hi nikal gya tha. .ab men kya krun?
Maan drinking his soft drink:u should go..ab mere sath naa rukne k lye tumhe itna bda event chodna nhe chahey.
With wild tiggress attitude she answered in her sexiet voice:tumhara sath to men bchpan se hun. .Agr kuch hona hota to ab tk ho jata! Its just dt. .i have nothing to wear.men kisi party k lye prepare ho kr nhe aai.
Instead of her sacrastic answer he gave one of his heart stolen smile:manna tum jangli ho. .par ye jungle nhi hai..We can do shopping!

~*~

She once again looked herself in stall mirror.Light brown colour hairs cascading on her shoulders which were covered in wine colour anarkali dress,wid net sleeves & dupata wid golden work on it.As she noticed his eyes too on mirror she looked away.Maan:bar bar sheesha dekhne ki tumhari aadat nhi gai.
Geet nervous on her outfit:bs mene buht time bad aesa kuch pehna hai.
He insisted:dn u hv realized u should wear. .achi lag rhi ho.
For da 1st time in these days she polietly replied:ho skta hai. .par wesi bilkul nhi lag rhi hongi jesa soch kr tum ne ye dress li thi.
Her tone was like a kind teacher who was dealing da most dumb boy of her class.Taking a deep look of da beauty sitting next to him he softly answered:haan. .hmesha ki trhan meri soch se zyada -khubsurat.
It was an open area function wid numerous light illumintng da light.Cultural food aroma was spread in air while da other area was busy wid dance interest people.Lots of stalls were around organized by da woman NGO.Youngsters & children were chattering here & there.As many of da femal passed nearby gving her respectfull smile he asked:tum yahan pehle bhi aai ho?
Geet:haan. .hr 6 months men hota hai.NGO men rehne wali ladkya yahan stall lgati ho.apne talent ko dunya k samne lati hen. .kitna kuch ho gya hai unke sath phir bhi sb kuch krne ka jazba hai.

Maan in approval nodded in yes but dn wishfuly:sari dunya kitna kuch kr rhi hai,aur hum kya yuhen bhete rahenge?
She followed his lost gaze & found him looking toward da dance floor. .a blonde tourist.She gave him friendly smile which Maan returned instantly.She snapped:men aese hi theek hun. .tumhe kahi jana hai to ja skte ho.
Seemed like da girl had maricaly heared her approval.In a next moment she approached him for dance & he left with her.Her eyes followed him disappointly as he disappeared with her in the crowd.Than her aching heart whispered"kya bura lag rha hai?usne btaya nhe men already wife k sath hun?Kuch schayan sirf bnd kamro men hi accept krna asan hota hai,sb k samne nhe."

trance of her thoughts broke as da music suddenly turned off & DJ announced:ek buht hi dukhi husband ki request hai.uski wife us se naraz hai uske sath dance k lye nhe man rhi. .so people he need sifarish!
Her eyes grew wider as da crowed left da space & she finally saw Maan standing wid AJ. The place echoed around wid aww. .yey. .plz as Maan forward his hand to her & she had to accept it.She felt her whole self drenched in embarrasment being centre of attention dis way.Settling her hand on his shoulder he wrapped arms around her waist.Giving fake smile around she whispered:i hate you.
Swinging on da romantic music he replied wid hint of laugh in his voice:janti ho. .nafrat aur mohabbat ek sikke k do pehlu hen.so nice progress!
Clap,whistles were echoing around but dy were lost in their own world.
~*~
He followed her as she took big steps toward da exit.But dn a voice stopped her:Geet di.
Geet instantly recognized da girl standing wid mehndi stall.Geet still remembered da teary eyes of her when she saw her 3 months back.But now her heart filled wid happines because of her smile.
Maan quietly watched as da girl spoke:pehchana aap ne. .men ab bilkul theek hun.mene itni ache mehndi lgana bhe sikh lya hai aur men is saal k aakhr tk apna khud ka parlour kholungi.
Aro patted her cheek affectionatly.While Maan:oh realy?lekin kitni achi aati hai wo pta kese chle ga?
Getting wink from him she instantly hold Aro hand wid a grin.Geet instantly shook her head to stop dis girlish act but no one listen her.

~*~

Her act of sleeping had worked which she did for save her mehndi widout hurting her ego.Maan was da 1st who went to fresh while she pretended to sleep.As one hour had passed. .mean her mehndi had dried & Maan would surely in deep sleep.She quietly got up,went to washroom.Washing her hands quickly her eyes shined wid happiness on its colour. .lyk any other girl.Her smilng eyes met wid Maan through mirror & her heart skipped thousands beat.

Taking her hands in his he admired da beautiful heena wid his passionte eyes lika a perfect man. .Her Man.Than he planted soft kisses on her palms which for the 1st time slipped tears from her eyes.Runing out of da washroom she finally brust out between her sobs:kyun aaey ho wapis?jb men aadat dal chuki hun akele jeene ki?Kyun?
Holding her head she brust into cry.He sat down on his knees where she was sitting on bed.His voice broken:kya tumhari life men bilkul jga nhe hai?. .kya tumhe kbhi zindagi k sathi k nb hone ka ehsas nhe hua?
She lifted up her face which was nt wearing any formal mask.Wid innocence she whispered:men men zindagi jena chahti thi. .guzarna nhi.Chahti thi kisi k wajod ko khud men mehsos krna.hr raat kisi par khtm krna.hr subha kisi k brabr jgnaa.kbhi gusa hona. .kbhi mnana.kbhi sunna,kbhi sunana..Karwa chauth rkhna. .kisi k lye sjana..Ghar bnana.maa bn naa.
He grabbed her hand in his,pleaded:kya tum mujhe ek mauka nhe dey skti? . .men tum se pyar krta hun?
Geet crying got up:nhe kr skte. .
He grabbed her from shoulders:tumhe mujh par bhrosa nhi hai?meri bnkhon men dekho,meri dhadkano men suno. .tumhe sch men lgta he men tum se pyar nhe krta?
She yelled:haan. .kyunke sb kehte hen.
He stared her in shock as she finally confessed:jb bhi men tumhare naam ka sindoor lgati hun. .mangalsutr pehnti hun sb kehte hen "Bechara Maan"...kya kmi hai usme phir bhi usko apne se 6 saal bdi ladki kyun?
He reamin silent as she continued:hr subha meri akeli,hr raat meri tanha phr bhi sb kehte hen Maan k sath galt hua.mene b maan lya par men ky krun?. .men nhe rok paii is dil ko..In paanch saalo men hr pal,hr saans men sirf tum.phr bhi men kuch nhi ke skti kyunke mera kasoor hai. . men Khud ko nai bdl skti. .Khud ko tumhare layk nhi kr skti.
"sshh" he shut her movh & wiped her teary cheeks:kya men aur meri mohbbat ki is dunya se zyada koi ehmyt nhe?
She threw her arms around him in result of his heart wrenching tone.Wrapping his arms around her he crushed her into him"i love u Maan.I love u so much""i love you Geet. .Nhe bta pa rha kitna"wid dt he captured her lips in his feverish kiss.

Tears of joy slipped from her closed eyes in living da treasury sensation.His eyes,hand,mouth worshipped each inch of her skin.Feeling cool metal on her skin she opened her eyes & found shining anklets on her bare legs.Locking dm he huskily whispered:mene tumhe keyd kr lya!
Geet:men chahun bhi to mujhe kbhi azad mt krna.

His eyes grew unbelivbly dark in passion.His goddess was laying infront of him wid all her beauty on display.Hairs spread around like water fall,skin marked by him,lips swallon,eyes shining wid intense love,mehndi filled hand rested over head in sylnder..seductively.He leaned over her but slipped Rose between their despo mouth.Her lips stretched ing gorgeous smile as he creased her lips & cheeks wid its soft petals.The lucky rose traveled down to her neck to her shoulder..to her milky mounds.His eyes following da path or da velvety touch caused hes sensitive nipple erect to aching level.The rose went down from dancing on her creamy waist to lower area.His actions finally blessed by her moan.He played wid rose on her like playing a musical instrument.The rose danced on her translating his praise,his love,his promise..The intensity which made
her toes curl.Breathing heavily she finally whispered:make me yours Maan.
Adjusting between her legs he dropped down his head & gave a hard suck on da most delicate peeble.His lips kissed her earlobe to sooth da thrill & wrapped her in passionate embrace of love:you was mine. .you are mine. .& you will be.Samjhi?

Khush rehna sikh to liya tha tumhare bger
mudaton baad jo poucha haal to behaal krdya!


Hope u enjoyed reading it. Thank u all da Silent,Vibrant readers for always appreciating my new ideas. Plzzz do Comments. .if want epilouge
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kabse wait karrahi thi I thought you forget or discontinued the story!!
Loved the end n there love!!😳😊
Thanks for gifting us a sweet smile😊🤗
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago

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