A LIE OR A TRUTH OF LOVE.. MG SS FINAL PTS pg 39 nov 29 *COMPLETED*

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gurti30

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

awesome story dear

but i m confused which is past and which is present scene😕

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saf24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Read all the updates in one go. Nice start to the story. Really interesting so far and can't wait to see what is in store next. Fab job as always

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Gudiyalovesguru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

superb story...
each chapter is increasing my curiousity...
continue soon...

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Rosmitha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

4 parts r awesome...

cont soon...

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sanum23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

confused conti soon plz

want to know who was that girl

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Prerna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

interesting start dear
liked it
continue soon and plz update Ek anjani dor

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rsusmita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

read all the part s in one go, ..
sorry for the late comment
nice concept loved it

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Teju

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Awesome parts.. Poor Geet.. sometimes old wounds hurt u deeply specially when they open again..

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Su_hana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

updating

most probably two parts...

coming up

any single reader waiting...?????

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Su_hana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

PART 5

maan was drinking this was burning his insides and outsides one side he couldnt get that she was all over him the girl had captured him in his mind she was now ruling him and this he couldnt bear..maan crushed the glass in his hands making it bleed profusely his wound was so deep but the pain was nothing he was having a weird feeling today he had came to hoshiarpur in order to seek some solace , the way he felt cheated with his life was something he couldnt even think off..maan stubles..it was midnight and he was alone in the cottage no one was there neither there was caretaker maan never allowed anyone to see him or too have anyone near him..
though his blood was dripping but the way that girl had messed up with him was making him angry...
maan: how dare she..himmat kaise hui uski.. i will show her that no one can go away after playing with me... koi nahi hai jo mujhse khel sakta hai ye cheez samjha dunga main use... sam tumhari himmat kaise hui... i will see that you will pay a big time same a big time...

finally all the frustation came in front of maan he was forced to bring it out that girl who threw that cold water on him brought his hidden frustation she was responsible now ... though a mere stranger was affecting him so much but he never thought that why all of a sudden that maan was getting affected who had recently cut off his relations with the outer world is he the same maan who never get affected by anyone's presence even sam' s presence couldnt change him but now just one .. only one weird meeting that left him wanting for more..yes he was craving for her ..
the craving was now for revenge ..but least he knew that revenge will be rather sweet ...

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rano looked at her daughter she was now dripped in her sweat ..only she knew how she feels seeing her dearest daughter craving for her father.. the death of her father had left geet in a big shock that she couldnt even fathom.. nidha was not even born..she just knew her father as a person who died before her birth and for geet nidha was the one who made her live again...

rano put the cold strips on her while geet slept in her mother's comforting embrace..

rano : i cant bring back your father geet .. tumhare papa ko main nahi la sakti beta..
she caressed geet's hair..

geet was very much attached with her father she was his life.. the day geet was born it was the day rano , for the very first time saw her husband crying for their daughter she was looking pink wrapped in a pink cotton cloth..she was the most beautiful baby she had ever seen...

it was the day her husband had fully known that what is called a daughter , handa's never had daughter's which were loved like this... and geet was the first one who was actually treated like a princess in the orthodox family of theirs...

she was the apple of her daarji's eyes though he was biased towards the son's in their families but being with geet and the amount of love geet shower on teh family members she was never a spoilt kid that made her different..she was quite and mingles with everyone..she keeps her daargi's pride high in the family...

rano was brought out of her reverie when she heard geet mumbling.. she wiped her tears and wiped geet's sweat..how did geet get drenched when she knew that she should be careful as she catch's fever easily...

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IN DELHI..

a lady in her sixty's was sitting with the dull and expectant eyes he had left the place she knew that her grandson was angry the way things were shaped up had left him in a sudden upheviel that he had forgotten even that he was having a family which cares for him..
savitri devi looked at her son he was trying to not affect himself from the circumstances...
savitri devi : maan kab wapas aa rahe hai ... hame maan yahan chahiye raj aap chahte hai ki uss ek ladki ki wajah se hamara parivar toot jaye...

rajveer looked at his mother he knew that by accepting everything that his son says he had done a big mistake but now things cannot be reversed maan being a hot headed personality will not understand the things right now.. his jidd to get married at an age of twenty two was the biggest blunder in itself...

raj : ma , use wahi rehne dijiye kuch din.. jab samaj aa jayegi toh wapas aa jayega...

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next will continue...

everything written here is past ...
prologue will come in coming updates...

Edited by suhana_123 - 11 years ago