A LIE OR A TRUTH OF LOVE.. MG SS FINAL PTS pg 39 nov 29 *COMPLETED* - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81



very interesting update...

all happenings are from past...

maan is cheated by Sam...is he married to her...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
part5
nice part
maans anger is actually on sam
but bcoz of geets behaviour he is angry on geet n want to take revenge on her..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
waiting fr nxt pt
poor geet crying fr her papa
story is good
conti
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
awesome update.maan is affected by geet n geet missing her father
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
part 5
nice part...
poor Geet...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

dear...😃
4 keep PMing me dear..😊..
n me not comment ...actually my net crused down .😭..
but now me cheack all updates ...me just dear..😛.
u done a ..👏👏👏
4 ur hard work.👏..
the job up dear..👏..





keep ing dear...😃
lov,❤️
Tama


NOTE: ME'LL NOT COMMENT OR VISIT THEM ..WHO NEVER BE ON MINE..ME ONLY ABLE TO THEM WHO ALWAYS WITH ME





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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
PART 7

it was the breakfast going on when geet came downstairs her room was with nidha but nidha always sleep with her mother and geet was left alone ...
Rano saw geet coming down her eyes were still droopy she was looking really pale .. Her brother immediately get up and hold her and brought her to make comfortable though they were cousins but still he loved his baby sister just like anything ..
Brij : tu niche kyun aayi geet .. Abhi nidha upar aati na tere saath rehne ke liye kal ye tere saath nahi thi na isliye meri gudiya itni bimaar ho gayi...
He teased nidha who brought a glass of water for geet.. Brij helped her to drink when rano and her taiji came and made her lie down in the room she was feeling alone...
Geet looked at her family and cutely complained...
Geet : mumma main akele bore ho rahi thi aur ye nidha subah subah pata nahi kaha gayi thi... Janti hai maine ise kaha tha mumma ko bhej de aur ye gayan ho gayi..
Nidha bit her lips and looked at brij to help her she had gone to fields with her brother and he had accompied his little naughty sister now they knew that both of them are in trouble ...
Nidha : mumma bhaiyya mujhe lekar gaye the sachhi...
Brij rolled his eyes on her nautanki she was defintely the naughtiest one...
Brij : acha choti aur kisne kaha tha ki main chlun bhaiyya , main mumma se pooch kar aayi hun.. Bolo..
Nidha : ha toh..
The elders knew that this will not over and when they heard geet's cribbing they were surprised that geet also was now among them..
Geet : aap dono gaye the.. Dekha mumma ye nidha toh meri behen thi hi nahi ab bhai also takes her side thee two left me alone... Main jaa rahi hun apne rooom me and nidha dare you come there ..
Nidha : kyun nahi aaongi didi..
Geet tried to get up but none let her her mother asked brij's wife to bring something for geet ...
Rano finally had enough and shouted..
Rano : bas bahut hi gaya .. Sare ek dum chup.. Nidha jao aur apna kam karo ... While brij too left after making sure that gudiya was fine..
Rano to brij's mother..
Rano : bhabhi kab bade honge ye sab...
Rupinder (geet's taiji): rano ye bache hain ho jayenge bade... Aur phir tu brij ko hi dekh abhi bhi geet aur nidha se ladta hai.. Koi kahega dekhkar use that he is married..
Rano : lekin bhabhi kuch saalon me geet ki shaadi ho jayegi use toh samjhna chahiye.. Aur phir uske papaji ke jane ka gam aaj bhi use..
Rano was all teary the way her husband left her and her girls always made her worried..
Rupinder : kuch nahi hoga rano geet samal jayegi..
Rano : aisa hi ho bhabhi.. Uss hadse me we lost her father.. Kehne ko ek hadsa tha par sabko pata hai ki woh kisi ki sochi samjhi saazish thi.. Unhe marwaya gaya tha...
Rupinder couldnt say anything she knew that her BIL was killed by some khurana's and no one was having any courage to stand against them it was only them who knew the truth...
rano : geet ko pata chalega toh kya hoga bhabhi...
Rupinder : rano kuch batton ka daba rehna hi acha hota hai...
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it was almost two weeks since maan had entered hoshiarpur and he had met geet.. Though nowadas he had turned into a total workolic no time to return home sometimes it was 11 or 12 but maan had completely drowned himself in the work.. The construction of a hospital that was going on was under his charge though he was just a graduate but now he was equally drowned in the work and never felt any kind of pressure for it ... Mainly his habits were changing the maan who knew partying and enjoying a lavish life to the fullest was now having a strict and tight schedule.. Though many times sameera tried to contact him but he ignored even after that daadi's call he had cut off his contacts with his family he was feeling regret for not understanding his family and his father's words

it was in the morning cool breeze was flowing he was standing in the fields sometimes out of his busy day he finds time for himself like surrendering to nature...
Maan saw a familiar figure sitting on the hay it was a small barn type place and she was sitting in the open her hair were open freely flowing she was wrapping her arms around her..
Maan tried to look away but something pulled him towards her he just kept staring at her for almost two hours...
Geet looked at the horizon the sun was peeking from the clouds she smiled and get up to go back this was her daily routine to spent some time alone that she generally spent with her father when he was alive unknown to her that some one was looking at her intently...

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Edited by suhana_123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
PART 8

it was the daily routine for maan .. When he saw her for the first time in the barn he didnt saw her face and till now he comes there daily only to see her and feel her presence unknowingly the hatred he possess for himself was melting with her glimpse she was like a shining star in his life... Maan will come daily at four he knew that she will come at five.. Will go near the barn it was clear place with some small plants that made him hide yet he could see her.. Though till today he never saw her face but the peace that he felt on seeing her was nothing compared to what he wants..

her life was never like she wants things were never in her accord...
Geet comes daily as she really needs to come out that painful past.. Everything just reminds her of her father.. The people the school the fields but the memories were certainly in good terms and the last and wicked thing that she doesnt like was that half burnt proof.. She was though little at that time but she knew what exactly had happend ..
Maan was looking intendly at her she was there daily with no delay hr eyes were soft but the amount of pain that was holding was immesurable...
Maan : kyun roz riz main ise dekne ata hun.. Aaj iska chehra bhi mere saamne aa gaya.. Ye hai wo jo mujhe is dil ko sukoon deti hai... Maan ye wo ladki kaise ho sakti hai.. Ye toh ek battameez aur ...
His words were struck... That aur never came...
Aur .. Aur kaisi hai..
Kyun uske hone ka ek ehsaas use ek zindagi de jata hai... Kyun khud se jhooth bolta rehta hai.. Kon hai wo.. Uske hone se kyun itna farak padta hai.. Na chahte hue bhi uska ye dard teri ankon ke samne aa jata hai...

Bahut si kashmakash aur koi jawab nahi hai...
Iss ankahe jazbaat me kyun wo behta chala ja raha hai...

Geet was no less she tried to forget and forgive but never in her life she had felt this much of helplessness...

Geet : kyun wo din mere zehen se nahi nikalta... Mein aapke uss chehre ko apne aanko se saamne se kyun nahi hata sakti papa...
Kisi ko nahi pata kisi ko nahi...
Me thi wahan ...
I saw you drenched in blood papa.. Wo awaz.. Jab unhone aapko ham sab se cheen liya.. Main kaise wo sab bhul sakti hun...
They took my father...
Aapko le liya mujhse...
I cat forgive them..
I wont..

Maan saw her sobbing... He wanted to go and console her.. He needed to console her..
But he cant...
She left after an hourbut he stood there..
He stood there seeing her departure..
May be from his life...

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nex t part pg 22
Edited by Sffs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update !!
loved both the parts 5 & 6 ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice story. It has me very curious!!!

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