A LIE OR A TRUTH OF LOVE.. MG SS FINAL PTS pg 39 nov 29 *COMPLETED* - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 6

maan opened his eyes his head was throbbing with immense pain eyes were heavy and vision was blurred he frustatingly tried to look for some lemon water from the side table but there was none.. His already blew up anger now got a reason again..
Maaan : nakul... Get me some lemon water..
He shouted the caretaker who was there immediately came and helped him he was not in his senses last night drinks had created a wide impact on his mind ...
CT : maan sir take this..
He handed him the glass maan gulped down the entire content and looked around he realised he wasnt in delhi it was punjab and he had left his place in search of some peace...
Maan : munshiji get me the details of the projects going here i want to personally inspect them and yes i am going to the head office today so you will accompany me..
Munshiji just nodded till now maan had never asked this .. He was used to report and give the entire details to his father but if chote shahab wants to go and have the things then this will be easier for him..
Munshji left the room in order to look the arrangements for maan.. He had already asked the cook to prepare the breakfast if this will be late then maan will agaian blew up..

maan was on his way towards the field it was only six in the morning and he was dressed in his tracks running through the fields .. The people who never saw him were amazed to see the young man... He was so much engrossed in his thoughts that didnt reconised that it was the same place where he had a terrible encounter with a girl.. He was about to go when he was disturbed by a call..
His eyes darted towards the screen and having no other reason to ignore he set his bluetooth to talk to the other person...
IN DELHI
savitri devi was finding a reason to call her grandson maan .. Since maan had broken up with sam and not only this he had insulted her infront of the both families , she was happy.. She always knew that sameera was nott the person whom she would like to see as maan's wife.. She still feels that maan had taken his decision in haste that has resulted in his heart break. And her dear grandson was paying the price...
Savitri devi : hello maan.
Maan doesnt knew how to deal with his daadi right now she willl defintely ask him to be back...
Maan : ji daadi..
SD: kab wapis aa rahe hain aap... Aur ye kya tareka hai kisi ko bina bataye aap chale gaye .. Hum chahte hain ki aap aaj hi wapis aa jayen.. Aur no arguments..
Maan : daadi please i cant come right now..
SD : maan why do you want that i should ask your dad to be strict and didnt i tell you to stay away from sameera..
Maan was getting annoyed with sameera's name he knew his family didnt even had a bit of liking towards that sameera still they agreed and this had also added in his remorse he had hurted his father too just beacuse of his stupidity his reputation was at stake he was never a responsible son like his brother karan..
Maan : daadi please i dont wanna talk about that girl.. Please main kuch din akela rehna chahata hun..
SVaitri devi sighed she knew that wanted to be aloof so she let the matter go and asked him to be safe and fine..

maan sighed and looked at his condition he was suffering for no reasons and he was betrayed though he felt really horrible when he learnt the truth about sameera.. She was not only cheating on his back but was planning to leave him after six months with false accusation just beacuse she wanted to be a proffesional model.. The day he learnt this next day itself he had called off the wedding .. Giving no answer and when his parents asked him he just didnt let out a single word.. Sameera shwed her crocodile tears but he knew what he wants and left the mansion to gain some peace of mind...
Maan came out of his reverie when he saw some giggling sounds.. He was in the middle of the fields the small girls may be of twelve thirteen years were playing.. One was running and other was catching..

girl 1: tu rukh abhi pakarti hun tujhe..
Girl 2 : aaj tak didi nahi pakad payi tu kya padkegi..
She teased her friend with by showing her tongue.. Her eyes were twinlking when she came near him and collidied with him...
Girl 2 : umm sorry bhaiyya... Wo dekho payal is catching me and i dont want to be catched ...
She smiled sweetly at maan and turned to the other side...
Girl 1 : nidha u are doing cheating i will tell didi.. Tu dekh lena..
The girl stopped and came towards her friend with angry eyes , pouting lips and hands on her wiast... Maan was finding it amusing he remember that tubewell girl she was also just like her.. His thoughts were put aside by nidha..
Nidha : didi will not come today wo bimar hain and whatwill you say ek toh mujhe pakad nahi pati aur dhamki deti hai...
Maan chuckled seeing the choti sherni and quitlty left the place...

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next : second encounter , knowing her better
Edited by suhana_123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
Nice concept
read the first four parts sounds interesting
waiting to read more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Dis is fab.

Prologue itslf made me so anxious.

Wats d lie...?

Maan n sam... Eeewww!

Muddy encountr of maaneet... Lol

conti sooon plz

its awesum

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Unknowningly Maan has started to crave for her
be it for revenge
but she is affecting him
poor Geet has fever hope she gets well soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
nice part
geet missing her dad
did sam leave maan so he is upset & come to HP
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
congrats
maan n sam ...
then geet with whom!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
awesome dear
maan is affected by geet and taking his anger and frustration out on himself
geet missing her father.hope she will be fine soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
superb update
being from orthodox family geet has been treated like a princess thank god koi torture nhi hua uske saath
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
toh prologue will happen later
now that makes a difference
the more of maneet the better
maan why does it matter about that unknown girl
dont be silly maan
but he is so gonna do it right
hmmm but geet man she is missing her father so much
bless that was touching
so what more now i wonder

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