OS Compitition 2013-link declaring the winner p4

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Hey everyone,
Okay there is a little change I said that there would be two rounds but as I am hell busy and even my engagement is around the corner I won't be able the handle the compitition. So this will be the only round and on the 26th the voting lines will be closed😆. So you can only vote till the 25th.
How to vote
Simple click like under the OS you like the MOST.
Winner:
Will be the one with the most likes
As I am damn busy I can't keep a eye on everything so if you see that any rule has been broken. PM me.
RULES, if any of these broken your simply eliminated:
1. If you have less words then 5811 or more then 6000 you will be trown out. The title or the words at the end: The End won't be counted.
2. If you don't write about the Literary genre mystery then your out and if you don't write about the topic that is campus crime mysteries your also out
3. If you publish you os or let it publish by someone else then me your out
4. You have to send the os to me as no-one can know who wrote what
5. You can send the os compitition link to your readers but not stating I am competing so please read, your readers will geuss which one you have written trust me. But pm your readers just simply the compitition link asking them to have a look at it😃
Now give a warm welcome to a set of writers😃. First stop is non other then our very own dreamy Miss Tia 😃. She blow us away with works like limits. Now she is all set to write a mystery OS for her beloved Maneet-ers😉.
(Thanks Carrissa for the banner) Tia use it the way you want😃.
Next stop is wel Mel. I ain't gonna introduce myself😛
(Thanks you Carrisa Baby)
Next is. Yup none other then kingofme😉. She has written great storries but that's not alll the is even a damn good banner maker herself. A truly Multi talented girl. I must say.
(Thanks Carrissa for making it, Use it the way you like😃)
Next is ghsp2fan she has written a lot of great os's before like Oh girl! your mine! and Jangal mein Mangal😃So I am sure everyone will be curious to know what she will write this time.
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Entry one:

Mystery behind Mishty.the ugly truth..

WELCOME TO EXCEL COLLEGE OF EXCELLENCE

A colorful banner welcomed the freshers as Maan Singh Khurana stepped into the Excel College Campus. Maan is a first year MBA student. The seniors welcome the juniors with a warm smile. Excel college is a reputed institute and has always been in the news for its achievements in academics. But all this is history. It has lost its glory for the past few years. Still many old students loved it. Maans father being an alumnus of the Excel college insisted that Maan too joined it.

Ms.Mathur is the vice-principal and she is known to be very sincere and strict. The students called her Lady Hitler. Shes an old lady, working since Maans fathers days at the college. You could say that shes actually from the last century (19th) , very old fashioned and still having faith in this college and its students. She is one of the few people, like Mr.Kkhurana, senior, who regret the present condition of their prestigious institution, THE EXCEL COLLEGE OF EXCELLENCE, and they believe that they could restore its past status through hard work and dedication, in which world are they in?, thats why we call them the past generation, far from the understanding of Gen X.

You know, the current students are also not far behind their earlier counterparts. They too have made their college famous. Yes, Excel college is back in the news, but only for the wrong reasons, Clashes among the students and the administration, which they proudly call their War of Liberty, the secret drugs supply chain, which they want to be open and thus obtain liberty. Many of the faculty members left, and only a few like Lady Hitler still believe that this place is their pride and wont let it rot like this.

Since Maan entered the campus premises a rumor surrounds Lady Hitler and her residence. Lady Hitler being the senior most person in the faculty and the vice-principal, she had the privilege of staying inside the campus. She had her own residence, a small guest house placed among the small oasis of trees inside the beautiful Excel campus. Its famous for these lush green surroundings and the serene environment.

The rumor is that, there is a mysterious guest at her place. Some say that its a ghost, some say that Lady Hitler is a split personality, she turns into this mystery monster at nights. Others believe that its her daughter that she is trying to hide from the world, since she is born to a spinster. Yes, Ms,Mathur is a spinster, she had an affair it seems with one of her colleagues, and this is his child.

The detective inside Maan found this case very interesting and Maan decided to take up this case at his own will. After all he is here with a mission, to restore this places lost glory. Let the mission begin with clearing out this rumor. Maan started gathering details about Lady Hitler and her mysterious guest, he named this mystery women, Mishty. Students say that they hear quarrels and loud noises only at nights, some have even seen a shadow of this Mishty, moving around that corner room upstairs, always in a white gown, related to the super naturals. Maan is not one to believe all this absurdity. But the students strongly believe that its the ghost of the young girl who committed suicide at the campus. She is supposed to be Ms.Mathurs favourite student. Thats why she has come to stay with Ms.Mathur. They also have a logic behind their hypothesis, all these activities started only after that girls death.

As Maan doesnt believe in this ghost story he started collecting information about this girl who committed suicide. And as Maan suspected its another love story, she had a love failure and so she ended her life and thats the end of that story. The other stories were created by our own creatives who had this hobby of inventing new stories. So, this story had nothing to do with Ms.Mathur. she was just another student and Ms.Mathur hardly remembered her name.

Maan started his early morning walks a little early, at 4 am when the whole campus was asleep. The best time for his detective job. He circled around the crime site, sorry, its not the crime site, Ms.Mathurs residence. He watched it keenly waiting for a glimpse of this Mishty. After a couple of days wait he was lucky enough to spot her. But he didnt jump to conclusions and waited for a few more days before he confirmed the presence of this Mishty as rightly pointed out by the students in that corner room upstairs. So, this is not just any rumor but a solid case for our young Sherlock Holmes.

Holmes is all set to break this mystery. Next day he went to Ms.Mathurs place a bit early. At 1 am, this time any ghost would have gone back to its grave after its meal, ghosts are believed to roam the world only at 12 am. So is at all there was any ghost it would have gone to rest. Maan climbed the pipes stealthily like a professional theif, and he made it to the corner room. He peeped inside the room and saw a girl dressed in a shabby white salwar half awake and half dizzy. Its the dawn of her day, it seemed.

It was pitch dark in that room and Maan hides himself in the darkness. He observed the girl closely. She got out of her bed and tried to reach the door. But she couldnt move more than a few steps. She is chained to the wall and she started shouting, let me out, let me out, she started hurling objects on the door and Ms.Mathur who was sleeping next door seemed to be deaf to this noise. Poor Ms.Mathur, gave this girl sleeping pills during daytime and she had them in the night. Maan felt sorry for that girl and he concluded that she is mad. Btu why is she not in the mental asylum? And why is Ms.Mathur hiding her in her house?

Its time for Maans exit and he leaves the rest of the detection for the next day. Then came back that night itself, at 11 pm. Ms.Mathur had just gone to sleep and this girl is also still sleeping. Maan had got his cell this time and he switched on the lights of his mobile and saw her face, she looked weak and pale, but still there is some kind of simple beauty about her that he liked, he kept looking at her innocent yet bold face. Suddenly Maans face turned pale and he quickly left that place, he had seen her before, he is confused, what is she doing here?

The whole day Maan was upset and thinking about Mishty only. He bunked classes and roamed about the campus the Sun sets and its time for his next visit. He is just waiting to see her face clearly once again before he could decide his future actions. He is now determined to know the truth though it may harm him, this time he has got better light and yes, it is the same girl, he could never forget her in his life. How could he forget her after what he did to her that night.

Maan didnt have the guts to face her and just left before she could wake. Maan thinks about the past, he met her during the holidays when he came to Delhi for his MBA entrance exams. And that was the fateful night when he met her and committed that grave mistake, he had sleepless nights after that horrible incident and is still trying hard to run from the truth. But as they say there is no escape from truth, truth alone triumps, sataymeva jayate. This Mishty is none other than the girl from his ugly truth, the ghost from his past that he had come face to face this day. Yes, she is the victim of his grave mistake.

After that unfortunate night this girl had lost her mind and she is in the care of her guardian Ms.Mathur. she is an orphan studying here in scholarship, before Maan ruined her life and she had turned into this lunatic. Actually God must have punished Maan and not that poor soul, Maan too has no escape, and his punishment had just begun, is this not a punishment to see a girl turn mad and suffer in front if his eyes just bcoz of his deeds? Is there a better punishment than facing the consequences of his karma so close yet not having the guts to face the truth and hiding himself from everyone?

Maan then decided that its high time he accepted the truth and help her. He decided that he should help her and that way his punishment would be lesser, God will forgive him for what he did, who cares about God? he want this girl to forgive him, then only he can sleep in peace. Till then he had to suffer, thinking about that night all the time. After he saw her in that pathetic condition he is seeing her all the time, at the class, at the mess, even in his dreams. She is asking him why he did that to her? He has no answer. How could he be stoned like that and ignore her cries when she pleaded for mercy?

Next day, he goes and waits for her to wake up. After she is exhausted after her usual wildness, she fell back on the bed and kept thinking staring the roof. The only thing she needed is freedom. The irony is that the victim is chained and punished while the culprit is roaming around freely. The door is locked from outside. Maan opened the door and slowly entered the room. She seemed to be lost in her own world, not bothered about him much, or she didnt realize that the door is open and someone is here. She is so weak and worn out, and her instincts have stopped working after that incident. As Maan inched closer she raised her head and stared at him, Maan stopped breathing for a second for the fear of her reaction seeing him, but she didnt seemed to have recognized him.

Suddenly she took the knife she had hidden under her pillow and tried to attack him. Maan caught hold of her hand and snatched the knife and threw it away, she thought that he would also rum away as did the other boys who came before, they were so scared and thought that she would kill them, they pleaded her not to hurt them and ran away, but to her surprise he is not afraid of her.

She spoke in a low voice. Tumme dar nahi lagtha?

Maan replied in an equally low voice nahi

She felt that he could help her(?)

Maan is happy that she didnt recognize him, but he wanted to confess, not now, later. First he should help her get out of this mess.

Geet continued sab mujhe dekkke bhaag jaathe, kya mein itna bhuri lagthi hoon? she asked innocently, not knowing that this is the man who is the reason for her plight.

nahi, tum toh bahut cute hoMaan tried to befriend her.

joot. Dekho mein kaise dikhthi hoon?

Maan looked at her shabby dress and uncombed hair, must be she had been kept like this for days.

tum mere madat karoge? she asked him with a lot of expectation in her eyes.

haan. Bolo, tumme kya chahiye?

Geet looked at her chains..But Maan has not come ready for this..Maan hesitates.

Geet is disappointed mein tumme kuch nahi karoongi, promise

Maan smiles at her request

tumme bhi lagtha hai ki mein pagal hoon?

Maan looked at her and he saw her eyes penetrating his and she was speaking so clearly.

She is definitely not mad

kya soch rahe ho?, koi pagal aaise baat kartha hai kya?

She is so smart, and how come she forgot him? There must be some mistakehad she forgotten everything?Maan could easily hide the truth from her , at least for the time being else she wont trust him.

I believe you, you are not mad

Geet is a little relieved, at least some one believed her. Maan looked at the room..Her dinner lays untouched on the table.

why didnt you have your dinner?

Geet was surprised that he took so much care for her, but why?

I dont like it

tumme bhook nahi laga?

She didnt expect this ..lagtha haina

Maan put his hands inside his pant pocket and took out a bar of chocolate.

ye lo

She didnt refuseShe had not had one in monthsShe relished it slowlyMaan kept watching her..Its too late, Maan should leave now

Maan chalo, ab mein chaltha hoon, gud night

Geet ddint bother muchshe is interested in her chocolate only.

As he left Geet called him.suno

Maan truned back..

tum kab aaoge?

kal

gud night

Maan smiled and locked the door as it was before.Maan left with a heavy heartwhat has he done? She is so nave and innocent.Next morning Ms.Mathur was surprised to see Geet sleepingThats unusual, she needed her pills to get some sleep.Ms.Mathur didnt want to disturb her.She can come and check her at lunch break..

And at lunch break Geet is back to her wild behaviour.Ms.Mathur had to put her back to sleep with the help of the pills.Next day Maan arrived a little late.Geet was just waiting for him..

itna dher kyun kardhi?

tumme kya lagtha? Tumse milne aana itna asaan hai?

Geet understood what he said and kept quiet.They just kept looking at each other for a while

Maan didnt know how to start the conversation..Should he ask her about that night?

No, maybe that would make her act wildHe just wanted to know why she didn t remember him? or did she forget the whole incident?

He extended his armsfriends?

Geet looked at his hands.they were empty..

where are my chocolates?

Maan forgot to get them today..

He was feeling so guilty all day that he didnt had any other thoughts other than what he did to herBut Geet was just waiting for her chocolate man to deliver her chocolate.. she is very disappointed. He cant even get her chocolates, how could he help her? He is of no use.

I will get them tomorrow, which one do you like?

Kit Kat, 5 star

She goes on and on and the list seemed never ending..

Ok Ok, I got it, you like anything chocolaty

Geet smiled..

look what I got?

Maan showed her the fake keys he had managed to get from a locksmith..Geet snatched them and tried to open the locks of her chains.She was so desperate that she couldnt match the right keys..She throws them back at him in despair.Maan catches them..

what are you doing? You are crazy

Geet got offended by that remark..

She shouted

mein pagal nahi hoon

Maan rushed and closed her mouth.chup bilkul chup

She repeated in a low voice. Mein pagal nahi hoon

mujhe patha hai, meinne toh tumme azad karne ke liye hi issko laya hai, tum thoda intrezaar nahi kar sakthi?

Maan then succeeded in freeing her..She stretched her legs and ran around the room like a kid..Maan looked at her and she was so happy..She wanted to get out of the room, but Maan stopped her, phir kabhi

Geet obeyed him like a kid, she had started trusting him..she believes that only he can free her But she also knows that she cant just escape over night, she had other plans..she wanted permanent freedom, she wanted to restore the smile on Ms.Mathurs face, not run away from her. She wants justiceyes, she has not forgotten everything, maybe she didnt remember Maan, but she wants the culprit to get punished so that no other girl suffers in future..

She went to the window and looked at the Moon, she peeped out and looked at the trees and the buildings that stood behind them.She had not seen them for a while though she was amidst these lovely woods.She wanted to wander in the woods just as she did in her college days

She asked Maan if he could take her to the woods next day.Ms.Mathur is going to some conference and she would be alone in the houseShe would skip her pills somehow.Maan didnt know if that is possible, but just told her that he would try.Its difficult to climb the pipes in broad daylight. And Maan is not a professional thief, mind you

Geet told him that he need not take this route for she knows where Ms.Mathur kept her keys.

In the pot to the left of the entrance. Maan then promised to come next morning and he replaced the chains and locked her up. He is also determined to tell her the truth one day and he is sure that she will forgive himThats why he is helping her..

Next day Maan entered the house as per Geets idea and he had no difficulty in finding the keys. He climbed the stairs and reached the corner room. Maan opened the door ans she is still sleeping.

Maan tried to wake her up..suno, utjao, dekho, subah ho gayi

Geet slowly opens her eyesmujhe sona hai

She closes her eyes and turns to the other side. What? She forgot what she said last night? What a fool Im to believe her words and enter someones house like this? He cursed himself for his madness and tried to get up. But hse held back his hands.

bas 10 minute, phir chalhte hai

She requested like a school kid, she is yet under the effect of last nights pills. Meanwhile Maan removes her chains and looks at her ankles that had turned red bcoz of the chains. How much she had to suffer bcoz of him? his heart ached. There is no escape Mr.MSK, you will have to pay for your acts one day. If you think that your deeds will be forgiven just by all this goody goody behavior of yours then you are mistaken, this is no good for all that you have done. Maan knows very well that the truth will come out one day and that day he is ready to accept whatever punishment she gives him. Right now he is here to help her, he applies coconut oil to her sore ankles. She feels his touch and wakes up. She has a broad smile on her face

gud morning

Maan comes out of his thoughts hearing her sweet voice.

whats your name? he asked.

She doesnt want to tell her name, that would create problems for her and Ms.Mathur, if he inquires about her in the campus.

Geet hesitates..I dont remember, she pretends to have amnesia, selective amnesia.

Maan believed her wordsfine aaj se tera naam Mishty hai

Mishty, mujhe bahut pasand hai

She looked at him and wonders how he came out with such a cute name?

jaldhi chalo, hummare paas zyada time nahi hai

She jumped out of her bed and is ready to take off.

mein toh tayaar hoon

Maan stops her. He looks at her for a minute and frowns.

aaise tum mere saath nahi aasakthi

Maan points out her shabby clothes and looks.

aaise nahi chalega?Geet looked at him and at herself.

nahi Maan answers sternly.

mein kya teri Girl friend hoon?

Maan is shocked by this question. But he doesnt show it.

tumme aaise dekhke sab ko lagega ki mein tumme seedhe mental asylum se lekhe aaraha hoon, aur mujhe bhi log galat samjenge

kay? Meinne kaha mein pagal nahi hoon

Geet gets angry and throws the oil can at him.. Maan catches it.

toh prove karo ki pagal nahi ho, jadhi ek achchi ladhki ki tarah tayaar hokke aao

She gets ready in a minute. Maan waits for her outside. She comes out. Maan is surprised to see her looking gorgeous in her colorful outfit. He has never seen her in this avatar.

ab toh mein tummare saath aasakthi? Haina?

Maan just smiles.they go to the entrance, Maan has locked the front door. He hesitates for a moment.

Geet is in a hurry, jaldhi karo

Maan turns back and looks at her innocent face, can he trust her, what if she runs away?

Geet reads his mind in a jiffykya dekhthe ho? mein kahin nahi bhaagnewali

She looks at him and continues..isnt it funny? I trust a stranger like you and you dont trust a beautiful young lady like me?

Maan answers her back., dont you know, too much beauty is also dangerous

haan..Geet replied in a broken voice as she tried to control her tears.

Maan opened the door and she hopped her way out. Maan followed her quickly. They strolled in the woods for a while and Maan held her hands in his throughout the journey. He feared that she would escape into the woods.

Geet ddint complain as she is so happy to breath fresh air after a long time.

Maan had this urge to ask her about what happened ? what she knew about herself? Why is she kept under house arrest? How did she lose her memory? Maybe she knew about what happened later that night, after that incident. And how is she related to Ms.Mathur. as far as he gathered news about Ms.Mathur, she has no family, no relatives, and the only place she knew is this campus. They believed that she had this habit of sleep walking and the students mistook her as some ghost.

Geet wanted to stay back for some more time but Maan told her that its high time they returned else they will get caught, and thats the end of her freedom. She followed him without further arguments as she didnt want to lose his friendship, he is the only trump card that she has, and she had to use it wisely. She wants justice at any cost, she is willing to return to her jail and wait for the right moment.

Maan felt a little relieved that night and went to sleep early. He is happy that he could bring a smile on her face. Thats what he wants, to see her happy and smiling again. Geet is reminded of her past, her college days back in the woods. She also remembered how she recovered herself that night and came here and knocked at Ms.Mathurs door that night. She fell unconscious and she didnt know how long had she been lying there. She told the whole story to Ms.Mathur and that she is going to the police, she asked Ms.Mathur to accompany her. Ms.Mathur told her that it is unsafe for her to go out at that hour, and that they can go and file the complaint in the morning

Later that night someone called Ms.Mathur and warned her that they would kill Geet if she opened her mouth, Ms.Mathur assured them that Geet would never open her mouth and that she would send her far far away from Mumbai soon, just spare her life. So, to save Geet Ms.Mathur silenced her. Geet is not ready to give up easily, she wanted to file a case against the culprit and she wont sit mum. Ms.Mathur had no other go but to keep her under house arrest till she found a new home for her. But Geet is still protesting and had finally found a way to get to the police station, her new friend would help her get to the police, and once she reached there safely , the law will take action and the police will protect her, poor girl, she ddint realze that our system is corrupted by money and the underworld.

Ms.Mathur often repeated these words..usske paas paisa hai, woh kuch bhi kareedh saktha

But Geet didnt listen to her, she still believes that the law will punish the culprits.

Next week.Maan forgets about his studies and keeps thinking of this girl. What should he do? How will he tell her the truththe ugly truth? He kept visiting her often and they have become good friends, he didnt want to spoil this friendship nor does she want to harm this. She waited for him to trust her fully and she told him about her wish to venture out into the streets one night.

Maan was not ready and is not going to accept at all, but she pleaded him and threatened him to end this friendship if he didnt take her out one day, just a few hours, and no one will see them in the night. At last Maan gave uo and it was decided that they would go out the following night. Geet would be ready at 11 pm and Maan would come and take her with him. Geet managed to get ready with her chains on as Maan was adamant not to give her the keys. He was afraid that she might set out of the house on her own and become a prey to another monster. And now she has forgotten everything and turned into this kid. He doesnt know that she is acting and her plans behind the act.

So, Geet is all ready to execute her mission. This time, no mistakes. Maan comes and takes her as he promised, they walk in the streets of Mumbai, Geet is waiting for the right moment to escape, she has come so close to the police station , just metres away,

Maan is holding her hand tight, she thinks of a plan, she wants gol gappe. As they wait for their turn at the chat stall, Geet releases her hand and starts running towards the station. Maan follows her and so do some goons

ye toh wahi hai, pakdo usse, mardalo , police ke paas jaathi hai?

They surround her. Geet is terrified, ye log yahan kaise? She realizes her mistake, but its too late.

She is in the hands of the gundas who were searching for her all these days.

Maan comes to her rescue, this time he wont repeat the same mistake, ek bar galthi ho gayi, dubara nahi ho gi, babaji ne Maan ko ek aur moka diya hai pane galthi ko sudarne ko, aur Maan iss bar koi galthi nahi karega.

He punches one goon and rushes to his Mishty in a second, he protects her pushing her behind his back. Geet is surprised, ye apne aap ko koi hero samajtha hai kya?

But Geet loves it, the real fight, she tries to help him, but Maan doesnt want his Mishty to get hurt, already she suffered a lot bcoz of him, so he fights fiercely and the goons fall down one after the other.

As always our police men come after the fight though they were only a few metres away, they arrest the goons and take them to the station along with Maan and Geet. Maan told them that they tried to attack Geet and Geet to supported him. they file a complaint and come out, Geet thanked him for his help, she thought that only the police men could fight like that or her Salman,

not bad, tum bhi achche fight karthe ho, khaas mein bhi aaise kar sakthi? Tum mujhe sikhaaoge? she asked him looking at his abs...she then continues

mujhe maaf kardho, ye sab mere wajhe se hi hua haina?.

Maan couldnt control himself now, how she trusts him and thinks so high about him

nahi, tumme maafi mangne ki koi zaroorat nahi

Geet is surprisedisse kya ho gaya?

She tries to look into his eyes for an answer, but Maan cant face her eyes.

He looks on the other side

tumme yaad nahi hai? tum mujhe jaanthi ho

Geet looks at him seriously and she cant remember him..

nahi, mujhe kuch yaad nahi aaya

Maan tries to help her remember..

mein tumme jaatha hoon, uss raat, jab tum aaise hi bhaag ke aarahi thi, kuch yaad aaya?

Geet ko kuch kuch yaad aatha..par teek se nahi.

mein wahi hoon, tummare ye haal ki zamedar mein hi hoon

Geet is confused

tum kya bol rahe ho?

teek se yaad karo , tum mujhe kaise bhool sakthi?

tum mujhe bahut confuse kar rahe ho? kya tum bhi usske aadmi ho? phir tum mere madat kyun karna chahathe ho? tumne apne hi aadmi ko kyun mara?

nahi, tumme yaad nahi, jab tum mere paas aayi aur mujhse madat mangthi thi

Geet now remembers him..that scoundrel.coward.

Geet had known about this Dev, the principals son and his nexus with the drug mafia, she had been following him and that night too she had followed Dev and came to that jungle..Dev was drunk and in his intoxicated state he was trying to misbehave with a young girl, she was with him and suddenly he turned into this beast, she didnt expect that and she tried to run away, Geet too tried to help her and thats when she saw someone coming in a jeep and tried to stop him and pleaded him to help her

That was MSK, and as always he was indifferent to women and he ignored her and rode on his way.

After a while he came back to see whats wrong but he was too late.

Dev and his men took the girl and Geet to a nearby go down and Geet somehow managed to hit Dev with an iron rod and helped that girl to escape, but Geet landed herself into trouble trying to help that girlshe was surrounded by these goons and one of them hit her on her head with the lathi and she fell down unconscious, they thought that she was dead and they ran from that spot.

Maan felt that he should have helped her and tried to know what happened from the people around, no one knew anything about that incident and that was not reported in the paper too, he then forgot about it completely till he met her again.

mujhe maaf kardho

Geet just cant control her anger, what if she also went her way like Maan, what would have happened to that little girl? Isnt she like his sister, why are men like this?

She just gave him a tight slap

Maan thought that he deserved this, and worse.Yes, these people who dont try to stop a crime are equally responsible for the crime ..Had the police been little more alert? Had the government been little more dutiful? Had Devs father stopped him when he did his first mistake? Had Maan helped her on that day? Many crimes against women could have been averted with the support of men.haina?

There is complete silence for a minute.then Geet starts walking and Maan followed her silentlyhe didnt know what would she do? She just went back to the campus, to Ms.Mathurs houseits nearly 6 am and Ms.Mathur is already upshe is preparing tea for Geet..Geet rings the bellMs.Mathur is surprised to see her at the door that too with a man.

Ms.Mathur is afraid that its one of devs men. She dragged Geet inside quickly and closed the doorMaan stood there waiting for Geets reaction, he wants her to forgive him, he is not returning till thenGeet calmed Ms.Mathur down and opened the door.so she forgave him?

woh kaun hai? tum aaj hi kanyakumari jaa rahi ho, pack your bags, I have spoken to my friend Shanthi and she is ready to help us, she will take good care of you?

Geet is shocked to hear this, so is Maan.

kya? ..donno ek saath chilathe hai..

haan, ab tum yahan nahi reh sakthi

Geet thinks of how she had troubled this old lady all these days.

sorry, meinne aapko bahut tang kiya haina? Ab aaise nahi hoga?

Ms.Mathur hugs Geetaaise koi baat nahi hai, tum meri beti jaise ho, aur tummare alawa mere liye koi nahi hai iss duniya mein?

haina? Ye dekho, ye aapka bete jaise hi hai, haina?

Maan doesnt know what to say, he just smiles.

thoda akdu hai, swarthy hai, dusron ki kadhar nahi hai, lekhin chalega

What an introduction?

Dil se achcha hai

So she has something good to say about him at last.

tummara naam kya hai? Geet asked

Maan is surprised kaise ladhki hai?

Maan Singh Khurana

meinne tere naam poocha, pura khandhan ki nahi

what?

btw, Im Geet, Geet Handa

Maan looks at her and then at Ms.Mathur

Ms. Mathur invites him for tea.

andar aao, chai phikke jao

ye toh yahan roz aatha hai, issko koi invitation ki zaroorat nahi, aao aao Geet too welcomes him..

Ms.Mathur asks Maan to accompany Geet to Kanyakumari as her life is in danger.she tells them how some goons came in search of Geet the following day and how Ms.Mathur gave her the pills and how some of her students helped her to hide Geet in their room. Geet doesnt know anything about thia as Ms.Mathur didnt tell her anything as she would get scared.

She had then got a call from the principal himself that his son is out of control and he is after Geets lifehe wants to take revenge.so Ms.Mathur decided to send her out of Mumbai, and has arranged for her stay at a friends place in TN.

Maan told her that there is no need for Geet to hide and he is going to tackle this himselfget rid of that Dev with the help of his father..he is ready to help them in any way he couldMs.Mathur thanks him and Geet looks at him and wonders why the sudden change?

Then Maan and Geet filed a case against dev and they became the witness.. Maan had seen Geet running for her life that night and Geet can identify the goons.till then no one was ready to help Geet in her fight against Dev and his notorious gang who had the Excel campus under their control and sold drugs to the students..Geet gave an account of everything that happened and Maan gathered evidences against them.Dev and his gang were arrested and the principal resigned his jobMs.Mathur became the new principal and Geet stayed with her happily.

Maan helped Geet get out of her trouble and they together helped the students who were affected by drugsGeet began to like Maan as he is now changing, taking care of Geet and also concerned about his peers.Maan proposed Geet and Geet accepted with one condition that he would never disrespect women, and Maneets love story continued in the woods.

Now Maan doesnt take the pipes but Geet loved that Maan better.

Maan kabhi kabhi choron ki taarh chup chuoke pyaar karne mein hi zyada mazaa aatha hai, haina babaji? Geet told Maan about her new wishMaan is getting ready to climb the pipes once again for his mishty..

Edited by angel-ki-shona - 11 years ago
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Entry 2:

--Obsessive love--

Maan walked a bit late into the Billboard awards, as he was late he decided to sit backstage for a while till it was his time to turn up on the stage. He heard the voice of the anouncer.

''Please welcome legendary actor singer Marlon Brando''

Maan saw on the screen back stage Marlon Brando walking up the stage. He took the mike and started talking.

''What can you say about the Billboard man of the year Maan Singh Khurana. The man who's acting speaks instead of him. At a age of only 22 when most of us are starting to think what to do with our lives Maan Singh Khurana has become one of the most succesfull actors worldwide in film history.''

A video about Maan's achievment's started playing just then his Phone ringed. It was Adi his manager aka best friend he couldn't ignore that. Adi would never call him unless it was important.

''Haan Adi bhol''
''Maan your dad is no more.''
Maan felt is world crashing down.
''NOOO this can't be.''
''Maan calm down.''
Maan sunk into the couch. This couldn't be happening his mom left him at the age of eigth uskebaad it was Maan and his dad only. Five years back he had moved to America to make it big in Hollywood. He used to speak to his dad everyday through Skype and he made sure that Adi was there besides his dad most of the time, when he wasn't. His dad Rajeev was a proffessor at *** University. He was also the head of that University.
''How''
Maan said in a low voice.
''Maan I have booked your tickets for tomorrow morning when you will come to India I will tell you everything.''
Before Maan could say anything he heard his name being called. As they say the show must go one Maan stood up and walked over to the stage to take his award. He took a deep breath and acted like nothing happened being the great actor he is he knew he could pull it off.
''I would like to thank my fans without them I would be nowhere.''
The next night Maan landed in India. When he entered KM Adi and he sat down.
''Now tell me what happened Adi.''
''Maan you know that uncle has a habbit of sleeping in his office on the campus, right.''
''Haan.''
''Well that faithfull night he was there only, the next day when I entered his cabin he found him lying on the floor with a needle in his hand. According to doctors uncle died by taking a overdoses of drugs.''
''What rubish dad didn't take drugs''
Maan yelled.
''Calm down Maan.''
Maan looked at Adi.
''Someone planned this Adi.''
''I don't know Maan.''
''What do you mean.''
''Uncle was behaving a bit weird these couple of months. He suddenly started getting aggresive and started feeling depressed. I tried talking to him but one day he pushed me out of his office asking me to get coffee. When I did he trew the cup on the floor screaming he doesn't need this coffee and asked me to leave.''
''And you never told me.''
Maan stood up.
''How could you hide something like this from me Adi''
''I didn't want to stress you I thought I could fix it.''
''You didn't want to stress me if you would have told me dad might be here.''
Maan yelled then he closed his eyes calming himself down.
''You should have told me.''
''I am sorry Maan and I blame myself for rajeev..
Before Adi could day something maan interupted him.
''No Adi I am sorry to lose my temper it wasn't your fault.''
''But.''
''No Adi. Tell me who will take dad's position now.''
''Maan I will after a couple of days you should go back to America.''
''Hmmm.''
''It's the best thing to do Maan.''
''Haan I know your right. I just don't feel like going.''
''Maan if you will stay here it won't do you any good you will just get depressed go back to America you fans must be missing you.''
Adi winked trying to lighten the mood.Maan forced a smile.
At the campus
Geet was reading a book while laying on her stomach. Pari walked inside her flat that was standing on the ground of the campus of University ***
''Heyy Geet, did you here that the son of Rajeev will come today.''
Geet sat up.
''Haan poor guy went through so much haina.''
''Yes I feel bad for him. Poor guy only 22 and lost his dad.''
''Haan I wonder why his dad used to take drugs.''
''You now Geet I don't think he took drugs.''
''Matlab''
''I think it was planned.''
''What, why and who would do that.''
''Patha nahi. I just got a feeling.''
Just then Romeo walked in.
''Everyone has to assemble in the garden area as Maan and Adi sir have arrived.''
The girls stood up and went to the garden area.
''OMG he is so handsome. So dreammyyy.''
Pari chirped.Geet shook her head.
''As you all know Rajeev uncle is no more and there for I will take his position.''
Adi declared simply.
''Excuse me sir why won't Maan take it over.''
''because the movies need him more and that is his passion too. And even Rajeev uncle would want Maan to follow his dreams and not quit them specially because of him. Now all you can go back to what you where doing.''
''Gosh I so hoped we would get a hot professor this time.''
Sameera whispered. She was a bit older then the rest, while Pari and Geet were only 18 Sam was 21, she was in her last year of her study and as a parttime job she was also Rajeev's secetary. Even while she was older the girls she still hit it off instantly with Geet and Pari. That's when Geet noticed her. Gosh these girls Geet thought. Geet was about to walk back when she saw Pari rooted to her place.
''Pari chal''
'Huh, Geet haan you go I still have to do some stuff.''
''Okay.''
Somewhere at the campus.
She ran a finger through Maan's picture.
''Your mine and I won't let you go this easly. Even if you will leave, you will come back running here.''
She laughed like a maniac.
Maan had told Adi he wanted to look around the campus before leaving. Adi agreed leaving Maan alone. Maan was walking around the campus like he was trying to observe where his dad used to walk and work. He inhaled the air like he could feel his dad in this air. He closed his eyes, when he heard a voice.
''Excuse me Maan.''
Maan turned arround.
''yes''
''Hi I am Pari Singhania. I used to be one of your dad's students and I can tell you he didn't die by a overdoses of drugs. I mean he didn't take it himself it was planned.''
''Come with me.''
Maan took her to his dad's cabin.
''Sit, why do you think it's planned.''
''Nothing as such but it just doesn't seem logic. I mean Rajeev sir didn't seem like such a person and was he ever a drugs addicted when he was young I mean why would he take drugs at such a age while his life seems perfects atleast to me.''
Haan maan had to agree as far as he knew even he found it weird.
'''Maan I think you should stay here not forever but temporary to find out what is really going on. I have a feeling there is much more to this.''
''Hmmm.''
'' Maan I think you should take you dad's position temporary. I have a feeling you feel find out more.''
''I should talk about this to Adi.''
''No I think you shouldn't tell anyone anything. I really feel something weird is going on. I know I am no-one to believe but I have seen Adi go to your dad's cabin on odd hours.''
''Are you trying to blame Adi.''
''No I just feel you shouldn't trust anyone.What is there to lose Maan just stay for a while take the position if nothing is wrong you go back and if there is you will atleast know who did this to your dad.''
''Hmmm thanks for your concern can I know why your telling and trying to help me.''
''Because I want to become a policeofficer and my it's my duty to help people and specially when there so dreammyyy and if my istinct is telling me something as a future cop I should tell you.''
Maan smiled.
'' Thanks.''
''Anything for you dreammyy.''
Maan shook his head while smiling. Pari stood up and left. Maan called Adi up.
''Hey buddy can you come to my dad's cabin.''
Five minutes latter Adi walked in.
''Haan Maan bhol.''
''I don't feel like going yet. I want to take dad's position over temporary.''
''Maan as a friend I understand but I also know it's the best thing if you leave. If you will stay here you will only land in a desperation.''
''No Adi I know what I am doing. I want to stay for a while. I don't feel like going.''
''Maan think about it.''
''I already have and I really want to stay.''
''Maan but what about you movies.''
''They can wait.''
''No they can't.''
''Well then they have to. I really want to stay Adi.''
''Fine I still think it's the wrong decision but if this is what you want, alright.''
The next day Adi called again everyone to tell them that Maan was taking over Rajeev's position.
''That's weird.''
''Weird or perfect I am so happy he is staying.''
''Sam stop drooling over him.''
''Why should I and as I was Rajeev's secetary I will also be his.''
Geet rolled her eyes.
''Your impossible you know that''
Sameera just giggled and walked away.
Somewhere at the campus
''Finally we are this close''
she said while running a finger though a human size Maan cut out. She put her head on the shoulder of the cut out soon it will be just you and me. Finally my wait is over. She kissed the cut out and then shied walking away while closing the door of her apartment. Maan walked into the class he started his lecture. After he was done Geet walked over to him.
''Sir I didn't understand this topic at all could you please help me.''
''Sure why don't you come to my cabin at 6. I have to run now.''
''Okay thanks.''
Maan smiled and walked away but not before looking at her one more time. She is beautifull he thought. Geet went to the liberary, when Pari walked over to her.
''Heyy Geet aaj raat let's go out of the campus to watch a movie as it's Friday today.''
''Nahi Pari I have to go and meet Maan sir at 6.''
''Why??''
''I didn't understand something and he told me he would make me understand.''
''Acha why don't I help you then we can go nah.''
''Nahi Pari waisi I have no time now I have to go and meet Romeo as we would finish our project today.''
''Theek hai.''
Pari left the liberary. Maan was working at his office when he heard a knock. He looked at the time, it was 6.
''Come in Geet.''
Geet walked in.
''Aapko kaisi patha tah, that is was me sir.''
''It was six so I persumed it was you.''
''Oh.''
Maan smiled at her.
''Come take a seat.''
Geet sat next to him.A hour went by but Geet still didn't understand it. She was feeling so frustrated.
''Gosh I am so stupid. No-one is a dumb as I am.
Maan giggled.
''Calm down Geet. Let me explain it again.''
''Sir no use you have already explained it a zillion times, bit nothing is getting into my thick mind.''
She pouted. She looks so adorable Maan thought. He ran a hand through her hair, a pair of eyes saw that. Geet was stuned when he did that.
''Your stressing to much, relax.''
He said while he messaged her head slowly. Someone fumed seeing that.Geet closed her eyes.
''Your not dumb your just taking to much tension.''
There was a knock on the door. Though the door was a bit open Sameera knocked at the door. Maan withdrawed his hand while Geet snapped her eyes open. Both felt akward Maan didn't get what had got into him and even Geet couldn't believe she let him touch her that easly, what the hell was wrong with her. Maan straighted himself.
''In.''
Sameera walked in.
''Maan sir your coffee.''
Maan looked at the time it was 7, that's indeed the time he liked his coffee.
''Thank you sam.''
She gave a sweet smile and walked away.When Sameera had walked away Maan and Geet looked akwardly here and there.Geet finally broke the silence.
''Woh maybe I should call it a day.''
''Haan.''
''Thanks for your help.''
''Sure anytime.''
Geet smiled and walked out as fast as possible.
Somewhere at the campus
''How dare you Geet Handa how dare you to comethis close to my Maan. How dare you, I won't spare you Geet Handa I won't. Maan sirf mera hai.''
The wicked laugh filled her room that was full with Maan's pics. Geet walked into her apartment still feeling dazed about what just happened. She didn't know what to think about Maans act. Maan's halat was the same he couldn't believe he acted like that. But he couldn't also deny that he was acttacted towards Geet. Maan smiled thinking he wouldn't stop his feelings and he would just go with it and it seemed like that Geet didn't mind it either. he recalled that she hadn't stopped him in fact she had submitted to the feelings by closing her eyes and letting him do whatever he felt like doing. Maan smiled to himself and then walked towards his apartment on the campus to get some rest. The next day Geet saw Maan walking on the campus, it seems like he was going to the liberary. She felt really akward after what happened yesterday so she decided to ignore him. She looked at the other side acting like she hadn't seen him when she walked pass him. Maan saw her he smilled and grabbed her arm. Geet froze to the spot, slowly she turned around.
''Geet what if I give you tution today at 6 again.''
Geet meekly nodded, freed her hand and alsmost ran away. maan smiled to himself. Damn is this what they called love at first sight he wondered. While he was smiling like a love sick puppy someone else was fuming.
''No Maan you won't see Geet today a 6. That's a promise darling.''
Maan was sitting in his cabin he glanced at the time again. It was 6.30. Where was she, did he her scare her with his acts. Damn it, he didn't mean to scare her. He should apoligize. Maan stood up to leave when he dazed into Sameera.
''Sorry Sir didn't see you.''
''No Sam I wasn't looking.''
''Sir Geet told me to tell you she can't make it.''
''Hmm. where is she.''
''Sir she is in the hospital.''
''What why is she okay.''
''Haan she is better now. She has been puking since two o'clock seems like she ate something wrong.''
''Alright I will go and check on her.''
Sam nodded. Maan entered the hospitalroom. He saw geet laying there while she was talking to Pari. She was looking really pale.
''Hey.''
Geet looked at Maan's concern face.
''Hi sir. I am fine now.
Maan walked towards her and sat on her bed.
''Really then what are you doing here.''
''Sir I am just a bit dizzy. I try to sit up but then fall back again.''
Just then the doctor entered fuming a bit. Maan stood up.
''Is everything alright doctor Sameer. ''
''No Miss handa would you like to explean why you took drugs.''
Maan looked at Geet shocked.
''Doctor I swear I didn't take drugs.''
''Of course you didn't.''
Sameer said sarcasticly.
''Maan she took ***** her body couldn't handle it which lead to her puking. I will have to call your parents miss Handa.''
''Please don't, they will make me quit studying.''
''You should have thought about that before taking drugs.''
''Sameer please don't call her parents, let me handle this.''
''Fine Maan as you wish. Youth now a days.''
Sameer angry walked out of the room. Maan turned to Geet.
''Sir I swear I didn't take any drug.''
He sat next to her and took her hand in his.
''I believe you.''
Geet blushed a bit, what was happening to her she wondered.Maan noticed the blush he smiled.
''Geet tell me what did you have before all this happened.''
''I had some coffee, which Pari made for me out of my own coffee can which I Always use.''
''Coffee??''
''Haan.''
''That's weird even Adi said something about dad asking about coffee.''
Maan thought out loud.
''Geet can I have the keys of your apartment.''
''Ji sir.Pari can you give it to Maan, it's in the pocket of my jacket.''
''Geet do you mind if I go with Maan.''
Just then Adi walked in.
''It's sir Pari it's sir for you.''
''Ji.''
''How are you know Geet.''
''I am fine Adi sir.''
''Good.''
Pari was playing with the keys in her hand not knowing what to do. Geet noticed.
''Pari you go with Maan sir as I am anyway thinking to sleep for a while.''
Pari nodded Maan looked at Geet she looked so weak he hated it. Following his heart he bend and kissed her forhead, Geet closed her eyes. Adi's eyes popped out.
''Call me Maan and take care of yourself.''
Maan stood up.
''Let's go Pari.''
''Ji.''
When Maan walked out Adi walked behind him.
''Buddy are you dating Geet.''
''Not yet.''
and he walked away smiling. Adi made a o-face. Maan and Pari went into the apartment of Geet.
''Pari do you know where Geet keeps her coffee.''
''Ji''
Pari went and grabbed the coffee can and gave it to Maan.Maan trew the can in his bag.
''Let's go.''
''Sir I came with you because I need to tell you something.''
''Haan bhol pari.''
''Sir I saw Sameera sneaking into Geet's room last night.''
''What and you didn't tell Geet that.''
''I asked her whether Sam came yesterday she said no. Then me thought of telling her, but I was scared that I would scare her off.''
''Hmmm and you are telling me this because.''
''because I have seen Sam sneaking into rajeev uncle's cabin all the time.''
''Hmm thanks for the info Pari.''
She nodded. Maan walked out of the apartment to see Sameera and Adi fight about something.
''Adi you are overreacting.''
''No I am not.''
''Your such a man at times.''
''You should stop looking at Maan.''
''Listen, you.''
Both stopped in tracks when they saw Maan raising a eyebrow. Sam turned around and walked away. While Adi let out a nervous chuckle.
''Everthing okay Adi.''
''Haan excuse me Maan.''
Adi walked away too. Maan found the convo weird but had no time for that he walked to the hospital.
''Sameer can you check the coffee can.''
''Sure.''
When Sameer left Maan went to Geet's hospital room. She was sleeping on the bed looking so drained out and fragile. Maan sat next to her. He carresed her cheek slowly. Geet opened her eyes.
''Maan.''
''Heyy how are you feeling now.''
''Much better.''
''Good miss dramebaaz.''
''Excuse me.''
''Haan Geet mein sahi to kehrah hoon. I understand you weren't in the mood of tution, but that doesn't mean you act like this to get out of it.''
Geet made a o-face.
''Geet don't make such a face. You look like a golgapa.''
''Maan.''
Geet whined. Maan smiled and kissed her forhead. Geet blushed.
''Finally some color came on your pale cheeks.''
Geet blushed more, while Maan let out a chuckle. Sameer walked in.
''Maan is coffee mein someone has put drugs.''
''What but how is that possible. Maan I Always drink coffee from this can.
Pari words ranged in Maan's ear. Was Sameera behind all this. He had to talk to pari about this.
''Geet you don't worry, okay. I will try to find out what happened. Excuse me.''
Maan left from the hospital. He walked around the campus searching Pari. When he saw her coming from the liberary. He walked over to her.
''Pari we need to talk.''
''Haan sir say it.''
''Not here come with me.''
Maan took Pari to his cabin.
''What happened.''
''Pari in the coffee can there was drugs and even Adi told me dad asked him about cofffee and when Adi got him some he pushed Adi away saying he didn't want this coffee.''
''So you think the same person who drugged your dad is now also drugging Geet.''
''Haan it seems like you where right it was planned this can't be coincidence can't it.''
''No I am sure Geet would never take it and neither would your dad.''
''I was wondering if you could help me figuring out who is behind this before we tell the police this as I don't want any media attention regarding this as for now.''
''Sure sir I would love to help you.''
''Good now feel free to tell me who you think is behind all this.''
''Sir I think it's Sameera and Adi the way they behave is so weird, from secret meetings to whispering.''
''Hmmm even I heard them fight today and my I heard my name getting dropped. But why would Adi do something like that.''
''Sir didn't you realise how Adi was all set to take you dad's place.''
''Hmmm but Sam and why Geet.''
''Sir maybe we should check there apartments.''
''That's a good idea, but when.''
''Sir leave Sam's room up to me you just try to find any time to check Adi's cabin.''
''Theek hai.''
Maan stood up and both Pari and he walked out of his cabin. Maan went and sat on a bench he closed his eyes. Could Adi his best friend really be behind all this. Just then he fell a hand on his shoulder. Maan turned around to find Geet looking at him, with love in her eyes if wasn't mistaken. Maan took her hand in his and lead her to where he was sitting. He made her sit next to him. She looked at him with a smile while her curl was playing on her cheek. He slowly tucked it behind.
''How are you feeling now.''
Geet put her head on his shoulder. Maan carresed her head.
''Weird.''
''Hmm you should go to your apartment and take some rest.''
''No it has nothing to do with that.''
''Phir.''
Geet sat straight she started playing with her hands.Maan noticed she was nervous about something.
''Kya baat hai Geet, you can tell me.''
''Woh I have never felt like this.''
''Like what.''
''Woh I like it when your arround me, I like your touch, while I hardly know you. It feels so weird. How can I feel attracted to a guy I hardly know. I don't know what's happening to me. I would slap a guy hard if he would kiss me on the cheek or even message my head like you did the other day in you cabin. But I enjoyed it. I don't understand why.''
A tear escaped from her eyes. Maan wiped it away.
''Sssh. don't cry I feel the same. I never touched a girl like that. I swear Geet but I don't know what happens to me when I am arround you.''
Geet could see sincerty in his eyes.
''Geet I think this is was they call love at first sight.''
''Love are you sure Maan.''
''I don't know Geet why don't we figure out together and I promise you one thing I will never hurt you.''
Geet nodded.
''I don't know why but I trust you more then anyone.''
Maan smiled and pulled Geet ot himself. Gesturing her to put her head back on his shoulder and she did.
''Geet why don't we go to the holloween party together that is held on the campus this sunday. This way we will know each other and are feelings more.''
''I will be ready at 8.''
Maan could feel Geet's smile touch his shoulder.
''I persume that is a yes.''
Maan said smiling. Geet nodded. He kissed on hair.
''You need rest let me walk you to your apartement.''
Both stood up and hand in hand they walked towards Geet's apartement.
Somewhere at the campus
She walked into her room feeling wild she trew all her belongings of the table.
''How dare he to gesture her to put her head on his shoulder. How dare he, doesn't he know he is only mine.''
She yelled. She grabbed the Maan cut out by his shoulder.
''Why are you doing this, don't you understand we belong together. Don't do this to me. ''
She pushed to cut out a side. It fell on the floor. Something suddenly got into her she ran fell on her knees. and took the cut out in her lap.
''I am sorry Maan this isn't you fault, but Geet's and she will pay for it. How dare she putting a arm on my Maan's shoulder how could she come this close to you.''
Suddenly she pushed to cut out out of her lap again.
''And how dare you promise her you will never hurt her. Maan you will be mine soon and that's my promise to you.''
Again her scary laugh filled the room. Geet was smiling thinking about Maan she fell on her bed rolling and smiling to herself.It was the day of the party. Geet was feeling so happy. She was almost ready. She was just combing her hair while singing to herself.
''Will my first love be true and real'
She smiled while she put the comb back grabbing the necklace from her table while singing.
'' my daddy tells me
That I light up his world
Everyday he says "Darlin,
You're my best girl"
He tried to teach me
From the very start
The meaning of love
So nobody breaks my heart''
She smiled to herself while she grabbed her earrings from the table.
''I know I'm not a little
Girl anymore
Cuz I'm feeling things
I've never felt before
Sweet sensations
And anticipations
Calling commotion
To my emotions''
Suddenly Geet felt two strong arms embracing her from behind.
''Acha you aren't a little girl anymore. So you feel sweet sensations, huh.''
Geet blushed.
''Maan.''
Maan kissed her cheek.
''Haan Misty.''
Geet leant her head back, leaning completly on Maan.
''How did you come in.''
''Your door was open.''
''Hmm I must forget to close it when Pari left.''
''Acha where you so lost in thinking about me, that you forgot to close the door.''
''Maan.''
Geet whined. Maan kissed her cheek,
''I love my name from your lips.''
Geet blushed.Maan kissed her other cheek.
''I love when you blush, just for me.''
She turned arround and hugged him. Maan hugged her back. Slowly they broke apart.
''Chalein.''
Geet nodded both entered the party, walking hand in hand. Two pairs of eyes fumed looking at them hand in hand. Her eyes where fixed on them. She swore Geet would pay for this. Geet felt like someone was looking at her she look back but saw no-one looking at her.
''What's wrong Misty.'''
Geet saw his worried face. He really cared a lot for her she smiled and shook her head.
''Kuch nahi.''
Seeing her smile a smile even came on Maan's face. Just then Geet's eyes saw Sam and Adi walking hand in hand.
''OMG Maan I think Sam is dating Adi.''
Maan saw it too.
''Hmmm.''
Adi and Sam wallked over to them.'
''Hey Adi I never knew you where dating Sameera.''
''Haan Maan we both needed to be sure about our feelings first before coming out with this news.''
''You needed to be sure.''
''Sameera don't start.''
''Whatever btw Maan you look hot, Geet not bad you made Maan yours.''
''Sam what's wrong with you calling another hot.''
''Please Adi don't start don't be so insecure.''
''I am not insecure.''
''Of course your not.''
Before Adi could reply Geet stepped in.
''Heyy you both look amazing together.''
''Thanks.''
Both said. Then Adi took Sam to the dance floor. Geet looked at Maan and noticed him lost somewhere.
''Kya huwa Maan.''
''Huh kuch nahi.''
Maan changed his mood quikly he didn't want Geet to know he didn't trust these two.He went on his knees.
''Can I have a dance ma 'am.''
Geet giggled and put her hand in his. Maan lead her to the dance floor. He put his hand on her waist. Geet put her head on her shoulder while they slow danced. Someone was going mad in anger. While Geet had the best night of her life. Maan dropped her home. He kissed her head.
''I really enjoyed Geet.''
''So did I Maan I had the best day of my life today.''
Maan smiled and took her in a hug. After they parted Geet walked into her room to get a peacefull sleep. She was sleeping peacefully when she fell a splash of water on her face she opened her eyes. She tried to move but she couldn't all she saw was someone's shadow.Her arms where tied up.
''Who is this.''
She asked in a terrified voice.
''Geet Handa you touched my Maan with this hand nah.''
The person broke a glass on that arm. Geet screamed in pain.
''This is just a warning remember stay away from my Maan. Or next time the warning will be worse.''
and then the person left. Geet screamed for help and out of pain. But no-one heard her screams. The next day Maan woke up early he decided to suprise Geet he bought a flowers and walked to her room he was about to knock when he realised the door was open he walked inside. The sight infront of him froze him. geet was lying tied up in the bed with blood spots on her arm and on the floor her rushed to her. He freed her took her in his arms and rushed to the hospital on the campus. When Geet opened her eyes Maan kissed her whole face. He had the feeling he would loss her.
''I love you never think of leaving me.''
He said in a broken voice. But Geet didn't reply.He looked at her face and carresed it.
''Misty you okay.''
She simply nodded she was feelings scared being close with Maan but how would she tell him that. Days passed and Geet was discarged and was even almost healed. But she kept aloof. Maan tried to ask her what happened that night but she used to tell me she didn't know and hardly talked to him. Maan was the whole time with her he tried everything to make her smile and maker her normal but nothing worked. One day he was trying again that day Geet noticed pain adn fallure in his eyes. She hated seeing him like this. She was scared but she decided that her love was stronger then her fear. She took Maan's hand in hers.
''Maan I need to tell you something.''
Maan sat next to her.
''Tell me Misty.''
Geet told him the whole truth. Maan hugged her tight.
''Don't be scared Misty I promise I will protect you. You see this bracelet I gave you after you came back from it has a tracer in it. So that I Always now where you are.''
''I love you Maan.''
''I love you to Misty.''
Just then Pari walked over to them.
''Maan I went into sam's room like decided.''
''Damn I forgot about Adi's room in all this.''
A confused Geet looked at them. Pari told her everything she and Maan talked about.
''maan I found a human size cut out of you in Sam's room she is addicted with you.''
''What but.''
''Maan there is no time as she has planned her new move go to her room now while I am taking Geet to the police.
''But''
''Maan trust me before it's to late.''
''maan let's just listen to her.''
Maan headed to Sam's room while Geet went with Pari. Maan bumped into Adi.
''Adi I am going to Sam's room why don't you join me.''
''Why.''
''You will know.''
When they entered Adi was shocked to see Maan's cut out and a lot pics of Maan. Just then Sam entered the room. Adi was fuming.
''What''
''You tell me.''
He said pointing at Maan's cut out.Sam giggled.
''That idiot I can't believe she still had all this Pari bhi nah, stupid kahi ki.''
Sam laughed it off.
''Pari.''
''Haan Maan two years back she had bought this cut out. She was a huge fan of yours. All this pics must be of her old collection. When I figured out you where dating Geet. I was teasing Pari that maybe I should tell Geet that you used to drool over Maan. And this put all this in my room probably cause she knows this guy here.''
She said pointing to Adi.
''Get's way to easy jealous. Can't believe she still had all this.''
Everything became clear suddenly. She trapped him and the fool he was didn't even trust his own bestie. Know he undertood why she knew it was a plan, why she was hell bend on so called helping him. OMG he just realised Geet was in danger.
Pari walked with Geet to a dark room somewhere at the campus.
''Pari what are we doing here. '''
''Your so dumb.''
''What.''
Pari pushed her in the room and turned on the light. It was full with Maan's pics.
''You didn't even reconigze my voice that night.''
''Pari what are you saying, what is all this.''
Geet said with a trembling voice.
''Geet oh Geet it was me all the time from Maan's dad to you.''
''Why''
''Because darling I want him I knew bidding Rajeev good bye was the only way saying hello to Maan but then you came between our love so it is time to say bye to you to now.''
She marched dangerously towards Geet.
''Pari don't I am your friend nah.''
Geet tried hoping she would let her go. Pari laughed.
''Darling in the name of our friendship I gave you so many warnings first the drugs then that night but you just couldn''t stay away from Maan could you.''
Just then the door swung open.
''Game over Pari.''
Maan, Adi and Sameera marched inside. Maan ran towards Geet who was trembling while Adi and Sam took a screaming pari away to the police station. Maan hugged a shaking Geet.
''Sssh it's over you safe now darling.''
''Maan I thought it was the end.''
''sssh don't think that way. I told you nah I will never let anything happen to you.''
He said carresing her bracelet.
''Misty nothing can come between us.''
''I love you Maan.''
''I love you to Geet.''
Edited by angel-ki-shona - 11 years ago
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Entry 3:
A TRAP

You are late.

Sorry naaa baby.

You always do this. She start walking away from him

No actually today it's your fault. He said stopping her in her track

Excuse me. How it is my fault?? She asked confused on his statement

Woh I was dreaming about you naa isliye

And what you were dreaming?? she asked irritated

Who actually in my dreams WE WERE he said coming close to her and stretching the word WE WERE

Maaan she cut him in mid by slightly hitting him blushingly turned her face.

What MAAAN Geet its Maan with double A okay now listen what WE WERE DOING

Nooo I don't want to

Arey suno na

Maan please stop it

What please at least for once listen na what I wanna say

Okay shoot

Woh you and me

Tum aur mai

hum

Ummm she responds looking in his eyes lost

Actually we were playing ladder And I was winning Maan said innocently

WHAT???

Haa kyu what you thought he made a cute innocent face

Geet was confused hearing him.

Seeing her reaction he laughed hysterically.

Geet was confused first but seeing him laughing like mad she understand he was making fun of her and was outraged

You are gone Maan. I hate you she ran to smack him hard with her books, and Maan was running to save his life.

Maaan you idiot, moron, gadhe I will not leave you today she said chasing him

Chodna bhi mat, mere jaise roz roz nhi milte he said laughingly while running

They come in canteen while their cat dog chasing still continue

Seeing them someone was burning in jealousy. And was thinking to separate maaneet. He called someone

Person 1 -all set

Person 2 -yup

Person 1- good and he cut the call. very soon I will separate you both. Enjoy as much you want now. Soon I will make Geet mine.

A person was standing in the corridor looking for someone

A girl come and tapped that person from behind

Angad - I was waiting for you

Disha - tell me the plan

After discussing everything Disha left

Here Maan came and hide behind Jia

Ahh Jia save me nhi toh this devil will kill me.

Oh ho Geet why are you behind my Maanu

Maanu ki bachi iss Maan ko toh aaj mai chodugi nhi aaj

Toh phle konsa chodti hu, agar chodo toh kisi aur ka number aaye na huh

Jia you shut your Maanu puran or else I am going to kill you both

Wow then we will be together in heaven at least go ahead Hearing her all broke in a fit of laughter.

Maan and Jia high five each other seeing Geet fuming. Whenever she is angry her nose turned red and it always amused them and they always do something to make her angry

Okay now tell me what he did today

Woh he he woh Geet shutter while speaking

Ha ha bolo Geet what I did Maan said enjoying her plight knowing well she can't say what he said and what she think.

Arey Geet bol na kya kiya iss Maanu ne

Jia smacked Adi for calling her Maanu, Maanu ( Adi met them in college)

Hey how dare you call him Maanu it's only my copyright dare you call him that again. said Jia showing her eyes to him.

Oh sorry sorry wo kya hai na we are not so used to hear Maan na when we are with you so that is why I forget Adi said sarcastically

Huh whatever, okay Maanu tell me what you did now? Why she is all ready to kill you

Haw Jia I did not do anything said Maan making a shocked face

I know you are not so innocent so tell me honestly Jia asked sternly

Maan gave a naughty smile and Jia smacked him hard.

Owww hey what was that for?? Maan asked making funny angry face

Maanu how dare you tease her like that

Aww Jia good I love you baby this moron deserve more hard smacks from you

Haina aur nhi toh kya how dare he tease you WITHOUT ME Jia said making a shocked face

And hearing her all again laughed and Geet hit her hard on her arm

OWWW Geet now what was that for, its hurting yaar.Maanu is right you are becoming an elephant.

WHAT Geet exclaimed

See the place where you hit it has become so red said Jia rubbing her arm

YOU CALL ME AN ELEPHANT AND MAAAN YOU SAID THAT

NO no geet I didn't tell her anything wo ab usko lagi na toh usko pta chal gya and make an innocent face

YOU BOTH ARE GONE TODAY I HATE YOU both run to save her life and Geet start chasing them.

But somewhere someone was burning seeing them together enjoying so much and wishing to separate them all so that he can get what he/she wants.

After the chasing and hitting they went to attend their class

The first class was history

I hate history and mostly I hate history professor. He is so boring na yaar. It should be that new professor who recently joins our college she is really hot haina

Geet smacked him

Maan shut your mouth or else

Arey Geet mouth se kya hoga aankhein band krva iski Jia commented and all three giggled

Maan glared her

Awww Maanu don't show me your sexy big eyes it don't scared me ya if you want we can play game who will blink first.

Her suggestion makes other three giggle

Jia stop calling me Maanu it sound so stupid

Okay than I will call you Maanu Jaanu now happy Maan glared at her hard and she winked at him

It was getting hard for Adi Pinky and Geet to muffle their laugh in the class.

Her calling him Maanu always irritates him. When they were busying in their so called fighting a girl entered in their class.

All head turned toward her. She was really hot and beautiful

May I come in sir?? Asked the girl

Yes come in. don't you think you are too early for your class said the professor sarcastically

I am sorry sir actually I am new in this college and don't know where the class was so

Okay now come in professor turned toward students

So students she is Disha new comer in your class so treat her well he said and warned r students knowing well how they made a new comer's life hell with their teasing and ragging.

Wow she is damn hot

Maan will you stop this or not

Now what I did, don't you think she is really before he could finish Jia smacked him from behind

Oye we are very straight so we don't see girl like that and other again giggled

Fine if you both have so many problems with me than alright I will sit somewhere where I can drool over her without any disturbance

Maan stand up and sit at the last giving them now what will you do now look

Geet and Jias mouth was open seeing him and decided to teach him a lesson

Hey Geet ye Maanu Jia glared at Pinky I mean Maan ko aaj kya hua asked Pinky

Kuj nhi lagta hai aaj janaab ko dose dena pdega Geet said thinking something

Bilkul theek kha said Jia both gave each other an evil look

Other side professor told Disha to sit

Disha who was already looking at Maan from the time she entered in class got the opportunity to sit with Maan as now he was sitting alone on the last bench and directly went toward him

Hey can I sit here??

He gave Disha sweet smile and moves to give her seat to sit

Geet was fuming seeing them together and Maan enjoying her company

Dekh kaise chipak ke baitha hai isko toh mai aaj chodugi nhi

Oh Geet tu fikar na kar mai hu na

Geet glared at her tujhe bhi kya jaroorat thi wo sab bolne ki dekh rooth ke wha uss chudail ke paas baitha hai

Ye lo I was just helping you Jia said making an innocent face

Oh thank you so much kitni acchi help ki tumne

Oh yaar don't worry kha jayega tere paas hi ayega so chill let the class end then will teach him a lesson how dare he leave my Geetu baby and sit with that bimbo haina

Tu and tere leasson no need okay I will handle him myself

Soon class came to an end

Maan and Disha were still busy in their talk when Geet, Jia come to them

Maanu won't you introduce your new friend to us? Jia said sweetly

What Maanu Maan you didn't tell me your friends call you Maanu

No no actually its only she call me that

Oh is she your GF?

No no she is not

Oh I was scared for a moment so you are single right

Oh woh mai he shutter and Geet s eyes were on him

Arey who said he is single? He is in a beautiful relationship with his looong time actually childhood friend and now his GF Jia said ever so sweetly blinking her eyes and Geet was killing Maan with her. Geets' deadly glares and Jia's ever so sweet words were making him scare for his dear life thinking about what's running in their mind.

What really Maan ?? Disha asked shocked but soon her shocked expression turned into seductive one

So what I think now Maan is bored with his so called long I mean childhood friend come GF haina Maan so I will be his refreshment right Maan. Disha said seductively rubbing his arm with her dirty hand while Maan gulped his saliva seeing Geet's deadly glares

Geet - Keep your hand away from him

Disha - why is your personal property

Geet- yes

Disha- umm I don't think so

Geet - youuu

So Maan will you come tonight with me to the Disc it will be stress booster for you when you have decided to break up with your long term Girlfriend she said looking at Geet

Before Maan could say anything Jia spoke

Oops I am afraid Disha darling how will he come with you said Jia shockingly

Why not Disha asked confused

Wo kya hai na Disha aaj Maan ka stomach upset hone wala haisaid Geet glaring him

What both Maan and Disha screamed shocked

Adi Jia pinky looked at their faces muffling their laugh

Ha aur hawaon mai smell bhi ayegi saath saath said Geet making a shocked horrible face

With her comment Adi and Jia burst into laughter

Maan looked at them angrily for making fun of him.

Enough both of you, I am not saying anything to you all it does not mean you can make fun of me. And ya Geet I am not a kid. I can take care of myself very welI

Maan why are you shouting on us? Asked Geet

Maanu we are not your enemy we just want to save you from these bimbos said Jia looking at Disha disgustingly

Enough Jia I am not a baby and you my mom to tell me what to do and what not and I know to save myself. Don't interfere in my life. Jia was hurt hearing him she left from there hearing his words

Enough Maan tumhe hua kya hai?? I didn't expect this from you, why you are getting so hyper?

Please Geet you are my girlfriend it does not mean you can control my life so just stay away from me I don't need a GFwho just want to control my life. And he left from there leaving a shocked Geet behind

Disha came to Geet with an evil smirk

Tichk tichk Geet I am feeling really bad for you see how your childhood buddy come BF went leaving you behind.

Just shut up I know how to take care of my BF from there. you just find someone else to reduce your body heat saying this she left leaving Disha smirking on her plan which is almost successful.

Adi tume Jia ko dekha asked Geet

No yaar don't know where she is. Said Adi

Oh babaji ab kha doondo? Pta nhi kha hai.you go and check backside I will see her in college

When she was going toward college playground she bump with someone but before he can hold her she managed herself not giving that person a chance to touch her

Ouch I am sorry sir I was in hurry so didn't see you I am really sorry

Oh!! It's okay Geet but why are you in so much hurry? Asked her history professor Dev

Woh sir I am looking for Jia, do you see her asked Geet worriedly

Jia?? no I didn't but I can help you in finding her he offered his help

No no thanx sir I will manage she was about to go but dev stopped her

Ah Geet I want to tell you something, come with me to my office

Geet want to run from there but she can't he is her professor but how can she left her friend also who will be crying somewhere

Hmm woh sir I have to go and find Jia she needs me now. I am sorry sir but I will talk to you later she was again about to run but Dev's word stopped her

I know about the fight between you and Maan

Sir?? She was confused

Ya Geet I heard everything what happened in the class

She lowered her eyelashes

Geet I think you should think again on your relation. I am your professor and I will always give you right advice

Thank you sir but it's my personal matter and I know how to handle it thank you once again now I think I should leave my friend need me and she left from there.

While searching Jia Angad met her

Geet was irritated totally

First her fight with Maan, second Jia missing third dev's so called advice and now Angad

Hey Geet listen

i dont have time

Geet did you think about what I told you

I don't find it important

What?? Its matter of my life my love and you didn't find it important WTH was that? Do you think I am a road side romeo?

I didn't say that

Or what Geet you know how much I love

Geet cut him in mid

Listen Angad right now I am not in mood to sit or listen anything just leave and if Maan saw you with me he will not like it. You know na how much he dislike you

It's because he know I love

Please Angad stop it,

Alright I know my own way

Hope you will not do anything stupid

I don't care I want my love

Jab tak mai hu tab tak nhi Maan came from behind and stand beside Geet

Fine toh tumhe hi plhe jana hoga said Angad looking in his eyes angrily

Do whatever you want but you will never succeed

And I will not let my love go from my hands saying this he left from there

Maan how you come here, you were going with that your new found girlfriend na then go with her now why you are here, who we are to you,now we will not interfere in your life you just

Before she could speak more Maan slammed his lips on her to shut her mouth. Geet struggled to come out from his gril after some seconds Maan left her her

Sorry

What? What did you say? I didn't hear you? Come again

I am sorry Geet, I just got irritated so all that I didn't mean it

Oh ya and do you have any idea your those stupid words hurt me so much. How many times I told you to control your temper but na you are THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA. Oh I am sorry, I should not tell you what to do and what not. I should not be a control freak girlfriend right she turned her face other side showing her anger

I am really sorry Geet bola na , I don't want to say all that but you know na I always need you please I am sorry na he said cutely touching his ears

Maan aaj toh keh diya dare you say that again do you have any idea how much it hurt me and Jia, OH TERI Jia shit

What happen and where is she?

I am searching for her only don't know where she went after your shouting

Oh god, come let's find her

Ha chalo

They found her sitting in the college playground

Both come and sit on the both sides of her

Finally found you

Now why the hell you come here go back to your bimbo said Jia wiping her nose with the back of her hand

I am sorry dear

To hell with your sorry

Arey yaar kbi kbi ho jata hai na

Ha toh abi I don't want to talk with you, and now onwards will not interfere in your life also lave me alone

Arey tab toh prob ho jayegi, mijhe unn bimbos se kon bchayega

Geet iss se bol de don't talk to me

Arey don't drag me in okay

Jia looked at her keenly and said

Ya lagta hai tumhe tumhara dose mil gya iss liye you are so glowing haina she got up and went to washroom to fresh up.

Maaneet tried to stop her but she left

Aaa

Suddenly they heard a scream

Whose scream that was? They said in union

She left toward the side from where that noise come

They reached in the ladies washroom and were shocked to see Disha stabbed in her stomach

Jia was standing there shocked

Geet - OMG she is Disha

Maan - Who did this to her, Jia do you

Jia -WTH Maanu why wouId I kill her? I did not do anything

Maan - I am not blaming you Jia just asking, did you saw anyone here

Jia - no there was no one. When I entered I saw her like this only she said shivering

Geet - relax yaar we are not blaming you

Maan - Let's take her to the hospital

Jia - But how can us, I mean its police case. It's will be a case of murder, what we will answer police??

Geet - but we can't leave her here also

Maan went close to her and checked her pulse,

Maan - she is dead

Jia - OMG OMG OMg now what we will do??

Geet - don't worry yaar, we didn't do anything wrong so no one can harm us

Jia - ya but

Dev - what you guys doing here he saw dead Disha

Oh my God you guys did this

Jia - no no sir we didn't do anything

Geet - yes sir we didn't do anything we heard a scream and when we came there, found her stabbed dead

Dev - but how can I believe you, and Maan what are you doing sitting close to her

Maan - sir I was checking whether she is alive or not but she is no more

Dev - OMG what happened in our campus, A Murder OH GOD!! I have to call police

Maan - yes sir you should call police immediately

Soon police arrived in the college

The whole college was present there seeing the scene

Police questioned Disha's classmates

She was new and it was her first day so no one know much about her, but they did tell police the hot argument between Disha and Maaneet and their friends

And Dev also gave his statement that he also saw them arguing and also that Maan is a flirt and he was flirting with Disha also

The police man was a chubby man, his name MR. GUDGUD KUKDOO PANDEY he always put his hand on his big tummy like is pregnant and his nine month going on and always made a sound like a hen do "kukdoo kadooo, teri bodhi vich juu"(A speck in the beard of a thief.) whenever he got a hint about the case or have any doubt on anyone.

Kukdoo kdooo oh ho aaj aayi aaj gyi hmmm very interesting said PM (Police man)

Ye banda murder mai b interest doond rha hai mumbled Geet

Firstly I want to talk to three of you he said pointing toward Maaneet and Jia but one by one

Trio were shocked they knew he was actually suspecting them

Yes sir trio said in union

First you come with me young man

Maan left with PM

So young man what is your name?

Sir Maan singh khurana said Maan with full of attitude

Maan singh khurana hmmm okay tell me do you know her

No sir she today only joined college

And on her first day you flirt with her, then fight and then killed her also

What rubbish sir I didn't kill her why would I kill her. I have no reason to kill her said Maanu angrily on his accusation

But I got to know that you and your friend have heated argument on her first day itself and it is enough to give you a reason to kill her

Yes we have argument but it was not so big that I would kill her

So tell me why you people argued

It was just I was teasing my Girlfriend by flirting with her and she got angry said something to me, I got angry and then left from there. It was not so worst that we would kill her. Neither me nor my friends did anything to her he said making himself clear

Okay so tell me where you went after that argument

Wooh I, I decided to go home so went to parking Maan said shuttering

Why are you nervous khurana

No sir nothing like that he said giving that PM a small smile it was more like he was trying to hide something or may be not

Are you sure you not hiding anything he said rubbing his tummy. Maan looked at him weirdly and replied

Yes sir

Hmm you can leave. send next one umm your girlfriend

But sir she also did not do anything

I did not ask you opinion Mr. send her in

Nodding Maan left

Is everything alright??Asked Geet once he comes out from office

Geet he wants to talk to you now

Geet was scared but she went inside

Oh come in Miss??

Geet sir

Miss Geet yes come and sits

So Geet will you please tell actually what happened in your class room

Ji sir??

About your fight with Miss Disha

Wo sir she was flirting with Maan and I did not like it

So when the class end we went toward them, there was just little argument between us because she was throwing herself on my Maan she said disgustingly

So you killed her

Nooo sir I didn't kill her she said widening her eyes

Ya I was feeling disgust seeing her flirting with Maan but it doesn't mean I will kill her.

Jealousy Miss Geet it makes person does many things which he never thought to do.

Sir there is nothing like that; I was not jealous just irritated seeing him with her. He actually always does this to make me irritate. There is nothing serious in all that and moreover I trust my Maan. She said proudly.

Hmmm he again rubbed his stomach Geet noticed it and make a weird face

So where were you after the class

Wooh woh sir I was looking for Jia

Jia ??

Ya sir our friend.

And why so?? he asked suspiciously

Wooh because Maan shouted on her.she was hurt with his shouting on her so left the class, I was looking for her

And where you find her

In playground sir

What she was doing there

she was sitting on the bench crying, Maan was with me and we were trying to console her and she didn't listen to us and went to washroom to fresh up there she screamed seeing Disha and we also reached there hearing her shout. And then professor Dev came there.

Professor Dev ?? What he was doing there??

I don't know sir.

PM was thinking something and suddenly said "KUKDOOO KADOOO TERI BODI VICH JUU"

Jii ?? Geet gave him weird look

PM cleared his throat and tells her to send her friend Jia

But sir she is also innocent and she was very scared seeing that

It's your problem miss let me do my work send her in

ji sir?

Wait listen,want to ask something

Ji

After sometime later Geet came out and told Jia to go inside

Jia was shivering while entering

She knocked the door

Come in. sit.

She was shivering

So Miss Jia

Sir I didn't do anything and I don't know who did it also

PM narrowed his eyebrow at her and rubbed his tummy (he rubbed it when he found something fishy)

I didn't ask you anything yet Miss she stopped her blabbering

So Miss Jia where were you after the class

Wooh sir I I was in playground

What were you doing there?

Wooh sir I was upset so want to stay alone for some time so went there

Aisa kya hua tha Miss

Wo nothing serious sir, bus mood theek nhi tha

Are you pregnant?

WHAT???

Nhi wooh only pregnant women do weird things and its really worst. He said remembering his wife

Jia looked at him weirdly

Oh bad joke lets come to the point so you were in the playground only when your friends came

Ji sir she said in law voice

Jia was lost in thinking something. Her face was showing her fear like she was hiding something.

Are you sure??

Ji jii sir.

Listen Miss it's a case of murder if you know anything please tell me

N o no sir I don't know anything she said in meek voice

"KUKDOOO KDOOO TERI BODI VICH JUU"

Jiii??

oh nothing go

She came out from the office

All asked her

Are you alright

Haa ha I want to go back home

Ya come I will drop you Said Maaneet

Maaneet was noticing her silent behaviour but think that she is scared

Jia (ST) what will I do now; I should not do it, what if Maanu Geetu came to know about that.how will they react? No no I can't take that risk. I lost my love but can't lost their friendship.Oh god please show me a way.

Maan dropped her home and Geet decided to live with her seeing her silence.

Jia tell me what is bothering you? I know it's not about just that murder something else is bothering you tell me

Nhi geet there is nothing believe me. I will rest then will be fine bas yaar now me feeling tired

Okay you sleep

Geet called Maan

Maan I think Jia is hiding something from us

I also feel same. Keep an eye on her she can't hide anything from us for long

Hmmm take care bye

Bye love you

Love you too

After talking to Maan Geet went to Jia's room and saw her sleeping. She was about to go but stopped seeing something. She went toward her bed and saw she was holding her bag

She tried to remove it but her hold on her was tight. When she as holding her bag to pull it she found something sticky and was shocked to see blood she jerked the bag from her awaking Jia from her sleep and was again shocked to see the knife clad in blood, something else also which make her eyes widened.

Other side Angad was worried thinking about Disha that if anyone comes to know about his plan what will be the consequences. But his plan was full proof and no one caught hold of her mobile also and no one knew her number so that they can track or know whom she called, so he is safe.

Next day in college trio went to college but Jia was not with him

Both were angry on her for what she did but can't say anything to anyone. How can they put their friend in trouble? She became selfish but how can them toward their friend and their distance was also noticed by PM.

Jia tried to talk to them when saw them coming

Guys please listen to me. I know I did wrong but please try to understand

We did not expect this from you. How could you. It's not a small thing said Geet

I know I accept. I was fool but

But what how could you knowing that it can create trouble for your friends said Maan angrily

I am sorry

Your sorry won't do anything, galti ki sazza toh milegi

Maan she said crying

PM come to them

"KUKDOOO KADOO TERI BODHI VICH JUU"

Trio went silent seeing him

Well you will be glad to know that we got the culprit and all thanx to Miss Geet Maan

Jia was shocked to hear him and look at both

Come I will show you the real culprit

Jia was hell scared; Maan was getting angry seeing her like that and Geet was thinking to tell Maan about Angad after this.

They all went to the office where all staff, and Angad was also present and waiting for them only

After coming in office PM disclose close the real culprit.

It was none other than DEV KAMINA KAPOOR.

Everyone was shocked to know that

And then PM told all everything

when he said Maan is a flirt. He found something fishy

Why will any professor say anything like that about his student? Then while questioning Geet she told him that Dev met her in corridor which is near washroom and playground and after inspecting more he came to know that there is no office, class or staff room near washroom there is only playground and lockers for student. So why Dev was there and he also reached on spot soon.

Then they went to Disha's house all proofs were already cleaned but still they caught hold of something which made their doubt clear. It was the picture of Dev and Disha hugging each other. It was under her pillow. And they got her phone bills which Dev forget to take. Most calls were on Dev's number and some from a week on Angad.

First they went to Dev's house and got all proofs which he was about to burm

Flashback

PM barged in his house

Hey what are you doing in my house?

"KUKDOO KADOO TERI BODHI VICH JUU" you will soon know. Arrest him

Why what I did

In the charge of Ms Disha's murder

WTH I didn't

Na na mr. don't these proofs are enough to prove you guilty now be a good boy and tell me why you Killed that her?

He kept quite

GKP beat him like hell

Ahhh I was bored with her and want GEET

what?? Gf of Maan singh khurna your student

Ya so I made a trap

What trap??

Disha told me that Angad hired her to create distance between Maaneet and their friend.

I know about their dislike toward each other for some reason so decided to use it in my favour

After her argument I got a chance and called her in washroom and killed her.

When I was returning back I thought to make Geet mine as no one was there but she was adamant on searching her friend I soon saw Angad coming toward us so I left and met Maan mid-way and when he asked me about geet I told him I saw her going toward washroom.. I know geet ja chuki hogi wha se but my plan backfired when I saw them together

And when I saw them going toward washroom ii went behind them and do all that drama.. bas.

Very good nice but alas!! Plan failed

Flashback End.

Knowing about his intention toward geet he marched toward Dev and start beating him

Meri Geet pe nazar dalta hai. I will kill you bas****

Geet ran to Maan

Maan chodo usko.

Mr Maan kanoon ko apne haath mat lo

PM order his men to take him out

and said KUKDOO KADOOO baki story toh reh gyi

you guys know Mr Angad hired her to create problem between you friends to get his love but Mr pyaar dohkhe se nhi milta he said patting Angad's shoulder and Maan glared him

Sir we have something to give you said Geet giving him the knife.

Actually Jia thought Angad killed her as she heard Angad Disha plan in playground. So thought maybe he did this just to create problem for Maan so she tried to save both we are sorry sir.

Chlo we got all proofs all the best. And he left.

Maan glared both and left. Both ran behind

Maan listen na

Kya suno geet that my friend didn not consider me important to share her feelings

Maan tum

I am sorry, I know you don't like him.

toh mere liye kuj bhi karogi

haa she said looking determinedly at him

why he asked

cause you are my Maanu Jaanu

he smiled and hugged her if you love him then say it

pakka

do it fast before I change my mind

NO

Angad came there hey I am sorry. I should not do it but I was blind in my love

its okay but dare you again plan anything like it

aur nhi toh pta chala kisi aur professor ki GF nikal aayi said Geet and all laughed.

So whats the plan

Let's all go for a date Date exclaimed Jia

Together Maan Angad said in union

Picnic hai ya date said Maan making horrible face

Shut up Maan . hayeee kitna maza ayega high fived Geet And Jia

And both boys shook their head on their crazy GFs


After college will go on our first date together said Jia getting excited

Wow Jia kitna mazaa ayegi

You both are crazy

Do you have any problem asked geet showing her big big eyes

No no why will I have

Chal Jia lets plan what we want them to do on our date

Both went and at on a bench

both boys look at each other making faces

Hey she so hot said Maan suddenly looking at some girl trying to divert Geets mind on him

Maaan you again started

Now what I do

Abhi btati hu aaj pakka tumhara stomach gadbad hone wala hai samjhe

And they go on.

Edited by angel-ki-shona - 11 years ago
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Entry 4:

the new beginning.
Geet and maan were studying in same college in Delhi . They two were best friends . Maan was a resident of Delhi and where as geet belonged to Mumbai . So for education she had come to Delhi and she stayed in hostel .
The hostel warden there was very strict , she always scolded the girls every time for small things . All the girls were fed up but they could not do anything .
This was a normal day in Delhi college . Geet got up at 5:00AM . It was rule , else no food for the whole day . Then after freshen up , 6:00Am they had to assemble for breakfast , else go empty stomach .
After breakfast , the hostel should be empty within 8:00AM , else the door would be locked . So geet rushed to her room to take her bag and started her journey to class . But that day , geet had a slight headache so she closed her room door from in and went to sleep .
After 8 : 00 A M when the warden came to check the doors , she thought geet had gone to class and so the door is closed , she ignored it and locked the main door and went in .
After sometime when geet woke up from her nap , she was feeling restless . To get some relief , she planned to go out to the hostel mess .
She opened the door of her room and went to towards the hostel gate , the gate was closed . So disheartened she went back to her room . Near the hostel gate was the warden's room , so it comes on her way towards her room .
While returning , she heard some strong sounds from the warden's room , but shrugged it . Then while nearing , it become more clear . It seemed like there were some persons inside talking .
Curiosity took over her and since the door was quite a jar , it was easy for her to peep .
What she saw shocked the wits out of her . She ran away from there and went to the secret path of the hostel known to her , maan and some more girls who wanted to sneak outside .
From that way she rushed to meet maan , on the way she said him to meet at their place . Maan sensed tension in her voice and immediately rushed .
Geet came there panting . She was tensed , scared and puffing . Maan was shocked seeing her condition ,
Maan : what happened geet ?
After some time geet told everything she saw there . hearing that maan was also shocked .
geet and maan planned to expose the warden . they planned to catch her red handed . so after some days geet again stayed without anyone's knowledge and then came when she thought that the warden would be busy .
she stood outside the warden's room and opened her mobile camera . the door was again slight ajar . she slowly sidled her mobile inside after switching on the camera. after satisfied with her work she pulled her mobile out and closed her camera .
she went to her room and checked the video . she was confident that this would be enough to expose her and her black works .
she went to maan and showed the proof . maan too was satisfied . geet kept her mobile safely in her bag and then she planned to attend the class .
evening when geet returned the first work she did was to copy this video to her computer ( laptop ) . then she took many copies of that video and hid them in many places in her room . since she was the alone resident of that room she had no danger and usually she would lock the door before going .
the next day maan got one CD from geet and posted it to their college . they were now they were waiting for action to be taken . after some days geet stayed once again to check whether is there any action taken .
she followed the same procedure. when she went she was glad to see nothing of that sort happening . she became happy and left to give this good news to maan . maan too became happy and Maaneet were peaceful .
Their friends gang consists of maaneet , adi , pinky , annie . All were together from the start of the college . Annie was maan's cousin and adi & pinky was a couple and maaneet were best of best friends .
After this fiasco , maaneet told everything to their gang and they were proud of their friends . But still now they had a minor doubt lingering-why was the warden not expelled .
But then they shrugged off it .
Some days passed . Now it was their exams going . After that they had vacations . So geet left for Mumbai . In this vocation , geet missed maan very much . She waited for her college to reopen so she could meet him .
During previous vacations , maan used to call her regularly . But this time , maan never called geet even once . This made geet angry . She thought to scold maan once she reaches . She was lost in her thoughts unknown to what game fate is going to play . A nasty game with her .
After vacation geet come back to her hostel for the start of a fresh year. Since she come a day before reopening, she was in her hostel. She got information that this year, she will have a roommate and she would come the next day. So she kept all her belongings properly. During tidying up her room, she came across the CD's.
She had totally forgotten about the CD's. she discarded them thinking now what their use is. She broke the each CD into two pieces. So that no one could know about it.
She too didn't call maan, nor messaged him of her arrival. She planned to supervise him. She was waiting eagerly for the next day.
Next day was the starting and a new year in the college. The hostel was filled with hustle bustle. The fresher's were to be welcomed in a grand way. So all were preparing for it.
Geet left for college. She was not interested in all this. She wanted to meet maan ASAP. She went to the college gate. her eyes were searching maan. He didn't come for nearly 10 minutes. She went in with a sad face. She went to the notice board to see the class for her this year. Unknowingly, her eyes searched for him. The bells rang indicating 1st period.
The class started, still there were no traces of maan. Geet started to panic thinking whether is all ok in his family. Now all her concentration was on his family. Thinking about them , much to her relief. After sometime maan came to class huffing. Geet became happy. After entering class , maan sat in the first row through the seat near geet was free. She wontedly kept the seat free for maan. Her smile disappeared. But then she shrugged it.
The whole duration of class she was waiting for him to turn. But she received only disappointment. As soon as the bell rang, she couldn't wait to talk to him. By the time she reached him, he had already left. Geet thought to meet him in the canteen. So she went.
There he saw all her friends sitting including aniee except maan. Though aniee was a year younger , she would always be found with geet and friends and maan was also over protective about his sister. Adi and pinky were in same year as maan but different stream. Geet went and dumped herself beside aniee.
Aniee was shocked seeing geet this angry.
Aniee : kya hua geet? Tum ne apni aise halat kyun banayi hai?(what happened geet? why is your condition like this?)
Geet: puch hi mat aniee..(don't ask at all aniee)
Pinky: [smrinking] phir chood aniee, mat puch.(then leave aniee, don't ask.)
Hearing pinky ,Geet's mouth turned o' shape.
Geet : nahi , nahi , tu puch aniee (no , no , you ask aniee )
Aniee : aacha geet.batau kya hua ? ( ok geet . tell what happened ? )
Geet : tumhara bhai hai . ( your brother . my this condition is due to your , idiot , stupid , moron brother ) [ pardon profanalities ]
Aniee: bhai ne kya kiya ? Wo tho . (what did brother do ? He was just.)
She was cut by geet.
Geet: bas aniee. Tum tho apne bhai ki taraf dari mat karo.janthi hum main tum dono bhai behenko.bhai ko fursat nahi hai apne dost se baat karni ke aur behen wo aagi hai bhai ki taraf dari karne.
(enough aniee . you don't support your brother. I know you duo very well. Brother doesn't have time to talk to his friend and sister comes to support him.)
Aniee : par suno tho geet(but listen na)
Geet : mein yahan se ia rahi hun (I am going from here). Saying so geet started to go from there but aniee'sa words stopped her.
Aniee : kya tum yeh jaana nahi chougi ki bhai ne tumher call kyun nahi kiya(don't you want to know to know why bro didn't call you)
Geet: iska mathlab tujepata hai(this means you know?)aniee nodded her head.
Now geet feared for the reason. . .
Aniee : geet thumhe pata hai na mere papa ki tabiyat thik nahi rehthi. bas chutti hote hi papa bohut bimar pad gaye. woh 15 din hospital ke chakkar lagane pade. phir yeh kam nahi tha ki mere dad ke friend ki beti aagi. aab bhai papa ke wajah se use seh rahe hai who bohut chipko hai. aur tho aur aab se woh humare college mein padhegi. aacha hua who hostel mein reh rahe hai. ghar par nahi. nahi tho meri khair nahi! aur abhi bhi bhai usi ke nakhre uthane gaye honge kyunki papa ne bhai se promise liya hai.
( u know our dad was not feeling well . as soon as vacation started he got serious. then 15 days he was busy in it . was this not enough my dad's friends daughter came to stay with us. and bro is bearing her coz of dad. she is very irritating . and more over she is studying in our college . I am in relief that she stay in hostel if not I would have not got peace . and now too bro might have gone to solve her idiotic problem . )
after hearing all this she had mixed emotion . first she felt pity for maan that he had gone through this much and she was not there to support him . then she got angry thinking about that chipko who had taken all her maan's timing . but what can he or she do when she was maan's dad's friends daughter . but then she wanted to spend some time with maan .
she somehow tried to make herself understand about the circumstances and went to attend the remaining classes . but this time when she reached class she saw maan already present there . she was glad that he dint try to avoid her and sat in his usual place but then frowned seeing him nervous . she slowly went to her place and kept the bag quietly . she sat down .
she waited patiently for maan to start the conversation . but he was sitting like the lecture board was the most important thing now so she had to break the ice .
geet : maan kya tumhara asie hi maun wrat rakhne ka irada hai ?
( do u plan to not talk like this ? )
maan : nahi geet .
( no geet )
geet : aacha? phir jab se aaye ho na mere se baat ki aur na sang the .
( oh . is it so ? then y r u not talking and being with us from the time u came ? )
maan : nahi geet who kya hua na ki papa ke friend ki bei aayi hui hai aur who usse samay se meri jaan kha rahi hai . mujhe samaj nahi aa raha ke mein usse chutkara kaise paau . papa ne tho yeh bhi kaha ha ki mein usse humare group mein shamil kar lun . par mein ne kaise bhi usse taal diya .
( no geet . actually what happened was my dad's friend's daughter had come home . and from that time she is hell bent on irritating me . dad even said to make her in our group . but somehow I made him ignore it . )
geet felt bad for him . after class maan said a small hi to all the group and left to meet that girl . geet to left for hostel . morning she was not so excited to meet her room mate . but now since she had met maan al her restless went away and she was eager to meet her room mate . she rushed to her room to welcome her room mate .
when geet went the room was locked so she thought that the room mate had not yet arrived after her class . so geet opened with her key and went inside and saw that there were bags kept already .
she saw tag of the posh airline . she came to know that now her privacy would be disturbed by some posh girl . but then she shrugged thinking to get a new friend .
after sometime geet heard the door voice . she became more excited . she stood up seeing the girl . she was really very posh . she was very elegant . she wore skirt which reached her knees and wore decent top .
geet could see a emotion of shock on her face seeing her . but after sometime it turned to a smile . and both hugged each other . geet welcomed her .
Girl : hi . my name is sameera . I am a first year student .
geet : hi sameera . can I can u sam if u don't mind ?
sam : no . y will I mind ? in fact I will be happy if u call me sam .
geet : great . u fresh up and come else the warden will make ur life hell the first day .
sam : kisi ki himmat jo Sameera singhaniya ko saza de sake ?
(no one dare give sameera singhaniya punishment . )
saying so both started laughing . after freshen up geet and sam started talking about each other . in one day they became good friends . geet promised to make her meet her group of friends .
then sam told her about the first day of her college . how it was . but when geet asked about her family . she changed her topic . this took geet's concentration but due to constant chatting she shrugged it thinking it to be her personal . not knowing that this was her biggest mistake .
the next day geet told about sam to adi and pinky . aniee and maan had gone for some work . they were happy and planned to make her member of their gang . geet became happy and thought to bring sam with her the next day .
the next day geet and sam came to canteen . maan and aniee had come there . maan and aniee were shocked seeing sam with geet . but somehow they controlled their surprise and asked geet .
M : Geet what is she doing here ?
G : arre maan . adi dnt tell u ? actually she is sam - my new room mate . she is 1st year .
A : hello .
G : sam this is maan , aniee , adi , and pinky .
sam : oh . hie maan and aniee .
geet : do u know them ?
aniee : geet u remember I told u about one person . she is sam . my dad's friend's daughter .
geet : oh . sry . I dnt knew about it .
geet showed a baby face to maan . who melted immediately .
later sam joined their group . but in the pretext of group she always used to stick to maan . when ever she saw maan with geet she would barge in . this made geet irritated . she would many times wonder why didn't she think maan's hesitance while making her join the group .
the only time when maan would get to talk to geet was during class . but that time too sam's msg would always be disturbing . he could not even ignore it as he promised his dad . but still something was a miss .
almost half year had passed . all was fine until one unfortunate day .
it was raining heavily in Delhi and usually maan and geet would enjoy rains by late night outing by breaking the hostel rules . it was a similar day . it was holiday and geet planned an outing with all her friends in rain . but maan decline straightly stating that he had a head ache . so geet too dnt force . for her more than enjoyment maan's health mattered .
so geet , adi , pinky and aniee went . even sam to declined that she had to go to maan's uncle's home . geet dnt reveal her plan to maan and sam .
geet and gang went to a mall nearby . there aniee , geet , pinky did loads of shopping and adi was the loadman carrying all the bags of madams . but none bothered . they planned to watch movie . so adi kept the bags in the car and came . they had their lunch in the mall food court .
during lunch geet spotted a familiar person sitting . seeing that person there her blood boiled . she slowly went to their side but she was not visible to conform her doubt . her doubt was conformed . she quietly went back and they went to see the movie . before going to the theater geet msg maan saying to get well soon . immediately she got reply that he was sleeping and he wouldn't able to msg her so not worry about him .
she kept reading the msg and walking . suddenly she hit a person and was goingto fall down . but a strong pair of arms protected her . but she dint want to be in his arms . as soon as she gained composure she came out of his grip . only to hear grasps of her friends .
yes that person was none other than maan . .
maan : arre geet careful .
geet : enough maan . I never knew that u even know to tell lies .
maan : geet pls listen to me .
geet : go to hell . aniee ,adi , pinky come with me if u want to see movie . these two want privacy . so let us leave them here . let them do whatever they want .
seeing geet angry none had the courage to say anything . so they went to see the movie . after movie geet was in the hurry to reach her hostel . she dnt want to face maan . so she said adi to drop her home soon . so adi left to drop her and pinky .
she wanted to avoid maan at any cost . she couldn't face him . how could he say lies so nicely . she always thought that maan was her best friends but he never thought like that .
she went to mumbai without telling anyone even adi or pinky neither aniee . this made them upset . but after some days geet returned changed . she stopped interacting much . she started to build a wall around her heart .
the trio was scared seeing her this state . but maan was least bothered . all mattered to him now was sam . he even stopped talking to geet . this made her more depressed . but she tried to smile for her friends who were taking so much care of her when she needed support when her biggest support got lost .
after some days she planned to start going college . when she went to her class the whole atmosphere made her nostalgic . maan and sam were together sitting in her row . but a thought came in her mind that how could sam come there ? but everything remained in her heart . she saw some other vacant space and occupied it . later she came to know that this is her every day routine . she would come to their class . wait till the clg starts and then returns back to her class . this hurt geet a lot .
more that maan's ignorance hurt her . she the whole day she sat there waiting for maan to call her . but he dint call her . geet left all hopes to get back her friend . but no one knows what fate has in store for us . right ? the same happened with geet . many days passed like this . it was now the time for their semester exams but geet was not able to concentrate . this affected her studies a lot . the trio was very worried . but maan showed no concern .
later the trio came to know y maan was behaving like that . actually he only wanted with him . no one else . this caused problem between maan and aniee too . aniee couldn't see he friend like that . so she slapped sam in front of maan . this angered maan and he too slapped aniee . this shocked aniee to the core . she couldn't believe that her maan bhai . . maan bhai slapped her . but what to do . she should believe it . however she tried to talk to maan he would tell her rude words and she would back off . getting fed up , she stopped talking to maan .
finally one day maan bombarded the bomb that he would propose sam soon and they would marry soon . aniee stopped reacting . maan's dad was very happy with this decision . but maan's mom was reclusive . she never felt sam a part of their family . from the start she always felt that geet could become their family member . but all her wishes came crashing down . but she was happy that at least there would be some peace in the family if his dad agreed and that had happened . so now no tension .
but no one knew what was running on maan's mind . no one knew what he was going through . no one was even interested to understand what was the reason for him to take this step . . . he wanted someone to share everything that his heart has hid so deep . . . the pain which is inflicted in his heart . . . while knowing his love's life is in danger . . . no one could guess that how much he has done . . . but now he is fed up of all the pretence . . he wanted someone would could understand him . . . immediately his thought went to his friend and only love geet . . . he thought about all the hurt that he has given to her . . . how would he face her ? ? this thought broke him from inside . . . but alas no one was there to hear the sound of heart break . . . .
but some how he gathered courage and went to meet geet . . . since the day she knew about sam . . geet shifted to PG so she was free from the warden too . . . she stayed with pinky but gave rent despite of her refusal . . . maan came there . . . first pinky was angry seeing him there . . . but then her heart softened when she saw his condition . . she let him in . . like she understood him she said that no one was in home except geet and her and now she will go out so that they could talk . . . maan thanked pinky and she went out . . . maan with heavy steps went to geet's room . . there he saw the condition of geet which made his heart bleed . . . his guilt could be seen on his face for hurting his love . . . but what to do he had o do what he was doing . . . but today he couldn't give a second thought . . . he ran to geet's lap . . . he sat down and kept his head on her lap and started crying . . .
like she understood his unsaid words she kept quiet and started threading his hair calming him down . . . this made maan more guilty and he became more detemined to tell geet the truth . . . after sometime when maan calmed down she gave him water . . he took it and gulped it . . . then now it was the time to tell the truth which was eating him from so many days . . .
maan : geet r u not angry from me ? ?
geet : how can I be angry from u maan . . .
though geet never expressed maan could see immense love in her eyes for him . .
maan : r u not angry coz I am going to propose sam ?
geet : no maan . . . infact I am happy that finally u found love . . .
maan : she is not my love geet . . I am only doing this to expose her . .
geet : what maan ? ? what do u want to expose ? ? ? and that to about sam ? ?
maan : this is a long story geet . . but tell me geet did this question never came in your mind that y was the warden not sent out of the college for her cheap act ? ?
geet : it came maan . . but what does this has to do with sam and ur love act ? ?
maan : there is a very big connection . . sam is princi's cousin . .
geet : what ? ? but she never said this . .
maan : y will she say this . . she became our friends only for some purpose . . and that purpose was u . . princi wanted to destroy u . .
geet : but y ? ?
all the information that maan would give would come as a shocker for geet . . .
maan : geet u remember the warden fiansco when we planned to check again the warden that time we found that no one was there right ? ? ?
geet : yes . . I had seen . . .
maan : but the truth was the warden had hid behind the gate . . she had seen u seeing her room . .
geet : but how do u know all this ? ?
maan : one day I was crossing the princi's cabin . . there were no pune standing there . . I was shocked . . but then I thought that he would have gone out . . but then I heard voices coming from the princi's room . . that caused my suspection . . I slowly peeped from the window . . I saw through the window that the warden ad the princi were playing the CD that we sent . . I became very suspicious that y was the princi showing the CD to warden where as he should have rusticated her . . . I was trying to hear their convo . . I wasn't able to hear much but I had my eyes alert . . after sometime the warden came out . . then next day u saw their room . . that time warden was coming from outside . . she saw u peeping in her room . .
I was also standing there only and seeing her . . she was going to come to u when suddenly sam came from no where and took her aside . . . that time we dnt knew who she was . . she told the warden to control for some days and she would take care of this geet . . . she promised warden that her truth wouldn't come out coz on her only they too depended . . . I was really shocked . . . I came to know that princi was also involved in this . . . I couldn't believe . . . but how could we dnt believe what our eyes sam . . . from that time I am following them . . . then only I came to know that they are doing this from years and spoiling lives of innocent people by making them drug addict . . .
I also got some info that the warden made a innocent boy drug addict . . I got his details and visited him . . . I came to know many things that would prove their gang and racket . . . but in all this I had to hurt my love . . .
hearing this geet's heart started beating rapidly . . . she was shocked first with the info then with his open confession . . . she saw in his eyes which showed his sincerity and true love . . .
geet : then y did u do this proposal act ? ?
maan : their plan was to break our unity and then destroy u . . which according to her she had done successfully and today they would execute their final plan which too I know . . . I know about her intensions . . I so wantedly made her believe that their plan was successful . . . and today they would fall in their own trap . . they dared mess with M S K . . they now have to bear the consequences . . so u better be ready for the final show down . .
maan told geet his plan and geet became very proud of him . . later maan sat sometime with her making geet conscious coz they were never like this . . .
( TIME FOR EXECUTION )
sam called geet and told her to be her moral support on her special day . . . geet was already ready with her answer . . in fact she was waiting for her call . . . immediately she agreed . . .
geet reached the venue before maan . . . coz maan was to bring sam with him . . geet went inside and made the waiter understand their works . . . after sometime maan and sam came . . first maan came out and opened the door for sam . . sam saw geet and made a sly smile . . . geet turned and grinned thinking about the condition of her when she will know what they will do with her . . .
when maan told her the plan she explained the same to the trio and they were very happy for their friends . . .
maan brought sam inside . . seeing geet she caught maan's hand and grinned seeing geet . . but she showed no reaction . .
in sometime maan and sam started their dinner along with champagne sam made all efforts to made geet feel unwanted . . . but since she was prepared she showed no expression . . .
after sometime there was heavy chaos in the restaurant . . there was police there . . sam was grinning . . she was waiting for this moment only . . along with police came princi and the warden . . the police came to maan's table and enquired about geet . geet was like shocked . . . the police came and told her
police : miss geet u are under arrest . .
geet : what ? ?
Police : miss geet we have found drug in your hostel room . . .do u wish to give any clarification ?
maan :drug ? ?
police : yes . . we got info from ur clg princi . . when we checked ur room we found many more such drugs there . . .
sam : geet ? ? what is this ? ? I never thought that u would be like this . . .
geet : but sir how can this be mine ? ?
police : y ?
princi : if they are from ur room then they muc=st be yours na . . .
geet : but sir when did they get this ? ?
police : we did checking today and found those packets . . .
geet : but sir I don't stay there any more . . then how could u get in my room . . .
princi : how dare u say lie geet . . u were staying there only na with sam . . else y would u have come with sam here . .
warden : and girls like u will tell lies when they are caught .
sam : maan see how much lie geet is saying .
maan : sam , princi sir ,mam and inspector I want to tell u that geet is not lying . she was not staying in hostel from 2 months . if u want we could get more witness for u.
sam was shocked hearing this. she thought that maan was in her hold.
then adi made entry.
a: sam wht is this? I only asked u salt .but I dnt know what u have given me .
sam was no scratching her head .the police got the packet and came to know it was the same drug they found in the room. sam was now scared so she blurted out the crime herself and told that princi and warden were also involved in it...
the ploce dnt need any more proofs .after the problem maan finally officially proposed geet on the same day.. this day marked a new beginning in maaneet's life...
**********THE END**********
Edited by angel-ki-shona - 11 years ago
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ALL STORIES IS TOO TOO GUD... I LIKED ALL BUT CHOOSE ONE IS DIFFICULT FOR ME
SO MY VOTE FOR SECOND ENTRY
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wow posted...
will read them and comment...
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love d first n second both...
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Was reading through the rules, just thinking since the writers cannot state they're taking part, don't think you should mention which writer is taking part then so it's fair because like that readers can tell which writer is which due to their writing style. Or you could allow them to let their readers know that they've taken part without saying which OS is theirs.. Just a suggestion because was thinking to join if you do another categorical OS competition...
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entry 1
awesome...
liked it...
poor Geet...
but at least now Maan realized his mistake...
lovely...

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