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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Em getting more n more addicted to poetry while reading Maaneet now 😳 Avi u r spoiling me 😳

lo kar lo baat😆
khud mujhe addict banaye hui ho aur phir meri shikayat karti ho ..😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1


lo kar lo baat😆
khud mujhe addict banaye hui ho aur phir meri shikayat karti ho ..😆😆


Toh aur kya 😳 I nevr saw them in poetic light and you just ... 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Koolsmile

Aaoge Jab Tum O Saajn is such a beautiful n soothing track , I love it. so apt. For the situation Geet is in ! All cleared now from Geet's Pov ! The beautiful weather that brought them together that night, its after effects created a misunderstanding n now one is waiting for his beloved n the other one is trying to get over it n all because a misunderstanding

I play songs on repeat when I write and this one was in my rooh by the time the words came. The scene where she was letting the rain kiss her.. ooh I loved that part.. Bohut pyaari ladki hai. I tried to maintain that through out.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey avi, I have to say this what differs you from the other writers is the situation you choose to bring the partners close. I have seen most couples and to be couples realise their love or change over happens in a trip to shimla or the great tajmahal. This is the first time I am seeing humayuns tomb and the dialogues by maan relating the situation is just awesome. ...love u buddy for this uniqueness. ... keep it up.. ⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Annleo92

Hey avi, I have to say this what differs you from the other writers is the situation you choose to bring the partners close. I have seen most couples and to be couples realise their love or change over happens in a trip to shimla or the great tajmahal. This is the first time I am seeing humayuns tomb and the dialogues by maan relating the situation is just awesome. ...love u buddy for this uniqueness. ... keep it up.. ⭐️ 👏


Thanks Ann😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 41-OMG this kamya lady is soo greedy and has a sharp tongue 😡.these kind of women are not satisfied with what they have and have their eyes on othe's.sujal loves her so much but still it is not enough for her.i am feeling very bad for sujal.
maan and geet part was brilliantly written.finally maan came to know the reason for geet's behaviour.the way maan talked to geet and made her comfortable again was awesome.my fav lines in the update-
"It is not others who define us and our actions Geet. It is us who leave our mark on the world. It is us who are the controllers of our destiny. Never let someone else tell you who you are and what you are capable of." 👏
"Those who matter don't mind, and those who mind, don't matter". 👏

part 42-this whole update was a nail biting update.tara should be thank ful to the cattle.i never expected that.i think the guy who is following her is the one who dev hired.i really loath the people like suraj.they think very highly of themselves and are sefl-centered.the slap which naintara gave,he so deserves it.i despise brij and his doings.beating up women and marrying them to their benefit is a degrading act.
the way naintara felt sorry for hurting dev and wanting to have a chance to show him how much she cared was brilliantly written.yayyy she kissed him,i am super happy.excellent song choice for the update.

part 43- i was having goose bumbs while reading the update.omg i don't even want to imagine what would have happened if kabir was not on time.unknowingly kabir saved the 2 ladies whom are very important to maan .first it was megha with the ragging and now geet with this.brij is a monster.he has his eyes on our bambi.when maan comes to know this,he sure is going to make brij life hell.
when naintara made up her mind to leave dev and geet,i was like shocked.i love the bond which naintara and geet share .
well well sangat ka asar i guess,dev reminding tara about rule no 1 from the rule book 🤣

part 44-i love the way dev spoke to geet even when he was angry at naintara.he takes care of her like a true brother,he even made bournvita for her.
comming to the best part of this update,i absolutly adore the way dev manipulated naintara's mind and made her accept his challenge.a very smart move by dev,lets see how naintara is going to escape this.loved the name devious dev. lovely song choice.

part 45-lol the maan thud.excellent song choice.
oh i heard so much about parathe wali gali,but never had a chance to visit it.looks like maan is completly forgetting about italian and changing in to a pure panjabi.i love the silent bonding they have in their relation.
comming to u r question about the precap they both are awesome.i am fanning myself after watching dev's picture ☺️

part 46-oh so it was the watch men who saw kabir,i thought it was maan.excellent song choice.
the way dadi felt that maan finally found his happiness was heart touching.thank god sona maam and the kids are safe and sound.lol geet calling hamare bache hai was hilarious.my fav line in this update-
Ek taraf se 'humare bacche' kehti hai aur dusri taraf haath bhi kiss nahi karne deti hai. Yeh ladki ne mujhe pagal kar rakha hai. 🤣
part 47-this update left me speechless.very well written.i loved the way maan took the initiative.he fulfilled his dream of dancing with geet to his fav song.the surprise was it's geet's birthday.i loved the way they exchanged their chains like varmala.yayyy they finally kissed.

part 48-beautifully written.the nature which brought them together,made them seperate too. u potrayed geet's longing very well.it is very hard to wait for u r love.she is living her life as he wanted.lovely song choice for the update.

thx for the updates,loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
really loved the way maan 's boosting up for geet.. kamya really deserves a tight slap... these greedy ladies r good fr nothing
n naintara... hope she finally gives into her feelings for dev n live her lyf fully
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Posted: 11 years ago
O! Nice parts!! Actualy m hvng no wrds aftr reading last chp of dis thrd... U slct perfct songs and all d shairies r best...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I really felt like doing something to that kamya, she is a lowlife creature n only knows one thing, envy. When she said that her husband n Pinky has gareebo wali choice the thought came to mind was though its a arranged married but he did chose u so yeah his choice is really a gareebo wali but in terms of thoughts n mentally. Anyway her words were really hurtful n more painful was Geet n Maan both heard them. I simply love this Maan who believes in himself n her n not the one who assumes things n hurt himself more in the process. Anyways i wont go there, the update had many great moments n will talk about it. Although he now understood why she always pushed him away from her cos the society would not put fingers on him but on her n call her a gold digger i Loved how he simply took Geet away from there rather than making matter worse n creating problems in Geet n Pinky friendship. And again the way he explained Geet calmly n made her look at herself with pride for what she is made me admire this man. He is awesome when he is calm, composed n sensible n gets worse when he decides anything on impulse. The walk in tomb n making her at ease forgetting all what kamya said was heart warming. And at the end when Geet dint resist while hold her hand more than necessary he felt its begining of something completely forgetting that this very begining is short lived n he has to go to London for his MBA.





Sigh of relief for having Tara safe n sound n may be i wasnt scared of the man following her cos i guess he was that detective. Her thoughts about past just made me think was she too unaware of what her mother Poonam was going through, her pain, turmoil, curses by Pammi n all? Cos it seems she was actually living a peaceful life, enjoying college, going to mivies with friends until Suraj came in her life else till then everything seemed fine with her. This makes me thinks was Tara close to her mother? And the sense of belonging to someone made her take that step of kissing him back n after this there is no turning back from Dev for her. He would not at all leave her n make sure she is just his.




So she kissed him a goodbye kiss but Dev haar maanne walon mein se nahi hai, m sure he will get back to her by all means she likes it or not.

Seeing Geet in such a turmoil just broke my heart. She tried to be strong for 2 years but seems now its not possible for her to hold onto the thin thread of hope. And remembering Maan in everything is so obvious as he has been like a shadow since the time they walked to her hostel in rain. What about the letter Maan said he gave to her? Did she not read it? Seeing her so sad n heark broken is really difficult n uppar se ladki akeli in night in deserted road, yeh ladki sach mei pagal kar degi. Why she had to go to Chandini Chawk so late at night? And OMG Brij saw her that night when she was going to Hoshiyarpur for her Darji's operation. He is worse than a monster and seeing him eyeing Geet was really making me scare to death. Kabir did sounded upset with his unpaid overtime but m sure he would now thank the owner of that same car repairer as cos of him Kabir got chance to return Geet's favor in some way by saving her from that monster Brij. Why i feel he is the one who cause harm to Poonam as well?

Tara must be really going through so much ek side Dev who she thinks his life might get into trouble cos of her dusri taraf Geet now who she again connects her to be in danger cos of her. I can do feel brotherly protectiveness in Dev when he immediately tried getting back on Kabir assuming he has hurt Geet. And for Tara seeing the two most of her beloved person in pain must have killed her. Though Brij is dangerous for Geet but its not cos Tara as he is dangerous to the whole lot called woman n young girls. Both Dev n kabir gestures n care for Geet touched me, specially Dev he dint hesitate to bend down n tie his hankerchief around kabir feet just cos in his eyes he saved their Geet today.

Finally everything is out for Dev n now he knows all reasons behind why Tara kept pushing him from her. This is the biggest relief for now.







Great Geet has to now go college in car n will always be safe hopefully, Khuranas really care for her so much. That kiss which started with anger turned into sensual n Ms.Kapoor couldnt resist calling him by his first name for the first time n the repeat of calling the name was so typical, haha. So Tara madam calls Dev's love as attraction which will flee away in time but she has under estimated him n cant fool him around. He knows she knows that he loves her genuinely n its no attraction but i like this challenge thingy b/w them after all they are a couple with firework so bina dhamake ke unki story aage kaise badhegi? Liked how he asked her to trust him but definitely dint liked how Tara said what he wants in return of his favors which angered him yet he kept his cool but seems like when he too used same lines like negotiating n ask her to give him a chance she get angry, not fair Tara. Banda jab saccha hai n u too know then why push him n later cry foul? So better take a chance n give urself n life a chance after all life is all about taking chances. And the way Dev provoked her was awesome finally 4 weeks challenge is on n we already know that love has win here for Dev-Tara. Just how the scenes b/w them went is going to be interesting n Tara's conditions were so typical girly, liked Dev's more. So Tara realized that Dev had tied her for the whole for coming 30 days at night? Itna late tube jala?




Maan thud how cute n it intensifies whenever he comes closer or holds her, hayeee. So Maan wants to spend time with Geet before going to London n Geet's trust in Maan is really strong which make their relationship grow more stronger. Loved how Maan felt they make a beautiful couple looking the reflection in mirror n gets disturbed when her eyes starts watering cos the chilli, banda is total crazy. Living his dreams with her, fulfilling some of hers while some of his n making tons of memories to survive for those 2 years of life away from each other. I dont know why but suddenly i feel its unfair, he knows he is going away after some days n so he is filling his moments but what about Geet? She is toh unaware n seems like she was unaware till he flew away to London. Wonder what went through her when she came to know he just left. Anyways that walking hand in hand n holding Maan's waist while on bike n going thud thud thud was awesome. And again the hand in hand walk till hostel was dreamy.




First of all the shayaris are Superb and i have loved them just forgot to mention with the flow of updates. But guess this time i couldnt forget may be cos the timing of the shayaris n the shayaris were simply Awesome. I Loved Them. The one writes them Naureen is damn talented.
So Dadima saw him hugging the pillow n all n how i wish she had made him confess his feelings to her just like she would be doing with Dev in future. She promised she will unite Maan with his love n irony is she is the only one who asked/reminded him about London Uni. n separated them at least for now. Seeing Maan blushing thinking about his plans was adorable.
The whole baby delivery in rains somewhat reminded me of All Is Well n yeah even i liked how Geet stays strong seeing someone in pain even when she herself is scared. Maaneet staying in ambulance n watching Sona Ma'am deliver twins n both comforting n supporting each other was so toughing n Geet saying humare bacche when the peon asks about the twins just made me burst out laughing and the shayari followed was like sone pe suhaga. Ride is auto n Maan pulling Geet close to him reminded me of his dream of having her in his arms while watching movie Dabangg, saare dreams sach ho gaye hai by waiting for it patiently. Maan's coffee excuse in the perfect weather of rains so that Geet stops n he can confess n the self encouragement was all adorable n him saying 'ke taraf toh hamare bacche kehti hai aur dusri taraf haath bhi kiss nahi karne deti' oh god only i know how much i ended up laughing at this n later grin like an idiot. After all this bas hug baaki tha woh bijli ke kadkadane se mil gayi. Total Maaneet-licious moments filled update.




Like always the epitome of innocence Geet appears, whereas Maan was enjoying the closeness in that hug jhalli Geet thought he fears the dark n lighting too. And what moment to remember to his threat 'pehen lo warna doonga' and poor Geet obeys him and here again one of Maan's fantasies of seeing her in his kurta came true though here is shirt but still. The way he asked her for farewell party n said she doesnt need to change for anyone again made me go all 'awww' for this man. At getting to learn the dance in 10 minutes all her shyness flew away not bad Maan babu knows how to get his work done. Both filling each others features under moonlight, Maan by comparing Geet and Moon n that shayari was so beautifully written and Geet goes with the thuding n the pictures made it so beautiful. And with the dream his character was introduced n song he wanted to dance on with Geet for his first dance has also come ture today and i guess u have actually made every dreams of Maan come true in these 2 years of college life with Geet n gave a closure to his dreams at least. And i loved how u gave both's thoughts alternatively on every moment. It made the update special. And the exchange of Locket and Om pendant and the chain of kisses was ummm *blush* And u surprised us at the end by making it Geet's birthday so both Maan n Geet birthday have been special n the last kiss was just amazing, see even this dream of his has come true. The back to back Maaneet-licious updates were sooo awesomely written n each scene were described so damn beautifully, it was nothing but dreamy.


And if now i come out of the dreamland can i just blast Maan once? Yes m kinda mad at him right now for his assumption disease and that dumbo, idiot even after getting her silent acceptance from that kiss n giving him her pendant thought she dint love him n played with his emotions? He seriosuly got to be kidding me then for doubting Geet's love here. For a girl like Geet the kiss would have meant her submission to the man she loves n knowing Maan actually i really thought he would know that much of her even after claiming to read her eyes he chose to be blind to this fact over some misunderstanding? Did he thought Geet is a girl who would allow any aira gera to come n kiss her? Sad n kinda disappointed in him for the first. Sad more cos he himself suffered the most in his assumptions n lived a life of loneliness for 2 damn years after spending the most beautiful moments with her ever.





So Maan dint got the chance to confess his feelings cos of Ms.Iyer again but dint miss the chance of stealing some kisses n tight hug in the darkness and in return she promised to be back from Hoshiyarpur before party which she couldnt keep cos of weather problem courtesy Adi-Pinky talks. So Geet's purse was stolen n may be there was that letter in it which Maan had thought about in London while going to Sameera's place. So i assume she dint received any letter n he assumed that she purposely dint come to farewell party whereas she was desparate to get back to him. This MU is so small n cos of lack of communication from both side n presence of mind from Maan mostly, they had to separate after spending the bestest day of their life. Feeling terribly sad right now knowing how much in pain both are. Seeing Geet dint even knew he was going to London until Adi said that to Pinky n dint got to say a goodbye is making my heart cry now n feel for her n that song added more to my miseries. The kisses she remembers so fondly n misses like anything n gets its feel through rains, he thinks her to be mocking of his emotions? Unlucky Khurana. Maan is filled in her entire being, her days starts with him n ends with him n the wait she is thinking is going to over is actually going to extend a bit more. Why i feel now the roles are going to reverse? Geet knows every damn feelings of Maan, the locket, through diary so she is defintely going to try talking to him n takes adavances n Maan will be ignoring her n pushing her away in his MU.




-Sanjana!
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Love Ur Story...
Ur Poetry & Song Selection is very Good...


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