The Locket (10), MG FF, new thread link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 107

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

what do you mean by sat & sun

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

Doc ne update kya teaser bhi nahi diya hai 😔

Originally posted by: Onir

Oh My Avi 😳

I loved the chapter 47. 🤗

Pyaar maanga hai tumhi se 😳 so beautiful and romantic

She spends her birthday with him and gifts both of them such precious memories of a lifetime 😳

The whole recreation (somewhat) of the RTM scene ... had me go all dreamy.

Her Innocence while his desires for her were a package here..

Loved it each moment ... be the shayari, her questions, his wants, their gift/locket exchange... 👏

The whole importance of the song and the locket was mesmerizing... too good... 😳

I love this Maan and his love for all the old classics... each word of the songs he chooses speaks so much of the emotions felt and lived. The song just touches you and leaves behind a sea of emotions to be felt for the characters here ...

I won't be able to write more as the feeling is yet sinking in... 😊😳😳 But be rest assured that this chapter is added in my favourites and my words won't be able to appreciate it much

Originally posted by: Onir

Aaoge jab tum Sajna 😳

Once again another too good chapter... the flashback gave a view about her reaction to the kiss and intimacy...

The whole intimacy and the slow burning passion between these two just before the two year separation was like a relief for all those coming moments that they're going to be apart. 😳

Loved the lines by Ritzy there ... the rain drops and the water connecting them was apt and did explain the slow burn of passion between them... 😳👏 Too good

The way she relates rain and each force of nature with moments spend with him speaks of her longing and craving of him and yet living with the hope of seeing him soon and being in his embrace was so beautifully described. 👏

I want them to have that moment of uninterrupted bliss that they missed out the last time ... now when all the misunderstandings clear out and they can face each other... 😉

Continue soon...

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

thanx avi..

i have posted the above pic and one more too in the gallery... let me see the response... then will add more... quite nervous thinking how every one will think...

thank u avi... its only due to ur suggession that i was able to do this...

LINK

Originally posted by: maanland

Thanks for continuing the night of maaneet

it was so lovely😊

even the song was so beautiful

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thanks Onir.

It had to be a memorable night... a night to remember for the separation to come.

I was not sure about the chapter even after so much rewriting and until Mari read it I was teetering on the edge with it.

I am glad you liked it.😃

Originally posted by: dqno1

Ritzy had more .. its on pg 132 but I think these fit the situation...😃

This is one of my fav songs from the movie..

2 updates back to back so Avi and her beat up back is going to take a break...😆

Just came from a long distance trip tonight and after all those hours in back to back traffic...

Catch you soon..😃

Thanks Onir.

Originally posted by: Onir

Oh I better go check it then on page 132 😊

Oh you went on a trip... traffic is a pain sometimes ... actually always