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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1051

Oh My Avi 😳

I loved the chapter 47. 🤗

Pyaar maanga hai tumhi se 😳 so beautiful and romantic

She spends her birthday with him and gifts both of them such precious memories of a lifetime 😳

The whole recreation (somewhat) of the RTM scene ... had me go all dreamy.

Her Innocence while his desires for her were a package here..

Loved it each moment ... be the shayari, her questions, his wants, their gift/locket exchange... 👏

The whole importance of the song and the locket was mesmerizing... too good... 😳

I love this Maan and his love for all the old classics... each word of the songs he chooses speaks so much of the emotions felt and lived. The song just touches you and leaves behind a sea of emotions to be felt for the characters here ...

I won't be able to write more as the feeling is yet sinking in... 😊😳😳 But be rest assured that this chapter is added in my favourites and my words won't be able to appreciate it much

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Deelight

@Deelight

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1052

OMG! i hd already read tis part... still read it again... can oly say it wz awesom!!

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-lakshmi-

@-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1053

Originally posted by: dqno1

that is so beautiful😃

put it in Geet creations gallery Lakshmi

thanx avi..

i have posted the above pic and one more too in the gallery... let me see the response... then will add more... quite nervous thinking how every one will think...

thank u avi... its only due to ur suggession that i was able to do this...

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Edited by -lakshmi- - 11 years ago

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Onir

@Onir

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1054

Aaoge jab tum Sajna 😳

Once again another too good chapter... the flashback gave a view about her reaction to the kiss and intimacy...

The whole intimacy and the slow burning passion between these two just before the two year separation was like a relief for all those coming moments that they're going to be apart. 😳

Loved the lines by Ritzy there ... the rain drops and the water connecting them was apt and did explain the slow burn of passion between them... 😳👏 Too good

The way she relates rain and each force of nature with moments spend with him speaks of her longing and craving of him and yet living with the hope of seeing him soon and being in his embrace was so beautifully described. 👏

I want them to have that moment of uninterrupted bliss that they missed out the last time ... now when all the misunderstandings clear out and they can face each other... 😉

Continue soon...

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1055

Thank you for the birthday wishes! The beginning was so sweet, now the wait.. We're slowly getting closer to the present. I can't wait to read about Dev-Tara. Thank you for the update! :)

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Neeraj

@nature2

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#1056

Fantastic update Avi

Just loved it

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teja21

@teja21

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1057

so dat was all a mu

thanx fr d pm dear

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1058

Doc ne update kya teaser bhi nahi diya hai 😔

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893213

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1059

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Thank you for the birthday wishes! The beginning was so sweet, now the wait.. We're slowly getting closer to the present. I can't wait to read about Dev-Tara. Thank you for the update! :)

You are welcome Krishna😃

Glad you liked it.

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JeevanaP

@JeevanaP

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#1060

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

you are updating today...but me sad...hell busy with office work

i yet to read part 46-47 and you are ready with next chapter also

hope i can read it on Sat as no office on sat...

what do you mean by sat & sun