SS~ RAZAA~ PART 2/3/LAST pg/30/31/32 *edited* august 28th :)

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amreenshameem

@amreenshameem

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#201

Superbly described
Well its a part of dis world
People should fight wid their fear
Come up wid new story soon

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maaneetmaahi

@maaneetmaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#202

it was good dear...loved the update..
previous update was in hurry..
this is really good..with additional maaneet convo...

can't press like button

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Angel

@amita5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Loved all the parts

from a woman in distress to a strong woman

with the support of her husband

geet became a strong person

want an epilogue

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momi

@-BreakingDown-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#204

thnxx 4 re writting the story again
now i really luved it hari

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#205

This is best
the way everything was cleared to maan was best

his thinking and maturity not only brought geet out of her past but gave a new life where she is not weak but a strong geet

she can stand and fight like she did with dev and pammi

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sandymg

@sandymg

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#206

loved it 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#207

awesome end to this story
finally geet overcome her fear and accepted the reality of life and maan was her strength for her in this journey!!!!!!!!!
once again thank u di for the writing this story as u want to write
it was awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#208

U changed last bit part.. but liked the convo btwn them.. Nice ending..

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pixelflower620

@pixelflower620

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#209

awesome ff buddy 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
finally u completed it
nd its very good nd tkes gr8 courage to write something like these topics
nd its d well affirmed truth of d society
really good tht u came up wid such socially burning topics
nd presented it in a very nice way in d form of maaneet
maan's love finally washed out geet's bad past
nd fill d life wid bliss nd happiness
thnx fr d pm😃😃😃😃😃