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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsm update di
thank.god aapne is storg ko dhang se end karne ka decision liya
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey nice you r continuing story. Nice update
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PART 3:


read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!


Doctor: Mr. khurana I want to talk to you alone, drop your wife home and call me we will have a talk she said confusing maan further. Geet was not a normal girl he knew now, something unaccepted has happened and what?? He laid her on the bed, she did not protest infact she had the juice when he fed her with his own hands. Geet was feeling protected with the way he was taking care of her and after a little while maan called the doctor unable to hold himself back as she slipped into sleep ... Dr. ... Its me Maan Khurana speaking



Haan khurana ji I was about to call you regarding your wife ... the way doctor was going desperate to talk made maan to worry even more ... Aaj jo unhone kaha uske baad I made out she was being harassed by women physically, yehi reason hai that she reacts wildly seeing them, and mostly stout women ... her response is pretty common on her ... treatment ka hai doctor???


treatment is something only you can give,


Aisa kya hai doctor??


Mr. Khurana did you get physical with your wife?? She asked with hesitance


Maan thought for a while and replied ... No doctor, we didnt ... and this can be the only solution this time ... until you dont get physical with your wife she wont be able to fight with the fear thats running within her ... Unko lagta hai ki the same thing might repeat to her, and thats the reason whenever she sees stout women she gets scared, the incident plays back and she slips into fear, and its only your touch that can assure her ... She was not aware of the lesbian relationship till now ... man and woman consummate thats common but this emerging ... newly found relations are yet to be accepted by the society, woh digest nahi kar paa rahi hai jo unke saath hua ... its only you who can get her out of it hope you understand, saying so she finished.



Maan thought about it but couldnt do it, Two days passed geet would go even more into depression when night comes, and the doctor has advised him to get physical with her!! He wanted to assure her, tell her that he was not one of those men whom she takes him to be!! But at the end he had to take the initiative to talk to her. There was so much to know of her, so much to tell her.



That night he found geet sitting by the window, He slipped beside her who was looking at the sky with ... he was the intention to start the conversation, they were strangers who were married and ever since the marriage nothing changed between them ... he called her ... She didn't notice, he called her again and that's when she got shocked seeing maan beside her and began to back with fear.




Please geet I want to talk to you for once ... Aur kuch nahi, he said holding her wrist and making her sit. Of all the emotions till now he had only seen her fearing, or probably crying, why couldnt she try to forget the past?? But maan wanted to



I know you don't want this marriage, I didn't ask your view while marrying you ... Neither did you protest for you decided to take your life, aaj ke baad main tumhe kuch kahonga, this is the first and last time for me to ask you ... don't you want to give US a chance?? Do you want to spend your rest of the life this way?? Agar aisa hai toh main kabhi tumse kuch nahi poochonga!!



His words seemed honest, his gestures seemed true ... She could atleast understand from his behavior towards her since two days and the question that haunted her was why did he marry her going against his own family?? Probably this was the right chance to know it geet thought.



Did you marry me out of pity?? Or is it that like your brother you lust me?? A straight question which clearly indicated her mind, there was nothing wrong in it but it did hurt him the word lust hurt him. But he was ready to answer her any question. He knew she would understand him for sure.



Geet marriage was a long lost thought of my life, and when my mother tried to convince me I didn't bother ... Mere liye woh kitna wait karti?? My brother said he wanted you, phir maine tumhe dekha I donno what I should term the feeling when I first saw you, jab yeh sab ho raha tha I just married you coz I didn't wanted to leave you, maine tum par koi ehsaan nahi kiya ... ek razaa thi ki hum shaayad saath rahenge with this relation.



She turned her head believing his words, geet didn't know as to why she could relate her father with this man.



Main uss din mar gayi jiss din meri shaadi arjun se hua, I was not happy ... Mere papa ne mujhe!! iss duniya ko!! chod diya, he was the most loving person in my life ... Phir main apni maa ke liye boj ban gayi, she got my marriage fixed ... Uske baad unhone mud ke kabhi nahi dekha ki main jinda thi ya mar gayi lekin sapna maa, mujhe nahi pata ki unhone mere saath kya kiya ... initially I hated her, par unhone jo mere liye kiya I developed a bond with her ... Kisine yeh nahi dekha ki main insaan hoon, not my own mother, not the mother which god has given me ... Not even you, everyone want me for their own selfish reasons, shaayad hi main aapko aapka haq depaongi lekin itna yakeen ke saath keh sakti hoon ki ill try accepting you in my life ... Aur woh sirf iss liye kyunki jab bhi aapko dekhti hoon mujhe lagta hai babaji ne unka dil aapko diya.



Maan was delighted that she thought of atleast giving a chance to their relationship, they did try to make things as normal as they could. But whenever geet would face pammi she slips into a depression and this thing maan did notice.



So that was the reason you were defending me infront of the people saying that you know me before marriage?? She asked



Haan geet I didnt wanted people to speak wrong about you, iss liye maine jhoot kaha ki I knew you since college, finally the clouds cleared and geet understood how maan loved her ... Just like her dad.



Geet its already late get up and brush your teeth .... maan called her from the washroom and hearing no answer he came back to see her sleeping, he again called her and handed the toothbrush with paste on it.



Geets eyes welled up to see maan doing the same thing which his dad used to do for her, she got up and hugged him tight confusing him.



Maan ... she cried with hiccups, her tears wetted her cheek and his shoulder ... kyun karte hai aap yeh sab?? She asked thanking her babaji for giving him in her life. She still couldnt understand that how she was feeling a sense of love for this man just like the feeling she always had for her father but with a difference here. She now knew that whatever happens in life, happens for a reason.


precap: you know i guess will post next part in few hours😉


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey dear, as always you have brought out a bold subject and written very beautifully... we all are in a new world which says now that same sex relationship is ok, but in this case, geet is really frightened bcoz she did see those girls abusing her, and her fear is very much understandable... I am glad that maan supports her...

and I want to say hats off to you, for bringing up this subject 😊 as there are many more geet's in the society facing this but probably no maan to save them 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG di me crying while reading these parts di coz I just love u more di so happy ke I'm reading wht u wanted to write frm ur heart aur di aapki yeh writing is touching my heart 😳 di loved the edited version where maaneet are trying to work there relationship aur when maan is helping her she remembers how the same her father used to do aur feeling emtional she hugged him aur di then she too realized ke jo hota hai kisi wajah se hota hai she is feeling the same what she used to feel for her father lekin the love she has for both is different very different & specail for maan😳 di ab next ka me waiting eagerly😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG didu it would so difficult for anyone who would face this type of situation
it really pained my heart poor geet she is so scared with the incidence which took place in her life
but now there is nothing to fear when maan is near
maan geet ko uske har dard har dukh se dur karega
nd even geet is feeling protected when maan is near her
waiting for more
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Posted: 12 years ago
already waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
Am so glad you re wrote the story...
there are things that do happen like this...
and i really wanted u to write the part of maan - geet making their relation work and how maan helps her to come out of the past..
i loved the updates... the way he tried to approach her.. her fear.. him trying to speak out and held her down... the emotions that she feels for him... all was very nice...
am waiting for the next parts...
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
finally talk between maaneet
and geet understanding
waiting for next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
LAST PART:


read at ur own risk dont be mad at me with the content!!!



An year of marriage, an year of understanding, an year of love, an year of simple commitment, she fell in love with her husband though he never try to go physical with her ... she craved for him and so did he but couldn't follow the advice of the doctor thinking that might end up in misunderstandings. What if she gets scared?? The question itself made maan to control his desires as his love has always been divine in all the senses.



She could never break the shackles and ask him neither could control, so it has become a habit of geet to do household chores or do something else to gain a command on her senses.



And like every normal day maan called geet not finding the car keys to leave for office, she ran inside the room and handed him in a second. Maan could see the fear in her eyes, he rubbed his temple knowing his high pitch voice always scares her.



He kissed her forehead lovingly ... sorry jaan I didn't mean that ... Office jaane ke tension mein tha he said hugging her. When his hand fell on her bare waist, she gulped hard as her throat was getting chocked with the unending desire. The need to be in his arms was going even more stronger in her mind, she crushed his shirt under her palm as his hand unknowingly caressed her waist. Her eyes welled up as maan left her, his heart almost stopped as he saw her eyes filled with tears thinking probably him hugging her made her to cry.



I am sorry ... She placed her hand on his mouth unable to hear the sorry ... You don't need to say sorry maan ... Mujhe aapse kuch poochna tha she said as the fear still lingered in her eyes.



Why are you so scared to ask anything geet?? Maan couldn't stop himself from being straight with his question.



Kyunki mujhe sapna maa se milne jaana tha maan ek baar unko dekhna tha, aap galat toh nahi samjhenge na??



Main khud leke jaaonga I cant let you go alone to jail jaan, ill be back in the afternoon then we would go together thik hai?? She smiled nodding to him, his heart jumped in excitement for making her happy. All he could do was to pray to her babaji that she smiles the same way for the rest of her life.


@jail,

Geet main tumhare saath chalta hoon ... Maan said following her towards the jail, geet stopped him coz she could never let him enter into a place which doesnt worth him, she was there for sapna but he had no necessity to go with her ... aapko aane ki jaroorat nahi hai maan I will manage, she assured maan even though her insides were going mad with fear. She couldn't simply break herself after what maan was supporting her, dammit she is married to him for an year and now she was strong enough to face anything that would come.



Finally the wait was over, it took geet an year to gather herself and meet sapna, she stood infront of the cell and peeped inside. Her tears widened as her eyes found the most disgusting sight ever, She saw one of the women who had harassed her that night with sapna in the jail, and the truth that she found was sapna involved with the woman. Probably living in the jail made her that way she thought, the woman killed her partner for having relation with a man. Sapna seemed happy in her company, geet almost felt like puking but controlled herself. Without a word she came back and ran into the car where maan was waiting for her ... She hugged him petrified with the sight that she had seen, those flashes came back ... the night came back to her.



Maan ... she cried controlling her emotions, Maan ... She cried into his neck muffling the sobs that threatened to escape, and finally she fainted in his arms unable to digest the fact. Maan worriedly got geet to the doctor who had almost lost his temper as he didn't follow her advice.



Doctor: Mr. khurana didn't I advice you that your physical love is necessary to break the shell that she built around herself?? She has faced something she would never be able to digest herself and now its high time that you listen to what I say, warna bohut kuch ho sakta hai ... You may even loose her, its only you who can assure her that the world is as normal as it was, aage aapki marzi.



Turning into lesbians was something which would happen naturally ... few turn with the situations, few with desire ... sapna was jailed for a lifetime, when a woman would not accept the punishment of living alone, the desires stir up or the situations go against her. Generally when women would be deprived of the physical love from a man, its quite common on them to partner with other women. This situation was very common in jail, that's what the doctor tried to tell maaneet.



It took time for geet to accept and forget the black phase of sapna, she did crave for the love from maan which she always wanted. She wanted him to love her but failed telling him, rest was something very satisfying for her with the care she gets from her husband ... The only thing which irked her was pammi and dev who seemed to busy preparing against her, to throw her out of the house as maan was the sole owner of the property. And like a usual day when maan came back pammi was yelling at geet, he didn't understand what happened. He had seen pammi going mad on his wife for no reason, still he remained calm coz he couldn't go against elder, but today the topic that she chose to make geet a culprit was something he could never stand.



He didn't bother saying anything but held geet's hand and walked away, She looked at her husband who lead her towards the exit after the way her mother-in-law accused her having physical relation with dev!! She didn't know how and when she began loving this man more than her father who was her god, the situation in which maan married her she never expected he would ever love her probably it was just a pity and now what was it??



Razaa nahi thi uss rishte par ki woh pyar mein badlega lekin jab badla toh khud ko poochne lagi kya woh sach mein pyar hai??



And when they reached their room, maan's reaction amazed geet ... kyun nahi kaha tumne kuch geet?? Kab tak wait karonga ki tum khud se kuch bologi?? I had no family until you came into my life, the relation I share with my step mother and brother is for name sake,he said what his priority was ... what he expected.



Kaise bolti kuch main unse?? Aap jaante hai I fear seeing stout women?? Phir main kaise bolti kuch maan?? kaise?? Her words knocked sense into him, he was yet to do what the doctor has asked him.



His lips landed on hers, she did not wriggle but only gave in as her body took the form of euphoria. She pulled him closer holding him tight telling him she was even more desperate for the love, shocking him ... he didn't know as to when geet overcame the fear of physical relation but sometimes the desire would break the inhibitions that's what has happened with her.



She didn't let him step back, both let their barriers away ... Geet closed her eyes with pleasure when his hands kneaded her breasts. She didn't let the past haunt her anymore feeling the love that was oozing out from his every kiss and caress. She screamed his name as she found him deep inside her, she pleaded for more and more with passion that overtook her.



The whole night passed the same way, it was probably the next day they stopped. Geet dozed off in his arms. They were complete now, they were one in every sense.



She tried to move away from him when maan again pulled geet back intending to start the session again ... But this time he stopped to clear out few things which needed to discuss then, geet ek baat pochon?



Ji kuch bhi ... What is it that made you bold sach batana he asked pushing her hair back that rested on her face hoping she would answer, geet blushed first and replied ... Maan mujhe khud nahi pata woh kya ehsaas tha ... it was my desire to be loved by you pata nahi kabse



And you feel this desire is wrong geet??


Aap aise soch bhi kaise sakte ho maan??


Phir jo tumne jail mein dekha woh galat kaise ho sakta tha geet?? She didn't want to talk about it, not now ... not anytime, maan held her face that was going numb yet again ... do you love me geet?? He questioned, his love had that strong aura around that she nodded in yes ... then why cant you face the reality?? Sach yehi hai geet ki such things are part of the world promise me that you wont get effected from such??



And finally geet came out of the past, maan had himself seen it when she threw pammi and dev out of the house. And things went better, they built a relation of two souls which were bound by love, with only razaa to stay together for the rest of the seven lives!!



I donno if I could satisfy you all with the update!! Last part hogaya I tried to write more than I thought of anyway leave the comments!!


preeti di sorry i missed your name love you😳


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Edited by dreamyharika - 12 years ago

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