OS- LIGHT IN THE DARK pt 3..pg-11 21 aug

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Binish

@mayurmaaneet

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#81

beautiful writing hun.. we totally felt maans pain.. i really hope geet gains her conscience again.. cont soon

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momi

@-BreakingDown-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

emotional update
geet in coma😭
maan is soo much in luv with geet
cant see maneet like this

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

very emotional update//hope geet and baby will be fine😭😭😭😭pls cont soon

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Sheetalvasa

@sheetalvasa

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Very emotional update loved it

Feel sad for maan rona aa raha hai...

Maan ki yahi tadap geet ko coma me se bahar laying...haina...!!

Maan ko baby ke baare me pata hai? Baby thik to hai na??

Eagerly waiting for next

Thanks for pm

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_Maaneet_

@_Maaneet_

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#85

such a emotional update

poor maaneet😭

pls geet ko jaldi thik kar do!!!!!!!

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Really nyv narration dear ...loved it

The way u started this OS an intriguing oway indeed than maan's turmoil after getting conscioUus was really heart touching ..

Over all simply loved it ...thnxx for sharing it.

N do accept my request n pm me

Waiting for the nxt update ...plsss sss plsss update soon

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

awesome n wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

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Sampa Ghosh

@sweetsampa39

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

What a heart wrenching update Suni.The whole updatde made my eyey teary.Maan's pain to see an almost lifeless Geet is so piercing.All his dialogues,his shouting,his not believing that Geet is in coma,everything is enough to shake the readers.

The best part was when he silently lied beside Geet...God I can not help but cry.

Awesomely written buddy.