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Posted: 12 years ago
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OS- LIGHT IN THE DARK

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PART- 3
*********Flash back*********
When Raj reached near maan's room he stopped near the door hearing Maan's voice . He could hear Maan asking continuously about Geet to the doctor attending him...he wanted to know about her condition, her whereabouts. On hearing Maan Raj was not able to move a step forward.He was scared for the first time for his son whose whole world revolved around only one name, Geet.He knew that Maan will completely shatter on hearing about Geet ...he will never be able to bear that her life, her love Geet is fighting with death for life.

Raj's thoughts came to an end on hearing sudden scream of Maan...Maan was trying to sit but while doing so he hurt his right hand and screamed in pain ...Ahhh.....

Doctor(immediately holding maan with his shoulder trying to support him)-Plz sir ...u'll hurt urself and tries to make him lie on the bed...

But Maan was nowhere to listen to the doctor ,he tried again to stand jerking away doctor's hands but failed miserably as his fractured leg and hand was not supporting him and finally after trying many times tears rolled down his eyes on his inability to fight for his Geet ,his inability to know about his geet and he pleaded to the doctor holding his hand...plz doctor ,for once take me to my Geet ...
A lone tear escaped through the corner of Raj's eyes on seeing Maan's condition...how helpless was his son today...he was not even able to sit on his own. But Raj also knew that he couldn't be weak now he had to be strong for his son. With this thought he moved toward Maan and caressed his head lovingly ...

As soon as Maan recognized Raj's touch he looked up towards Raj through his teary eyes and left doctor's hands .

Maan( holding Raj 's hands )- dad plz tell me where is Geet...plz take me to her...I want to see her dad...plz dad...and dips his head in Raj's hand crying bitterly...

Raj trying to suppress his own tears sambhalo khud ko maan ...

On hearing Raj, Maan removed his hand from Raj's hand and looked straight into Raj's eyes...

Maan- sambhalu...but how dad??...no one is taking me to Geet...neither the doctor is telling me about her nor you... I just want to see her once dad ...plz dad...

Raj who couldn't lie to his son moved a few feet away with his back towards Maan and says in a trembling voice she...she ... she is fine Maan...

Maan who knew his dad too well again tries to stand up but this time his pain didn't matter to him anymore because deep down in his heart he knew that his dad is hiding something from him and his jaan, his geet is not fine. He walked near Raj limping and keeps Raj's hand on his head...Where is Geet dad???
Raj who couldn't lie anymore had no option except telling the truth...wo...wo...OPERATION THEATRE...

At that time earth slipped below Maan's feet and he wobbled backwards still looking straight into Raj's eyes. He was about to hit the floor when Raj moved forward and held him from his shoulders..

Maan who wasn't in his sense anymore jerks away Raj's hands and start running towards OT. He bumped into anything and everything that came in his way,blood started coming out from his wounds but it didn't matter to him anymore and he continued running like a maniac. He was not even able to hear the voice of Raj who just running behind him asking him to stop . And when he reached near the OT he heard doctor telling about Geet to Rano and Mohinder.

*********Flashback end********

After operation Geet was shifted to ICU and doctors allowed them to meet Geet ...
While doctor was talking to the elders in the family Maan entered inside the room, he saw Geet lying on the bed. He was moving towards her like a lifeless body taking one step at a time .His eyes were blank but never moved away from Geet for a second, he was continuously staring at her while walking .Not a single drop of tear came out from his eyes. On reaching near the bed, he lied alongside Geet in the little space available putting his hand on her stomach...

Raj,Mohinder and Rano entered just behind Maan to see Geet'but they were petrified after seeing Maan in that position besides Geet...

Rano ,who herself was completely broken on hearing about Geet didn't want to lose maan and moved near them. She kept her hand on Maan's shoulder and spoke while trying to control her own tears...

Rano- Maan...

Maan( without looking at Rano)- Shhh...maa dheere boliye meri Geet so rahi hai'wo distrub ho jayegi...and starts caressing Geet's forehead as if making her sleep

Rano couldn't bear this and ran away from the room while tears came down from her eyes...

Maan still caressing Geet's cheeks and forehead lovingly...Geet tum so jao, main thodi der baad aata hun thik hai...par tab tak uth jaana nahi to main gussa ho jaunga...and moved away kissing her forehead..

Tears rolled down from Raj and Mohinder's eyes seeing Maan in this condition. But what shocked them more was Maan's strange behavior . He didn't cry for once and now he was moving towards the door...

At that time Mohinder moved forward holding Maan's hand and took him near Geet...

Mohinder(pointing towads Geet and shouting)- Do u think she is sleeping then yes she is indeed sleeping Maan but in a deep sleep now turning towards Maan holding his collar ...samjhe tum ...in a deep sleep ... wo humse bahut dur ja chuki hai ..bahut dur...use kuch mehsoos nahin hota ...and looks towards Maan but still maan's eyes were completely blank Mohinder then cupping maan 's cheeks...Tum samajhte ...

Maan then stops Mohinder in-between... Shh...papa dheere boliye... aap samajhte kyun nahin wo so rahi hai abhi...she will wake up in few hours...moving towards Geet caressing her hand...haina geet..

Mohinder ( turning Maan towards himself and shakinghis shoulder)- wo nahi jagegi Maan...suna tumne wo nahi jagegi kyunki wo...he broke down into tears..as mohinder didn't had the courage to speak that word on seeing Maan's madness for Geet ...

Maan turned towards geet- dekho na jaan dad kya bol rahe hai...kyun nahi jagogi tum ??? chalo ab uth jao and tell that u r fine and shakes her slightly...aur kya jaan tumne ye apni kaisi halat bana rakhi hai...

Maan moves towards Raj...dad ab kuch din apko office sambhalna hoga...she is not taking care of herself properly...mujhe hi iska khyal rakhna hoga...

Raj who was quiet till now couldn't control anymore and slapped Maan tightly on his cheek ...

Taking Maan towards Geet...see towards her Maan...wo hai tumhari Geet jo tumse bahut dur ja chuki hai ... bahut dur ...wo sirf saans le rahi hai lekin maut se bhi badttar zindgi jeene ke liye Maan...aur shayad puri zindgi aise hi rahe and sat down on the floor holding Maan's hands...wo coma mein hai Maan ...coma mein

At that moment a lone tear escaped from Maan's eyes...taking his hand away from Raj's hold he moved slowly towards Geet while limping...he was in pain 'not in physical pain but the pain of his love...the pain of seeing his Geet in this condition...he stood near her bed and extended his right hand to touch her but his hand was shaking , he couldn't have the courage to touch his geet and fell down on his knees near her bed crying loudly and screaming in pain ...Geeettt...

Seeing Maan in this condition Raj moved forward to console him but Mohinder held his hand asking Raj to let Maan cry. So that he could handle himself and Mohinder took Raj out of the room.

Tears were continuously rolling down his cheeks. Suddenly he got up and shrieked in pain due to injuries but still he went near Geet and touched her cheek with trembling hands...

Tears were rolling down his eyes continuously ,but he was caressing Geet's hand again and again pleading her to end this deep sleep of hers...Utho Geet ,please for me jaan'main tumse kabhi ladai nahi karunga...tumhari sab baatein manunga par apne Maan ko aisi sazza mat do ...I will die without you Geet...I will die ..and leaned on her keeping his head on her heart.

On not getting any response he got up and shook her petite form harshly and shouted.utho Geet..damnit I said wake up'tum mujhe aise chod ke nahi jaa sakti'suna tumne..tum mujhe akela nahi chod sakti and ultimately took her into a bone crushing hug...

Maan(while sobbing)- plz jaan...mere liye...just for me ... I cannot live without you Geet...I cannot...meri Geet mujhe wapas dedo...nahi ji paunga main tumhare bina...taking her out of the hug and cupping her cheeks... tumhe mere liye wapis aana hi hoga and slightly brushed his lips with hers...tumhe apne Maan ke liye aana hoga ..

He lays her down on the bed and slips beside her putting her head on his heart as if he wanted to feel more and more...make himself sure that his Geet will never leave him...
Raj ,Rano and Mohinder were watching them through the small glass window of the ICU hoping that the dark clouds of pain may fade away with the new light coming in their lives...
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Suni
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Edited by angelic-eyes - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
wow me first
emotional update dear
geet in coma 😭😭
felt bad for maneet
hope everything will be fine soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
aww ... Painful update

Poor Maan
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
Mummy.!!!! Kitna rulaya is update ne...
I can't bear my Maanet in so much Pain 😭
Please I hope Geet wakes p for her Maan soon...

Very emotional update suni.! But loved it..eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So painful update but geet to pergnant thi na to doctor ne uske parivar ko kyun nahi batayea waiting 4 next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
awesome, emotional part
feel sad for maaneet
poor him
hope this will solve soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very painful update geet in coma
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Indeed that was painful part.. I m crying for Maan..😭 he is in pain.. being in coma.. Geet doesn't know anything... Hope she will get up soon...kuch miracle ho jaye..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww so sad os..but awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was heartwrenching 😭
Loved the update 👏 beautifully written
Nd thank u soo much for the pm 😃

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