Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 20

Originally posted by: preeti.1

one of the best part of this ff ...

really amezing

Really? Best? Oh thnks hun😊

LOVELY UPDATE DEAR

superb part.. Asad is really cool guy.. helped Geet a lot.. & Maan .. is changing slowly slowly without his awareness.. oww.. he didn;t even like when Asad is talking abt her.. possessive munda..
Geet is so cute.. m sure everyone will like her then wht will he do?

going gr8.. egarly waiting for next update..thanx for pm

And Congrats for your job.. but pl. update as m so much waiting for it always..

I just love your adaptation, it is so beautifully written. Thank you for updating. Keep up the fantastic work.👍🏼

Awesummm Update

Luved the way Geet was so excited when she told Asad about the dress she got for her date. Reminded of same scene in the movie.

And ofcourse when Maan phoned her and she immdediately answered and Maan said why she picked up so quickly, without listening. And Geet said then to stop calling, it was funny.

In th evening Maan and Asad talk, and said a certain young lady waiting for him in the lobby.

Now waiting for Maan's reaction, when he sees Geet in her new makeover, he is just going to be frozen, at hw beautiful she looks. Excited for next update nd Maans reaction. 😉 😛

Superb update loved it
loved Asad and how he is helping geet

Originally posted by: maanland

LOVELY UPDATE DEAR

AND REALLY A LONG ONE

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT

EACH AND EVERY PART WAS WRITTEN BEAUTIFULLY

AND YOUR DETAILED WRITING PROVED ONE THING

READING A STORY IS MUCH MORE INVOLVING AND INTERESTING THAN WATCHING A MOVIE

AS THEY CANT SHOW EVERYTHING WHAT ONE IS FEELING INSIDE

BUT YOUR WORDS ARE FILLING ALL THE HIDDEN FEELINGS OF THE CHARACTERS

THE WAY GEET WAS MISSING MAAN AT THAT MOMENT

AND SEEKING SOLACE IN HIS THOUGHTS

WAS REALLY SUPERB

LIKE THE ENTHUSIASM OF SHOPPING FOR GEET

HOW PEOPLE JUDGE EACH OTHER BY CLOTHES OR RATHER BRANDS

AWESOME DEAR👏👏👏

AND NOW SO EXCITED FOR MAAN'S REACTION

I CAN IMAGINE HOW BEAUTIFULLY U WILL DESCRIBE WHEN MAAN SEES HER MAKEOVER

WILL WAIT EAGERLY FOR THAT

I tried long to make up for the wait😳 At any given day I choose reading over watching. I have hardly seen any movies. You can guess the extent witht he fact that i never saw DDLJ ever. PPl mock me all the time, but I never had the opportunity too. And generally I rewatch stuff I ike. You would have judged that by hw i remember almost innate dialogues as well😉 reading is so charming and adaptation gives me a thrill to run the thought process of the characters on my own accord. I hope i live up to ur expectations with the next part as well😊

Originally posted by: AnonymousMG

Really? Best? Oh thnks hun😊

awesome update dear...

pari_jyothika Thanks a ton girl! I like it👏