Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 11

ok..that was marvelous...must say beyond marvelous...
i repeat geet's naivety is endearing...
i was reading this update with my mom hovering in my room...half scred she will catch me reading this and controlling my laughter...when i was going literally howl like a hyena reading that cucumber part🤣

but the update was worth the wait and made me go gooey gooey and blushy blushy😳😆

Originally posted by: yappingduck

ok..that was marvelous...must say beyond marvelous...
i repeat geet's naivety is endearing...
i was reading this update with my mom hovering in my room...half scred she will catch me reading this and controlling my laughter...when i was going literally howl like a hyena reading that cucumber part🤣

but the update was worth the wait and made me go gooey gooey and blushy blushy😳😆

Mission Accomplished😉

Originally posted by: AnonymousMG

Ab to tum rula hi dogi itni tareef kr k😭 I googled roshesh ki kavitayein. even i dont remember them, but they usedto be epic. Even in the movie JR shows traits of self respect. I am just working on those subtle indications. The major challenge is Maa. I felt Edward very un-responsive and calm for Maan. So he has to be changed accordingly. And Maaneet ke liye pagalpan hi to h jo even after 3 years, we are smitten by their magic😊

haila.. its superb update..

Maan came to know she is 1st timer.. & he is very happy with that.. oh boy.. & wht he is telling her he won't let anyone touch her gr8...

oh dear u reminded me sarabahi v/s sarabhai.. Roshes.. i did really loved that show.. possessive Maan even don't want her to watch that show as she founds Roshses is sweet & kissbale

loved d part.. though i already watched movie several times .. i do like ur writing & that too on my fav.. Maan & Geet... & always wanted to read more & more. plz. update soon

superb terrific update. quote of the day is ' practice on cucumber'. lol that was so funny. geet is so inoncent . would like to know her past of how come she came in this line. maan concern towards her is so pure and true. superb writing. am enjoying ur writing more than the movie which is one of my favourite movie. so eagerly waiting for next continue soon

Originally posted by: maanland

AH NEVER SAY SO MY DEAR

OK AGAR RULUNGI BHI TO KHUSHI KE AANSOO

OK😊😃

MUST SAY YOU CAPTURED THE SUBTLE THINGS

AND MAGNIFYING IT SO BEAUTIFULLY

RE READ IT AGAIN

AND FOUND THAT I DID NOT MENTION

THE WAY YOU DESCRIBED GEET'S BEAUTY

AND MAAN'S LAUGHTER

VERY WELL WRITTEN

INDEED MAAN AND GEET KA JAADU HI TO HAI

UNKE PYAAR KA JAADU

THAT WE ARE SO HOOKED TO THIS FORUM

AND THE STORIES ON THEM

JUST THE NAME MAAN AND GEET IS ENOUGH FOR US TO TAKE US TO THEIR DREAMLAND

YOU ARE DOING FULL JUSTICE TO THE CHARACTER OF MAAN

IT'S GREAT THE WAY U R CHANGING IT

MAAN IS MUCH MUCH BETTER THAN EDWARD FOR ME😉😉😉

SO ONE MORE JHAPPI TO YOU MY DEAR

🤗

True that, But I am seriously bothered if you are going to finish all your praises in lieu of a single update or save smthing for future too😆

Originally posted by: farzu3008

superb terrific update. quote of the day is ' practice on cucumber'. lol that was so funny. geet is so inoncent . would like to know her past of how come she came in this line. maan concern towards her is so pure and true. superb writing. am enjoying ur writing more than the movie which is one of my favourite movie. so eagerly waiting for next continue soon

Thank u😊
Yes the past will be clear n the mean time., in bits and pieces.However I do not plan to make it a big affair. It wud be smthing subtle making maan feel more for geet and vice versa.

Originally posted by: punam2712

YOU MAY BE WRITING PRETTY WOMAN BUT THEN YOU HAVE GIVEN YOUR TAKE ON IT

IT IS AN INDIANIZED VERSION WITH OUR BELOVED GEET AND MAAN

I AM GLAD THAT YOU SHOWED THAT IT HER FIRST TIME NOT BECAUSE OF ANY MORAL REASON BUT JUST THAT I WANT MAAN TO TEACH HER ALL THE PLEASURES OF HER BODY

ALSO THIS BRINGS OUT HIS PROTECTIVE INSTINCT FOR HER - HE WILL ENSURE THAT HE IS HER FIRST WHATEVER HE MAY HAVE TO DO

HE WILL NEVER LET HER GO

I LOVED HER REFERENCE TO A CUCUMBER AND DID I SEE THE RISE OF JEALOUSY IN MAAN

AND SHE WOKE A CONSCIOUS IN HIM WHICH WAS LOST

ALL IN ALL A LOVELY UPDATE AND REALLY LOVED IT

Thanks for ur comment [")] I think it would be a mutual teaching😆 *if you know what I mean* It would be like a *first time* for both of them when it comes to it. Right now what Maan has in mind is that Geet takes the step with sm1 she loves. And this realization will come later. Its too soon for it😛

Originally posted by: AnonymousMG

True that, But I am seriously bothered if you are going to finish all your praises in lieu of a single update or save smthing for future too😆

DONT BOTHER DEAR