Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87 - Page 10

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AWESUM UPDATE

Luved all the parts,especially the part about the makeup nd wig. The small talks between Maan and Geet was nyce as such were no there in the movie.

Also Maan's concern about Geet's first time and hw he didn't want to cause her pain by taking her virginity was so thoughtful off him 😊 😊.

Geet is really so innocnet/naive the way she said that she praticed on cucumber, was cute nd funny , 😃 😃

Totally loved all the chapters, .. Waiting for more updates

Nt going to watch dat movie.bcz want to read,visualize maaneet wd ur evry updt.though i skipd al d adult cntents,hahaha.bcz if i read it nw,thn while sleeping at night i'l dream al of dis.

Loved the updates and your story.

🤗

Originally posted by: maanland

SUPERB UPDATE

WANT TO CONFESS THAT I DID NOT WATCH THIS MOVIE BEFORE BUT YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING AND THE WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE FORCED ME TO WATCH THE MOVIE

JUST FINISHED WATCHING IT NOW

AND THEN COMES YOUR WONDERFUL UPDATE

FIRSTLY EVEN I LOVE THE SHOW SARABHAI SO MUCH

AND HATS OFF TO UR POEMS

IT WAS EVEN BETTER THAN THE ACTUAL ROSHESH POEMS

AND FOR ME YOUR SETTING WAS EVEN BETTER THAN THE MOVIE

REALLY

AS IN MOVIES THERE ARE NO SELF TALKS AND WHAT THEY ARE FEELING OR CRAVING

SO YOUR WONDERFUL WRIITNG COVERS THAT PART AS WELL

AND GEET'S FIRST TIME DID SUIT THE CHARACTERS SO SO WELL

AND MAAN'S CONCERN FOR NOT TAKING AWAY HER VIRGINITY WAS SO THOUGHTFUL

THEIR HALF ACT HAD ALL THE FIRE HOTNESS EVERYTHING

THANKS TO YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING

I AM SURE THIS IS GOING TO BE A FAR BETTER VERSION THAN THE ORIGINAL PRETTY WOMAN

AND WHEN THAT PRETTY WOMAN IS OUR GEET NO ONE CAN BEAT HER

AND MAAN WILL REALLY OVERPOWER EDWARD

AND CREDIT TO UR SUPERB WRITING

AND LOVED UR CREATIVITY

TOTALLY AGREE WITH UR VIEWS REGARDING ADAPTATION OF A CLASSIC

SO SO VERY GLAD THAT YOU DECIDED TO MAANEETIFY THIS CLASSIC

SO ALL WE FANS OF MAAN AND GEET AND ENJOY SUCH A NICE STORY WITH OUR VERY OWN LOVABLE MAAN AND GEET

THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS

WAITING EAGERLY FOR THE NEXT PART

NOW EVEN WATCHING THE MOVIE CAN'T HELP

AS I AM ENJOYING YOUR WRITING MORE THAN THE MOVIE

SO PLS PLS PLS UPDATE SOON

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A big Jhappi from my side. You left me blushing with you praises seriously. Though I doubt it actually overpowers the movie but still feels so good. Heardfelt thanks to you for being here since day 1 of the FF. Your comments really give me the enthusiasm to write more. Roshesh poem are from original. Glad you liked them😊 Thanks for all ur attention. Keep gracing the thread with your wonderful comment.
Loads of love😊

Originally posted by: flopsy

AWESUM UPDATE

Luved all the parts,especially the part about the makeup nd wig. The small talks between Maan and Geet was nyce as such were no there in the movie.

Also Maan's concern about Geet's first time and hw he didn't want to cause her pain by taking her virginity was so thoughtful off him 😊 😊.

Geet is really so innocnet/naive the way she said that she praticed on cucumber, was cute nd funny , 😃 😃

Totally loved all the chapters, .. Waiting for more updates

Yep, I was pretty clear about make up and wig. Glad you noticed.

Originally posted by: sree10

Loved the updates and your story.

You are correct, this might be a take off on Pretty Woman but I find the treatment very refreshing and like it very much. Makijng geet an innocent is also correct. In the original movie also the character is naive even though she has experience. Here Geet is Indian and it is very unlikely that a girl form a rural area will have that kind of experience.

Thank you.

Next you should try A walk in the clouds or hum hai rahi pyar ke

Also I like an old hindi movie starring Navin Nischal, Nanda and Mala Sinha where the hero was to marry Mala Sinha but she eloped and he marries her cousin Nanda but he and his family dont know of this change.

Thanks a lot for the suggestions. Can you PM me them. In a way it wud be bookmarked then😳 Depending on my interest, time and how many ppl would follow another adaptation, I plan to continue. What I have in mind is the rom com two weeks notice. And a romantic action south indian movie 'ek aur rakshak' let see how things turn out😊

A BIG JHAPPI TO YOU TOO DEAR FOR WRITING THIS FF AND THIS UPDATE🤗

Originally posted by: maanland

A BIG JHAPPI TO YOU TOO DEAR FOR WRITING THIS FF AND THIS UPDATE🤗

AND FOR YOUR REPLY

I WROTE WHATEVER I TRULY FELT AFTER READING UR BRILLIANT UPDATE

AND THAT TOO JUST AFTER WATCHING THE MOVIE

AND FOR ME NO ONE CAN BE MORE ROMANTIC THAN MY DEAR MAAN AND GEET

SO I FELT THAT UR FF IS BETTER THAN THE MOVIE

AND OFCOURSE UR WRITING MADE IT EVEN BETTER

ROSHEH POEM WERE ORIGINAL

MAY BE IT'S BEEN SO LONG THAT I WATCHED THAT SHOW

BUT LOVED IT

I JUST RE READ THE UPDATE

AND LOVED IT AGAIN

AND LOVED THE WAY U R PORTRYING THE CHARACTER OF GEET

THAT EVEN SUCH PEOPLE CAN HAVE VIRTUES

👏👏

SHE WANTED TO DO SOMETHING TO SUPPORT HERSELF

AND NOT BEG FOR MONEY

👏

WHAT A THOUGHT

AND NOW THIS ELEVATED THOUGHT WAS NOT IN THE MOVIE

SO FOR ME YOUR WRITING HAS SURPASSED THE MOVIE

KEEP IT UP DEAR

Ab to tum rula hi dogi itni tareef kr k😭 I googled roshesh ki kavitayein. even i dont remember them, but they usedto be epic. Even in the movie JR shows traits of self respect. I am just working on those subtle indications. The major challenge is Maa. I felt Edward very un-responsive and calm for Maan. So he has to be changed accordingly. And Maaneet ke liye pagalpan hi to h jo even after 3 years, we are smitten by their magic😊

Loved it I so happy Mann her first to have her no one else can