Pretty Woman (ADAPTATION) Maneet FF...ON HIATUS :'( Note:Pg 87

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AnonymousMG

@AnonymousMG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9
easy to wait is one line which fail here bacly.please update soon dear.and me your ome of silent readern but sure guve me few comments sometime as pc is dead and mobile suck for me.

Its okay hun. I understand the problems mobile users face!!😊 No issues.

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AnonymousMG

@AnonymousMG

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Posted: 11 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: yappingduck
she is a complete firecracker...she is adorably cute in her antics..and her innocence comes across, making it endearing and refreshing..
maan is completely gobsmacked to see himself melting to her innocent charms and looking forward to her antics.😆

dental floss scene was kinda cute... and i was tempted to wring maan's neck for beign such a cynic, (i wouldnt blame him though😆)

a completely enjoyable update...
the moment i reach the concluding part of the update, i wish for mroe...its like i am licking my fav candy, and the thought of melting candy makes me go greedy and wish for one more...i know a pathetic analogy😆

btw how do u know my name...😉

OMG!! That was a really wonderful commen. Loved ur take. Thank u so much for being so warm to the FF.

Well I have been lurking here on Geet forum for most part of my day since last three years. So i know most of the people around with their names. Though when I decided to try my hand at writing, that to an adaptation, I wanted to do it anonymously. So thats how I know your name😉

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spoorthi

@sporthy_smile28

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#73

not fair yaar !!! i waited 4 the whole day

but the part was as good as the previous ones!!👍🏼

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: AnonymousMG

Its okay hun. I understand the problems mobile users face!!😊 No issues.

you must have great issue dear as you are too great as a writer to be ignored . and its our pride and luck that finally you are ready to pen dowm your idea . its too good to read your ff even we knew the absd of your story line still e we are waiting for you to write it and darlingnwe are lon loving it. and now about update part me feel lik singing andar se koi bahar na zaa sake ,aur bahar se koi andar na aa sake. but hwhen waiter come i feel lik '' maan will sing '' andar yeh kyu aaya, isse dekh kar hui mujhe jalan aur ab dil kah raha hai kar cu main iska murder .''' yes dear its not onoy maan but even we arebegar to see what r this night hold for them. ''like... do sitaraooo ka zami par hai milan aaj ki raat.''

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nehakapoor7

@nehakapoor7

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#75

oh wow.. i loved this update.. waiting for next

Geet is so innocent & 1st timer. with her behavior . . i think maan will get to know this soon..

maza aane wala hai.. egarly waiting for next

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#76

THIS IS THE DAILY UPDATE THREAD

VISIT IT AND POST THE LINK OF YOUR STORY HERE WHENEVER YOU UPDATE

FIRST TIME JUST WRITE THAT YOU ARE A NEWBIE AND HAVE STARTED A NEW STORY ON MAANEET ALONG WITH THE LINK

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3648098/ff-daily-updates-thread-7

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punam2712

@punam2712

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Posted: 11 years ago

#77

HEY TAKE YOUR TIME IN WRITING

WE ARE IN HURRY FOR IT TO END AND LOVE THE LONG CHAPTERS AND THE DETAILS YOU WRITE

MAAN IS FEELING SO MANY NEW THINGS WITH HER - HE COULD NOT SEE HER CRYING AND FOR THE FIRST TIME IN HIS LIFE APOLOGIZED TO SOMEONE

SHE IS ONE SURPRISE PACKAGE AND HE WILL LOVE UNRAVELLING HER

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---nishu---

@---nishu---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#78

i knew , me back too early. but what to do, wait hi nahi ho raha dear.please tell next part kab post kar rahi ho. please do it fast.my few words for your story'' tanha tha , zindagi ki raaha main. chal raha tha ,jaane ki aaur main . na koi apna tha, aur koi hoga mera bhi apna,na yeh sapna tha . par ab tum milli,, to lagaa , hai zamaane baad mere bhi aangan main dhoop ihilli khilli. tera muskurana , teri in masoom aaniho ka, tere bin bole bhi mujhe sab kuch kah jaana. tujh se judne lagaa hu, na mujhe pataa laga, par teri aur mudne lagaa hu. dekhe yeh raat kya rang laayegi, shyaad na hum bhulege , woh kahaani aaj likhi jaayegi .tu meri raah banana ,mein tera hum saaya banu ta. jo saath teere rahga woh saaya banuga. hope you like it. as i m writing from mobile so poem ko thik se read karna . i knew yeh headcqche hai, but what to do. mujhe se control hi nahi hua. please update soon and meett us with great update abain.

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miss_dreamy

@miss_dreamy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#79

i saw the movie for first time today after reading ur updates... awesome movie..

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Ms Beas Pramanik

@Turtledove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#80

Just read chapter 4 and its awesummm, superb update 😛 😊

Every part reminds me of the film, luved the way maan talked about his ex-wife nd ex-girlfriend, sort of sad, a rich succesful buisness tycoon who has everything he wants except for love,. But that will soon change 😉 😉

Geet a little scared when the bell boy came with the strawberries, thinking to be be raid or something. Maybe its from past expereince.

Waiting for next update,

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