The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 99

Originally posted by: Tyro

so it seems she did not come...n he is trying to move forward...

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi thanks 4 da pm n awesum update! Lovely! Y is Maan thinking like dat abt Geet! update soon! Well written!

Originally posted by: heytal

First of all

Thank you so much Avi

🤗

Second this is one of my fav song from this movie again😳

Coming to the update it was superb

very well woven bringing out the complications of their respective love lives

Dev worried for NT and Geet too untracable😒

but glad that Dev acted fast and roped in the Commissioner of police atleast now they can trace there whereabouts soon

Plus if Brij and Suraj are influential so is Dev

Aakhir saari Delhi ka attraction hain😉

NT emotions taking a toll over her and she did commit a blunder😲

Hope she is able to escape in time😕

Maan's pov cleared the picture

so this was how the misunderstanding happened

Geet did'nt turn up at the party which I'm sure there will be valid and strong reason to it😊 Please love triangle mat create karna Avi🥺

But loved the whole update yaara

very well written down the way u described not only their emotional turmoil but the surroundings was truly commendable

Simply superb!!!!!

And a special thanks as u didn't stretch the saddy part and quickly ended it😃

How are we to wait ab

Monday kab aayega😔

Thanks for updating

🤗

True about Dev...

NT wanted to find out more about her father but she got trapped. It is a bad circle for her right now but NT is strong and smart.

I can never see Maan as anyone else's so you can rest assured Kissi ko mere Maan pe bharosa nahi raha? Hai re kismet...

Thanks Heytal for your support always.🤗 It makes me happy to write when I know people are enjoying reading it.

More khichdi to come😆. Though on the other side of it, if the khichdi stops, the story stops... and I am enjoying it too much to stop right now.

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome dear😊

naina ki life in danger poor dev is feeling

restless ..aww geet waiting for maan and maan think she cheat him

Originally posted by: dqno1

True about Dev... 😳

NT wanted to find out more about her father but she got trapped. It is a bad circle for her right now but NT is strong and smart.

I can never see Maan as anyone else's so you can rest assured😳 Kissi ko mere Maan pe bharosa nahi raha? Hai re kismet...

Thanks Heytal for your support always.🤗 It makes me happy to write when I know people are enjoying reading it.

More khichdi to come😆. Though on the other side of it, if the khichdi stops, the story stops... and I am enjoying it too much to stop right now.

Originally posted by: heytal

U wont believe I had already clicked a like yesterday on ur update

but thought to just check it and couldn't see my name I checked it twice than press the like button again and the likes decreased so clicked it again but still couldn't see my name

Then I realized I had to check red now on and not green

Originally posted by: dqno1

I am not the same as other writers. Mujhe waisi writing nahi aati..😕

Did I not make you fall in love with Dev?

Was Darji not the best grandfather ever, in this story?

Thoda toh vishwas rakho yaar... mujh pe nahi toh mere Maan pe...

Am feeling very down with all the comments

Tum sab mujhe daantoge toh mujh se nahi hoga.😭

Trying to write but back is not cooperating so it is on paper for now.

When I get a chance I will type it up.😃

Thanks for the support Lakshmi.