The Locket (9), MG FF, thread 10 link on pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 98

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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for the late reply...

hope ur back is better now... take care avi...

last part was saddy on both the sides...

on one part... dev tara... dev analysing geets words ... i hope he even thinks off the situation in cool mind and think about tara pushing him off...but her eyes and actions sometimes telling him her fondness to him.. her fear towards her fiancee...as tara seems that she will never disclose all this to dev as she is hopelessly in love with him ...

tara have she been trapped by suraj??

the saddest thing to read was of maan... thinking that geet was playing with his feelings... i really wish he had confronted her personally rather than passing a letter... has the letter really reached geet?? the words that " this is where he belonged" was piercing me... the presence of sameera, the name which i hate most now thanx to the gf writers,is just worsening it...

eager to read more... but u take care first...
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Posted: 11 years ago
time for the new threadDisney graphics
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Posted: 11 years ago
ab maan aisa kyun soch raha hai geet ke bare me...


thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

sorry for the late reply...

hope ur back is better now... take care avi...

last part was saddy on both the sides...

on one part... dev tara... dev analysing geets words ... i hope he even thinks off the situation in cool mind and think about tara pushing him off...but her eyes and actions sometimes telling him her fondness to him.. her fear towards her fiancee...as tara seems that she will never disclose all this to dev as she is hopelessly in love with him ...

tara have she been trapped by suraj??

the saddest thing to read was of maan... thinking that geet was playing with his feelings... i really wish he had confronted her personally rather than passing a letter... has the letter really reached geet?? the words that " this is where he belonged" was piercing me... the presence of sameera, the name which i hate most now thanx to the gf writers,is just worsening it...

eager to read more... but u take care first...

I am not the same as other writers. Mujhe waisi writing nahi aati..😕
Did I not make you fall in love with Dev?
Was Darji not the best grandfather ever, in this story?
Thoda toh vishwas rakho yaar... mujh pe nahi toh mere Maan pe...
Am feeling very down with all the comments
Tum sab mujhe daantoge toh mujh se nahi hoga.😭
Trying to write but back is not cooperating so it is on paper for now.
When I get a chance I will type it up.😃
Thanks for the support Lakshmi.
Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

so sad part...everything is in problem...

dev is sad for nt not ready to accept him...
what have done nt...you yourself landed in a problem...how will she escape from surja's goons..?
where is geet now...where she gone without informing dadi...hope dev could trace her soon...poor dev...geet aur nt ne use tension me daal diya...
maan is feeling that geet betrayed him and now happy with sameera & his new life...there must be some misunderstanding otherwise geet will never do this to him...
take car of your health
updates can wait

Wanted to lump all the sad parts together, so that it can be fixed fast.😊
Thanks Madhuri😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Tara got caught by Suraj's goons,thats unfortunate,now how shall she be saved?

And Maan is thinking Geet ditched him!!!

But why???

What is the confusion here??

There definitely a big MU.


Nice,mysterious part.


Thanx for d update and d PM.

Its a set up for Dusht danav Maan 😆 Usually my Maan's are very goody good.
I am itching to write a DD Maan hence the MU..
Hope it is not too disappointing in the future.
Thanks Sampa..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: reachsky2011

hosiyarpur ki chase yaad agayi...

I guess it was the same time 3 years back...
jaldi update de dena... Get well soon

Will try but can't sit on the PC for too long. Even office time is fully on the computer so need to get rest otherwise I can't even sleep.
Thanks Sky.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: 6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6




please no no no for Sameera...how can Maan move on...how can he forget his first love so soon...

this all misunderstandings happen because of lack of communication...

Maan never said anything to Geet and vice-versa...did she get his letter... and why there is need to write letter when the person is in front of u...she is waiting for him there and here he is trying to move on...finding his happiness and belonging in somebody else...and if he has any misunderstanding why didn't he confronted Geet before going to London... how will Geet understand that he loves her that much...

Tara is in trouble...will Dev be able to save her...

very emotional update...

thanx for pm...

I had said in the beginning of the story that there are only a couple of villains here.
Sameera is not a villain. Please wait until the next part for more clarity.
Thanks for reading
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Posted: 11 years ago
so it seems she did not come...n he is trying to move forward...
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb i loved the whole update. now y is maan thinking negative abt geet. waiting for next

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