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hai dear... lovey part...comment kal karrongi...ok na
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Awesome update
what did maan do against geet
that she hates him and wants to ruin him
what is the next blow geet will give
please update soon and pm me

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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

hai dear... lovey part...comment kal karrongi...ok na


Its OK dear... 😊

Neha ka bhi Epi. aa gaya..😊
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Its OK dear... 😊

Neha ka bhi Epi. aa gaya..😊



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😊 Lakshu check ur PM...
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Mujhe laga tum others updates per ho...😊
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a very different and nice story.update soon
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i think maan rape her in past and still regrets his mistake for that night and again make an mistake is he will change or will remain same?think will change.
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Updating...
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( credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp

Prologue...

She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


Hope u all like it. plzz do hit like button and leave ur comments.






Part-5


Maan took a cab and went to their hang out place. He looked for Dev, NT and Sam. He went to cafeteria and there were they discussing something. He too sat there, Sam came close to hug him but he didn't show any interest. He took out their cell phones from his pocket and placed them on table. They picked them crazily.

Dev: WOW!! Bro great ... aap le aaye. Thank you so much.


Sam: Yes Maan, i was dying without my cell. Thanku .


NT: Thanku Maan. Hope isske liye tumhe kuch sunna na pada ho. First i want to check my phone. (she start her phone and got busy)


Sam: hey chalo sab night mei disc chalet hai... Sunday to waste gaya. Lets enjoy tonight.


Dev and NT : yes , good idea.


Maan: I am not coming. Aap sabko jana hai to jao. Dev don't forget Dad ne kya kaha hai?


Dev: I know, I'll handle that.


Maan: I hope so. OK, I am leaving. (He got up to go)


Sam: Oh come on Maan plz come, why are you behaving like this? Ye sab to chalta hi rahata hai . Kuch din mei sab set ho jayega. (She held his hand and forced him to sit)


Maan jerk her hand and left from there. He don't want to talk anybody. He was hurt with Dev's words so he don't want to go with them. He never thought that Dev could behave like this, so selfish, so harsh. He was wrong and only he will pay for that. He went back home and after few mnts he was in his gym pouring out his anger and frustration. He was looking very confused, hurt and restless.


In cafeteria ...


Sam felt something wrong. She remembered how Maan withdraw himself 2yrs back. She played very smart and with lots of efforts she was succeeded to bring him back in his old self. She didn't want to lose this golden goose. Now again he is behaving like that. She is struggling in her modelling career, she needs some big contracts. She can't efforts these high profile parties. She is enjoying her life because of him. Not only Maan she has some more fishes in her trap and she used them smartly time to time.


Sam: Dev, what happened to Maan? Why he is behaving like this?


Dev: Nothing yaar, Dad scold him yesterday and said ... ( He narrated all to them, and how Maan accepted all his father's conditions.)


NT: But why do you suffer for his mistakes? You didn't do anything then why your Dad stopping you? Why didn't you argue him?


Dev: I can't NT. He deprived us from the property. He is very strict. But i have my own plans and smiled.


Sam became serious and thinking something. She switched on her cell and pressed few buttons.


Few days passed in that way. Maan joined Manesar project and engrossed himself in the work. He came back, gave all reports to his Dad, Discuss with them and then locked himself in his room. He was not used to this much hard work of the site so he got tired end of the day. He didn't talk properly to Sam and his others friends after that day.


Dev Bribe his security man and sneak out at night to meet NT and for night party.

After 2 week ... At KM


It was early morning and a cab stopped at KM's gate, a girl came out, she was in a simple suit, hair tight in a braid, her head was covered with duppatta, she went to Security Man of KM.


Girl: Bhaiyaji kya Maan ya Dev sir hai ghar per?


SM: Ji hai , aap kaun?


Girl: Main Maan sir ke office mei kam karti hoon, ye kuch jaroori papers dene thy, kya aap un tak pahooncha denge?


SM: Tum khud hi de do jaker.


Girl: Meri texi wait kar rahi hai, mai late ho jaungi train pakadni hai, plz aap Maan sir ko ye de do, ye bahot jaroori office ke papers hai, bas Maan sir ke haath me dena kisi aur ko nahi, plz.


SM took the sealed envelope and went in, he knocked Maan's door and handover the packet to him and came back to his place.



Part - 6...

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Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago

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