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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 5

Awesomeee part Babbie..

Good to see that Maan is really changing. He had become responsible and really wants to undo his mistake .. That's Maan spirit

Hate Dev Sam & NT more now.. how Dev has intention to take over his dad property and Sam .. she is using Maan for her career and not only Maan but many more.. Disgusting

Hope Maan sees her real face soon ..

And at Last .. I guess she is Geet and had given something related to their past ..

Waiting for next

-lakshmi- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago


hi babie... aaj abhi tak aayi kyu nahi??
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-



hi babie... aaj abhi tak aayi kyu nahi??




Lakshu...🤗
Lots of love...😊
Sorry to late dear...



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Part 4


Awesomee part babbie ..

So maan is so ashamed with his action whatever he did, of course he should be!

MaanGeet first meet happened but sad Maan could not see her face and Geet succeeded in her purpose..

Hate Dev that he shouted on his elder bro and that too Maan..

Ek mukka marna tha na uske sada hua face per . bara aya Maan ko shout karne wala 太热了QQ表情 有钱花搞笑图片




Mona...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

part 5

khudgarz mandali... that is dev, tara and sameera...

an anonymous gal... geet hai kya??? now what will that cover have???

am waitinggg for the next...



Lakshu...🤗

Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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( credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp

Prologue...

She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


Hope u all like it. plzz do hit like button and leave ur comments.










Part-6


Maan was confused, he looked at the envelope in his hand and opened that. There were two packets named Maan and Dev. He opened the packet which has his name. There were some pics. He was shocked to see the first pic. He hurriedly watched all the pics. His head was spinning, he thumped down on his bed, numb, after few seconds he composed himself, his throat became dry, he gulped his saliva and again saw those sketches and pics. What the hell is this!!!

He noticed that pics were edited not original. All were very awful. He was there with different girls along with Sam. In few pics. Sam was too with different guys. Who can do this? He hurriedly hid the packet in his wardrobe and rushed to main gate of KM.

Maan to SM: tumhe wo envelope kisne diya ?


SM: saab ek ladki aai thi texi mei kaha ki wo aapke office mei kam karti hai, kuch office ke jaruri papers hai aap ko de du.

Maan: ladki!! dekhne me kaisi thi?

SM: Saab seedhi sadi si thi...suit pahane hue . Maine kaha bhi ki wo khud de de, lekin usne kaha ki usse train pakadni hai, wo late ho jayegi. Ku kya hua saab?

Maan (confused): nahi, kuch nahi, esse hi poocha.

He returned to his room. He was not able to get head and tail of all this. Who did this? Who was that girl? He was totally clueless. He took out the envelope again and opened the other packet named Dev. There were too some pics. Dev and NT's. The sketches were handmade and pics were edited.


He wrapped all and hid the packet properly in his wardrobe. He thought for a while, changed his dress and went out. He was thinking that may be Sam and NT also got something. He thought that someone is playing dirty game with him and his friends. Though the pics were not real but they can tarnish their image and respect. He was very worried. He straight way went to Sam's flat (basically d flat belonged to Maan, he paid its rent ). He ringed the door bell, he waited for few mnts then he remembered that he has a spare key of the door lock in his wallet. He opened the door and entered in the flat. He went to the bed room and got another shock. The sight in front of him froze him there, he clinched his fists in anger, his eyes turned red and just wanted to turn everything into ash. There was She, sleeping in the arms of a man, Mr Mehra, owner of an advertising Co. He step back and came out, closed the door and drove off. He threw some belongings in a bag, his laptop, files and rushed out.


He can never imagine that the people who are very close to him cheated him like this. He felt used and discarded. He was living in an illusion but now everything is crystal clear and this bitter reality burning him. He was driving very fast, wanted to go away from all these selfish people and soon he was on the site of construction. He entered in the guest-house and started his work out. Whole day he was yelling at every person for single mistake and made their life difficult.


Part - 7

Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago


aaj main yaha bhi first aa gayi...

the making of maan singh khurana. ki shuruaad... ahaa

on one side its so good that he is so caring for his friends... but the only thing is that his choice of friends is worst... but am sure with the choosing of his right partner(geet ke siwa aur kaun) wo track par aa jaayega...

sam... am so happy that her true colours are revealed...

does past has something connected to tampered pics of geet???

waiting for the next abhi se shuru...

thanx for the double update dear...

Edited by -lakshmi- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
kahaan ho??

abhi update nahi kar rahi ho kya???

main 2-3 comment karne hain... karke aati hoo...

aaj aur koi update tho nahi mila padne ko...tumhain mila?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

kahaan ho??

abhi update nahi kar rahi ho kya???

main 2-3 comment karne hain... karke aati hoo...

aaj aur koi update tho nahi mila padne ko...tumhain mila?


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Posted: 12 years ago
main aa gayi

part rad kake abhi aathi hoo

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