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Posted: 12 years ago


Sab kahan hai...??
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesomeee Part Babbie ,,

Loved their bonding. I am happy to see that in Geet tough time also she has her true friends with her. That s very nice. Loved their friendly talks.

Missed maan in this part.. next tym he should be there okay !!



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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: MonaSWrites

Awesomeee Part Babbie ,,


Loved their bonding. I am happy to see that in Geet tough time also she has her true friends with her. That s very nice. Loved their friendly talks.

Missed maan in this part.. next tym he should be there okay !!




Pretty Thank You Graphic Mona...

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Posted: 12 years ago



Aaj sab gol...... Bye...
good night Scraps, graphics and Comments

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Posted: 12 years ago
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( credit goes to Lakshmi ❤️ Thanku so much dear 😊 )

- Meredith Sapp

Prologue...

She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


Hope u all like it. plzz do hit like button and leave ur comments.




Part- 4



Dev was very frustrated. He entered Maan's room. Maan was standing near the window and staring outside lost in his thoughts.


Dev: Bro. What is this? It's Sunday and i am caged in this house. Even i don't have my cell phone, i am dying to talk to NT and my friends. All are enjoying and i am here all because of you. He was looking at Maan angrily.


Maan: NT's phone too is in police station.


He said without looking at him.


Dev: Bro. This is too much, main iss tarha se nahi raha sakta. Aapki wajaha se mujhe bhi suffer karna pad raha hai . ( Maan was looking at him all hurt) Arey aap ne galti ki hai aap hi bhugto mai ku ? Aapko jo karna hai karo mai issme aapke sath nahi hoon . Aap mera aur NT ka mob. Laker de do , aur jhelo Dad ki conditions.


Maan: Ye mat bhulo Dev isse pahale jo hua tha wo tumhari wajah se hua tha.


Dev: Lekin maine aapko nahi kaha tha wo sab karne ko.


Dev... Maan shouted angrily clinching his fists, but control himself and said, yes Dev it was all my mistake but now i don't want to do any more. Ye meri problem hai, mai hi face karoonga.


Dev tumhe meri wajah se kuch bhi bardast karne ki jarurat nahi hai , lekin ek baat kahunga ki jo galti maine ki wo tum mat karna. Be responsible. (Saying this he left the room) .

Monday morning ...


Maan came to XYZ police station and met to the constable. He asked about their cell phones. The constable replied that they are with ACP and he has to ask her. Maan asked that is she there? Can he meet her? Constable said that she is in meeting and after that he can meet her. He could wait there.


After half an hour constable informed him that he can meet the ACP. Maan with thudding heart came and knocked at the door.


Maan: may i come in plz?


ACP: yes , you can.


She was reading a file. Maan came inside and stopped near the table. He saw her engrossed in her work. She was wearing glasses, hair tied up in a bun, full sleeve khaki uniform, her cap is placed right side of the table. He felt a shiver in his body. He gathered his courage and asked.


Maan: Ma'am can i take our cell phones?


ACP: Yes you can. Register mei sign karo aur le jao. Baaki kahan hai?


Maan: Kya mai nahi le sakta unke?


ACP: ku unhe kya hua hai? wo ku nahi aaye lene? Tumne theka uthaya hai kya un sabka?


Maan: No ma'am ye baat nahi hai , wo meri wajha se ye sab hua to meri responsibility banti hai ki mai hi leker du.


ACP: Really!!! Itna khayal hai responsibility ka wo bhi unke liye? Aur tumhari responsibility kaun lega? Hmmm.. ( in a sarcastic tone)


Phone ke bina to neend bhi nahi aai hogi raat mei? GF se baat karne ki badi jaldi hai? hmm..


Maan: nahi essa nahi hai, aap mera rakh lo mujhe koi jarurat nahi . unke de dijiye plz.


ACP: OK, le jao.


She opened a register, made some entries and put that in front of Maan to sign. Maan signed there. ACP took out phones from the drawer of the table and put them on the table. Maan took them and asked to leave. She nodded and started her work . Maan looked at her once again and turned to go, he walked out from the office and then police station. He was feeling the restlessness again. Why?


In these two days Maan didn't notice the name plate of ACP's name. That night he was drunk and disturbed and today he was very nerves and ashamed. He came and went with lower head.


In ACP office ...


After leaving Maan, Geet took out a Hard disk from the drawer with a smile.


Geet: mujhe jo chahiye tha mil gaya Maan Singh Khurana. Now wait for the next blow.





Part- 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3685802/mg-ss-the-punishment-new-thread-link-on-pg145-17aug?pn=45




Edited by singh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
main first hoon pehli baar iss thread par

hi babie kaha gayab hogayi thi. tumhare liye wait kar rahi thi.
maan is feeling ashamed chalo apni galthi ka ehsaas tho huwa. ab geet kya karne wali hai?
Edited by priya111111 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: priya111111

main first hoon pehli baar iss thread par

hi babie kaha gayab hogayi thi. tumhare liye wait kar rahi thi.
maan is feeling ashamed chalo apni galthi ka ehsaas tho huwa. ab geet kya karne wali hai?


😆 😆 Priya...🥳

And...

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Posted: 12 years ago


😆 itna udas mat ho...

Baaki sab kahan hai aaj...😕
Tum sab to din mei aatey ho... aaj kya hua..??😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



😆 itna udas mat ho...

Baaki sab kahan hai aaj...😕
Tum sab to din mei aatey ho... aaj kya hua..??😊



kya karoon aaj main dazzler ban gayi hoon aaj hi koi nahi aaye😭

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