MG ~ff~ KASAK PART 10 pg/89 || May 1st || - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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yahooo aaj di mera sabse lucky day coz meri di is updating my best story yayyy di eagerly waiting for the updte di jaldi se dedo😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice prologue

waiting for the update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 1:



Geet ... Geet ... Geet ... Geet ... the cell phone alarm buzzed with maan's voice. Every day she hears the voice of maan and wakes up ... She has recorded in her phone back 15 years!! And Ever since maan left to london this was the only trace she had of him. Geet lost her parents when she was a child, there was no one who were related with blood relation to her. But the way maan's family supported her, she actually never let that thought to even pass by that she is an orphan. She was only ten years old when maan left her, but in these long years of separation she understood maan is her babaji, maan is her life ... maan is her love. And there was nothing and no one which could match up to his place in her heart.



A faint smile adored her lips as She hugged the phone closer to her heart and closed her eyes ... Aaj maan aane wale hai, aur main yaha so rahi hoon ... jhalli tujhe itni neend kabse aane lagi?? Its been 15years and these eyes still wait for his glimpse to have a peaceful night, a peaceful sleep ... Geet sat on the bed pulling the duppatta on herself ... aur mujhe yeh bhi nahi pata ki mujhe unka intezaar karne ka haq hai bhi ya nahi



London,

Aahhh don't make a face you idiot, I am just going back home ... gimme a hug c'on, maan said pulling the cheeks of Agata. They were friends ... best of friends since the day he came to london. Though living in a boarding school made him stay away from girls but this girl was someone whom he clicked to instantly.



You will forget me ... I know, she hit maan's chest complaining him that she will miss his presence, his talks ... indeed everything of him.



Ya I need to forget you ... he pulled agata away and continued ... Look at you ... who would say you have a boyfriend?? Maan teased setting the cap on her messy hair ... just stay happy sweetheart, jake is a perfect choice for you ... a wild animal.



Shut up maan ... she again warned him asking him to stop. She still couldn't forget the first day when she met him in the school ... others were making fun of him for the way he looked like. There were racial feelings but maan did mingle with everyone, his charm did work and now he has become the most handsome hunk of the town. She even managed to learn his language, hindi was more beautiful than she ever thought.



Say something agata ... I miss my country so much ... waha ki khushboo, waha ki hawa ... I have to go, have to ... she bid a bye to her friend hugging her for one last time ... will meet soon ... walked away in excitement to go to his hometown ... back to his parents, his real life ... his true place.


Khurana mansion,


Pammi: Geet aaj outhouse ke bahar bhi nahi aayegi yaad rakhna ... she warned Vicky who was munching onto the apple, who stopped suddenly and snapped in anger



Mom you don't need to say that again and again ... Geet waise bhi nahi bro ke saamne aayegi, so stop this nonsense



Interrupting their talks yash came to have his breakfast and screamed ... office ka time ho raha hai pammi give me my breakfast.



Aaj aapka beta wapas aaraha hai aur aapko office ki padi hai?? leave after he comes, she said not wanting to give him food.



Kya fark padta hai?? Geet bhi toh maan ko nahi dekh rahi na?? Yash retorted. He knew his answer will ignite her but that was the truth indeed too. He was already feeling bad for geet and to add to his misery pammi was repeatedly saying that geet will not see maan.



@geet's room,

Yeh kaise lagega?? Acha hai?? bolo na Zuzu .... Geet held the watch infront of the her baby doggy who was looking at it with disapproving look.



Aise mat dekh, yeh maan ka old wala watch hai, London jaate waqt maine chura liya ... from the other hand geet held the waist chain that maan gifted her.



I couldn't give him this coz i wanted something of his to be with me ... iss liye aaj bhi mere paas hai, Zuzu turned her face away cribbing to geet's babaji that its been 15years geet every single days shows this stuff to her.



Isko bore nahi lagta?? 😆She mentally told herself huffing and puffing ... Meri breakfast kaun dega?? She thought.



As if geet heard that nanha sa jaan's pain, she gave her food and left for dargah freshening up knowing that it was only the way she could stay away from maan and his thoughts. It was only this place which always gave a peace of mind to her.


Airport,

As maan landed in India ... his phone started to ring continuously. He knew it was his mother, who else would it be. Though he wanted to answer he didn't knowing pammi will not like his idea to pay a visit to dargah first.



Her payal chummed as she entered climbing on the steps, geet knelt down and prayed to babaji before entering dargah.


Her insides began to think of maan as geet stood infront of god, the time she spent with maan came back to her and all the desires came out as a simple plane, a complete selfless prayer of hers ... Babaji aaj maan wapas aane waale hai ... meri badnaseebi hai ki main unke saamne nahi jaa sakti, its been fifteen years I had seen him, and I won't even try to see him ... Bas unko khush rakhna, mere hisse ka bhi khushi unko dedena ... Geet closed her eyes setting the duppatta over her head praying to god, tears threatened to fall but didn't probably they dried long back. She wanted to see him badly ... For once!! Just once!! Her body badly wanted to go to mansion to have a glimpse but she knew she cant. Suddenly cold wind blew through the place ... The duppatta now fell on her shoulder, her whole existence began to tremble feeling HIS presence around. Geet looked around in anxiety as the time stood still when her sight caught the shadow of a person who was praying to babaji.


precap: Nahi pata 😲😎🤣


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Edited by dreamyharika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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meri jaan di kal se eagerly waiting for the update jaldi se dedo di plzzz apni mani ke liye😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
congratsss for new ss
awsome start
maan forgot his geet and busy in his life
and poor geet love him badly
😡pammi don't want geet to meet maan hate her but who can stop our maaneet
love the way yash support geet
Edited by fabiyamg - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maaneet ke pitch sab ku pade rahete hai and how maan forgate geet poor geet mad in maan love
Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautifully written..

Loved the way you have shown tat small glimpse of Maan's and Agata's friendship..

The way Paami tell Vicky to make sure geet does not come... and does Yash objects it.. and yeah Geet ka.. waha she has so many friends yaar.. how come she made friends with a doggy too..

lovely.. poor girl she is waiting for maan and she cant even see him
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely start harika so maan is coming back after 15long years. and geet still thinking about him

whether still remembers geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome start
she was already waiting for maan from past 15yrs & here people doesn't want her to see maan, but y?
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
hi dear! Interestin update! Maan his her everythin! she is waiting 4 him for 15 yrs! Maan in London! Returning to India! well written, update soon n so pm! Thanks

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