MG ~ff~ KASAK PART 10 pg/89 || May 1st ||

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#441

Emotion filled and intense painful story !!!

It was really heart wrenching while reading Geet's pain and her yearning for him.

He too yearns for her, but fighting with self !!!

Vicky is right, if he comes to know how she is he will be hell angry for hiding and lying.

waiting for their past to reveal.

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amreenshameem

@amreenshameem

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Poor geet wanted to avoid maan but couldn't. ..

Arnav did it ri8.

Maan now in angry boss mode. ..

Baba ji bachalo geet ko

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#443

awesome ff...
read all part in one go...

loved the concept...

felt like crying seeing geet in so much pain...
only vicky seems to know what she is going through...
her guilt for destroying their relation eating her from inside...

maan after coming back not for once talk about her...
and neither geet want maan to know her...

plz continue soon...

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Hajra

@-Haju-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Nice concept

Feeling sorry for maneet

You've described their pain so beautifully

Can't wait to read more.

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jeyanthi123

@jeyanthi123

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#445

lovly update :-) :-) wat hapd n past tat geet thnks maan hate her.. Workng 2gether .. Continue soon

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geeta-99

@geeta-99

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Read most of ur stuff but this story of urs is so confusing when will past unfold n who is pari...
Man meet working together hope love will blossom again in their life.
I'm fond of ur writing skills plz continue soon...