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Posted: 10 years ago
maan taking care of geet
he is staying with them
arpita is reluctant
but prashant makes her understand
dishu having gud time with her nani n dost
all 3 slept holding each other
both daughs too want to join them n feel the complete family hug.
now dishus que how will they answer..


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hi
i am a new reader of this ff. i found it yesterday .beautiful ff. please update fast.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update!!!👏👏Awww Disha is so cute and smart too...Loved Maan,Geet and Disha bonding is so lovely❤️❤️Perfect family😊Maan is so naughty😉loved their lovely moments😳Loved it so much...waiting for the next updateThanks for the PM dear😃
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Essence of love

Character sketch:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3523345/essence-of-love

Part 1:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3524545/mg-ff-essence-of-love-thd-1-part-1-pg-no-3-7-04-20

Part 2:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3524551/mg-ff-essence-of-love-thd-1-part-2-pg-no-5-7-04-20

Part 3:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3524563/mg-ff-essence-of-love-thd-1-part-3-pg-no-7-7-04-20

Part4 to 6:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3526934/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-1-prpt-4-5-6-pg-6-78-8-0

Part 7:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3526979/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-1-pt-7-9-04-2013

Part8 to 14:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3526992/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-1-prts8-9

Part 15:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3526992/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-1-prts8-9?pn=2

Part16 to 20:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3543332/mg-ff-essence-of-love-tread-2-part-16pgno-18-04-2

Part 21 to 24:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3543332/mg-ff-essence-of-love-tread-2-part-16pgno-18-04-2?pn=2

Part25to28:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3543332/mg-ff-essence-of-love-tread-2-part-16pgno-18-04-2

Part29:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3543332/mg-ff-essence-of-love-tread-2-part-16pgno-18-04-2

Part30 to 44:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3597294/essence-of-love-thread-3-part-30-page-32-22-5-2013

Part45 to 59:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3603955/mg-ff-essence-of-love-thread-4-part-45-59

Part 60to till date:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/3627433/mgff-essence-of-love-thd-5-part-60-14-6-2013


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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-11 /part-145/pg.no.110/1/11/2014




Part:-145

All stood rooted stunned by her bomb. They didnt think about it till now ,.. weather to explain her and confuse her little brain r not . wat to tell her?wat not to tell ,.. not yet been thought.. They all stood like that trying to explain ,.. when Maan first responded . He composed himself and thought that there is no need to explain her everything right now ,.. as she only 4 yrs ,.. she will understand gradually as the days pass. so he " thum mujhe dost kyu bulathe ho? he asked her.
Dishu:- kyun ki aap mere dost ho ,. aur mujhe aap ko dost bulana achha lagtha hai.
Maan:- umm,.. thik waise hi thumhare mumma ko mujhe papa bulana achha lagtha hai ,.. isliye wo mujhe .. papa bularahe ,.. aur mujhe bhi achha lagtha hai,..
Dishu:- ohh;,.. she clapped her hands jaisa meri mama papa ,.. aap aur nani meri mumma ki mumma papa haina?all breathed in relief how easily she accepted him,..?
Maan:- haa,.. meri champ thum bahut smart ho,...
Dishu:-haa ,. mai tho bahut smart hu ,.. nani bhi mujhe wahi kahthi hai ,..
and she went in deep thinking keeping her fore finger on her chin,..
Maan:- kya hua? Dishu:- aap tho meri dost haina ,? Maan noded his head to yes,..
Dishu:- mai tho aap ko dost hi bulaungi,. mujhe wahi achha lagtha hai ,..
Maan:- haa meri dost thum mujhe dost hibulao ,.. all smiled in releif and contentment.
Dishu:- dost ab tho aap nani ke saath school avogena?
Maan:- kyu koi khaas hai kya?
Dishu:- waha sab log aap ki baare me nani ko puchthe hai ,.. kabhi kabhi nani chup chup ke rothi thi ,..
All baffled hearing this new information. Even Arpitha @ Ankithad idnt know this newi nformation,.. unki maa kitni humiliate horahi hai .
Maans jaws tightened hearing this he fisted his fist in anger ,.how dare? how dare them to humiliate her? and decided something strongly in him.
Here while returningto km Dev ,Annie and Arjun r discussing about the marriage of Maneet. they picked up Rahul fr. school.
Annie:- bhai ,. ab kyahoga? kya maa maanjayegi maan bhai ki ye shaadi? Dev:- isse kya farakh padtha hai Aannie ,.. unki ye zidd ki waje se bhai ghar code ke jaarahe,.. kya mlega usse ? agar ye maan gayi tho is me unki bhalayi hogi ,.. nahi maane tho ,. tho bhi kuch nahi hoga ,.. bhai tho waise bhi ghar nahi anewaale ,. tho wo bhabhi ka kya bigadsakthi ? Arjun:- dev thik kahrahe anie,.. hume ye baath ko unper chode denge ,.. thum ye chintha math karo aur shaadi ke baare me socho kya karna hai kaisa
karna hai ,. unki preparations dekho .
Dev:- haa annie ye sab falthu cheeje chodo ,.. hume ye khush hona chahiye ki bhai jaha bhi ho khush rahenge ,. aur bhabhi unhe bahut khush rakhthe hai .. isse alawa hume kya chahiye ,..
Rahul is hearing it silently.
Later in K.M. annies room,..
Rahul is sitting in the coener of the room all gloomy gloomy,..
Annie:- rahul beta,. kya hua? itni gumsum kyu ho? school me kisi se jhagada hua? kisine mara thumhe?
Rahul :- nahi maa ,..
Annie:- per thum itna chup kyu ho?
Rahul:- mumma iya bade mamu ab K.M. kabhi nahi ayega? mai mamu ko bahut miss karthahu ,. mai mamu ke bina yaha nahi rahunga,. mamu ke passjaaunga,.. mamu ke saath geet maam ki ghar me rahunga..
Annie hugged him ,. she know how much he attached to her bhai ,..
Rahu:- mamma ,. nani kyu geet maam ko pasand nahi karthi? wo kitna achhi hai ,.. kitna accha hoga agar bade mamu ne geet maam ko shaadi karetho? hum sab yahi saath saath rahsakthe haina?
Arjun:- Rahul yaha avo beta,..
Rahul cameto him ,.. Arjun took him to his laps and kissed him saying ,.. ab geet maam thumhari badi mami hai ,.. thumhe unhe badi mami bulana hai ,.. aurthum chaho tho thumbhi waha jaake badi mamu ke saath rahsakthe ho,..
Rahul:- sach me papa,..? mai geetmaam ki ghar me rahsakthahu?
Arjun:- no ,.. no ,. rahul badi mami , kahana maine ?
Rahul :- haa ,. sorry ,.. sorry ,.. badi mami ,.
Arjun:- right,..
Rahul:- hai.. hai ,.. mai bhi mamu ke saath badi maami ki ghar me rahunga ,.. and dishu ke saath khub khelunga ,.. aur mami hume achhi achhi kahaniya sunayegi aur mai ,.. and his list of does going on and on,...
Here in geets house ,..
Arpitha went to Maans room to clear everything and to set bed etc,..
Dishu came
Dishu:- mama aap kya karrahe ho? Arpi:- papa keliye kamara thik karrahi hu,..
Dishu:- koun papa? thumhara papa:,..ya mera papa?
Arpi:- thumhare papakeliye thum thik karo kamara ,.. mai tho mere papa keliye thik karrahi hu.
Dishu:- thumhare papa keliye kyu? dost ab yahi rahenge unki ghar nahi jaayenge?
Arpitha@ Prasant looked eachother like ab kyu bolu isse ,..
Dishu:- patting on her head,.. ohh; ,... mai samajgayi ,.. samajgayi ,.. papa aur mama saath saath rahthe hai ,. isliye dost bhi yaha rahthe hai nani ke saath haina mama?
kitne samjdaari bachhi hai ,.. sawaal karthi hai ,.. jawaab bhi khud dethi hai ,..
Prasant lifted her in his arms and kissed her saying my smart girl ... dishu grinned showing her pearls.

Here in geets room at 10.p.m. after dinner,..
Maan:- ab sojao geet raat bahut hogaya ,. mai ghar chaltha hu ,.
Geets face turned pale hearing this she dont want to leave him ,.. but dont know how to stop him,.. she looked at him pouting,..
Maan:- kya hua muh kyu banarahi ho? Geet:- math jaona,.
Maan:- kyu yaha bait,.bait ke kya faida? thum tho mujhe pass bhi nahi anedethi ho? "Shaadi se pehle ye galat hai Maan " he said it mockingly imitating her ye bolkeh umesha muje bhagathe ho,.. he pouted now,..
Geet laugheds eeing his pouting but then muffled keeping hand on her mouth seeing his annoyed face ,..
Maan:- thume hassi arahe?yaha mai itna bechain horaha hu ,.. aur har pal tadapraha hu thumhareliye ,. thumhe tho hassi arahe? griiting his teeth.
Geet:- trying to stop laugh ,...in teasing tone ,.. kitna bechaine horaha hai? pata nahi itni saalonse kaise apne aap ko kabu me rakhpaaya? kaise control karpaaya aapne aap ko?
Maan:- sat near her and taking her in to his arms ,. jab tak thume dekha nahi ye haal mujhe kabhi nahi huag eet ,.. pehli baar,... pehli baar muje ye ehsaas thumhe dekhne ki baad hua ,. zindagi me pehli baar mujhe mere liye kisi ko hone chahiye sirf mereliye , mere apna ,.. ye ehsaas mujhe tabhi hua ,.. thumhe dekhne ki baad mujhe ye ehsaas hua ki mai ek mad hu ,. mujhe bhi kuch chahiye ,..pyaar chahiye ,.. ek jeevan saathi chahiye ,.. ek pariwaar chahiye khushi chahiye ,.. ye sab mai mehsoos karne laga jab mai thumhe dekha , mujhe laga ki thum hi ho mere sacchi saathi ,. mereliye bani ho ,.. aur ek thum hi meri is pyaas bhuja sakthi ho ,.. mai apne aap ko khosaktha hu thujh me ,.. he hugged her tightly digging himself in her clevage trying to fulfill his thrust there..geet too hugged him to her carassing him and giving smooches on his body where she can get contact soothing him .
they parted hearing some foot steps ,..
Arpitha @ Prasant came
Arpitha:- chaliye papa,.. aap ka kamara thik hogaya,..
Maan in wonder :- mera kamara ,..
Prasant:- haa ,.. sir,. aapko fh jaaneki koi jarurat nahi ,.. waha aap kyu akela rahna ? yaha hum sab ke saath rahiye ,.. waisa hi kuch din ki baath hai ,.. baad me tho aap ko yaha rahna hoga..
Maan:- lekin,. he lookd at geet,..?
Prasant :- maa bhi yahi chahthe hai sir ,.
He looked at geet she nodded her head in yes ,..
Arpitha:- dekhiye papa maa haa boli ab chaliye ,.. Maan thik hai,. he looked at geet and winked at her leaving her in thinking wat is he up now? my god kyac halraha hai inki dimaag me?
Prasant gave him some night wear and he changed in to them .
while he is going to bed ,.. he got call fr. dev...
Maan:- hellow Dev,..
Dev:- bhai ,.. congratulations,.
Maan:- dev kitnibaar kahthe ho cogts,..
Dev :- ye cogts tho aap ki "20th ,. The Best Bussiness Man Award "ki hai bhai ,.. hume abhi patachala ,..
Maan:- ohh;'' thank u.
Dev:- bhai hum bahut khush hai bhai ,. aur hum is khushi me ek badasa party dene ka sochrahe ,..
Maan:- haa,. Dev we will through a big party ,. aur isbaar tho party bilkul special honichahiye ,..
Dev:- mai samajgaya bhai ,.. aap bhabhi ko sab ko introduce karna chahthe hona?
Maan:- haa dev ye bahut jaruri hai,..
Dev:-haa,.. bro ye bahut achhe mouka hai bhabhi ko introduce karneka,.. mai puri intezaam karunga bro ,.. aap ye jimmedaari mujhe per chodiye ,..
Maan:- thik hai ,. goodnight ,..



{ guys maine ek salaha pucha per kisi ne dhanke se meri help nahi ki ,.. tho mai mujhe jo achha laga wahi diya ab kisi ko pblm haitho please mujhe math bathana,.. dishu tho bahut choti hai tho mujhe laga ki koi jarurat nahi inhe explain karneka ,..,.. per rahul tho 10 saal ka hai mujhe laga ki wo samajsakthe isiliye isa likha ]

Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear... This update is really gud and wat u said abt kids is also correct. At 4yrs kids cant understand where as a 10 yr old can. I know because I've seen my sister's kids. And very eagerly waiting for ur updatenext. Really felt happy reading it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
that was a beautiful update. loved dishu and rahul. and please update fast the next chapter .
Edited by dhanyabinu - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Toh dishu aur rahul ko bhi sab pata chal gaya aur dono ne bahut achhi tarha se socha...i liked dishu's talk..."mummy pappa hai toh saath hi rahenge na"...
Maan ache se geet ko batata hai ki geet ka usski jindgi mein aane ke baad usski jaruratein badh gayi hai!!!
Prashant bhi maan ka ussi ghar mein rahene ka plan bana deta hai...geet ki bhi ha kar deti hai...
Ab Maan ko award mil raha hai aur woh uss time Geet ko sab se milwana chahta hai...






Edited by sheetalvasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
dear logic is perfectly right...
u written very well dear...👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice update
relax you are doing your writing work very beautifully
so continue like this only

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