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Posted: 10 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-10/part-144/pg.108/15/10/2014




After some time arpitha brought lunch for both Maneet. Maan wanted to feed Geet but geet denied it and said him to take his lunch ,she iso.k. now and can manage herself as he too was hungry and didnt had anything fr. morning. After lunch he gave her meds.
Geet asked him take some rest as fr. many days he didnt get proper sleep and it is needed ,. saying him that she too will sleep.He sat near her on bed and asked her to sleep first and then he will . Geet looked at him with love and effection and contended having him this much close ,.. slowly she drifted to sleep . Maan slowly got up fr. the bed and settled on the couch and tried to get some sleep still rimincing their beautiful minites .
Evening,..'4' clock,...
Prasant brought Dishu fr. her school. She is so excited that she will meet her Nani today ,. as all these days they kept her away fr. geet as she is in hospital and may scared looking her. Fr. morning she is sooo,... exited to meet her nani ,.. she asked about a 1000 times about her through out the way.
She stormed in to geets room throwing her school bag on Arpitha calling ,.. no ,.. no ,. acually shouting ,. NANI ,.. NANI ,... not listning Arpithas warnings,. like dheere ,.. dheere ,.. nani sorahe ,.. chillao math ,..nani abhi tak thik nahi hue ,. etc,.. etc,... today nobody could stop her .
And she jumped on Geet soon she entered in room,.. I miss u ,.. miss u ,.. so much nani she hugged her and kissed her.
Geet also hugged her as she also damn missed her kissing on her face and every where,.. Dishu all clinged to her carassing her whole body and head,asking ,.. ab aap kaise ho nani ,. aap ki chote thik hua .. mai bahut dar gayi thi she cupped geets face with her small small palms with tear ful eyes. Geet:- mai bilkul thik hu meri pari ,.. kuch nahi hua mujhe,.. Dishu hugged her neck.
Maan also at once wake up by the noice ,.. he came near them looking them dearly smiling he know their bond and how much they missed each other.
Dishu looked him ,. Hai dost aap yaha? and now she jumped on him ,.. Maan took her in to his arms and kissed her as he also missed her all these days.
Arpitha came saying ,.. kahrahi huna mai isa nani per khud nahi sakthe ,.. chalo ab thum utharo aur fresh hojao.
Dishu:-nahi mai nani ke pass hi rahungi,.. she clinged to geet.
Maan:- rahnedo beta,.. wo apni nani ko bahut miss karrahe ,aur geet bhi unhe bahut miss ki.
Arpitha:- per papa,.. pehle inhe muh haath dhoke kuch khana hai she showed kuch snacks and milk for dishu and for maneet.
Dishu stopped and looked at arpitha one second hearing calling maan as" papa". like confused , but she let it go in childish way .
Maan:- lao mujhe do mai khilaunga meri dost ko ,.. o.k. ab thumhara pblm solved .
Arpitha gave him smiling and left.
Dishu:- grinned to geet ,pata hai nani ? school mai sab aap ko bahut miss karrahe ,. school bilkul achha nahi lagtha aap ke bina ,. sab aap ki baare me puch rahe aur rahul bhaya bhi aap ko bahut miss karrahe.
Geet:- achha tho meri pari mujhe bahut miss kiya
Dishu:- haa ,.. bahut ,she showed how much like widening her arms as big as possible.
Maan:- feeding her snacks ,.. tho thum sirf nani ko miss kiya ,.mujhe nahi? apni dost ko?
Dishu looked him with puppy and confusing ,.. dont know wat to say ,.. at the same time dont want to disappoint him, Mai aap ko bhi miss kiya"
Maneet laughed her cute confusing face and trying to please him.
dIshu looked with puppy face and pouting.
Maan:- o.k. ,..o.k. ,.. ab thum khalo,. he fed her and she started to feed both maneet as its her habbit ,. she never eats without sharing.
She fed an apple peace to geet ,.. Geet bit a peace and kept the remain back in the plate .
Dishu took another peace and kept it near maans mouth ,.. but he took the left over peace by geet and put it in his mouth,..
Dishy:- chi ,.. chi ,.. dost ye nani ki jhuta hai ,.. aap isa jhuta nahi khasakthe,..
Maan:- nahi ,.. dost ye jhuta nahi hai ,.. ye tho prasaad hai,.
Geet in warning way' 'Maan,...' Dishu turned and looked at geet in wondering way ,. [ kyu nahi ? generally she calls him as Maanji ,.. but now only maan,.. bachhe hai yaar sab observe karthe ,.. question bhi karthe ]
Dishu:- prasad?
Maan:- haa ,.. thum tho humesha kahthe hoona ki thumhari nani ek angel hai ,..
Dishu:- haa ,.. wo tho sahi hai ,.. mera nani such much angel hai ,.
Maan;-tho angel ki juhta prasad hi hothi haina? prasad tho hum khasakthe,.. right?
Dishu :- haa right ,.. she grinned
Geet awed by his naughtiness and the way he convinced dishu,. Maan winked at her and she blushed furiously.
And dishu continued and continued her blabbering settling in maans laps and playing with geets hands and pallu she didnt observed that how closely maneet sat ,.. and she dozed felt tired in his lap. geet also dozed . Maan looked at his two angels lovingly sleeping on him dishu on his chest and geet on his shoulders. He cocooned both of them in his arms feeling contended having his two precious possestions in his arms ,.. he too dozed off in that position.
After some time Arpitha came to take dishu to get her fresh up and for her h.w. etc,.. she stood rooted seeing the lovely scene. looking like a complete family ,.. mainly seeing her mother with her man beside. Never in her life she witnessed,.. layer of tear formed in her eyes. Ankitha too came to see her ,.. she hugged her and kept her face on her shoulder seeing them. Aarpitha looked at ankitha with her tearfull eyes.
Ankitha;- Di ,.. mujhebhi join karna hai in this family hug me,..
Arpitha;- cupping her cheek ,. mujhe bhi .looked each other with contented smile. Arpitha led her to out of the room closing the door . they sat on the couch remincing the beautifull sight. Ankitha laid in arpithas lap.
Ankitha;- dI ,.. mujhe aap se kuch kahna hai ,..
Arpitha:- haa bolo ,..
Anki:_ Di mai maa keliye bahut khush hu ,.. per kabhi ,..kabhi mujhe meri man me kuch dar jaisa lagraha hai ,.. kayi hum maa ko khodenge?
Arpitha:_ thumhe isa kyu lagrahahai?
Ankitha:- Di ,.. aaj tak maa ki jindagi me sirf hum hai ,. per iss shaadi ke baad ,.. maa ko apni alag sa family milthe hai ,. naya ghar ,.. naya pariwaar ,. naya rishthe ,.. naya jimmedaari hothi hai ,.. aaj tak unki priority sirf hum hai ,.. per iss shaadi ke baad unki priorities badalthe hai ,.. ye sab nibhana padtha hai maa ko aur in sab me wo hume pehle jaisa pyaar aur lagaav de nahi paayegi ,.. ye baath mujhe bahut pareshaan karrahe.
Arpitha:_ thum isa kyu sochrahi ho? thum khud ek maa bannene waali ho aur ek maa ki mamatha thumhe samajme nahi arahe? maa ko kabhi apni bachhe ke pyaar mai kami hothi hai kya?agar hum iss rishthe se kuch khoraha hai tho,.. bhi kuch paa raha hai ,.. hume papa milrahe ,. kya kabhi hum papa ke pyaar milgayi? aur sir ne kitne khule man se hume apna rahe,.. kya ye kaafi nahi hai? hume maa ko samajnachahiye ,. unki maodat karna chahiye ,.. har ek ladki ko shaadi ke baad sab kuch badalthe hai ,. unki apna maa baap chode ke jaana padtha hai ,. unki priorities badalthe hai ,.. nayaghar ,.. naya pariwaar ,.. rishthe naya jimmedaari nibhana padtha hai ,. ye tho humari khush kismath hai ki hume prasant aur aakaash milgay ,.. hume kuch badalne ki jarurat nahi hua ,.. har kisi ko isa nahi hotha , ye tho humaari khush naseeb hai ki hume sir jaisa papa milrahe,.. hum age bhi maa se dur jaane ki jarurat nahi hai , isse jyaada thumhe kya chahiye choti? isa kabhi math socho hume maa ko support karni chahiye, samjhe thum?
Ankitha:- haa di .. aur ,.. hum,.. they r talking still ,..when prasant came with an electrician and a big carton with them. Arpitha and ankitha stood fr. the couch
Arpitha:-ye sab kya hai prasant?
Prasant:-arpitha yea.c. hai mai isse duseri bed room me fix karwaaraha hu.
Arpitha:- per kisliye?
Prasant:- arpitha ye sir keliye ,..sir a.c. ke bina nahi rahsakthe,.
Arpitha:- papa keliye ? kya papa yahi rahenge?
Arpitha:- ofcource arpitha ,.. papa aur mama saath saath rahenge na? aur sir tho k.m. nahi jaana cahthe hai tho aur kaha rahenge ? f.h. me wo akela kaise rahthe hai,.. and i am sure maa bhi yahi chahthi hai wo pareshaan hojayega,.. aur waha sir maa keliye pareshaan hoijayega ,. wo dono ek dusere ke bina nahi rahsakthe ,.. [he remembered how maan rushed to the hospital in midnight]
Arpitha:- per Prasanr shaadi se pehle dono isa ek hi ghar me ,..
Prasant :- ophoo: arpitha ab ye reethi riwaaz rasme insaari ke baare me math baath karo ye sab baahar logonko jaruri hai ,.. dunia ki jaruri hai hume nahi,.. kyun ki hum jaanthe hai ki hum kya chahthe hai kya karna hai ,.. hume kisi ki jawaab dene ki jarurat nahi hai ,.. jaha tak hum galat nahi hai tho ,.. mujhe do no ko alag rahna achha nahi lagraha isiliye mai saari intezaam karraha hu .
they didnt say anything.
Here in room Geet wake up first. She looked at maan who is stll sleeping hugging them to his heart. She closely observed his sharp features fr. his closed eyes to his M shaped lips those r broad in mesmarising smile even in sleep. slowly she came close to him not able to stop the temptation to kiss him. She kissed him on his cheek very lightly taking care that his sleep not disturbed. But Maan awake, he laid like that to see wat else she could do. She started to carass his features of his face feeling them and loving them she again bend to kiss on his lips. She wanted to peck them lightly but Maan turned it to full mouth and passionate kiss swallowing her every nectar and grasping her every secrets. She stunned by this first and slowly lost in his kiss submitting herself to him . Paasion raised in them to a level taking all their sences and they began to maon which made dishu disturbed,.. she stirred in her sleep and they have to part. Maan patted her to sleep again but she got up and smiled. She looked confused seeing them very near ,. rather to say geet in Maans arms and confused getting some weirdness. Geet diverted her by asking about her h.w. and there started her blabbering again.
Later at Dinner time again dishu observed that Aarpitha and Aankitha calling Maan as"papa" her small brain could not fanthom all that new hapenings fr. evening she could not control her enthusiasm ,.. she asked," mumma,.. thum aur chachi meri dost ko papa kyu bularahe ho?
[ she throwed the bomb,. now time to mission"Dishu and Raul ko maneet ki rishthe ke baareme samjhann" per kaise ,. badonkliye itna mushkil horaha , bachhon ko kaise samjhana? ,.. me hair pulling,...can i expect any sugestions r means r ways r ideas fr. my dear likers,.. commenters ,.. readers,.. my buddies,.. and my guruji ,..]
Next part only after getting apropriate sugestions fr. u all

Thank.u. all



Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update love maaneet n dishu moment
awesome like perfect family
geet daughter also want to join
maan is soo naughty like it
now dihu question
iska answser thoda mishkil hai


they will said they want papa so nani marry your dost n they will our papa n u will get nana like ur friend

rahul ka anwser


your geet teacher you love her na so mamu made her live with you by marry her

di is say zayada nahi socha jara hai complecateed hai bacho ko samjhana
Edited by fariya20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update. Disha she is too smart.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
Toh ab ankita aur arpita ne dil se Maan ko apna liya hai...
Dishu badi sweet hai aur usska nanha sa dimag maaneet ko dekhkar ulaj gaya hai ...
Aur dishu puch hi leti hai ki dost ko papa kyu bol rahe ho?
Loved Geet ki choti si puppy jo baad mein ek passionate kiss ban jaati hai...


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Posted: 10 years ago
Anu, dishu ne bomb nahi phoda par tumne hum par foda hai!!!!!
Hum tumhare sawal ka kya jawab de?
Main puri koshish karungi ki kuch sochu,,,,,kal bataungi...chalegana?
Edited by sheetalvasa - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update,
Waiting for more👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely pt
dishu missing nani so she
immediately rush in geet room
and both awake by sudden noise
prshant brings ac 4 maan
he nows that maan's ac habbit
he won;t be comfortable without it
geet small kiss turn to passionate kiss
maan won't leave chance
dishu Q wat will the answer
that they want papa so maa
filling their wish by marring
her dost

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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! amazing update dear...loved it a lot
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Posted: 10 years ago
anu, thaks for updating yaar. it was great.Arptha is such a matured girl. loved her conversation with ankitha. DDishu was cute. I'm not sure how can this be explanied to the children!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sanum23

lovely pt

dishu missing nani so she
immediately rush in geet room
and both awake by sudden noise
prshant brings ac 4 maan
he nows that maan's ac habbit
he won;t be comfortable without it
geet small kiss turn to passionate kiss
maan won't leave chance
dishu Q wat will the answer
that they want papa so maa
filling their wish by marring
her dost


thank.u. yaar none can gave a sugestion i deffinitely try to consider this

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