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Posted: 11 years ago


hmm abhi Geet ke Dil ka darr duur karna zaroori hai...

when she will be ready to face everybody then half of the fight is won...

after returning from Simla Maan first should go to Geet house...gather all Geet children and Dev, Annie, Arjun together there and put this proposal that he wants to marry Geet...first of all it will give opportunity to everybody to discuss and if some don't agree then who are ready for this can make them understand...

from Maan's family Pammi and Naintara are not needed to agree...their opinion doesn't matter because of their selfish motives they will never agree for that...so leave them but Dev, Annie, Arjun are already ready... if they will involve with discussion between Geet family then they can make others agree...

very interesting update...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Pyaar ka izhaar toh ho gaya par ab mission MANAVO...
sabse jyada geet ke bachhe ko manana muskil hai
Geet ke mann mein jo dar hai usse maan dur karne ki koshish karta hai
Maan usse samjata hai...chahe kuch bhi jo jaya ...hum saath nahi chodenge!!
Ab aage dekhte hai maan sabko kaise manate hai...
Plz ab jara jaldi update dena...
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Posted: 11 years ago
beautiful confession😳😳 by maaneet..hope geet family will support her and learn thar their mother happiness is in maan's hand..i really dont bother about maan family😆😆😆..lovely update yaar...pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part..geets fear is reasonable..maan says he will make things go right..hope all accepts their relation
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-118/7/2/14





Part:-118

"Geet" he groaned in peek of pleasure as she hugged his head to her chest tight making him all aroused, dont want to be part fr. him all drowned in his passion.
A shriek voice of her cell brought them out of their love world ,they slowly parted, then onlyse noticed that her sareepallu totally fall down exposing her bossoms to him she shied nd covered her by crossing her hands and by turning to back seeing maan. Maan smiled to her shyness ,he tookher pallund placed it on her top taking her hands out,"pho. dekho geet" he wishpered slowly in her ears making her more red .
She slowly moved to her bag and take out her cell . Its fr. her coleagues asking her where abouts and when she joins them.
She looked at him, " we will join them in half an hour, ask them where r they?he told.
She tell them the same asked their where abouts.
Maan:- Geet jaldi ready ho jao. mujhe bahut bhuk lagrahi hai.
Geet:- ji,.. and she quickly got ready and came to him.
Maanserved the foodin a plate. only one plate.
Geet looked at him like " why one plate?"
He took her in to hisarms and"aaj se yaha hai tumhara seat" he wishpered in her ears making her all blushy blushy.
he took one spoon full of b.f. and kept it near her mouth she moved it to him pehle aap
Nahi,.. pehle tum"
Geet:- nahi ,.. pehle aap.
Maan o.k. hum ek saath khayenge o.k.?
She nodded and started to bring another spoon, but Maan stopped her "is ki koi jarurat nahi hai"and he brought the spoon to her mouth asking khao,..
She looked doubtingas he is going to cheating her,
"Tumhe mujhe per bharosa haina?MAAN.
She nodded her head to yes,..
"tho muh kholo aur khao,..maan
She opened her mouth and took the morsel looking in to his eyes,thinking wat is he upto now,..?
as soon as she took it he came very near to herlips taking her lips in his sucking them nibbling chewing along with the b.f.fr. her mouth, with a sweeet and sweetl soulsearing kiss draining all her lives
Clusters of desires pleasures of passion happyness joy burst in her heart for his love. Never,... never could experience thismuch love ,.. never in her dreams,.. pleasure jolted her , as she shuddered in his passion. dont know how could she keep up all this love ,.. she feared ,.. she feared that she cannot handle this much love.She could not explainher state not able to frame her happyness in words and she hugged him,.. hugged him,.. by his neck keeping her head in his crook. The emotions she felt now cannot be defined.
Maan "kyahua?
Geet nuzzled her head in his crook to nothing.
" mujhe nahi ibathaogi?"
Geet,.. kaise? mujhe nahi pata kaise mai aap sebathau ki mai kitna khush hu. Kya horaha hai mujhe me, mere pass koi shabd nahi hai ki ye kahneka, kya kartha hai aap ka pyaar mujhe me, kitna asar hai unki mujh per ,.. mai ye nahi batha sakthi maan kaise mai pighal rahi hu aap ki pyaar me. kaise aap k pyaar mere purani jakhm ko ek malaam jaisa araam derahi hai,... Maan itna pyar mai kaise samhalungi? dar lagtha hai ki mai isse samhalpaaungi?
Maan cupped her faceand, " pyaar samhal nahi jaatha geet,.. pyaar mehsoos kiya jaatha hai ,.. pyaar jatana hotha hai ,.. ye koi cheez nahi hai ki samalneki ,.. ye ek ehsaas hai geet ki jisse humemehssos karna jaatha hai ,.. aur usse prathidaan karna jaatha hai,.. ek dusere keliye samarpan kiya jaatha hai,.. pyaarkoicheez nahi haiki samalneki yaa chpaneki,..jitna chupaneki khoshish karthe ,.. utnahi tej se uchhal the hai ,.. aur pyarr ko samalna nahi ,.. usse sammaan kiy jaatha hai ,..apne pure dilse ,. aatma se, buddhi se,.. tan se man se ek dusereko samarpan karna hotha hai ,.. yehi hai asli sammaan pyaar ka.
Jab hum pehli baar milethe,.. shaayad tab se hum pyaar me hai geet , tab se hi hum ek duserese pyaar karnelaga hoga, but hum yenahi pehchaan paaya,.. shaayad ussi pyaar aaj hume itna kareeblaaya,.. aaj hum isa ek dusere ki bahoome unki wajese aya. ye pyaar hai hume ek banaya. hamare pyaar ki khahani kuch alag hai geet. ye bilkul alag hai duseronse. Humari pyaar me sab kuch hai geet jo hona chahiyetha.,... pyaar,.. be intehaa pyaar,..mohabbat,bharosa ,.. ek dusere keliye samarpan,. dil se ,. aatma se ,.. ,. sab kuch hai humari pyaar me tumhe darneki koi jarurat nahi geet hum ek hai ,... aaj nahi bahut pehlesehi ,. aaj jo kuch horaha hai bus wo us pyaar ka continuation hai[ here i want to define it in hindi but not fined any apropriate word to this i went to dictionary got these words ,.koi mujhe bathayegi kounsa suitable to the word continuation,.. they r ,..silasila, nirantarata, utthar katha, ke kram me, visthar, jaari rahna]jo bahut pehle hi hona chahiyetha. Hum ek dusere ke binanahijee sakthe,.. ye such hai geet ki ,..hum ek dusere keliye bani hue. tum pelhe ye samajneki khoshish karo, phir tumhari saare dar apne aap mitjaayega.
He took another spoon and fed her sharing it fr. her mouth,.. they finished ther b.f. like that only.
She came to him aftercleaning he stood at the window watching out. she came to him and hugged him fr. back.
he know she dont want to go leaving him,.. yes,.. she is not at all wanting to go fr. him,. she is wanting to spend as much time as possible with him,.. who knows? once they go back ,.. wat happens? how will be situations ? how will be their families react? dont know wat happens? when will she see him talk to him? will they allow her to meet him? will she able to discardthem? howwill be theturning of events? she fears,.. she fears and want to spend with him a quality time.
He too dont want to leave her. in deed he has so many plans for her in his mind,.. der tho sahi pyaar kiya haina ,. aur duniyaki saari khushi deneki waada bhi kiya usse ab usse nibhanapadegana,../He want to do everything that all lovers could do,.. shuru se shuru karna chahtha haiwo .bahut saara plans hai unki dil megeet keliye.
"mujhe ek aur din yaha rahnahoga" she told him keeping her face on his back pressing herself to him.
He turned her towards hugging her to his frame,Mai kahi nahi jaaraha hu geet"
She looked at him" such"?aap yaha rukenge kal tak?
Maan:- Kaise jaau? bina mere jaankahi nahijaasaktha.
Geet hugged him with happy and contentment " mujhe bhi nahi jaana ,man kaartha hai hmesha aapki pass rahu.
Maan"-mai shaam ko tumhe lene avunga.
Geet:- umm,.. Maan :_ ab chale,..
And he dropped her at their place and again came at 6,o'clock she came to him runinglike a small child almosthugging him in openshe is now not bothering about the surroundings and the people around them.
Maan "- chale,... he opened the cardoor andmade geet to sitin passinger seat asking about her day. they reached the g.h. talking their days incidents.
Geet:-mai kuch banathi hu aapkeliye,.. coffee leke aathi hu.
Maan:- nahi ,.. aaj tum kuch nahi karoge ,.. sab kuch tayaar hai tum bas fresh hoke aajao pehle...he led her to b.room.
she went to her bag totake change,... he came fr. her back holding her shoulders turning her towards him he gave a pack to her,.
she looked at that surprised," ye kya hai?"
Maan:- " khud dekho khole ke"
She smiled and took it and opened it ,.. to her great surprise she found a beautiful saree full white and pink kundan ,,beed work ,.. a beautiful,saree ... she overwhelmed by this act of him as she never get a surprise like this before other than her daughters,.. nobody gave anything likethat to her ,... smaans first gift to her pyaar ki thofa ,.. his pak pyaar ki nishaani,. her favt colours combination and all work increases its grace,.. she never wore that type of saree till now[ of course whose selection yaar our Maan babu ka,.. always thebestlike geet herself ,. haina,..]
Her eyes filledwith tearsof happy,.. kyu nahi ,..its our geet haina ,.. chote chote bathonse khush ho jaathi hai
Maan wpied her tears with his thumb and led her to the wash room.
While she was changing here he too changed to white shalwaar all get ready waiting for her.

She came all fresh like a white rose dipped in dew,. all wet hairs on one side and covering her back with pallu as the blouse isbackless. She first hesitated to wear that,.. later after thinking alot ,.. she wore it ,.. she dontwant to disappointbmaan. She never want to let him down asa these 2 days r very preciousin her life..,,spending with maan . Shewant to give all happiness to Maan which she can giveto him no obstacles,.. no objections. She will not miss any chance which give maan happy. She will give everything to him and live these 2 days to the fullest in his presence and will cherish each and every sec. with him experiencing his love.

I know lot of spelling mistakes this time but dont know why i canot edit this some technical pblm please adjust karo this time


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Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago



wonderful dreamy update...

aajkal kahan ho yaar...update dene mein itni der...

Maan-Geet are feeling asif they have fallen in love for first time...it is indeed their first time only...Maan never think in that direction because of his mother and Geet never got love from her so called marriage to that scumbag...

Geet don't want to leave him even for one day and he is so crazy for her... their desires to be with each other are in peek...

I want them always happy yaar...I am also worried about their family's reaction...I don't want her family to get angry with her...her daughters, her son-in-laws have seen her struggle...will they be so heartless and selfish to think about society and all when they should think about her happiness...

whenever I read this story my mind started getting very active...Geet was married( I don't remember her husband name)...in our society wife has to live with husband only whatever he does or whatever he behaves... but when Geet saw her daughter's future and dignity in danger she break that society norms and fled with her daughters leaving him...that time no society helped her get justice...she was all alone to struggle for her daughters...

now it is her daughter's time to reciprocate that love and what she did for them...their is same society who don't approve women second marriage and when she is in Geet's place...now I want to see whether her children wants her happiness and revolt against society or not...

baaki maan ke jo achche gharwaale hain Dev, Annie, Arjun they are already approved their relation...Pammi, Naintara, Sameera can go to hell...maan or Geet should not care of their approval...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
Acha h!!
Ek baar wapas jayenge tho maza ayega!😉
Waiting for the next !
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Posted: 11 years ago
like is not working so count me in
geet isoverwhelmed with his love n
maan want to give all love like all lovers do..
what will be the families reaction
i wonder..
maan gifting her a sari n backless blouse she wore it for him
want 2 cherish this moments for her whole life..
nice part

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