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Posted: 11 years ago
finally confessed and accepted their love for each other...superb update...do continue soon.
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An important note:-------- maine Essence of love part-114 phir update kiya with some more edit including photoes etc,..etc,... its a try , actually not mine my dearest dearest friend Sheetal ka hai ye saara plan so please go once again and do commt please my friend is also a very talented after her idea i really feel the real essence of my story,.. i still wonder is it my story,.. do i write such a beautiful story this much talent in me ? i wonder myself ,.. if so its all goes to my friend sheetal please give a big aplause to her if u feel it really beautiful
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hum chahe kitne hi ache kapade pahen le par hamari ruh agar paak na ho to uska koi matalab nahi hota...vaise hi aapka update hi itna acha tha...maine to sirf upri sajavat ki hai...EOL ka ruh to aap hi ho!!
Hamare dil me itne jazbaat hote hai...hame khud pata nahi hota...par vaqt aane par vo bahar aa jate hai...aapki writing uska sabut hai...ab jab maan geet ke pyaar ki Bari aayi to vo dil me pade hue ahessas ne apna rang dikha diya!!

Muje lagta hai ki main lucky hoon...aapki EOL ki journey ka main hissa ban gayi
Itni achi story ke liye thank you so much...aapki ye journey 200+ tak chale...!!!
Edited by sheetalvasa - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very beautifully written. Reminded me of GHSP ka tent-wala confession scene. How Maan convinces her of her purity. Geet cannot but accept. He is so well prepared, he even located people from her past, so it doesn't become a problem for them later. Very nice song choice, fits the scene beautifully. As you said, she has accepted his love, so half-battle won. Now nothing can stop him, he has his strength with him.
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photos are really very beautiful...perfect for update...


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aur intezaar karna padegashaayad 1 r 2 days tour mehu didnt write till now have to write and update karna hai aap ko aur intezaar karna hai
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MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-115/pg.35/26/12/2013



NCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-115/pgno.35/26/12/.13



Part-115
And she slept. A peaceful sleep,.. which she didnt get fr. the day that her life has been spoiled by that dreadful jaanwar. All her sufferings ,pain,dard, ghutan sab kuch ,.. sab kuch .. bhool kar sogayi unki baahonme. hugging him like her life is in him dont want to go away fr. him not at all wanting to leave him fearing if she leave him he may vanish in the thin air.

Maan staid like that feeling contented to have her in his arms, never ever before experienced this much peace , contentment any where. Feeling for the first time in all his life the beauty of the love,.. the real Essence of love,.. grasping its fragrance to the fullest. Contentment of feeling completed,... never ever thought before that a mere woman can steel him like this and she become his life now, not able to think life without her ,. fearing to loose her he hugged her ,.. hugged her like a precoiuos thing of the world will vanish in the air if he leaves her.

Here in Delhi,.. maans cabin,.. After maan left simla,.. Prasant and Arjun r there in his cabin.
Prasant looked all lost still thinking the whole thing ,.. Maans worry for his maa,.. and how he got tensed hearing her adventure,.. how he ran to simla everything is looking something ,. which he cant fanthom wat is going on.
Arjun:- kya hua prasant kaha khoehue ho? abhitak tumhari maa ki baare me sochrahe ho?
Pra:- haa,.. sir humesha maa ko koina koi samalna padtha hai sir...
Arj:- isa kabtak chalega prasant?
Pra:- kab ta chalega matlab kya hai sir ?humesha ,. humehsa hum unhe samalenge
Arj:- mai wahi puchraha hu ki kabtak aap log unhe samaloge,.. matlab tumhe bhi apna family haina,.. tumhe apna parents ki responsibility haina,.. aur tumhe apni family haina,.. aakhir kabtak aap log ye bhoj uttayenge?
Pras:-stoped him in middle ,. his face turned to red in anger,..
"pehli baath hum maa ko ek bhoj kabh i nahi samjhaya sir,.. wo humari responsibility hai jisse hum sab khushi khushi nibhathe ,. aap age isa math boliye sir ,. hum sab unhe bahut pyaar karthe hai,.. hum hai unhe samalneki.
Arju:- nahi,.. prasant tum mujhe galat samajraheho,. mai jaantha hu ki aap log usse kitna pyaar karthe aur kitne acchi tarikese use samalthehai,.. per aap kabhi ye socha ki wo kya chahthe hai,..?
uski kya khayaal hai apni zindagiko leke?kya zindagibhar isa akeli zina chahthi hai,.. ya nahi?
Prasa:- akeli,... akeli kyu hai sir ,.. hum haina unke saath.
Ar:- haa ,.prasant hum sab hai unke saath lekin isa kayi baath hothi hai wo kisi aur ke saath share nahi karsakthe siva ek jeevan saathi ke alawa,... isa bahut kuch zasbaath hothe hai wo kisi aur ke saamne na laa sake,.. sirf ek pati samajsake,... prasant stopped him,
Aap kahna kya chahthe ho sir,...?aap shaayad maa ke baare me nahi jaanthe,.. uskipati,..Arjun stoped him,
" mai jaantha hu ki unki pati koun hai ,,,aur unke saath kya ,kya kiya hai,..mai is wakth uss nalaayak ke baareme nahi baath karna chahtha hu,..unke saath jo kuch hua isme unki galathi kya hai,.. wo kyu apni zindagi barbaad karni hai,..guna kisi kaa aur unhe kyu bhughatna pada. Kya isa hi age zindagi bithayegi wo? Aadha zindagi baaki hai prasant kyu wo isa beranki zindagi bithana hoga,.. kya unhe khushia mehsoos karneka haq nahi? Age zindagi au mushkil hotha hai prasant,..is umar me ek jeevan saathi ki jarurat padtha hai,..ki,.unki saari baath, ehsaas samajsake,.. unki asara bansake ,.. ek isa insaan jo unki saya bankar unhe shara dethe,.. kyu wo apni saari desires ,saari feelings ko undar dabake chupake jina hai,.. ek isa insaan mili tho ,. jo usse pyaar kare,.. unki ek nayi zindagi desake,.. khushia dene ko tayaar ho,.. isme galat kya hai?
Prasa:- Arjun sir,.. aap jaanthe ho aap kiske baareme baath karraheho? kya anaapshanaap bolrahe ho?
Dev who entered the cabin when arjun started the conversation with prasant,.. stood quite listening all now interfeared,...
"Arjun kyu pahellu me baath karrahe ho? he turned to prasant and hold his hands and asked,
"Hum apni Maan bhai keliye aapki maa ki haath aapse maangrahe hai prasatji,.. kya aap desakthe?
Prasant stunned by all these events,. he cannot understand wat is going on,.. wat to answer him,.. he dont know wat is this all. He dont know whaether this is correct r not? wat all will thik ? how is it possible,.. log kya sochega,.. hassegaa,.. majaak udhayega maa ko,.. he dont know how arpitha will react to this he know very well how much these 2 sisters possessive to her mother .kya ye galat nahi hai? etc,..etc,.. going in his mind getting confusion.
Pra:- sir,.. aap ye kya baath karrahe ho? maa ke baare me aap isa kaisa soche saktheho?
Dev:- nahi,.. nahi,.. prasant tum hume galat samajrahe ho,.. mai bhabhi ko bahut izzath kartha hu, aur aap ek baar sochiye kimai kuch galat nahi kahraha hu,.. kya aap kabhi nahi dekha ,.wo dono ek dusere se kitna pyaar karthe hai? kabhi socha nah aap " kyu wo ek dusere ke kitna khayaal rakhthe,.. kyu bhabhi maan bhai ki accident ko sunke kaise react kiya,.. kaise gidgidaya maa ke age bhai ko sirf ek baar dekhne keliye,.. kitna khayaal rakha unki,.. ,.maa mana kiye ki bavajoot wo ghartak aya bhai s milnekeliye ,.. aur aap abhi abhi dekha ki maan bhai ne kaise doud ke chala bhabhi ke pass. kya ye pyaar nahi hai? mai jaantha hu prasant h ume ye sab samajne me mshkil hai,.. nahi samajsakthe lekin,. hum koshish karthe kyu na hum unhe ek karsakthe.
Prasant mai aapke age haath jodtha hu,.. meri bhai ko abhi tak zindagi me koi khushi nahi mili. unhe kabhi unki baare me nahi socha ,..wo humesha humare liye jiya ,..unhone unki saari zindagi humareliye mehnath kiya. unki family , unki pariwaar, unki khushi ke baareme wo kabhi nahi socha.ab humari baari hai,.. hume furz banthahai ki unki khushi keliye khoshish karna. itni saalon ki baad ab unhe unki khushiyon ka mehsoos hua,.. chahnelaga wo aap ki maa ko,. bahut pyaar karthe wo unhe,. nahi ji saktha unke bagar. adhe zindagi waste hua ,. aur baaki zindagi mai isa nahi honedunga. Mai mera bhai ko khush dekhna chahthahu.aur unki khushi aap ki maa hai. uske saath wo khush rahsakthe . isiliye hum aap se aapki maa ki haath maangrahe. Prasat aap ek baar shaanthi se sochiye isme donon ki zindagi khush hoga ,.. please prasant.
Prasant caught his head not able to say anything, he dont know wat r the consequces after that praposal,... cosequences to durr ,.. pehle he dont know how to put this infront of Aarpitha,.[thefire brand]he know very well she never agrees to this. she will not trust any one around her mother, shaadi tho durr pehle ye sun kar wo kaise react karegi?
No sir,... i dont think this is possible? i dont think Aarpitha will accept it? i even dont know how will i put this infront of her,.. sorry sir,..icannot do this.
please leave me and dont,.. dont ,.. ever bring this again . with this he rushed out of the room.
Arjun and Dev looked eachother,.. like wat to do?
Dev:- koi baath nahi Aarjun,. ye itni aasaan ki baath nahi hai,. hume aur koshish karna hoga,. unhe wakth lagega,.. samajneka, hume aur intezaar karna hoga, aur mehnath karna hoga.
Arjun:- haa,.. dev hum phirse try karenge, manayenge usse, ek prasant hi hai "di' ki beti ko mana saktha hai. so hume phirse unse baath karna hoga,. ab suru kiya tho ,.. unhe humehi pura karna hoga.


Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Geet maan ki bahon me sab kuch bhul ke so jati hai
Aur maan geet ko kimti heera samj kar bahon me le leta hai
Dono ek dusre ki bahon me duniya ko bhul kar kho jate hai...awesome!
Like prashant and arjun convo...
Ab prashant ko sab pata chal gaya
Uska reaction bhi sahi tha...aisi baat paheli baar sun ke jatka to lagna hi tha!
Dev aur arjun bhi kafi samajdar hai to koi jald bazi nahi karenge aur sahi vaqt aane par hi aage kadam badhyenge...
Maan geet ab aage kya karenge ye dekhna hai...aap jaldi jaldi next update dena...plz...
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ab family ko manane ka silsila shuru to hua...

now as first of all Prashaant knows about Geet and Maan's love...how will he act around them now...yeh dekhna hai...

kaisi ajeeb baat hai ki when wife dies then all relatives start thinking about his loneliness...every incident they start comparing with his lonliness...they will say bechara akela hai apni biwi ko yaad kar raha hai...kaise rahega akela...iski doosri shaadi kardo...even if wife is not dead but can't have children then also people will advice him to marry again.. but when husband dies then nobody thinks about that lonely women... man can atleast take care of his own expenses but women if she is not working then she have to be burden on everybody around... they will start taunting her but never think of her lonliness and need of partner...

same people who felt sympathy towards widower show hate towards widow...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...


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hai my dear buddies , " I wish u all a very haapy new year with great prosper and peace"
I am very much thank full to u all for ur encouragement and support to me in my scribblings.
Thank u all.

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