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Posted: 11 years ago
Last update...pichhle saal diya tha ...😆
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: MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/part-116/pg.37/8/1/14




Part-116

Simla,...
Maan woke after sometime. He looked at Geet, who is sleeping laying on him forgetting everything, feeling safe and secure in deep slumber ,.. never slept before like that,.. deprived of that strong sleep fr. eternity. He dont want to disturb her . He slowly scooped her in his arms getting up to place her on the bed to give comfort . He scooped her in his arms and went to upstairs slowly without disturb her . She kept her head in his crook of his neck keeping her hands round his neck,.. never want to go fr. him,. she hugged him ,.. a tight hug ,.. as if she will penetrate in to him not at all wanting to be a separate individual,... only wanting to be in him like both r one individual,... Maneet,... no Maan and no Geet,... Its only" MANEET".

He slowly kept her on bed placing pillow under her head, adjusting her legs and covering her with quilt,.. he carassed her head lovingly keeping her hair locks behind her ear which r disturbing her sleep. He looked her dearly ,, contentedly assuring himself "She is mine,... She is only mine"He kept looking at her for sometime and slowly started to sleep on couch,. when he find a tug in his hand as geet caught his hand,.. mumbling " math jaona,..dont leave me"
Maan:- " mai kahi nahi jaha hu geet ,bus idhari hu" she took his hand and kept i tunder her cheeks holding him tightly.
He laughed and shook his head and slowly slipped beside her ,.. taking her on to him embrassing her into his chest. She came on to his chest adjusting herself on his chest as if she belongs there. He covered both of them with quilt and slept a contended sleep feeling their togetherness.fulfilling his long desire of having her in his arms.
Next morning,... 11a.m.
Geet woke up fr. her sleep rubbing her eyes to get the clear view and trying to recall the incidents the last night ,..immediately she searched for Maan. She frightened ,... frightened as she didnt find him in the room.
She rushed out of bed to see for him,.. maan came with b.f. tray in his hands.
Maan:-looked at her fearful face " geet tum utthgayi?kya hua ? tum itni darihui kyu ho? he kept the tray on the table
Geet came to him and hugged him,.. aap kaha chaigaye, mai aap keliye dhund rahi hu.
Maan:- bus neeche gaya hu,. b.f. lanekeliye,. he too hugged her.
Geet:- b.f. aap kyu banaya,.. mai banathi huna?
Maan:- actually its not b.f. its brunch b.f. ka time hogayana?
Geet ;- brunch? time kitna hua? she looked at the watch,..screaming"O mygod"11 a.m. mai itni derr tak kaise sogayi hu? mujhe bacche ke pass jaana hai Maan"she became tensed and worried.
Maan:- relax geet tum tension math lo ,.. just relax
Geet:- kaise relax hu mai,.. kya sochega wo mere coleagues ,.. mai itni befikar kaise hosakthi hu,.. aap mujhe uthhaya kyu nahi?
Maan"-geet tum bahut gahari need me ho mujhe tumhe uttaneki man nahi laga,.. geet chill yaar mai unhe inform kiya ki tumhari tabiyat kuch thik nahi hai,.. aur tum unhe thoda late milthe hai ,. koi pblm nahi hai tum jaldi se fresh hojao aur hum ye brunch karke unhe milthe.
Geet still stood there unbelieving her self itni der tak mai kaise sosakthi hu ,.. in her whole life she never do that,.. how can she?
Maan :- geet chodona ye sab kyu itna pareshaan horahi ho choti baath keliye , tum bahut thaki hue ho isliye sogayi ho .. jao ab jaldo fresh hojao.
Geet :- kaise fresh hojau me ,.. mere kapde tho wahi hai.
Maan:- Jab Maan Singh Khurana kuch sochtha hai unki saara intezaam wo khud karega ,..mai koi kaam adhura nahi chodtha,.. maine aapki bag mangwaya , ye raha tumhara bag ,. ab jake jaldi avo, mujhe bahut bhuk lagrahahai.
Geet:- ji,..mai abhi ayi,.. she went to fresh up
Maan went out to do some work on his lappy.
Geet came out after getting fresh to the balcony wiping her wet hair with towel.In another balcony maan sat working on his lappy.
He looked at her ,.. Geet came out like a fresh rose dipped in dew drops. Her wet hair locks giving a beautiful view of a budding rose in a simple red saree giving her eligent look enchanting her beauty mesmarising him towards her. He was dragged towards her unknowingly.
He came to he rplacing his hands on her shoulders hugging her fr. back . His tota lbody gluing to her back giving goose bumps to her .he inhaled her shampoo keeping his hands around her waist taking her scent in to his full lungs. His breath is falling on her neck . She shuddered with the warmth of his breath. He slowly pulled her to himself completely gluing her to him,.. nuzzling his face on her neck to earlobes creating havoc in her. He slowly nibbled her ear lobe cracking desires in her which create currents of pleasure throughout her body. Her tummy churned ,..1000s of butter flyes flying in her stomach wanting more and more pleasure. His passion bursting her inner shells of shy,... and she felt shy ,.. all pink ,,pink,.. Ohh god" how much shyness ,.. never ever felt before this much shyness. Her towel slipped fr. her hand long before. She completely lost in his passion. He start to give smooches on her neck and shoulders and nape and her head fr. back creating tingles all over her body.
He slowly turned her to face him. She turned towards him ,. but because of heavy shyness she is not able to look at him. Her face turned to red and her eye lashes became heavy not allowing to raise to look at him,.. and she burried her face in his chest not able to handle herself.
He lifted her face by his thumb giving smooches onher forehead eyebrows eyes ,cheeks every where,...
" Idhar dekho geet" he whispered to her,.. he want to clarify wat is in her mind,.. he want to confirm whether she want this relation r not before taking this relation a step ahead he want to assure himself that wat haapened yesterday is not in the out burst of emotion,.. did she really mean it,.. he want to assure that she really want him and want to move ahead in this relation with him. for that she has to show some initiative,.. she has to come out fr. her shell,.. she has to take step ahead by her self and he is searching answeres in her eyes asking aprooval to proceed . He is searching his answers in her brown crystal hazels which r the mirrors of her soul.
She understand him,.. his hesitance and waiting,... and she raised on her toes to his level cupping his face with her palm came near him,..very near ,.. very near not even a single inch gap between their lips.
She took his lips in her,... sucking,.nibbling ,. leaving all her barriers,.. coming out of her shell ,.. showing her complete acceptance to him... showing complete submission ,.. assuring him her acceptance to move a head with him ,. everything to him ,.. everything ,..giving to him,.wat he want.
Bus he got his answeres ,.. and he took charge now,..bursting with passion he took her lips hungrily intruding in to her mouth grasping the nector fr. all corners of her mouth in to soul searing kiss filling him with her sweet quenching his thirst making her lost herself completely to him.
A soul searing kiss ,.. long and deep which give solace to a wounded heart of her,... till she become breathless claiming her as his,.. only his.

Link for part -117:-https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&TPN=39&#p99915044


Link for part-4 of IZHAAR PYAAR KA...:-https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/99277968
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
geet is not leaving maan in her sleep too..
loved their part..n geets acceptance made him move forward with his desires..nice part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part...

finaly geet confess her feeling...there confesion is realy good...waiting for next update...what will her daughters reaction on this????mainly akash ...
Edited by sanam1234u - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
geet is nt leaving him in her sleep too...she is scared nt finding maan in morning...
geet accepted the relation...this gave maan the power to move forwprd in this relation...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awww..😳😳such a lovely maaneet moment..geet is letting herself free to feel maan's love..amazing..hope babaji keep them together forever..pls cont soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Maan jis tarha geet ka khayal rakh raha hai...loved it!

Geet bhi maan ko ek paal ke liye chodna nahi chahati...
Maan ne geet ke kapde, breakfast ...sab ka intezaam kar diya...awesome!

Geet ne jis tarha apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya kya kahu...? Isse achha izhaar ho hi nahi sakta!
Geet ke is izhaar main na umar , na duniya, na koi rishta...kuch bich main nahi hai...hai to bas pyaar hai...woh apne aap ko maan ko arpen kar deti hai...jaise hum bhagvan ko phul arpen karte hai...maaneet ka pyaar bhi aisa pak pyaar hai

kal ke adhero se nikal ke dekha hai aankhe malake malake
phul hi phul zindagi bahar hai tay kar liya

kanto se khich ke ye aanchal tod ke badhan baadhe payal
koi na roko dil ki udaan ko dil vo chala
aaj phir jine ki tamanna hai aaj phir marane ka irada hai



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Posted: 11 years ago



lagat hai mere chron aur bombs explode ho rahe hain...

wonderful update...

now after confession there is no need for hesitation so Geet claimed him first...

ab to aisa lagta hai jaise Geet ne decide kar liya hai ki jaan de denge but apne pyaar ko paakar rehna hai...

it is very relieving to see Geet shedding her hesitation, her boundations on her soul to enjoy love and life...

waiting for next part...

thanx for pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
part 115 .

arjun and dev ,ask for maaneet marriage but it is not easy for geet doughter and son in low ,but hope they all except it soon ,waise Msk ko mana kon karega


part 116

geet so scared without maan , maan totally busy with geet Brakfast , arringing her bag etc , wow maan confered geet love in his style and geet also except it with heart


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Posted: 11 years ago

MG FF-ESSENCE OF LOVE-Thd-9/PART-117/PG.NO.39/21/01/2014







Part:-117

He left her when she felt breathless.,,. all panting both in their passion drowning in their own world of newly found love, not at all wanting to come out of it . She rested her head on his chest feeling the bliss and he rested his head on her head feeling contented and peace. She nuzzled her face in his chest hugging him tightly fearing to leave him ,.. fearing to be come out of his arms wanting to be there forever , feeling secure and safe. He hugged her tightly dont want to be separate fr. her not at all wanting to leave her as his life is in her.
She still staid there slowly coming out of her trance,... the reality striked her ,bringing her out of her passion pushing her again in the pit of her past ,.reminding her state ,.. her haisiyat,.. her destiny ,.. her place ,... slowly her eyes start to rain making his shirt wet,.. which bring him out of his dream world,shockingly he lifted her face by her chin looking in to her , fearing wat happen?
She looked at him with her rainy eyes ,.. understanding his worry,"dar lagtha hai Maan mujhe ,.. dar lagtha hai ki ye sab ek sapna tha,.. aur karwat badlu tho chale jayegi,.. " " mai itni khush naseeb nahi hu maan " mer ijindagi me kabhi khushiya nahi likh ihui maan,... aadat nahi hai mujhe khushionka" "dar lagtha hai,.. mujhe ki mai aapko khojau? ji nahi saktha mai aapke bina". itni dinoke baad mujhe ye khushi mili,ab mujhe dar lagtha hai ki aapko khojau? aage kya hoga maan? kya humari rishtha dunia manegi? kya sochega log ,.. samaaj? kya bithega aapki pariwaar per? unper iska asar jarur hoga,.. aur mera bachha kaisa behave karegaa ye sunkar? agar wo raaji nahi ho tho? Maan logonka taane sunna mujhe aadat hai,.. bahut kuch suna maine ,mujhe koi farak nahi padtha ,.. per aap ko koi kuch kahe ya aap per ungli uthhaye ,..ye mai bilkul bardaash nahi karsakthi hu maan, dar lagtha hai ki kayi mere waje se aapko aapki pariwaar ke beechme koi daraar paida ho ye mai nahi sahsakthi hu maan,.. mai apne aap ko kabhi maaf naih karpaungi,.. mai aapki jindagi ki naasur ban jaaungi maan , mera saaya bhi aapkeliye thik nahi hoga shaayad,...per mai kya karu? maan mujhe nahi pata tha ki kab ,aur kaise mai aapse pyaar karne lagi hu . kabse mai aapko chahne lagi hu. ye mujhe bilkul nahi patachala. kabhi mai socha bhi nahi tha ki mujhe isa ehsaas bhi hosaktha hai. per aapne badaldiya sab kuch,.. aapke anese sab kuch badalgaye maan ,.. meri jindagi badalgayi,... jindagikya hothi? pyaar kya hotha hai...? ye ehsaas mujhe aapne dilaya maan,.. ab mai jine lagi hu [ yahaa hum ye song imagine karsakthe "Jine laga hu ,.. pehlese jyaadaa,.. pehle se jyaadaa pyaar karnelaga hu,..]jina chahthi hu aapke saath ,.. nahi ji sakthi aapke bina ,.. mai kya karu Maan?" I Love U Maan "
nahi ji saktha aapke bina" she nuzzled her face in his chest in that his shirt first 2 buttons opened exposing him.
She kissed him on his chest right on his heart making him jolt with 1000vts of currents of pleasure passed throughout his body ,shuddering him in pleasure which reached his down parts making him aroused in fraction of secs. One side she is seducing him with her simple innocent act and another side making him drowning in to her pure and innocent confession of her love to him. A beautiful confession ,. shaayad koi nahi desaktha isse jyaada khubsoorat si Izhaar,... pyaar,..ka,...

He totally melted down to earth in her pure and innocent confession ,..completely drowned in her bend himself before her love surrendering himself to her closing his eyes dissolving her words in his heart " feeling ,,..the feel,... filling the feel to the fullest of his soul and body.
He cupped her face with his arms making her to look at him ,wiping her tears with his thumb,he asked"Tumhe mujhe per bharosa hai?
Geet looked at him like why he was asking that?
Bathao geet tumhe mujhe per bharosa hai? mujhe per viswaas hai tumhe? yakeen karthe ho tum mujhe?
"Mai apne se jyaada aap per viswaas karthi hu,. mujhe se jyaada mujhe aap per bharosahai maan.
"Tho yakeen karo, mai sab kuch thik karunga, mai sab dekhulunga,.. tum sirf mujhe per viswaasrakh karke befikar rahna,.. mai sab thik karunga,.. mai saari dunia ka jawaab dunga, mera pariwaar ko manaunga aur humari bachhe ko bhi samjhathahu,. aur geet wo tumhari bachehai wo tumse bahut pyaar karthe hai ,. har pal tumhari khushi chahtha hai wo, tumhari bhalayi chahtha hai wo ,.. mai unhe ye ehsaas dilaunga ki tum mere saath khush rah sakthi ho ,.. mai unhe yakeen dilaunga ki is dunia ki saari khushia mai tumhe dedunga, tumhe mere seene pe lagake rakhluna, meri palkome bithadunga kabhi nahi chodunga mai tumhe. unhe tumhar ichintha hothi hai geet wo tumhari khushi keliye kuch bhi karneki taayaar hai humeshaa.aur wo ye jaanna hoga ki tumhari khushi mai hu. baad me wo jarur maanjayega hum unhe manayenge. mai jaanthi hu ki ye sab itna aasaan nahi hai per hume khoshish karna hoga . hume ye ladayi ladna hoga ek aakhri ladayi .
hume ladna hoga ,.. is dunia se,samaaj se ,logose,..humari pariwaar se ladna hoga ,.aur is baar tum akeli nahi ho geet ,mai hu tumhari saath, hum ek dusere ke saath khadi hoke ladenge. ye humari jindagi ke sawaal hai geet , hume jina hoga , ladna hoga humare liye humari aage khushaal si jindagi keliye ,humari ye khubsoorat humsafar keliye humari saathgi keliye hume ladna hoga .geet.
Dunia ki , logonki, pariwaar ki samaaj ki chintha thum mujheper chode, bas tum meri saath raho, harpal ,har wakth, har muskhkil me meri saath raho aur meri himmat ban kan meri saath do. agar tum mere saath ho tho har mishkil ma iaasaani se par kardunga. kya tum meri saath dogi? he stretched his palm asking her promise," promise me ki tum meri saath dogi?
Geet kept her palm on his and said," mai har pal har wakth har mushkil me aap ki saath dungi, kabhi mai aapko nahi chodungi."
He hugged her like hiis life "Geet ek baath yaad rakhna,... Dunia maanegi ya na maanegi,.. samaaj maanegi ya namaanegi,.. log manegaa ya na maanega,.. pariwaar manega ya na maanega,...isse mujhe koi farak nahi padtha,.. mujhe ye saari baath koi mahne nahi rakhtha,.. mujhe sirf tum chahiye,.. mai tumhar isaath jina chahtha hu. Geet pehle hi hum bahut saari jindag ikhochuke hai ,.. ab aur nahi,.. hume humareliye jina hoga naki kis iaur keliye nahi sirf ,.. hum,.. tum,.. humareliye. Aaj se hum ek pariwaar hai jiss me sirf hum aur tum honge .Mai ye nahi kahraha hu ki humari pariwaar ko chodenge,.. hum unhe mananeki khoshish karthehai, agar wo manegatho achha hai , nahi mane tho ye humari rishthe per asar nahi padna chahiye ye unki marzi hai , hum humari jindagi me aage badhayenge .isa asar mai humari rishthe pe nahi padne dunga mujhe humari jindagi ,humari khushia jyaada important hai,.. mai ye nahi kahraha hu humar ibacche ko chodo ,.. mai jaantha hu ki tum unke bina nahi rah sakthiho ,.. wo tumhare liye kitna maine rakhthe hai wo mai jaantha hu wo manega jarur maanega mai usse manalunga.
"Aur Geet tum meri baare me bhi socho,... ma itumhare bina ji nahi sakha geet,.. meri jindagi tumhare bina aaj tak adhoori rahgaya,.. aur aage bhi adhoori rahegi tumhare bina. Der se hi tho sahi bhagwaan humari jodi banaya rakhageet . nahi tho itn isaalonse mujhe kabhi ye ehsaas nahi hua ki pyaar kya hotha hai,.. unki jarurat kya hai?jindagi unke bina kitna adhoori hai? shaadi kyu karni hai ,.. autr har ek insaan ko unse hi pyaar karne waala kyu honi chahiye kabhi ink ibaare me mujhe ehsaas nahi hua ,... kabhi mai ye sab socha bhi nahi tha. per jab se humari mulakaath hui tab se sab badal gaya geet. meri jindagi badal gaya ,tumne sab kuch badal diya, mer isaari dunia badalgaya. mujhe tumse pyaar hua, ab meri dunia sirf aur sirf tum ho geet. tumare bina mera aur koi nahi hai, tumho tho sabkuch hai ,, agar tum naho kuch bhi nahi. mer ijindagi ab sirf meri nahi hai tumse jude hue hai. meri jaan ab tumme basthi hai. nahi ji saktha tumare bina,.he bend down to her chest hugging her keeping his face on her chest getting solace there confessing himself to her making her understand wat she meant to him ,how much he needed her.
"I Love U Geet" Aadath hogayi meri jindagi ko tumhari geet" mujhe apna lo geet" math chodo mujhe" mai ji nahi saktha tumhare bina"he nuzzled his face on her chest giving her goosebumps all over her body sending shivers through her spine. He r breath became uneven loosing herself to his passion. she clutched his hairs with her fist to get hold on herself trying to cope up with his passion. She feared as her knees became jell and loose grip and she may fell down.
"Maan" she moaned in passion totally lost in him.

Link for part-118:_http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3668596&TPN=41&#p100859926
Edited by anuradha.nandam - 10 years ago

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