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' Part - 42

Next day...all the ceremonies begin...

Haldhi shuru hothi...

Maan has refused to attend haldhi...he doesn't like all this...

He would only come to the mandap...

Geet ko ye baat patha chaltha...

No haldhi?

Geet is disappointed...

Ab Geet Maan ko aaise apne mann marzi nahi karne degi, she is now his wife, haina?

Let me show my power...

Ab mujhe bhi apna haq ko isstamaal karna padega, haina babaji?

Ye MSK hai toh mein Bhi Geet MSK hoon, haina?

Geet haldhi lekhe seedhe Maan se milne usska kamre mein jaathi...

Maan has just come out of his shower...

Geet opens the door ...it's not locked...

Maan had left it open for his Mishty...

waise bhi Geet ke alawa kissi ka himmat hotha hai aaise Maan ke kamre ke andar gussne ka?

Maan ghar pe hotha toh koi Maan ke kamre ki taraf dekhtha bhi nahi...

Geet Maan ke peeche jaakke kadhi hothi...

Maan looks at her in the mirror and smiles...

Maan: tum yahan kaise?

Geet: kyun mein nahi aasakthi hoon kya?

Geet haldhi ko apne peeche chupakke rakthi...

Maan: kal toh bhaag gayi, aaj kya hua?

Geet Maan ke samne aathi...

Maan looks at her...she is looking gorgeous...

Actually she is glowing because of the happy occasion...

Geet Maan ke chehre pe haldhi lagathi...

Maan smiles...Maan ne kushi kushi haldhi lagali, waise issi ka intrezaar tha...

Geet is surprised...

She thought Maan would get angry...

But Maan is looking very happy...

Maan: dekha? Kaise tum kudh mere paas aagayi

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan Geet. Mujhe patha tha ki jab tumme patha chalega ki meinne haldhi mein shamil hone ke liye manna kardhi toh tum zaroor mere paas aaoge

Geet: toh aaisi baat hai?

Geet backs off...

Maan Geet ke haath se haldhi lekhe Geet ko lagatha...

Geet sharmathi...

Maan: Geet, ye kya hai?

Geet: kya hai?

Maan: tumne galthi se lal mirch powder toh nahi lekhe aayi?

Geet: kya? Meinne toh haldhi hi laya tha

Geet looks at her face in the mirror...

Geet ke chehre pe toh haldhi hi hai...

Maan gives a killer look...

Geet aur sharmathi...

Maan: toh tera chehra itna laal kyun ho gaya?

Geet nazar jhugathi...

Maan lifts her chin...

Maneet eyelock...mahi...

Geet pushes him off and tries to run away...

Maan holds her back...

Maan: Geet, aaj toh tum mujhse bach nahi jaasakthi

Geet sharmathiii

Maan: aaj se tum meri ho, tum chahe toh bhi aaise bhaag nahi sakthi, samji tum?

Geet: mein bhaagna bhi nahi chahathi

Maan: achcha?

Geet: koi apnon se kyun bhaagega?

Maan: toh ab mein bhi tera hogaya hoon?

Geet: aap toh hamesha mere hi ho

Geet goes and hugs him...

Maneet passionate hug...mahi...

After Haldhi it's baraat time...

Maan godhe mein beitkke aatha...

Geet is waiting in the balcony...

She calls Maan...

Geet: toh mera rajkumar aagye?

Maan: haan Geet, tum tayaar raho

Geet: mein toh kab se intrezaar kar rahi hoon

Maan: achcha?

Geet: haan, aur mein kaise deikhthi hoon

Maan: tum rukho Geet, mein yahan se teek se nahi dekh saktha

Geet: nahi dekh sakthe?

Geet comes down running...

Dadi: hare Geet bete, sambalkke

Maan bhi andar aatha...

Geet stops seeing Maan...

Maan signals that she looks perfect...

Geet blushes...

Meera comes and takes her back to her room...

Meera: hare Geet, itna bhi kya jaldhi hai? pehle shadhi toh hone do

Geet sharmathi...

Meera: waise Geet, aaj toh sare ladhkiyan tummare Rajkumar ke sapne mein hi rehthe honge

Geet: kya? woh sirf mere Rajkumar hai, sabko apne aakhen band rakhne ko kaho

Meera: itna achcha Rajkumar ko kaun nahi chahega?

Geet: Meera, woh na tummare bhai hai, samjji tum?

Meera: haan haan, Maan sirf tere hai, ab kush?

Meera nakli gussa karthi...

Geet: haan, Maan hamesha Geet ka hai

Dadi comes...

Dadi: Geet bete, aap kahan bhaag rahe the?

Geet: woh...Dadi

Meera: Dadiji Geet toh mujhe dhoondh rahi thi, haina Geet

Meera winks...

Geet: haaan, kahan chali gayi tu?

Meera: ab toh aagayi hoona, ab tumme chodkke tabhi jaoongi jab Maanji ke haath tummare haath saupthe

Dadi: tum donno bi na, jaldhi tayaar ho jayiye, panditji bhulathe hi honge

Meera: teek hai Dadiji

Dadi: Geet, aap toh aaj aasmaan ki pari lagthe hai, kahin nazar na lag jaye

Meera: aur kissi ka nazar nahi toh bhi Maanjii ka nazar jaroor lagega, haina Geet?

Geet: Meera chup kar

Meera: mein toh chup ho jaathi par tum aaise hi kissi ko chup nahi kar sakthi

Dai smiles...

Dadi : toh tum donno batein karo, mein chalthi hoon

Geet ka phone rings...

It's Maan...

Meera: meinne kaha na? ab tum inkko keise chup karoge?

Geet: tum jao abhi

Meera: teek hai teek hai, par jaldhi kar, Dadi phir humme dhoondhkke aayenge

Geet: haan haaan

Geet: Maaan

Maan: toh kya kar rahi hai meri sapnon ki Rajkumari?

Geet: apne Rajkumar ki intrezaar

Maan: fikar mat karo, tera intrezaar abhi katam ho jayega, mein toh mandap mein tera hi intrezaar kar raha hoon

Geet: kya? toh mujhe kissi ne abhi tak bhulaya kyun nahi?

Maan: meinne bhulaya haina? Aajao

Geet: teek hai

Tabhi Pinky aathi...

Pinky: Geet, ye meera kahan hai?

Meera: mein yahi hoon

Geet: kya? tum itne dher yahi chupi thi?

Meera: haan haan, tere Rajkumar ki intrezaar katam

Pinky: hare Geet, jaldhi aao, Panditji tumme bhula rahe hai

Geet: mujhe patha hai, mein toh wahi aanewali thi

Meera: hare, mujhe chodkke akhele kaise jaa sakthi? Rukho Geet

Geet ko toh kuch sunayi nahi detha...

Maan ne bhulaya toh Geet chali gayi...
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yeh geet aur maan dono kitna wait karraha hai shaadi keliye aur wo din aahi gaayi
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part 40
awesome dear...
too good...
arey Brij tho idiot nikla...
cant he see Geet is happy?
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 41
awesome dear...
so lovely...
the way of narration is making me laugh...
yeh Brij bhi na...
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part 41 n 42
loved it
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part 42
awesome...
lovely dear...
is Dev here?
cont soon...
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Part - 43

Dev ko shadhi ke barein mein patha chale jaatha...

Dev Pammi ko lekhe delhi aagaya...

Muhurat ka samay ho gaya...

Maan mandap mein Geet ke liye intrezaar kar raha hai...

Panditji Dulhan ko bhulathe hai...

Dadi: Pinky bete, jaldhi Geet ko lekhe aayiye

Pinky Geet ko neeche lekhe aathi...

Maan looks at his Mishty coming down the stairs like an angel ascending from heaven...

Geet ke aankhen Maan ko doondhthe hai...

She looks at him...

Maan smiles...

Geet sharmathi...

BGM...

"Dulhe ka shehra suhaana lagtha hai...

Dulhan ka toh dil deewana latha hai..."

Everyone looks at Geet...

Dadi Geet ke paas aakke ussko apne saath lekhe jaathi...

Geet dadi ka ashirvaad lethi...

Beeji bhi aashirvaad karthe hai...

Mamaji stops her...

Maan gets angry...

Ye pagal mamaji kya kar rahe hai...

Beeji: hare, kyun rokhthe ho? hatto

Maamji: Geet puthar mera ashirvaad nahi lena

Geet goes and hugs him...

She bows down...

Geet: mujhe aashirvaad kijiye mamaji

Maamji is so happy...

Mamaji: jeethe raho, jeethe raho

Geet then heads towards the mandap...

Just then Dev enters...

Dev: Geet...Geet...kahan ho tum?

Geet is shocked to see Dev...

Maamji: hare andhe ho kya? Geet toh yahi hai, dekho

Mamaji points Geet...

Geet bahut darjaathi...

Maan rushes to his Mishty...

Maan holds her hands...

Geet: Maan

Maan:Geet, tumme darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, koi kuch nahi kar saktha

Geet: Maan, mein aapke chodkke nahi jaoongi

Geet hugs him tight...

Maan: Geet, mein bhi tumme jaane nahi doonga, tum meri ho Geet

Dev: kya?

Maan: Dev, tummari himmat kaise hui yahan aane ki?

Maan punches him...

Brij: Deeev

Brij also punches him ...

Meera: aaise hi, ek aur, ek aur

Pammi: ye kya ho raha hai?

Meera: tere bete ki dhulayi jo bahut pehle hona chahiye thi

Dev has come with the police...

Inspector : Mr.Maan, stop him

Maan: chodo usse

Maan stops Brij...

Geet: Maan, veerji

Geet tries to help Maan...

Pammi: kuch toh sharam karo, chote bhai ke biwi hothe hue bhi usske bahi ke saath dusre shadhi?

Maan: Geet meri biwi hai

Dev: aapki biwi? Toh Geet, kal meri biwi thi, aaj aapki biwi parson kisski biwi banegi?

Maan ab Geet ke barein mein ek aur galat sabd bardhaast nahi kar saktha...

Maan: Dev, tameez se baat karo, jaanthe ho ki tum kisske barein mein baat kar rahe ho? Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana ke

Dev: Inspector sab, aap hi bathao ki ye kaunsi Khurana ki Mrs hai

Maan: Deeevvv

Maan slaps him...left and right...

Inspector: Mr.Maan, ye shadhi nahi ho sakthi, Mr.Dev has filed a complaint that you have kidnapped his wife

Geet: nahi, ye joot hai, Maan, ye log aapke upar galat inzaam laga rahe hai, inspector mujhe kissi ne kidnap nahi kiya hai, mere Maan ko kuch mat kijiye

Geet bahut pareshaan hojaathi...

Geet ke wajhe se aaj Maan ko kya kya sunna padtha...

Mein aaise kuch nahi hone doongi...

Geet: inspector, inhonne kuch nahi kiya hai, aap chaho toh mujhe lekhe jao, mein aapko sab sach sach bathaoongi

Maan: Geet, tum kyun darthi ho?

Geet: Maan, ye sab mere wajhe se hi horaha hai, aap ko toh mujhe bachana hi nahi chahiye tha

Maan: Geet, aaise mat kaho, ye log humme kuch nahi kar sakthe

Geet: Maan, mein aapko aur takleef nahi dena chahathi

Maan: Geet, pareshaan mat ho jao, mujhe kuch nahi hoga

Geet: Maan, mujhe bahut dar lagtha hai, ab kya hoga?

Maan: kuch nahi hoga, jab tak mein tere saath hoon, tumme kuch nahi hoga

Maan produces all the legal documents including the marriage certificate...

Inspector is convinced...

Inspector: sorry to disturb you Mr.Khurana...you carry on, chaliye Mr.Dev ab aapko yahan koi kaam nahi hai

Dev: lekhin inspector, issne mere saath shadhi kiya hai, ye dekho photo

Inspector: ye shadhi illegal hai, Mr.Khurana ke paas sabot hai ki ye shadhi zabardasthi apne kiya hai, inkke marzi ke khilaaf

Pammi: hare ye meri bahu hai, ussko hummare saath bhejdho

Inspector: Mr.Dev, aapke maa ko lekhe jayiye, warna mujhe action lena padega

Dev: kya?

Inspector: yes, I'ill have to arrest you

Dev and Pammi leave...

Maan hugs his Mishty...Maneet pationate hug...mahi...

Maan: Geet, ro mat, woh log ab tumme tang nahi karenge, mere hothe hue meri biwi ke ankhon pe kushi ke aasoo bhi mana hai, samji?

Panditji bhulathe hai...

Maan Geet ko haath pakadke mandap tak lekhe jaatha...

Maan ke hothe hue Geet ko bride's maid ka bhi zaroorat nahi haina?

Maamji: jaldhi karo panditji, ab police wapas aajayega

Mamaji toh police ko dekhthe hi parde ke peeche chup gaye...abhi bahar aaye hai...

Lucky: hare mamu, itna vada jasoos ho, aur police se darthe ho?

Maamji: sshhh, ye andar ki baat hai, bahar nahi kehthe

Sab hasthe hai...Geet bhi zor zor se hasthi hai...

Maan Geet ko aaise hi dekhna chchatha...

Chalo aaj maamji ne ek achche kaam kardhi...

Unkki sare galthiyan maaf...

Dadi ke aashirvaad ke saath Maneet ki shadhi ho jaathi...

That night...

Maneet ki SR...

Maan is waiting for Geet...

Geet comes...

Maan: Geet, itne dher kya kar rahi thi?

Geet: kya?

Geet ko patha hai ki Maan se toh itna hi umeed kar sakthi...

Jab dekho naakh ke upar gussa beittha, haina babaji?

Maan: mein kab se interzaar kar raha hoon

Geet: aap ladhke ho, do minute noodles ki tarah jat se tayaar hojaathe ho, lekhin humme dekho? Kitna sajna padtha?

Maan: Geet, meinne pehle hi kaha hai ki tumme usski koi zaroorat nahi hai, agar uss raat tum behosh nahi hothi toh ye hummara first night nahi second night hotha

Geet: kya?

Maan: hare kitne sawaal karogi?

Geet: mein sawaal karthi hoon?

Maan: Geet, hum iss ladayi ko kal continue karthe hai, ab toh tummare saath ladne ke liye mere paas waqt nahi hai

Maan catches hold of her hand and takes her with him...

Geet is puzzled...

Geet: Maan, ye aap kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: tummare sapne ko pura kar raha hoon

Geet: kya?

Maan: haan, jaldhi karo Geet, warna godha so jayega

Geet: kya?

Maan takes her out...

Horse is waiting for them...

Geet: Maan?

Maan: hare, tum hi chahathi haina ki mein tumme iss goahde mein utakke lekhe jaaon

Geet: par Maan

Maan helps her get on the horse...

They start their ride...

Geet: Maan, hum ab kahan jaa rahe hai?

Maan: mujhe kya patha? Ye tera sapna haina? Tum hi kahao ki uss Rajkumar apne Rajkumari ko kahan lekeh jaatha?

Geet: aasmaan mein ek ghar banakke wahan lekhe jaatha

Maan: par ye Rajkumar aaisa kuch nahi kar saktha, mein bas pane Rajkumari ke liye yahi ghar bana saktha

Maan stops at an open space...

There stands a small tent...

It's decorated with flowers...

Ye Maan Singh Khurana ka Shhhtyle hai...

Maan Geet ko apne bahon mein lekhe jaatha...

There lies a flower bed just made for his flower like Mishty...

Maan lays her on it...

Maan starts removing her clothes...ye kaam toh Maan ka favourite haina...

He covers her with the flowers...

Geet sharam se apne aankhen band karthi...

Ab toh yahi Geet ka kapda banega...

Geet: aaplog kya dekhthe ho? picture katam ho gayi, aap abhi jao, hum agle kahaani mein milthe hai...

Tab tak ke liye mahiii...

Guys I have another story for the same tittle...

"Mere Brother Ki Dulhan - 2"

It's a short story...

But will start it only after finishing Mujhe Shadhi nahi Karni...

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lovely update indono ki shaadi hogayi hai
yeh dev aur pammi ko abhi tak akal nahi aayi issliye phirse aagaye maneet ki shadi rokne
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part 43
last part
awesome dear...
so cute and lovely...
good that creep is chucked out...
lovely...

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