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Posted: 11 years ago
part 39
awesome dear...
so cute and lovely...
cont soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely updates..
some were damn good🤣🤣
ur an amazing writer..
continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
some personnel problem come back after a while
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Part - 40

Brij aur Meera Geet ko doondhthe doondhthe Amritsar jaathe hai aur unkko Geet ke barein mein sab kuch patha chala, Brij Geet ko lekhe bahut pareshaan hojaatha...

Sab usskke wajhe se hi hua hai...

Usskke galthi ka sazaa bechari Geet ko pukatna pada...

Mein aaise kaise kar saktha hoon?

Kaise bahi hoon?

He is very frustrated and angry with himself...

Meera tries to console him and says that it's not only his fault it's also her fault...

Par asli gunegar toh dev haina?

Brij: ye Dev ki itni himmat?

Meera: humme pehle Geet ko bachana padega

Brij: haan

They come to Delhi...

Brij is shocked to see KM decorated...

Yahan kya ho raha hai?...

Hare, apne Geet ki shadhi ki tayaari hai Brij veerji...

Nahiii, aaise nahi ho saktha...

Brij: Geeet...Geeet

Geet ko laga Maan hoga...

par ye awaaz toh Maan ka nahi hai...

Actually Maan iss waqt Geet ke saath hi hai...

Geet: ye kaun ho saktha?

Brij: Geeet, tum kahan ho?

Geet recognizes him...

Geet: veerji...

Geet is very happy...

She runs to see her brother...

Maan: Geet...rukho, hare babaji, ab kaun aagaya mujhe apne Mishty se dhoor karne?

Geet: veerji...aap kaise ho?

Geet goes and hugs him...

Brij: Geet, mujhe maaf kardho, mere wajhe se tumme kitna kuch sehna pada

Meera: haan Geet, humme maaf kardho

Maan just comes...

He is happy to see Brij...

He is seeing him for the first time...

But Brij knows that Maan is Dev's brother...

Geet : Maan, veerji

Geet bahut kush ho jaathi aur kushi mein patha nahi kya karthi...

She goes and hugs Maan...

Maan: haan Geet, tummare veerji aagaye hai, ab toh tum kush hona?

Geet: haan Maan, bahut kush

Brij catches hold of Geet and pulls her...

Brij: Geet, ye tum kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: veerji, ye Maan hai

Brij: haan mujhe patha hai, ye Dev ka bhai Maan Singh haina?

Geet: haan veerji

Brij gets angry and he punches Maan's face...

Brij: tum aur tummare bhai ne mere Geet ke zindagi ko barbad kardhi

Geet: veerji

Geet is shocked, she goes and stops him...

Brij: Geet, tum hatjao

Maan controls himself...

Geet: veerji, ye bahut ahcche hai

Brij: Geet, tumme patha nahi ki ye khurana log ladhkiyon ke zindagi ke saath kaise khelthe?

Mere: haan Geet, brij sahi kehraha hai, tum hatjao

Geet: Meera, tum veerji ko rokho

Meera: Geet, tumme patha nahi isskke bhai ne mere saath kya kya kiya hai

Geet: mein sab jaanthi hoon Meera, par ye maan hai, Dev nahi, aur inhonne hi mujhe uss Dev se bachaya hai

Geet goes and hugs Maan...

Geet: Maan, aap ko laga toh nahi

Brij: Geet, pagal ho gayi ho kya? chalo mere saath, tumme yahan nahi rehna

Geet: nahi veerji, mein Maan ko chadkke nahi aasakthi

Brij tries to drag her...

Maan stops him...

Maan: Brij, haath choda

Brij: nahi chod saktha

Maan: tumne suna nahi meinne kya kaha? Geet ka haath chodo

Brij: ye meri behen hai

Maan: ab ye meri biwi hai

Brij is shocked...

Maan: I mean, honewali biwi hai

Brij: Geet, ye kya keh raha hai

Geet: haan veerji, kal hummari shadhi hai

Brij: Geet, tum Dev ke bhai ke saath shdhi nahi kar sakthi

Geet: par veerji, mein inse pyaar karthi hoon

Brij: pyaar? Tumme patha bhi hai ki tum kya keh rahi ho?

Geet: haan, mein Maan se pyaar karthi hoon, aur mein unkke bina nahi rehsakthi

Brij: Geet, ye shadhi nahi ho sakthi

Geet: veerji

Geet bahut pareshaan ho jaathi

Maan: Geet, tum gabrao mat, hummare shadhi hokke rahegi, koi nahi rokhsaktha

Brij: Maaan

Maan Geet ke haath pakadkke ussko apne paas keenchtha...

Geet Maan ke peeche jaakke chupathi hai...

Brij is shocked...

He is very disappointed...

Brij: Geeet?

Geet: veerji, mujhe maaf kijiye, mein Maan ko chaodkke nahi jaasakthi

Brij: Geet, ye tumme kya ho gaya hai? issne aaise kya kardhiya? Tum apne bhai ko chodkke iss ke saath kaise jaa sakthi?

Geet: kyunki mein inse pyaar karthi hoon, mein Maan se pyaar karthi hoon

Beeji comes...

Beeji: haan Brij, Geet sahi keh rahi hai, Geet aur Maan ek dusre ke liye hi banne hai

Brij: beeji? Aap yahan?

Beeji: mein Geet ke shadhi mein aayi hoon

Brij: beeji, Geet toh bachi hai, lekhin aap iss shadhi ko kaise maansakthe?

Beeji: Brij, Maanji bhi Geet ko bahut chahathe hai, aur unhonne hi hummare Geet ko uss nikanbe se bachaya hai

Geet: haan veerji, aapkke jaane ke badh toh inhonne hi mera saath diya tha, agar ye nahi hothe toh shayad mein aaj zinda nahi hothi

Meera: Brij, tumne kya kiya? Tumne toh apne behen ko akhele choddiya than a?

Brij: par mujhe laga ki Geet beeji ke saath hai, mujeh kaise patha ki Geet Hoshiarpur aayegi?

Meera: jo tumme karna tha woh toh Maanji ne kiya hai, ab toh Geet ko Maan ji ke saath hi hona chahiye

Brij: meera?

Meera: haan Brij, tum bhi maanjao, Geet ki zindagi Maanji ke saath hi hai

Brij: Geet, agar tumme issi mein kushi hai toh mein tumme nahi rokhoonga

Geet: veerji

She goes and hugs him...

Dadi: Geet bete, kya hua?

Geet: Dadi, ye mere veerji hai

Dadi: aap hummare Geet ke veerji hai? aapne sahi waqt pe aaya hai, kal hummari Geet ki shadhi hai, Geet toh aapko bahut miss kar rahi thi, Geet apne bhai ko andar lekhe jayiye

Geet: aayiye veerji, aao Meera

Geet donno ko OH lekhe jaathi...

Brij is still not happy...

He spies Maan...

He wants to know about Maan...

Maan tries to avoid Brij...

Agar Brij ne dubara haath utaya toh Maan ussko chutney bana dega, phir Geet naraaz hogi...

Issiliye behthar yahi hoga ki Maan Brij ka samna hi nahi kartha, haina?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Beautiful update after a long gap


Hope everything is fine now


Last part was :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update accha hua brij maangaya!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh no ab kaisa hai aap ka bhai take care of him dear our prayers are with him

chalo brij aur meera bhi aagaye hai aur bahut mushkil se maan bhi gaye hai shadi ko. Ab maan ko ek aur spy milgaya hai uspar nazar rakhne keliye😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
after a long tym...
really nice update...chutney part really good😆..
continue soon...aur is bar jaldi update dena😈
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: -indu-

Beautiful update after a long gap


Hope everything is fine now


Last part was :D

yes, life is returning to normal...here I'm back...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part - 41

That evening...

Maan comes to the OH to see Geet...

Brij sees Maan entering the Oh...

He follows him...

As usual Maan Geet ke kamre mein hi jaatha...

Brij gets very angry...

Ye Geet ke kamre mein kya karne jaa raha hai?

Maan andar jaakke darwaza band kartha...

Brij runs to stop him...

But Meera who had been following him stops him...

Meera: Brij, ye tum kya kar rahe ho?

Brij: Meera, woh...Maan Singh yahan aaya hai

Meera: haan, meinne bhi dekha hai ussko

Brij: woh Geet ke kamre mein chala gaya

Meera: toh?

Brij: Meera, Geet meri behen hai

Meera: ye usska ghar hai, woh jahan bhi jaasaktha

Brij: kya?

Meera: haan, tum bhool gaye ho kya? hum yahan ke mehmaan hai

Brij: ye ghar usska hoga par Geet abhi bhi meri behen hai

Meera: aur Geet usski honewali biwi bhi hai

Brij: par ab tak shadhi nahi hui haina?

Meera: tum kyun itna chintha katrthe ho? Geet Maan ko bahut pyaar karthi hai

Brij: woh toh pagal ho gayi hai

Meera: nahi, mujhe lagtha hai ki tum pagal ho gaye ho

Brij: kya?

Meera: tumne dekha nahi Geet ke aakhon mein Maan ke liye pyaar?

Brij: ye sab bakwaas hai

Meera: toh hummara pyaar bhi bakwaas hai kya?

Brij: hum ek dusre ko 20 saal se jaanthe hai

Meera: 20 saal ho ya 20 din? Pyaar toh pyaar hi hotha haina

Brij: tum kehna kya chahathi ho?

Meera: Geet bahut kush hai yahan, tum usski kushi ko mat cheeno

Brij: tum kuch nahi jaanthi, hatto

Geet ke kamre ke bahar itna tamasha ho raha hai aur andar Maneet apne duniya mein kho gaye hai...

Geet: Maan, aap aagaye

Geet welcomes Maan with a jadu ki jappi...

Maan is surprised...

Maan: Geet, tum toh aaj bahtu kush dikhthi ho, hamesha mujhe bagaathe rehthi ho, aaj kya hua?

Geet: aaj mein bahut bahut kush hoon

Maan: woh toh mein bhi dekh saktha hoon, tummare bhai ke aane se itni kushi hui haian?

Geet: haan, aur mere sapna bhi sach ho raha hai, haina?

Maan: kaisa sapna?

Geet: Maan, aap bhool gaye ho kya?

Maan: Geet, mein tummare sapne ko kaise bhool saktha?

Maan gets closer...

Geet: hare, Maan, mazak mat karo

Maan: Geet, ye tera sapna hai, koi mazak kaise ho saktha?

Geet: ye nahi, woh Rajkumarwala sapna

Maan laughs out loud...

Ye sunkke Brij ka khoon ubal raha hoga...

Maan: Geet, aaise sapne toh kahaaniyan mein hi sach hothe hai

Geet: nahi nahi, mujhe toh apna Rajkumar milgaya hai

Maan: toh mein Rajkumar lagtha hoon?

Maan gets even closer...

Geet: abhi nahi

Maan: kya?

Geet: pehle jaakke godhe lekhe aao

Maan: Geet, ye Delhi hai, yahan ka traffic mein godha darkke bhaag jayega

Geet: mein kuch nahi jaanthi, aap kal safed godhe mein aakke mujhe lekhe jaana, warna mein ye shadhi nahi karoongi

Maan: mujhse shadhi nahi karogi?

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh teek hai, mujhe bhi tumse shadhi nahi karni

Geet: kya? Maan singh kkurana ek godhe ke liye apne shadhi ko rokhega?

Maan: aaj tum godha maangthi ho, kal kya patha ki tum kya maangoge? Agar shadhi ke din tum asli rajkumar maangthi toh mein kahan se lekhe aaoon?

Geet: mera Rajkumar mere paas hi hai

Geet goes and hugs him...

Maan: Geet, godha bhi mjilgaya. Woh bhi safed godha, ye dekho, Maan shows a picture in his mobile

Geet is very excited...: sachi? Aap bahut achche ho

Geet kisse his cheeks...

Maan: bas itna hi?

Maan looks at her in disappointment...

Geet: haan, picture ke liye itna hi milega, kal aap uss godhe mein aakke mujhe lekhe jao, aur phir aapko kaun rokh saktha?

Maan: achcha. toh tum issiliye godha maangthi ho?

Maan looks at her and winks...

Geet blushes...

Brij knocks the door...

Maan: hare Geet, tum toh teek kehthi ho, humme na, uss godhe mein beitkke kahin dhoor chale jaan achahiye, jahan sirf tum ho aur mein hoon, aur koi nahi disturb karein

Geet: haan haan, kal ki baat kal karenge, ab hatto, mein dekhthi hoon ki kaun hai?

Maan catches hold of her and doesn't leave her...

Geet: Maan chodo mujhe

Brij knocks the door harder...

Brij: Geeet

Geet: veerji?

Geet pushes Maan and opens the door...

Maan stares him and leaves...

Brij: Geet, ye yahan kyun aaya tha?

Geet ko patha nahi kya kahe...

Geet: woh...woh toh bas yuhi aaye the

Meera: Brij, chalo, hum chalthe hai, ye kaise ulta seedha sawaal karthe ho?

Brij: Geet, jawab do

Meera: Brij, ab tum chalthe ho ya nahi

Meera tries to take him away...

Geet: woh... veerji mere sapne toh sach honewale hai

Brij: Geet, ye haqeeqat hai, sapna nahi, tum kab apne sapne ki duniya se bahar aaogi? Sach ko dekho Geet, ye Maan uss Dev ka bhai hai

Geet: veerji, yahi mere Rajkumar hai, mere sapnon ka Rajkumar

Brij: Geet, asli zindagi mein koi Rajkumar safed godhe mein nahi aayega aur tujhe utakke nahi jayega

Geet: nahi veerji, kal dekhiye mere sapnon ka Rajkumar safed godhe mein aakke mujhe zaroor utaakke lejayega, Maan toh ussi kabar dene aaye the, godha bhi milgaya

Meera: hayeee, kitna Romantic? Geet tum bahut lucky ho, tummare Maan tummare liye godhe lekhe aayenge, par tummare bhai ne toh mujhe phaithal 10 10 KM lekhe gayae tha, woh bhi koi jungle ke rasthe mein, mein toh shadhi ke waqt behosh ho gayi thi

Brij: Meera, tumme toh kush hona chahiye ki meinne tujhe uss Dev se bachaya tha

Meera: aur bechari Geet pasgayi

Geet: hare, chodo usskke baat, agar Dev nahi hotha toh shayad mujhe Maan bhi nahi milthe, haina?

Meera: Geet, tum bahut achchi ho, issiliye tumme sab kuch achcha hi hoga

Meera hugs Geet...

Brij leaves as no one is listening to him...

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