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Part - 37

Maan: dus minute

Geet: Maan

Maan: jaldhi aao

Maan disappears...

Beeji toh mujhe ghar se bahar nahi jaane denge...

Beeji aathe hai...

Geet bahut pareshaan lagthi...

Beeji: kya baat hai puthar? Tum kya soch rahi ho?

Geet: woh beeji, mujhe kahin bahar jaana hai

Beeji: kya?

Geet: haan, ek zaroori kaam aagaya

Beeji: lekhin puthar aapki shadhi honewali hai, aap aaise bahar kaise jaasakthe?

Geet:beeji mere boss mujhe bhula rahe hai, mujhe jaana hi padega

Beeji: tum unsse kehdho ki aaj nahi aasakthi

Geet: lekhin woh nahi manenge

Beeji: kaise nahi manenge? Tum Maanji ko phone karkke bathao

Geet: nahi

Beeji: kyun?

Geet: woh...Maan bhi kuch nahi kar sakthe

Beeji: kya?

Geet: woh Maan ke dhost hai, toh Maan kaise?

Beji: tum pehle Maanji ko phone karo

Geet calls Maan...

Maan: toh tum ab tak tayaar nahi hui? 5 minute ho gaya, abhi bas 5 minute hai

Geet: Maan

Maan: Geeet, Maan nahi, Maan sir kaho

Geet: hare Maan. Beeji aapse baat karna chahathi hai

Maan: kya?

Geet: lo aap hi baat karlo

Beeji: Maanji

Maan: ji beeji

Beeji: woh aapke dhost haina?

Maan: kaun?

Beeji: hare jiskke saath Geet kaam karthi

Maan: haan haan, usska kya hua?

Beeji: kaise aadmi hai?

Maan is shocked...Geet ne baaji se complaint kardhiya hai?

Maan: kyun? Ussne Kya kiya?

Beeji: aap hi bathao, koi Dulhan ko apne shadhi chodkke kaam Karne bhulathe hai kya? Geet ko aaise aadmi ke saath kaam kyun karne dethe ho aap?

Maan:nahi nahi, woh bahut achcha ladhka hai, ussne toh pehle mujhse hi poocha tha ki kya Geet aaj office aasakthi ? lagtha hai ki koi bahut zaroori kaam hai, Geet hi handle kar sakthi, issiliya meinne bhi Geet ko bhejne ki wada kardhiya hai

Beeji: kya? Aaisa bhi kya kaam hai, ab toh Geet ko jaana hi padega

Maan: haan, bas do gante ka kaam hai, Geet jaldhi wapas aajayegi, aap fikar mat kijiye, mein kudh Geet ko lekhe jaatha hoon aur wahin intrezaar karkke Geet ko wapas lekhe aatha hoon

Beeji: toh phir teek hai

Maan: Geet ko jaldhi bhejiye

Beeji: achcha Maanji, mein ussko bhejthi hoon

Geet: kya hua beeji?

Beeji: Geet tum jaldhi jaake apna kaam katam karkke aao

Geet: kya?

Beeji: haan, ye koi zaroori kaam lagtha? Warna Maanji tumme jaane nahi denge

Geet: toh mein chaloon

Beeji: sambalkke puthar

Geet: ji beeji

Geet chale jaathi...

Maan is waiting for her...

Maan opens the front door for her...

Geet is angry...Geet gets in the car...

She goes and sits in the rear seat...

Maan: ye kya kar rahi ho?

Geet: Sir, apne kaha ki koi zaroori kaam hai? toh jaldhi chalo

Maan: tum pehle yahan aao

Geet: sir, mere paas zyada waqt nahi hai

Maan: kya? Geet, ab yahan aathi ho ya nahi?

Maan yells...Maan kitna bhi achche bannne ki koshish kyun na kare? Lekhin DD se hi kaam hotha...

Geet aage jaakke betithi...

Geet: ab aapko aaisa kya kaam aagaya?

Maan: kaam? Kaisa kaam?

Geet is shocked...

Geet: lekhin sir

Maan: hare Geet, koi kaam nahi hai

Geet: aapne joot kyun bola?

Maan: warna tum mere saath nahi aathi

Geet: ye kaise mazak hai?

Maan: Geet, mein toh bas tumse akhele milna chahatha tha, ghar pe toh tummara bodyguard pareshaan kartha

Geet: kya? Mera bodyguard?

Maan: haan, tummare mamaji

Geet: aapko mamaji bodyguard lagthe hai?

Maan: haan

Geet: aap mujhse akhele kyun milna chahathe?

Maan: ye kaise sawaal hai?

Geet: hum kahan jaa rahe hai?

Maan: tum hi guess karo

Geet: KC?

Maan: nahi

Geet: toh RK constructions

Maan: nahi

Geet: phir kahan?

Maan: socho, mein bhi dekhtah hoon ki tummara diomag kaise kaam kartha?

Geet: kya?

Maan: socho socho

Geet: haan, Gurudwara

Maan: nahi

Geet: nahi? aap hi bathao

Maan:lo aagaye hum

Geet bahar dekhthi...

Ye kaise jagah hai...

Aur hum yahan kyun aaye hai?

Lagtha hai ki KC ka koi kaam hai, lekhin Maan ne kaha ki aaisa koi kaam nahi hai...

Toh yahan kyun lekhe aaye hai?

Geet is confused...

Maan: Geet, kya soch rahi ho? aao, sab hummare liye intrezaar karthe honge

Geet: kya?

Maan: jaldhi karo Geet

Maan opens the door for her...

Geet gets down and looks around...

Maan: aaise kya dekhthi ho?

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Part - 38

It's register office...

Maan has arranged for a registration of their marriage...

Aage koi legal problems aagaye toh?

Maan toh koi risk nahi lena chahatha?

Dev pe koi barosa nahi hai, woh toh kuch bhi kar saktha...

Adi & Pinky are waiting...

Geet: hum yahan kyun aaye hai?

Maan: Geet, mujhe laga ki tum aajkal mujhse bahut dhoor jaarahi ho, toh

Geet: toh?

Maan: meinne socha, chalo aaj hi shadhi karthe hai

Geet: abhi?

Maan: nahi, parsoon

Geet: kya? Mein aaise nahi kar sakthi, dadima ko patha chalega toh woh mere barein mein kya sochenge?

Maan: meinne dadi ko bathadhi, Dadi ko koi problem nahi hai

Geet: kya?

Maan: Geet, pareshaan mat ho, aao mere saath

Maan Geet ke haath pakadkke andar lekhe jaatha...

They sign the papers and exchange garlands...

Pinky: Mubarak ho Geet, teri shadhi ho gayi

Pinky is jumping in joy...

Geet is also happy...

Adi: congrats Maan sir, shadhi mubaraak ho Geet

Adi greets Maan and shakes hands...

Pinky: hare aaise nahi

Pinky Geet ko hug karthi aur...

Pinky: Geet muh kholo

Pinky Geet ko laddoo khilathi...

Adi: Geet, ab tum Maan sir ko khilao

Geet sharmathi...

Maan can't wait...

He takes the laddoo...

Geet: hare, itne bhi kya jaldhi hai?

Maan smiles...

Maan: ye mere liye nahi, aapke liye hai Mrs.Maan Singh Khurana

Geet is overwhelmed hearing that...

Geet toh ek minute kushi se hosh khogayi...

Maan Geet ko khilatha aur phir Geet Maan ko khilathi...

Adi & Pinky leave...
Maan: Geet, ab tum meri ho gayi ho, Maan ki Geet

Geet sharmathi...she is on cloud 9...

She is almost crying...

Maan: hare, Geet, kya hua?

Geet: aap mere liye itna kuch karthe ho, kyun? Meinne toh aapko kitna galat samjha, phir bhi, aap itne achche kyun ho?

Maan: Geet, mein abhi bhi wahi swarthy MSK hi hoon, ye shadhi bhi meinne tummare liye nahi, apne liye hi kiya hai, Geet, ab tak toh tum meri aadat thi, ab toh tum meri zaroorat bangayi ho, ab mein tumme apne aapse kabhi dhoor nahi jaane doonga, tum meri ho Geet, sirf meri

(thank you barry ji, for all those beautiful eternal Maneet dialogues, I can use them in every story)

Geet comes and hugs him...

Maneet passionat hug...mahi...

Geet: toh chalein?

Maan: kahan?

Geet: ghar?

Maan: abhi?

Geet: haan

Maan: Geet, abhi abhi hummari shadhi hui hai, aur mujhe toh ab pura haq hai

Geet: kya? Maaan, sab intrezaar kar rahe honge?

Maan: aur mera intrezaar ka kya hai Geet?

Geet: aap na, aaise hi intrezaar karthe raho

So saying Geet runs away...maan follows her...

Maan: hare Geet, rukho, ab toh aaisa mat bhaago

Maan takes her to the same place where he used to go...to the jungle...

Geet also wanted to come here after marriage...

Maan: Geet, ab toh mein akhela nahi hoon

Maan is very happy...

Maan: mere saath dene koi aagayi hai, Geet, meri Geet, Maan ki Geet

Geet : haan, ab mein bhi akheli nahi hoo, mein Mrs.Maan Singh Khurana hoon, ab mujhe koi dar nahi hai

She goes and hugs him...

They stay there for a while...

They return to KM...

Wapas aathe waqt...

Geet finds a pahipuri stall...

Geet: Maan, gadhi rokho

Maan is shocked and he stops the car...

Maan: Geet, kya hua?

Maan pareshaan hojaatha...

Geet : wahan dekho

Geet shows the panipuriwala...

Maan smiles...

Maan: tumne toh mujhe dardhiya Geet

Geet laughs...

Geet: Maan, koi MSK ko dara saktha hai kya?

Maan: mein kabhi bhi apne barein mein sochkke nahi dartha Geet, lekhin tummari koi baat ho toh mein bhi darjaatha

Geet: bade bade batein karna toh koi aapse seekhe, ab batein band karo aur chalo panipuri khathe hai

Maan: yahan?

Geet: nahi, ghar pe

Maan: teek hai, tum mujhe banakke dedo

Geet: hare, neeche uthro

Geet drags him out and takes him to the stall...

Geet: bhaiya ek meeta aur ek teeka

Maan: meeta bhi hai kya?

Geet: haan, ye lo, ye aap ke liye, aap teeka nahi kathe haina?

Maan: nahi, mujhe bhi aaj teeka khana hai, tum khasakthi ho toh mein bhi kha saktha

Geet: teek hai, mein aapko chaat banakke dethi

Geet kuch zyada hi mirchi dalthi hai...

Maan is not used to such hot food...

But still he pretends to like it...

Geet: kaisa hai? bahut teeka hai kya?

Maan: nahi nahi, bahut achcha hai

Geet: kya? mujhe do, mein dekhthi hoon

Geet tastes one...

Geet: ooohhh,,,,,bhaiya pani do

Maan gives her water...

Geet: aapne kaise khaya?

Maan too drinks water...

Maan: tumne pehle bar mere liye kuch banaya haina?

Geet: aap bhi na? mein toh bas mazak kar rahi thi

Maan gets angry...

Maan: Geeet

Geet runs and sits in the car...

Mujhe Shadhi Nahi karni - Updated
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part 35
awesome...
yeh Geet bhi na...
my God bechara Maan...
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part 36
nice part dear...
oh ho poor Maan...
oh hes not gonna leave Geet his time...
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part 37
excellent...
Maan ko kabhi kabhi MSK banna hi hai...
else Geet uska mazaak udathi rahegi...
where has he taken her?
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part 17-38
awesome updates
was out of town
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Superb update
Story is going excellent 👏

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part 38
awesome dear...
wow so they are legally married...
Dev ab kuch nahi kar saktha...
cont soon dear...
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Part - 39

Geet heads to her room...

Maan: Geet

Geet: hmm

Maan: kahan jaa rahi ho?

Geet: apna maika, OH

Maan: hare, ab toh tum Mrs.Khurana ban gayi ho, bhool gaye ho kya?

Geet: toh?

Maan: toh...tummara kamra wahan nahi yahan iss taraf hai

Maan shows the staircase...

Geet: kya?

Maan comes and lifts his Mishty...

Geet: hare, chodo mujhe, sab dekh rahe hai

Maan: dekhne do

He takes her to his room...

Geet: Maan, ye kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: Geet, hummari shadhi ho gayi hai

Geet: lekhin Maan, abhi bhi pheren bakhi hai

Maan: toh?

Geet: toh mujhe jaane do, beeji mujhe doondh rahe honge

Maan: nahi jaane doonga

Geet tries to leave...

Maan catches hold of her...

Geet: Maan pls, mujhe jaane do

Maan: aaise kaise?

Geet: Maaan?

Maan pins her against the wall...

Looks at her lips...aaj toh ye mera hai...

Someone knocks...

Maan ko laga mamaji hai...

Maan: mamajiii

Dadi: Maan bete, ye hum hai, dadi

It's Dadi...

Geet opens the door...

Dadi: Maan bete, hum manthe hai ki Geet ab officially aapki hogayi hai, lekhin hummare rituals bhi pura honne dijiye, Geet bete aapko beeji bhula rahe hai

Geet smiles and leaves...

Maan is not at all happy...

Next morning...

Maan apne workout ke pehle apne Mishty se milna chahatha...

He heads to the OH...

Luckily sab so rahe hai...

Geet is also still sleeping...

She is having a beautiful dream...

Maneet apne HM pe jaathe hai...

Geet ka favourite hill station, Shimla...

They have just checked in...

After the long journey and a heavy Punjabi lunch(courtesy Geet) Maan is tired and he takes a little nap...

But Geet is very excited...

She takes a stroll out, in the garden, enjoying the cool breeze...

She comes back and finds Maan sleeping...

She then decides not to disturb him...

She goes and takes a shower...

She comes back and Maan is pretending to be asleep...

Geet ko laga Maan abhi bhi so raha hai...

She is in her towel and is drying her hair...

Maan is admiring his Mishty and couldn't control himself...

He turns and pulls her in a flash...

Geet didn't expect that and she looses her balance and falls over him...

Maan keeps staring her...not able to take his eyes off her...

Her hair still wet and water droping from it...

It falls on Maan's cheeks arousing him...

Geet looks at him and she is a little scared...

Ye toh dream haina? Maneet ka Milan abhi tak nahi hau haina?

That's why Geet doesn't know what his next move would be...

Maan turns her around so that she is underneath him...

He starts caressing her neck...

Geet looses her senses and she hugs him tight...

Maan hugs her even tighter...

Geet closes her eyes...

Maan whispers in her ears..." Good Morning MIshty

Geet opens her eyes...

This is Maan...and this is not her dream...

He is in her bed and it's real...

She had left the door unlocked...

And Maan had entered while she was dreaming...

And he had just wanted to have a look at his sleeping beauty,

but he cpuldn't stop himself ...

Rather Geet had invited him herself...haina?

Phir Maan kaise apne aapko rokh saktha?

She is realy hugging him...

Ye kaise ho saktha hai?

Geet tries to get away...

Maan holds her back...

Maan smiles...

Geet is embarrassed...

Ye meinne kya kardhiya hai?

Geet: aap? Aap kya kar rahe ho?

Maan: meinne toh kuch nahi kiya, sab kuch toh tumne hi kiya haina?
Geet: kya? woh...mujhe laga ye sapna hai

Maan: toh shadhi ke pehle hi aaise sapna?

Geet: aapko kaise patha ki meire sapne mein kya hua?

Maan: tum toh mujhe yahan demo de rahi thi na?

Geet: kya?

Geet blushes...

Geet: par aap toh mere sapne se kaise sach mein aagye?

Maan: Geet, kehthe hai ki subha ki sapne sach hothe hai

Maan winks...

Geet: aap bhi na, aap andar kaise aaye? Aur aap mere bisthar pe kya kar rahe the?

Maan: mein bas tumme dekhne aaya tha aur tumne toh mujhe apne paas keencha aur

Geet: meinne aaisa kuch nahi kiya? Ye toh aap ne hi kiya tha

Maan: Geet, subhe subhe joot mat bolo

Geet: aap subhe subhe mere neendh karab karkke mujhe hi jooti keh rahe ho?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: aur kitna achcha spana tha? Ada adhoora reh gaya

Maan: hare Geet, usskke aage kya hotha ye tumme toh sapne mein nahi dikega, kyunki aage kya hoga ye toh mein hi jaantha hoon

So saying Maan pulls her and pins her on the bed...

Geet dar jaathi...

Geet: Maaan

Maan: ab tummare ada adhura sapna ko mein pura kartha hoon

Geet: nahi...Maaan, ye teek nahi hai

Maan: ssshhh...chup...bilkul chup...

Maneet eyelock...mahi...

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