SS~ROMEO+LAILA -Part 10/pg-24 @ 16FEB2014 - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

whenever u start i'll show u my special responce😆😆



I already start but i didn't update in this thread
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima_FM



I already start but i didn't update in this thread

ok will wait till then
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

ok will wait till then



that one i will update in arshi
not in maaneet
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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 9

(Hi Guys🤗

how are you?

Hope u r perfectly fine with the grace of Almighty😳

calo lets start the story

did u rember where we stop or u forget

if you forget let me remind you I was in the resturan😉

remember aur you forgot😆

i think u all know)

Arnav & Khushi holding their grip tightly, even they r also clueless that they should do.

"What do u think of yourself priness Daina' huh? every one will listen to you, huh" Maan spitted angrily

"Main koi apne app ko daina-baina nahi smjte hu, oh toh tum apne app ko Prince of persia' samjte te ho, that everyone will roam around you" she is no less than tigress.

"main bhi koi apne app ko prince-brince nahi samjete ho, to tum ho jo Maya Memsaab' samajte ho jo sab ko apni gulam manti ho"

"aur to apne app ko Raja Hidustani' samajte ho na! jo pura duniya tumra kadmo main hain"

"Guys plz stop it" Arnav and khushi said to their respective partner

"Don't interfere in this" Maan and Geet said to them, and made themshut "iski toh main" and gritted their teeth

"Tum samjate kya ho apne app ko" Geet spitted angrily

Maan temperature also rise high "Khushi leave me, main apne app ko smjata hu, oh toh main tumhe abhi dekate ho, U"

"U, U kya laga ke rakah hain, tum kya dekayo gey muhje, main abhi dekta hono"

(Isshhh!!)

(Wait guys!! yeh dono kuch deknae ke bare main baath kar rahe hain, but kya deknake baath kar rahe, umm!! Hmm!! ☺️did u get it? ok sorry sorry guys my mind is working all guttery)

All other people in restaurant are watching their fight like an "entertainment, entertainment, entertainment" (kya muft ka entertainment show hain, Food + Tom & Jerry fight)

And other 1 couple are on the verge of dying on shame, they just wanted to disappear somewhere.

Arnav and khushi is giving pleading look to each other plz do something. (Guys my suggestion chaye jo kuch chora na maat guys otherwise they will turn this restaurant in into "fight club") and they took their respective partner outside the restaurant.

(chalo Ab shanti se main kha sakti hu, food is so appealing, yummyyy!!!)

After 15 minutes 4 of them come back to restaurant and sit in 1 table.

One couple who just got engagement few days ago they are dying to sit together, hand to hand. But because of Maan & Geet they compelled to sit opposite of each other.

Maan & Geet are facing to each other and as well as other couple. And waiter brings the delicious food and they start having food.

Some sound start coming.

"Thud" "Thud" (guys I think DJ has played some song)

Again "Thud" "Thud" "

Aranv Khushi takes 1 morsel to put in their mouth but they stop with the thudding sound. (No guys this is not any song)

"Thud" "Thud"

They look at the table it was full shaking they thought some earthquake is happening.

"Thud" "Thud"

And they pass look this is not earthquake (if it is not earthquake, Guys kahi Godzilla' toh nahi ya gaya, oh god iss mey haran hone kya baat hain, jab romeo+Laila hain tab kuch bhi ho sakta hain😆)

And they look at the Romeo & Laila

"Thud" "Thud"

Now Romeo & Laila facial expression also has been changed, few minutes before they cat fighting mode, now passing smileto each other they just thanked almighty.

"Thud" "Thud"

They thought even they are also fine, then where the hell this sound coming from and what on the earth this table is shaking' and slightly bend under the table to see what's happening.

"Thud" "Thud"

The best scenario Romeo & Laila lips are pressed tightly with a fake smile; hands are fisted firmly controlling their rage.

And the worst scenario is under the table kick fight is going on. (*cough**cough**cough* food stuck in my throat, please water. What do you expect else than that. khud toh nahi kah rahe hai aur mujhe bhi Shanti se bhi khane nahi deh rahe hain)

"Maan" "Geet"

Arnav&Khushi shouted to them.

Maan & Geet look at them, they are glaring at them angrily😡

Geet retorted first "I didn't do anything he only started"

"Oh hello! Miss Laila u started first" Maan answered back

"Who hit my foot first, u r the one who started first Mr romeo"

"I will hit you, oh come on, never, You hit first, and then only I started"

(isss! Guys in logo kya hone wala hain, ab tho bagwan kud hi pareshaan ho gaye hain)

"YOU" (Guys )"YOU"

"YOU" (Guys)"YOU"

"GUYS STOP IT, ENOUGH" Aranv & khushi lost their temperature

(yeh toh hone hi wala tha)

"tum log khud bhi kha nahi rahe aur humlogo bhi khane nahi deh rahe, lets do one thing we return back to home it better"

Maan & Geet stopped them and later on didn't utter a single word and eat peacefully.

Still their fighting didn't stop now pair of eyes is fighting with each other.

(Actually I thik their thowring dynamite with eyes😆 , Now this songs is perfect, akhiyon se goli mare😉, *dishkon* ladki kamal ki, akiyon se goli mare😉, *dishkon* ladka kamal ka

In log *dishkon**dishkon**dishkon* karte ray

Till that I am leaving

1 more thing next day i am planning to go to Cine complex for watching movie😉

Bye

Love u all

Fatima)

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it dear:)

superb:)

maan and geet r like nursery kids 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...once again a fun filled update...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima_FM



that one i will update in arshi
not in maaneet

ohhh lets see may be i'll stalk u there to...
n net is solw update will read tomorrow n comment then
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update ..

loved maaneet's eternal tu-tu mein-mein tom&jerry f8 ..

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update
princess Daina n princes of Persia🤣🤣
maya mem sahab raja hindustani😆😆😆
ya dono aise hi ek dusre ko naam dete rahi to ho gaya😆😆😆
love their fighting😉 worst than kids😆😆😆
loved it...

Edited by goldenmoon - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Poor Arnav n khushi.. Thud.. Thud.. leg fight chal rahi thi..😆 They are calling each other Romeo n laila..😛😆

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