AT WORK WITH ME (3pt story) page1/2/4 completed - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: maansee

👏... tusi great ho ...


achcha ji😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

lovely story,,geet counselor and maan trainee..very interesting😃😃..pls cont soon.

thanx I have completed it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: -MSKdeewani-

awesome start di,loved the 1st part ,continue sn!


continued till end
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

rub nd josse speckally hai zamin par hamaare liye bheja ,woh bhet'bift gift'' ho

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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: 9n9i9s9h9u9

poor maan oops no maan it's maan singh khurana'''read in capital letter''


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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply superb.loved it..
somebody is getting a taste of his own medicine😉

bitter medicine😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: DevilClan

Wow new chocolate.. erm.. I mean story. Loved both parts. Hope now mr. Perfectionist knw that HUMAN BEINGS can make mistakes and he can b lenient with his employees. Awesum and lovely story.


very true

and a hearty thank you
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: harshithaaa

nice part

feeling pity on maan
i think geet is doing this to make him understand how his employees feel when he scold them

thank you

very much right

and finally she was successful also
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 1 - Wow...what a start shruti

Loved the idea of geet reading IF stories and can not resist it while going to office...it happens with me while going to home...lol...
So geet is counselor and ready to tame bad habits of arjun, dev & maan...bet all these maan is difficult task...ye to hona hi tha...lol..
Very unique concept dear...fabulous idea


it happens with me almost daily


easy Maan difficult to digest😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 2 - so now geet understood his problme being perfectionist and accordingly she found the remedy to his pronlem...

omg now he is secretary to her...poor maan...kitna kuch karna pad raha hai...
geet made him to taste his own medicines...now he could understand how difficult it was to obey superiors orders withot fail...
omg geet got the list of his secretary's job and made him follow for her...brilliant geet...
Thnx ofr a very long update


assume Maan with a red sling bag being Geet's secretary😆


I wanted to finish it soon

and rather my college net was not working since last 3 days😉

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