AT WORK WITH ME (3pt story) page1/2/4 completed - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWESOME!!this has to be my first at forum where geet wasnt serving as maan's secretary but vice versa 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -lakshmi-

loved this hatke story...

i loved the first part where the 3 entered in uniforms with sling bags... i cant even imagine our msk in that avataar😆... the 3 jobs u gave as per their requirements were fab!

the taming of the tiger was really fun!!! the way u made geet know his problem of perfectionism and then working on it was fun to read... u even left maanu nearly in tears! but am happy that he passed all the tests in flying colours and all r now in praise for him... now thats our MSK...

the ending again was superb... but yeh dil maange more...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely story👏👏



epilouge please😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
Wow!!! 👏

such a different and lovely story
MAAN WORKING AS GEET'S SECRETARY 😆 😆 😆

just fab it is
hats off to ur creativity
⭐️

👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It would b great if u give an epilogue to the story...that will surely n a icing on the cake dear... 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is something totally different I hv read till now. Whole concept was quiet refreshing.loved to see maan as a secretary 😆 and geet bossing over him 🤣

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