AT WORK WITH ME (3pt story) page1/2/4 completed

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JeevanaP

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Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

you completed this...

will read at home

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farzu3008

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

superb love it. very different concept

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Twilightsparkle

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

shruthi ji aap ko ise ideas kaha se aathi hai wow that was soo fab didi i like it much geet reading ghsh uds and geting late yaha sb ki halat ise hai hai lol so maan was tempered man and u know i was keep on laughing while reading

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Ishita Irani

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Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

amazing story

read n one go

maan having problem in controlling his anger

geet makes maan her secetry

finally maan become a happy man from devil avtar

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

haha god geet and her punishment type works give me a break didi haha and maan dng it 100% and here i got some new avatar of geet re he is ceo but he was unble to copup i was shocked and being msk maan with flaws and he was in tears at times god badawali joke tha hahaha soo nice

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

geet was hell bent to iritate him in working but maan poor he it was master piece didi hahaha at last he is back to maan from devil avatar maan needs all that such a mast story haire

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
Part 3 - now he is changed man...geet turned him into normal human being...
now he is attracted to her and asked her for a coffee date...

ufff...ye kya kar diya shruti tumne...aakhir me apna punch daal diya na...geet had a boyfriend already...in my opinion geet ditch your boyfriend...geet to maan ke saath hi achchi lagati hai...

😭read again

it's high time I had a boyfriend

it means she did not have any Boyfriend for a long time

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maaniqra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

amazing story

read n one go👍🏼

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Twilightsparkle

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

at last the end was didi tum ho great i like it soo much shruthi ji maan was flat for her just awesome

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: priyadarshini64
congrats for new story...
it seems interesting...
loved first part...
maan came for counseling and the counselor is none other than geet...

waiting for next part