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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 14

this part is really delicated to preeti dii, haye unka hi idea tha yeh n i loved this idea muahhh dii 🤗

past

She was seeing maan with sad face, who was busy in dressing himself n geet was making different types of face as she too want to be part of function but she too know this, if she will go everyone will shout n get angry on her, which she didn't want as today is spl. Day for aniee n arjun n 2nd the moments she shared with maan today is enough to live now. At that tym sam entered inside room, geet looked at her as she didn't like sam, she looked here n there but with theif eyes were looking at them, as sam was talking to maan who was busy in dressing.

"Maan today samrath is coming to meet u n attend the function too"

"Hmm ok sameera, I have no prob. By the way when he is coming"

"He is on the way maan, will be here in 30 minutes, I think" she said smiling

Maan nodded her head, and then she said "let's move all must be waiting for baby mama n mr. handa wants to talk u something, he is waiting" here this geet looked at sam n thought "papa came here but didn't come to meet me"

"Hmm u go m coming in sometym just need to call addi"

She nodded n left while glancing over geet who was sitting silently n looking sad n in deep thought, maan took out his cell made call to addi, n told him to bring some spl. Gift for aniee, n was leaving when glanced over geet's sad face, who was on verge of crying, n hope to meet her father, she looed at him so brief sec. then down casted her eyes.

Maan came down n was talking wid guests n at that tym geet came out, n hide herself behind the curtains soo nobody will see her standing there, n scanned whole mansion, which was full of ladies, then her sight caught here papa who was now talking wid maan, she was looking at them with longingly wanted to run n hide herself in her papa arms n pour out her heart, but she know this is not possible, she keep staring at them, then looked her siblings who were playing with aadil, all were busy in themselves at that tym a boy entered inside the mansion he in non another than sam's younger brother samrath spoiled brat totally, a playboy maan didn't like him but bear him for sam.

After some tym aniee came, wearing beautiful lehnga, looking lyk a bride, all were greeting her n made her seat on beautiful decorated swing, while she looked up as she knows geet must be standing there looking from there, she smiled at her, n geet to gave the wide smile to her but aniee can sense her sadness n her parents too didn't went to meet her once, in that process somebody else too noticed geet standing there as her face was only visible, she was looking beautiful in simple dress too, as her young age plus maternity adding glaze to her beauty n someone was lusting for her body unaware of fact that she is geet.

Ladies gathered near, aniee n was doing rituals, keeping things in her aanchal n saying something in her ears, in which she was smiling geet was feeling tired, standing there from hours so she thought to go inside for sometym, so she went inside, n the person who was lusting for her got a gud chance to escape too, he too went upstairs in search of her, while sam looked at him gng upstairs n smirked evilly. N went behind him.

Geet was pacing in room, when heard some footsteps but ignore thinking must be maan as only maan come in his wing, so she keep moving here n there in room, but slowly two hands slide in her waist, which make her jump, as she knows maan's touch how can she forget his touch, n in horror she shouted n came out the grips of man, only to see unknown person that too in her room, then she thought he must be searching for someone, so asked meekly "whom u r searching" he smiled evilly n said in hush n lusty way "to u only sweetheart" she was feeling disgusted n wanted to go from there when he held her wrist tightly n pulled her with force toward himself in this way she hold her stomach soo tightly but as her body crashed wid him, she started feeling pain, but was wrangling in his arms which was tightly holding her n now he throwed her duppata harshly on floor n she was trying to shove his hand from her body, which was getting difficult for her as she is weak from mentally n physically both n at last she started screaming n crying, where he started kissing her neck, collarbone, n her bulged part of blossom above her dress, biting it harshly, she was shouting continuously but as there soo much sound that nobody heard her cry, he was shoving his hand regularly but she was weak n front on him, he was pissed off her struggling n at last he pushed her to bed with thud making her scream in pain loudly n she was in pain now, she started crying holding her stomach, when he come n opening his shirt n started kissing her while holding her both hands above her head n keeping some pressure over her body, she was losing her consciousness, but struggling with him, he was about to tear her dress, when maan n sam came in room.

Maan shouted angrily "samrath" yes he is brother of sam.

Samrath looked at maan, n leave geet, while geet was losing her every bit of energy, ran toward maan n hugged him tightly while sobbing but sam jerked her from maan n glared her n said angrily "u cheap girl be away from my maan"

Geet looked at him with hope bt seeing no reaction from him she ran toward door, where arjun was standing, as he came to take geet downstairs for doing some rituals as his sister not the DIL of this house. She hugged him tightly while sobbing hard n fainted in his arm while holding her stomach.

Maan ran toward her n tried to take her in his arm, but arjun showed him hand to stop n scooped her in his arm n placed her on bed n called doctor immediately.

Samrath was scared as he was catches red handed but to save himself he make pity face n put all blame on geet

"Maan, I was not at fault, she was the one who, who called me from balcony, n when I asked her y she called me she started kissing me, n saying she like me in 1st look only" maan looked at him then geet who was lying on bed.

Before maan could say anything sam interrupted n took her brother side n said disgustingly looking at her n making pity face "see maan, her real colors, how innocent she is, she is truly a cheap gal that's y her parents throwed her out of their house must have been with many boys, when she is not getting satisfaction from u, she used my innocent brother, how bitch she is carrying ur child but wanted to have s** with my brother, don't know how impure she is must have slept with many mans" she said with pure disgust while looking at geet. Maan was looking at her with fire speaking eyes, just wanted to eat her alive.

When sam looked at maan's angry face she winked at samrath n then plotted her another game, n said what which took floor from maan's foot n looked at her. Maan, I think she is destroying ur sister life too, see how arjun is taking care of her, when he should be with her wife, but he is here with geet, this cheap n bitch girl" n that was enough

Thud***************thud***********thud


Sam was holding her both cheeks with her both hand n looking at trio, that was maan, aniee n arjun who has slapped her for her bakwash

"How dare u sam to blame the relation of arjun n geet, they are not like u" said angry aniee, who came to look for geet as arjun didn't showed up with her n she too want that ritual must be done by her so she came here with jenny. N hearing sam's words her blood boiled.

Arjun saw aniee who was angry n her breathing too was fast soo, he took her out by saying lie that geet is ok, she is sleeping n jenny took her away while arjun said slowly in maan's ear "maan, I know u hate her, but plzz don't let anyone point on her character u too know, she will never think about any other men other than u in her life, maan fought for her dignity today, for the name sake relation which u both share husband wife don't let people don't doubt at the purest relation of marriage plzzz." He left saying this.

Sam looked at maan with fire spitting eyes n said "how dare to slap me maan" maan looked at her then went near geet n looked at her n then came back n pulled the collar of samrath who has again weared her shirt n punched in tightly that his nose that started bleeding, n sam shouted at maan holding his collar "how dare to punch my brother maan" maan took her hand removed from her collar n pushed her aside n shouted "how dare he to touch my wife, to play with her dignity, to play with her life, u know na she is gng to become mother n u manhandled her, see she is pain now, if anything will happen to her then I will kill u mr. samrath khanna, n punched him again on his stomach tightly that he yelled in pain" sam who was trying to remove maan's grip from samrath collar also got hurt in sense to save her brother, n at last maan roared "just get lost from here sammera otherwise I will don't think for a sec about u that u r a girl" sam looked at him angrily n harshly remove his grip n shouted "don't forget ur about our deal maan".

Precap- kaun sa deal kaesa deal socho socho, n abi bht kuch bakki h next chap me 😊, or jutte chapaall du kya samrath n sam dono ko J😊

Prachi in devil mode 😈


actually m enjoying writing this part n what about u all


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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Part 15

Past

"Maan don't forget about deal" sam said angrily, n smiled evilly but her smrik gone when she heard maan saying "don't try to blackmail sam, u know if I can do anything for u n this deal, then it won't take a single minute to take everything back from u, n in our deal, there were no clause that u will do anything to hurt my wife, harm my child" maan roared angrily, while samrath went away from there, sam said laughing while keeping her hand on maan shoulder "maan , maan don't forget ur sins, more than me u have given her pain, done worst with her, ab bolo"

"I know what I have done with my wife, u don't need to teach me n tell me, understand, n rahi baat deal ki I never broke it, n if u try to broke it, that day u will meet real MSK n from that day ur life will run like my wish" sam know if she will go extent to make him angry, anything can happen n her lies will be out. Before maan n sam discussion go further doctor come to check geet n maan glanced at sammera, n she left, doc said maan too wait outside n she checked geet, maan was pacing here n there when arjun came running there n asked in worried voice "hows she", n looked at maan tensed face maan hugged him tightly, he know he can share his pain n everything wid only arjun but now days he is angry with him for his sins, for giving soo much pain to a small girl, who is innocent, they parted from hug n maan said in cracked voice "she will be all ri8 na arjun, n babies, if anything will happen to her, I won't be able to forgive arjun" at that tym doc. came out with serious face, maan rushed toward her n asked "doc. how is my geet".

Doc. looked at him then arjun said "plzzz tell doc. is she n babies are ok", then doc said "1st u both calm down n mr. khurana as I said earlier she is not prepared to carry baby, but u didn't heard my suggestion, n u all are also not taking care of her health, she need gud diet, energy n most imp. Tension free pregnancy otherwise, there is danger of her life n babies too mr.khurana. n after what today happened she must be broken from inside n the force which was use to handle her was soo much that she had some pain in her stomach, if ri8 treatment was not given her on tym, then we were unable to save babies, maan m ur family doc, from decades n I will suggest u, take care of her she is soo small maan, just 18 years n she is weak physically comparison to other gals of her age, she didn't have food on tym , n more over her dress is quite uncomfortable looks, Isn't she said to have new onces, n more thing I have noticed maan, she is not bubbly like other girls, she used to mum mostly n in her back check-up when I asked about u she was numb n more she didn't showed any fear or happiness of carrying twins, while mostly girls show her fear n happiness both, maan take care of her n her diets she need to gain some wait otherwise, it's gonna difficult for her to carry" doc. said every possibily to them describe new medicines for her as from fear she is having temp.

She left n maan moved to her rooms while arjun left downward were function was still gng, aniee asked him with eyes about geet n she assured her, as he know he can't say all thing to her n give her tension too. All were enjoying function at that tym sneha called sam who was talking wid her brother n said her to do godbharae of aniee, on which aniee denied softly as she don't want to see her too but sneha forced her, she smiled fakely at aniee n took coconut n was about to put in aniee aanchal when a lady hand hold her n stopped her by glancing at her. Aniee jumped in joy to see her n screamed loudly "I missed u soo much dadi maa" n hugged her tightly when dadi maa said softly "I too missed my bacha"

n kissed on her forehead n then took coconut fron sam hand n put it on aniee aanchal n blessed her, but saying sweet words gifted her beautiful kangan, n blessed her n her child n looked angrily at sneha who was shivering to see her mother-in-law, yes every khurana fear from her, as she is lady of rule n regulations, but yet sweet n lovable but as still don't bear single mistake of anyone, she is SAVITRI DEVI ALOK KHURANA. She said in slow but yet dangerous voice to senha "after function come in my room bahu" she nodded n touched her feet while all youngsters touched her feet, at tym that an old man came n said "oohho savitri, u started now itself, now we are here u can take it some other tym" dadi nodded to her husband n aniee screamed again in joy "dadu I missed u too" he too came near her n kissed n said "me too princess" soo he is our dadu MR. ALOK SINGH KHURANA,

chairman of khurana industries, a proud father, grandfather, always encouraged his children n maan is his best pota as he established his own business on his own without any help.

All took blessing from dadi maa n dadu, n now all riyuals were gng according to dadi maa, in mean tym dadi maa inquired about maan from dev, n he said he is in his room, so dadi n dadu left to see their laddla pota.

Maan was caressing her face while changing the cold water bandage on her forehead, n looking at her situation n marks which was given by samrath n his blood was boiling, how much he gave her pain but never wanted to give this type of pain to her, he know how pure n innocent she is, never looked at anyone else, he is the only man of her life who touched her. N how can anyone ever think about her n arjun, he knows how much she love him as a brother, how arjun has filled her life of a place of big brother n care for her, he knows today she was sad n standing on corridor looking at function n more than function at her father who didn't care a dam for her.

He went near her wardrobe searched something n take out a losse nighty which was brought by aniee n arjun for her. Was about to close the door when saw his dadi maa n dada ji standing he hugged dadu soo tightly he is the only person in KM who understand him n love him so much, n cried like a small kid n said "where were u both how much I missed u both" while hugging dadi maa. N then touched their feet, while dadi maa eye caught the vision of geet who was lying on bed n dadi asked lil angrily 1st "maan, did nobody taught ur wife, how to behave there is function gng of her sister-in-law n she is sleeping" maan looked painfully at dadi maan, how can he say nobody allowed her, if they have allowed her this tym doesn't have happened, while dadi maa marched toward her in full mood to take her class, then looked at pale face with cold water bandage n cute baby bump, n she looked at maan with twinkling eyes n asked "maan u didn't informed us that my grandson is gng to become father" on hearing that dadu hugged him n said with grin "wow one more baby gonna to come" maan smiled at the big big child n said "no dadu too two more babies, she is carrying twins" hearing that both oldies smiled ear to ear but dadi maa sat near her n asked while checking her forehead "what happened to her maan, she is looking pale, weak n more over having high fever n in unconscious too rubbing her stomach, she is having any pain" maan was caught how can he say what happened then he said a lie "yeh dadi she got hurt on her stomach n having lil pain, that's y rubbing it in her unconscious state too" dadi looked at him angrily n told him to bring some things n also too call servant. Maan did what she said, while dadu came near her n saw her internationally n then said "savitri, look how beautiful she is, u know I always wanted a beautiful bride for my maan, but she looks quite young" n looked toward maan who said "yes she is only 18" while dipping his head in shame n that tym dadu too got angry n said "have u lost it maan, u married a girl of small age n that to she is pregnant, cant u wait for 2-3 years until she become enough mature to take this responsibility, she is herself a child, how she will take care of two babies" he said angrily while dadi signalled him to be silent as geet was stirring hearing loud voice n was fearing in her unconscious state too.

Dadi told servants to make kadda n how to make it n then looked at maan who was holding her nighty n smiled at him n said "alok u go n get fresh n to coming after seeing servants how they are making kadda n maan u change her beta,"

Both dadi dada left while closing the door n maan went near her n hold her n make her head rest on his shoulder n then opened the zip pf her kurti n with lil difficultly take it out only to see lots of brushes over her body due to tight dress n felt guilty for ignoring her, he made her wear nightly n made her lie again on bed n caressed her hair n keeping the cold bandage on her head.

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Ufff m tired to write two updates in a day having back pain n neck too paining mumma, now need more than 10 page comment of this update otherwise dusra update cancel kar dugi kal, n try to give comments fastly like the way I give updates.

Hope m clearing maan's pov in past too slowly slowly but don't dream that maan will behave like this in front of geet too, n wont her n I know now u must be thinking y geet left home, then uska v reason h jo maine abhi tak socha nahi h n aap v mat socho, I wont disappoint u all pakka but aap log v mujhe mat karna just need ur support n love nothng else

Gn sabko need bada wala comment n those who will read both parts now alag alag comment cahie :P prachi devil ban raahi h but kya karu my fingers my back my neck all are paining soo much toh itna toh haq banta hai na mera to ask.

Edited by geetsmile - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
teaser
poor Geet...
how could the family be like this?
will they ever get their dues?
and who is this lust filled rogue?
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: spvd

teaser
poor Geet...
how could the family be like this?
will they ever get their dues?
and who is this lust filled rogue?
cont soon dear...


deepa read update
posted on pg 10
u will get to know
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45



Originally posted by: geetsmile



awesome poem dii me loved it
i will use it surely


sach mai


u liked it


thanks for that


aur check this wink wink


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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
nice part...glad to see sam getting slapped😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47


wow lovely painful update.. te way geet sitting sad and te way my maan watching her and left with sam was so painful.. te way geet watching te function hiding and te way all enjoying leaving geet in pain, was lovely painful.. te way samrath touching and misbehaving with geet and te way my maan got him and te way he blaming geet and te way my maan standing silent which break geet more and hugs arjun and fainted was so lovely painful.. te way sam ki words and trio slapped her u want it and te way my maan saying how dare he touch his wife was so lovely, emotional, wat ever maan , but his subconcious mind know who geet is and wat she meant to him..te way sam talking abt deal, oh tats why my maan behaving like tat to geet?..i love te update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
nice dear😊

that b***** how dare he touch geet


how dare that b***** talk about geet like ths


wow maan,aniee n arjun slap that b**** sam👏

maan punch that b*** sam*** love maan fr ths


which deal
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
lovely update
Poor Geet god knows what else she had to see before getting happiness
good Maan at lease this time did something for Geet
sam and sam 😆 got slap and punch 🥳
what deel ?????
already waiting for update
please cont ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kaunsa baap aise hote hai k apnehi beti ko nafrat karta hai...disgusting...aur kaunsa deal maan ne kiye uss b**** k saath jo usse geet se door rahene k liye majboor kar raha hai...maan k mann mein geet k liye soft corner hai...magar woh kyun apne aap ko rok raha hai...is he a man...or a coward jo apne patni ko itna zulm sahene mein bhi kuch nehi kar sakta...

magar humein sab k upar ek hi cheese chahiye maan n geet together aur geet k khushi...

awesome n wonderful but painful update too...

loved it very much..





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thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...





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