My Teacher (III) - chap 33 @PAGE 143 // 11th dec - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
God do they do anything,I mean anything normally.Naaa...Then it wont be Reet's Maaneet.They've got to be exceptional.

Geet even after getting the ring,didnt want to be in"bujho toh jaane" mode.She wanted it vocal,the assurance that He is there and will never leave her.
And Arjun cudnt easily voice out his love after her denial at first time.Then he thot his love wudn't need word.But The hurt child Geet needed words.And Arjun begged.[This only one line I didnt like.There's no place of begging in love]
My heart cried at the heartfelt confession of Maan.
And after that the whole time Maaneet spent in each other arms,was pure bliss.Geet securely clinging to Maan,not letting him go,its fantastic.
Their close moments were mesmerising.

But the 'Maan' part yet remained unsolved.I m scared it wud again create major prblm.

And poor Dia actually witnessed Maaneet smooching and the Maan carrying Geet to his apartment!!!!!!!!
Her heart broke into thousand pieces.But she has to gather herself and Satya wud be there with her jst like today.Crying out loud will help her decrease the pain.

Lovely part,Maaneet confessed,ring ceremony bhi gayi,kissy wissy also done.Now eagerly waiting for next part.

Thanx reet for the update.
I hope U are better now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Fantastic...update is like thirst quenching drink after running thro' the deserts of sorrowfulness. glad that they poured their heats out though skipped sharing their past. geet got what she wanted, his confession and affirmation of their relation. no need to mention your excellent penning skills in bringing out their feelings. felt bad for dia but satya will bring her out of this pain soon.hope both the couples stay together now.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Superb Part 👏
Finally Arjun SIR proposed Her 😳
I don't know how to do Long Comments 😆
In 2 lines se kaam chala lo 😆😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Finally...
Both confessed to each other.
Its high time geet should know about her GF.
Edited by cvrocks - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
ye finalyy
awesome
update
just hope sab theek ho jaye
fingers crossed
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Y noone see thm together undr th neem tree...hehe...ok dia saw...bt except dia vikas or other students there r other faculties employees n theirfamilies...its a uni campus...koi dekh leta to they r still tea-stu...

Finally thy confessed...n its really beautiful...geets charging...maan confession...his attempt to put on th ring...their togetjerness...kiss...rain...n nw wtng for empty apartment...geet told abt past bt nt maan...feeling scared...maan took one day frm awasti...what will happen tomrw...where is vikad...

Feeling sad for dia bt thank god u brought satya for her...he realized his feelings...what will b diad reaction whn she will b calm...

I read all th parts lines again of ur IN LOVE WTH ENEMY n BIN TERE:..again...n nw again some dream land...plz tell me will u ever update those r discontinue this...there r nt mch left wth bin tere bt ILWE...so many questions...uff plz update it...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
that was a great update!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48


loved it very much so happy that everything got cleared between arjun and geet but still why arjun didnt say that he is maan it may lead to mu between them in future because geet may get hurt after knowing this truth. Ok for time being they are happy.Feeling sad for dia but her destiny is not with arjun.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
I love ur writing style... n I still miss ur enemy wala ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Congrats for New thread... 👏 Their confession... Both are really crazy for each other..But Feeling bad for dia.. Finally Satya realised his feelings for Dia.. Nice one..😃

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