My Teacher (III) - chap 33 @PAGE 143 // 11th dec

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-bansi-

@-bansi-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Congrats on the new thread..!!

So happy with this update..!!

Finally they are together and Geet has no interest in knowing the past..loved their romance and mushy mushy parts. :D

Feel bad for Dia..but glad Vikas is there by her side and he realized that she's not only someone to him but she's more than that...!! He's in love with her and has accepted her in all ways...love him so much..!!

Loved the update reet..!!

Hope u r doing fine now..take care..!!

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Onir

@Onir

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Oh my long update but I'm loving it all ❤️

Everything... the pain, anguish, hurt, outpouring and venting all the suppressed emotions... culmination of the dream like proposal. 😳

👏 Beautiful description of each emotion... I'm still savoring it all. 😳

Finally there were words flowing without inhibitions and blinding rage but just for two souls dying to be together. He did it with his words and actions reciprocated it all. She was able to vent it all out healing herself and him too.

Loved the mingling of two souls melting in the intimacy and love with nature acting symbolic force to shield and guide them and the song adding the desired feel and effect; all giving it all a complete blissful feeling. ❤️

The past did make an entry though not fully and loops are still left untangled but then there's a hope so strong now that they will be a forever filled with undying love and unshakable trust leading to bliss that they will cherish after overcoming all the hurdles in their path.

There was right mixture of pain, love, melting, submission, desires, blazing passion and suppressed emotions coming out after tending to all of their own past raw wounds and scars that soothed them with each others worthy love, words, gestures and actions.. with final the symbol of love being there existent in her fingers... ❤️ A beauty woven together by you that is a sure shot successful recipe of love that makes me and has transported me to a different world ☺️😳 that I'm still recovering form it ... 👍🏼

The intimacy, kiss and submission to long held onto desires and pleasure was just so needed that I feel you've excelled in showing all of their emotions.. 👏👏 With true solace in each others arms cocooning them in a world with just them leaving everything else out unworthy to enter their "Home" again. 😳

Dia-Satya ... felt for them both but I'm glad that they have each other. I knew this was coming but then it did hurt them both for lost love and pain and anguish of the pain of a loved one.. But nevertheless they can tide over it with their own self supporting the other . 😃

Thanks for this update... 🤗 take care of your health... and continue whenever possible

Edited by Onir - 12 years ago

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lily

@LILY111144

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

o reet such a beautiful updtt.totaly lovd de way he proposed nd geet pouncd on hm.hyee m fida on de prt ware geet s woried about hr saree de first gift nd arjun said mei aur ledunga kiss me jaan.songs r beautiful nd apt as always .dias hrt break bt tym 2 accpt de reality.arjun ne fir se geet ko pura truth nehi btaya m woried 4 dat...going 2 rd again... thnx 4 updting wen u r hving fever.get well soon..😊

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893213

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Amour_Reet

bowing down avi !
pleasure is all mine to make you see this happy !
okie ..i m elated to have your first comment ..here on this thread

aww...u loved the songs ?

but panicked ...you are avoiding one part !!
😕

I pm'd... check dabba... inbox...😃

now no more doubting... let me go back to read the proposal part again...I can't believe I am so mean and shoo'ing you...😆😆😆 but I want to read it...

😳😳

Edited by dqno1 - 12 years ago

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sia-

@sia-

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awesome update
i am a new reader
loved you story
so is the door of past really closed ---------------- or
it may come later ----------- i wonder

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Congrates for new thread, amazing sensual n excellently written update.

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daredevilisback

@daredevilisback

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

"Geet clenched her teeth .".okay .. enough drama .. tonight you need to face me.""
Geet love you for this decision of yours😃
Thank god u decided to talk to him😊
I just loveddd how maan blabbering with himself😆
"Geet did u find the ring ..? umm that's actually mine ..but I want you to have it . oh by the way that's a marriage ring . we should get married ..as quick as possible ."🤣
Maan you are impossible😆
The most I loved about update was maaneet's fight..🤣
Throught out the update they were fighting like teenage lovers...but obiviously there is No age for love😊
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"I am not marrying you ..!

She announced defiantly crossing the arms on her chest ."
"Oh you are marrying me geet ..

Samjhi tum ..!!"
🤣🤣
you have to marry me ..you don't have a choice .!

she mimicked derisively..😆

This part was hilarious...
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And ofcourse after laughing with most funny yet adorable fight THE MOST AWAITING PROPOSAL BY MSK TO GEET 😊
My mosttt fav. part of the update or may be whole ff...
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"but I kept coming back to you with the traitor heart in my palms ."
Awww so cutely he confessed it😳
"kiunki ..jiya nahi jaata tumhare bina ."
Mere toh aankho me khushi k aansoo aa gaye😭
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"Banogi meri dulhan ?"
WOW..WOW..WOW..
couldn't stop myself saying this😳
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She shared her past with him..
" i m always going to choose you ."😊
But will be waiting how she'll react after knowing arjun is maan...
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Maaneet's moments😳
Rain and all☺️
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"What happened .. he groaned at the sudden loss of warmth .

My saree .. its getting spoiled.."
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Ufff yeh geet bhi na romantic time me bhi saari k baare soch rahi hai😆
"He cursed aloud .its no more beautiful than you ..come kiss me jaan."
🤣 maan's eagerness😳

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"Take me home arjun .."
Hayyyeee😳
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At the last dia seen maaneet together ...
can understand her pain 😔
But she've to see what she has got ..
Satya truly loves her even realised it😊..
"Satya realized this girl wasn't anymore "someone" to him ."

Loved it thorughly
Pardon for mistakes typed it from mobile so maybe there r chances for mistakes...

Edited by daredevilisback - 12 years ago