My Teacher (III) - chap 33 @PAGE 143 // 11th dec

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valli30

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

congrats for new thread

finally tehy confessed

but still geet doesn't know arjun is maan

waiting for next part

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ammu5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

congo... superb update. loved their confrontation ...

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CoolHania

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

hello Reet

im ur biggest fan yar

i loved ur in love with enemy

and now enjoying my teacher

u r a verstile and brilliant writer

when i was reading this story's parts after 20 i cud see a glimpse of Reet who wrote in love with enemy

wish you cud complete that FF too plzzz 😳

that too soon 😉

about my teacher i m loving this maan who came here to take revenge of his mother's death but ended up falling in love with his own wife

geet who was rude and too proudy is now guilty to even love her teacher now

dia from enmity to buddy . and thanks for giving her chrctr a face i like pooja gor

satya very nice charctr a loyal friend

hope to see their love story soon

i haven't read ch 27 till now

will read soon

i love the way you give long chrs always with everything describing so perfectly

thanks for updating even being ill

take care

lots of love

Hania

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anaum91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

awesome one...keep up d gud work...cont soon

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karuna_M

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Fabulous update... loved it very much….. ek dum speechless,,, finally everything settled btw them…. . gonna read again 😊

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Madhuri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

wow...lovely part...uff they started with their fight but ended with their confession and so cute union of maaneet...loved it

i loved how satya supported dia when she broke down seeing maaneet together and he realised dia is more than 'someone' for him now

cont soon

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sonai-adrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

he is not going to come back ..i know that ..but if .. ever ..he does ..then i m always going to choose you .

Then close the door to past . I don't want to know anything . past . because if I know .. then I might get hurt ..Questions might arise in my mind . I can't do that all over again what happened with dia . I can't let my insecurities, my abandonment issues ruin my life . when its not only my life any more . I can't ruin you arjun ..i can't ruin us . Not again when I know me too the only one for you . I am , ..right ?

Can she be able to stick with her words when she will come to know that maan and arjun are two faces of the same coin.that time can she be able to choose arjun over maan after knowning the fact that if arjun had disclosed his true identity before then her insecurity and abandonment issues and that related suffering were long healed.been hailed from an orthodox family will she be able to digest the fact that she accused her own husband with false sexual harrasment allegetion.

Leave it... sometime i too become sadist. 😳

The proposal...
A perfect dream proposal just with a fat drop of ego..

I thought the words wouldn't need ..cause you are my love ..but you wanted me to beg . So begging geet ..

But this is what arjun singh khurana is...and for the very same reason we love him this much...hayyy
For me this man is also a frightened child from inside who wants a person who can understand his unspoken words without his effort.just like a baby.

Continud in next post

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sonai-adrica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Conti...

Can pour out his feeling without any hesitation. And for him the person is his child wife.what a Perfect combination.

I just loved their raging bull and matador version.and What a coincidence geet wore red..🤣

Dia and sayta...

I'm Happy that dia saw them in intimate way.it will help her to move on in her life. Sometime our heart and mind starts working in synchronisation only after getting the proof at same time provided by our own naked eyes. it's good that she had vented out all her frustration and insult with her tears...frustration coz she pretty well knew that she can never be geet... insult because she poured her heart out infront a person who didn't even acknowledge the same...she let go her pain in the darkness of night in the soothing embrace of the person who will bring a new day to her with his true love.

I hope u r fully cured by now.

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

i have completely turned into gooey puddle after reading this confession/proposal... it was so beautiful...finally they have confessed, kept aside their ego, miusnderstandings...but somehow arjun not telling her about him being maan doesnt sit well with me...hope this doesnt become an issue as if anant happens to get even a whiff of it, he will distort the facts and create hell lots of MUs... feeling scared ... dia, i felt so sorry for her... the feeling of having lost her first love, rather unrequited love leaves a deep scar, and makes u feel helpless and is really painful... but i hope satya will get her back from this heartache and shower her with all the love and affection that she deserves..
overall a beautiful update..loved it

hope u r feeling better and dont fall ill frequently...we need our doctor to be fit and fine...take care...muahhh

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fffanatic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

beautiful update reet.

idiot arjun thinking of ways to propose her after he was back after thrusting the ring in her hand😆

poor geet.she knew there was a ring but was nowhere near thinking if it will ever come her way and when it came in the most unexpected way. must say it was indeed a very unique proposal.

maan knew about the info dia had passed to geet and also knew that it was the reason of geets confession and her behaving nicely with dia. he is ishmart

their blame game with a pinch of complain pain and anger was beautifully penned.

finally the role of SIR ends😉

arjun going on his knees and baring his heart was dreamy.

geet was so cute when she was concerned abt her saree and when she complained that he ruined her moment by making her wear the ring when she was nt aware.

next part pe no comment😳

I m born to be with you and you are the only one for me.

So if ever past comes back knocking on our door arjun , any of our past ! .. , I promise you , I will chose you .

i will always come back geet ..again and again ..even if you hate me .

the above lines define their future for me.they are meant to be.they may hate, they may fight,they may hurt BUT they also cant help but love.they belong together no matter what.

i could feel dia's pain but i m glad satya is there for her. satya realized he is irrevocably in love with the girl who is standing in his arms crying for the man whom she loves, drenched in rain, pouring her pain out through her unstoppable tears. i loved how he asked her to let go.

waiting for more and more and more.

reet you are a born writer. writing is something you should never stop.⭐️ hugsss🤗