MG FF-Winter Sonata-Thread 7 - Page 62

i just loved whole part

men like dadaji is needed more

thhis was one of the best chapters in this story diii...loved it the mooosttt...awesomesssttt part diii...very very very beautifully written diii...👏 no words...the story of dadima , the way you have written her talk to Geet is simplyyy outstanding diii...i had my mouth wide open till the end...it was not at all boooring ...loved loved loved it

wow that was an amazing update...

Woah. What do i say? Im speechless. 👏 👏
This was way beyond my expectations. I thought that dadi will refuse geet but here she made geet believe that she is a diamond and she would perfectly fit as maan's wife. 👏
Really hats off to your creative mind and writing skills. 👏 👏
I adored the way you narrated dadima's past. And i admire Yashwardan. 👏
Brilliant. Im just loving the way this story is shaping up.
Cant wait for more. 😃 😳

wow di... loved the update truly...
it was not bored at all...
completely inspiring and emotional too...
the way maan's dada g behaved with dadi, loved the way he was with her in every way...
and maan's mother part was also awesome...
so this was main plot of this story as now dadi found another krishna in geet and she'll become a bahu of khurana khaandaan...
brilliant part as well superbly written by you...
though there were no maaneet but i didn't feel that there was no maaneet...
so touching...
thank you di for this track...
when i started reading, somewhere when yashwardhan helped savitri, i felt i am reading innocent love ff... don't think i am comparing or anything... i just reminded of that story...

That was just absolutely breath taking update...

Truly i was very much touched...

though it was zero maaneet, i completely loved the update...

about your inspiration - i remember we discussed about the same some time back and u had given me the reference.. I did read , but not fully that time…

Coming to the past of dadi… you know, it was totally overwhelming to know such people do exist in this world and is no pure imagination..

In an era, where girls had to get married in such early age and get into the family routine, maan's dadaji has been truly an amazing person to have understood the real meaning of a life partner..

Its so true, your life partner should not be a person who abides by what you say or walk behinds you and just loves you… A true soul mate is a person, who is able to guide you through good and turbulent times, a person whom you can share all the things without a fear, and who walks besides you and supports you in all phases of life… a person who loves you for what you are – knowing your pros and cons..

Its so true that in her time, girls going to colleges was a great thing… infact not much girls even went to school… So a person actually understanding the true sense of a life partner and doing everything in his ability for the betterment was absolutely a pleasure to read…

And more than that its so overwhelming coz there has been a person who did this… and that too long back.. thanks ritzy for this… I really felt so good on reading it… and am so happy that you brought such things in your FF..

And coming to maan's mom… that was yet again stunning one… you know there are so many girls who are so self made after facing so much difficulties and going through worst phases in life.. but they never accept defeat and cry over it.. they fight against fate and destiny and try to make the world a better place to live..

I so completely belive in one thing… when u face problems, there is no use to cry over it and sympathize over urself… u should always think about a solution and ways how to solve it instead of sulking… and this is one quality you have beautifully brought in maan's mom and Geet.. am so happy for that..

Finally coming to the update…

This update cleared a lot of things for Geet..

It made her understand that whatever maan did for her in helping out in her studies was more of a right in his love… and not a favor towards her.. and also there was no thanks required for that but her love and support through out their life!!

Geet has been from a place where in girls were not even respected or considered to be in existence.. but dadi just explained her the importance of a wife in a marriage… she made her understand that women are not just objects of pleasure or slavery, but life partner in true sense..

And with all this is cleared her doubt if she would be accepted being a widow..

Lovely update ritzy.. actually there is so much, but am so overwhelmed at this point that I just wrote wat came in my mind…

I know u have been updating regularly, but is a request, please do update the next part whenever you can – very soon.. coz this one was completely a bliss to read….

And thanks for such a wonderful update

I was nevre surprised at dadi's decision about Geet.I knew it will going to be happen

Too good yaar👏

wooww... di it was so emtional wid d whole new persona of dadima & her past... which made her wat she is today... nobody can think she too faced xtreme in her life at young but her husband was der beside to help her & motivate her... dis realy made me respect dat person who fought wid his elders for his wife as dat was right thing & even readily left d title of being royal & made his own name... bt above all he respected women & loved his wife truly as a companion and friend... & d little u told abt maan's mom was also inspiring abt a girl wid nobody to call as her own fight wid society to become someone... & dadaji admired her spirit & asked for his son's wife... d way u showed d strtng by dadi beng devoid of emotions & asking her abt wat she feels for maan... & den d reason for decision was jst superub... she dint showed pity on geet, o jst agreed becoz her grandson loves her bt becoz of her spirit to live & try to fight world too inspite of being frm society where girls r not even treated as human... i hope to see d whole ff as u hd planned wen u started dis ff di... will be waiting for d nxt updt eagerly...