The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 114

Thanks😃 it is a parallel love story

part 23-gosh a botany teacher mishandling a rose made me sad(uska akal ghaas khane chali gayi kya 😡).felt really sorry for geet when she supressed her self so that she cannot get diverted from her goal.she wants to take care of her darji and she thinks that she should not give maan any kind of hope,which does not have a future.i am happy that maan saw geet taking the rose.no more misunderstanding.(phew)

nakul and maan part was hilarious.bechara nakul is just trying to help and in return he is getting scolded.

my fav lines in the update-

Why was it that Nakul was around when he was shirtless both times today? 😆

Kahin Nakul wo toh nahi... Naah... he shook his head and hurriedly went to dress up. 🤣

Khana laga du? Maine bhi khana nahi khaya abhi tak...", Nakul offered.🤣

"OUT!", Maan yelled, "... abhi ke abhi chalo yaha se warna mujh se bura koi nahi hoga. Aur khabardar jo mere aane ka intezaar kiya toh".(ab isme nakul ka kya dosh)

Still it was his duty so he stopped at the door and turned and said "Happy Rose Day Sir!". 🤣

excellent song choice for the update(1 of my fav song)

part 24-very well written.dev and his witty answers.he called naintara as haathi.u showed both their emotions very well in this update.dancing with the kids naintara was behaving herself,innocent and serene.the wishful look which she had when she saw dev with kids was very painful.loved the songs u incorporated in this update.i hope she doesn't go back into her shell after the kiss.

part 25-finally now geet knows what it is like for maan when she doesn't look at him.i really like the way even when they don't show they are in sync with each other.loved the way their story is progressing.

i guess pinky was the one who saw maan the other night.she is very concerned for geet.even though she is 1 yr younger to geet,in this update she behaved like a elder sister.

my fav line in the update-

I just want to walk with her on her path. If I can't give her roses, I want to take away the thorns before they come in her path. 👏

I had a sense about her and her upbringing that she would not eat without making sure everyone else was eating too

excellent song choice.1 of my fav song.

part 26-i just wanted to hug Dev when he was just blabaring about tulips and singing the song.naintara's rejection hurt him a lot but still he tried to make her comfortable.he is a cutie pie.comming to naintara all i can say is she is burning in her own hell and i was surprised when she said lives were at stake here.what does she mean by that ? i love the way they both lock horns.neither want to back off.loved the way naintara asked dev to stay away from geet.naintara is not aware of the fact that dev considers geet as a sister,so i am not bashing naintara about this.

lovely song choice(i fell in love with the tulip flower when i first saw the song )

part 27-a very heart touching update.i was having tears while reading about the bike ride to the bus stop.geet trying desperatly to control her sorrow and maan silently giving his shoulder to her to lean on was brilliantly written.hope darji will be ok.excellent song choice suits the update very well.

my fav line in the update-

Sometimes walking together is not an option but he would make sure she was not alone either.

part 28-a very well written update.felt really sorry for both.i guess distance brings the heart closer.the way naintara reacted when dev said Tum sad death night bol do, chalega..." was just heart touching.this suraj guy is giving me creeps.i am sure he is the one responsible for the burn on tara's shoulder.excellent song choice for the update, suits Dev very well.

thx for the updates,loved them.

Maan thought Nakul to be a gay? Oh god m ROFLing right now. Never in my wildest thought i had thought that i would actually liked Maan-Nakul ka unintentational 'dostana'. Coming to the whole rose day update was really beautifully written. I could feel each n every emotions rush in me. Maan ancipating her reaction n he beaming when he saw all couples happily roaming with roses in hands n was all positive but the moment he saw a girl slapping a boy he was back to the other reality. The detailed fall n catch scene was perfect n added some romance to the rose day update. Though just like Maan i too feared for that delicate rose to be scattered when all the professors were playing with it explaning its symbolism n i was glad too that Geet heard their conversation n came to know what that moments means. And i really thought that at least while giving away the rose to her he would speak but nahi the silent couple they are, Maan even her gestured through his head moments that the rose was for her. And i felt sad seeing how Geet wanted to but couldnt accepted his rose n rejected him outrightly with her nod. But then i cant blame her, she does have some responsibilities on her n now knowing that her Darji needs to undergo an operation, she just cant think of herself n what made me feel for her more was that she knew she had hurt a gem of a person like Maan who had been through her even without they being friends n has seen that side of his which the whole world is unaware of. And though Maan dint knew her reasons and already knew she would reject him but still the pain he felt made me instantly have a feel that Geet should have taken the rose even me knowing her reasons well. But then u simply surprised me by actually getting Geet back to the conference room and feeling the rose n making Maan hold on her with a hope that all was not ended. I simply liked how the update which was all sad n upsetting suddenly had a hope at the end of it. And again Maan-Nakul scenes just lightened all the more n all the hurt n painful parts were replaced by Maan-Nakul dostana with Naul runing Maan's fantasis.

So many songs in one update n every song had its own way to say its story. Well i have never said this but i loved the song u select in each updates to express the characters feelings n make the update more special. Tara is such a child at heart but past has made her so tough n cold. Loved how she was carefree for once with those kids n danced n enjoyed the rains and with those innocent souls around she couldnt help but again dream of a normal life which she had lived once. And must say both twin brothers love kids and made their lady love fall for them some more. And that roop tera mastana song of Dev actually reminded me of Maaneet's roop tera mastana n even Tara's dress reminded me of how Geet had dressed the same way in show. Liked how Dev like a gentleman made Tara sleep on bed and i wonder does Tara have such nughtmares every night? And if yes then Geet never heard them? Or was it that she saw her mother after so long n also started to see that dream which she feels can never happen to her, she is having such nightmares? Or does it have some more stories to it? And Dev though i have started to love him, he so deserved that slap for that kiss. Dream dream mei kuch jyada hi ho gaya bande se.

I really like how being so silent n no talking their story is progressing so much, like the only way Geet n Maan does taking is through eyes n when Maan had the eye infection n Geet couldnt see those eyes which spoke volumes to her, made her think of how he must be feeling when she averts her gaze from him. Loved that moment when Maan overheards her n wanted to explain himself but Pinky phir aa gayi taang adhane. Couldnt she come some time later, grrr. But well i like how she is protected towards Geet n wanted to know the reasons n motives behind sending those notes to Geet by not making aware it was Maan himself who send it. And more importantly loved how Maan replied her n said he is not here to increase her problems n wanna stay just as Maan. That dinner date was sooo romantic in its own way. Maan babu doesnt leaves a single chance to try his luck. He got what he wanted, her serving him n enjoying times with her by filling her beauty to his heart's content. Pinky-Adi ke wajah se Maaneet ki unofficial date bhi ho gayi not bad. And again that cake feeding n ride back home was really a cherry on the cake. Liking how Geet is getting more comfortable with him n doesnt hesitates. Lovong this college romance. And again the song was just beautiful.

So many happenings and emotions in just one update. From finally reality strucking Dev that he has indeed kissed Tara and with her anger replacing the initial shock she goes on hitting him with pillow for stealing her first kiss to then finally Dev stopping her n both ended up being in embrace. And when finally Dev blurts the truth her anger vanishes n anxiousness replaced it for what all she might have blurt in her nightmares n what all he knows right now. And again that anxiousness was replaced by hurt when he says he dint mean to kiss her and despite being angry at him first for that same kiss she couldnt help but feel she isnt worthy of it and if he would have been conscious he would never kiss her. And then finally surprise again when he comes letting him lose against his feelings n confessing his feelings for her and the way he confessed with simple words and like a normal guy would do, i super loved it. No wonder even Tara wanted to hold on to that moment but had to deny his feelings cos of her past. How i wish she would have really said yes giving herself a chance to live n love. And this update just made me fall n respect Dev more for what he did after proposing her. The way he tried to remove the awkwardness b/w them by talking about tulips, singing songs (oh by the way i loved Dev's version of dekha ke khwaab, just made me brust out laughing), getting her coffee and finally behaving like a mature man by asking her to forgive n forget for all that happen b/w them and pretending to be all cool just to not pressure. And even here when Tara should have been glad for it she questioned herself about it being easy for him for letting her go but little did she knew it was all an act just for her. And Pari, she is simply getting on my nerves but then that one call from her brought the protectiveside of Tara for Geet and ended up warning Dev to stay away from Geet but well i felt she was kinda jealous too. But i loved it when Dev promised that he would never leave Geet cos its not his fault of she mistook the relationship Dev-Geet shares. And of course at the end couldnt help but feel for these two souls who are fighting among themselves n their feelings. Complications hi complications hai solution kuch pata nahi.

I really had my eyes wet in this update. I really wonder can there be really someone like Maan in the world out there for real? His unconditional n selfless love and support is making me fall for this man more deeper n deeper with every update. The song was perfect n one of fave too from Taal. I so loved him when he purposely speeded at the speed breaker n put the break so that she can come close n cry on his shoulder without even letting her know. In fat he has always done that, help her silently. And that almost car accident was really scary and like Maan even i cant be angry on Geet for her carelessness cos for the state of mind she is in. Though i liked how she handed him the money for the tickets, true to her character n self respect again and also how she denied his card. But Maan being Maan raasta dhoond hi liya n kept his card in her purse again to her unaware. And i can totally understand Geet's pain when she finally managed to push him away by her rudeness but when she saw Maan getting hit by an auto she couldnt help but run out of the bus leaving all her things n crying for him. Everytime she tries pushing him away she is thrown more closer to him. And what can i say about his care n corcern? He actually got her food that too exactly like she prefers in all this worriness knowing Geet wouldnt think of herself. And if all this was less, he again helped her by getting the best Cardiac doctor for her Darji keeping aside his own pain n hurt of not seeing her for months n the emptiness he felt by her being away. The way he always stood for her in all her problems n helps her silently is just making me admire him more n more. I just hope this love i have for him stays strong just like Maan has stayed with Geet all through. The helplessness both Maaneet felt in this update reached to me n i couldnt help but cry n feel for them. Beautifully written n described.

Dev-Tara had come a very long way indeed and had now changed a lot with each other's presence in their life before and now with each others absence also. Tara who thought she is happy with her life with his absence exactly knew the days n hours has passed without seeing him n his presence in her life and Dev who thought he had succeeded in finally getting over Tara by 99.9% is still going nuts with that 0.1% which is still there. She who never acknowledged the beauty of nature was loving the beauty outside the hotel and he who was a credit taker came to her for thanking her for all the discipline n professionalism she showed in her work and made him a man who is now celebrating his success but still that success dint mean anything for him n he craved for her wish and demanded again n again like a baby and when she dint put her foot down, he again lose himself in her and wished exactly the opposite of it and that did the work for him as she immediately put her gaurd down by putting her hand on his mouth n telling him on to say such things. And at last when she saw that she has given him more than needed hint she fled to bump into her past, Suraj. And try she may Dev has already become a part of her life n is ruling in his won ways. Though the title was running they couldnt help but come more closer n closer to each other by the end of it.

-Sanjana!

maan and nakuls budding love story is very interesting hahahah

nakul took maans GG as jiji and for that maan declares him a drunken

and dadimaa made him drink neem and karela juice and that to three times aday hahaha

geets darji going through bypass and maan helping her first dropped her at bus stand and then sending doctors for him,he truly is a gentleman not expecting anything only giving

and coming to dev-tara ,thier rain dance ofcourse seperately but romantic for both as they live their feelings at that moment

and dev kissing tara in dreams atlast he gets some moments with her but they are gone with slap

i like how simply he proposed her and when she rejects he makes the situation light by joking around though he is hurt

and at last face to face with past now what will dev do protect her or leave her by thinking that she is engaged to someone else

vow,i really like this DAve! So loving caring hope istar finds courage!

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