The Locket (7) MG FF, THREAD 8 link pg 1, COMPLETED - Page 112

avi...you're just making me laugh!!! here maan is thinking of having food with geet but all he Could get is Nakul's company ;) to top it all he's wishing maan Happy Rose Day hehehe... I'm amazed with how you come up with such ideas :-) geet is in her own confusion. her promise to self especially when she can't share it with anyone not even with pinky!! her coming back for the Rose... i don't know what to say. maan is left with some hope now. superbly written :)

its always by amazing feeling when children are around. i loved their bond with the children :) i thought you would continue with the song chak dhoom... another slap!!! what next?? hmm will in n read to find out ;) le avi thanks for acknowledging my comments though i know i way behind your schedule...

pal pal one of my favourites again :) so both are heading somewhere, but where!!! hmm...for the 1st time she accepts to ride with him without hesitation tat's an improvement ;) so she thinks black is his favourite hehehe... i thought he wears black around geet is because he thinks black is lucky for him isn't !!! great update. loved it :)

oh my goodness this guy is something... i loved is proposal which had honesty n i totally understand Nainatara's situation. though she can get wat she dreams for still she can embrace it... this has to be the most painful situation!!! i guess tat's how life is. you can't always get want you want :)

Avi i 'm seriously telling you i have a choke in my throat. I'm again telling you i have once again fallen in love with maan love. i can feel how helpless maan feels seeing geet but still he's helping her. you have done a fantastic job. thank you for writing such a beautiful story :)

Avi... to start with i would say all the chapters till now were brilliantly written please don't take of wrong this chapter 28 is my favourite i thought it was very strong right from the title Running til the end!!! SUNNY... she's sacred of him is it??? I'm sure would find answer when i read further. i can't wait to read further. i guess i spent a good 5 to 6 hrs reading LOCKET today. i have my exam on Saturday still I'm reading LOCKET tat's wat you've done 2 me. ok wil read few more for 2day ;)

Originally posted by: bina_a

Avi... to start with i would say all the chapters till now were brilliantly written please don't take of wrong this chapter 28 is my favourite i thought it was very strong right from the title Running til the end!!! SUNNY... she's sacred of him is it??? I'm sure would find answer when i read further. i can't wait to read further. i guess i spent a good 5 to 6 hrs reading LOCKET today. i have my exam on Saturday still I'm reading LOCKET tat's wat you've done 2 me. ok wil read few more for 2day ;)

Chapter 23 😃
The title was fiery at first , I was expecting Maan's rose day to end in tears, thankfully it didn't 😳 The title suited perfectly btw 👍🏼
Black my favourite 😳
I felt so very bad to see those professors miss-handling Maan's rose, I almost had a feeling that they would destroy it discussing its history n biology whatsoever 😡 but that English prof came on tym to rescue it n unknowingly putting Maan's heart in open for Geet 😳
Heart broke seeing her rejecting his feelings 💔 but she may be right in her view, her responsibilities aren't allowing her to commit her lyf to anyone 😔 But then she came back 😃 Dil hai, k maanta nhi 😳 She couldn't do that to him 😳 Then the relief n satisfaction in Maan's body language was beauty of the scene 👏
Nakul k baare me kya bolun ! 😆 😆 😆 as sweety would have said Bechare Nakul ki to waat lagi padi hai 🤣 I just can't stop myself from laughing out loud 🤣 🤣 🤣 It.Was.Darn.Hilarious I tell u 😃
Three cheers for Avi 👏 👏 👏

Lovely chapter 😃 was waiting for Dev n his I-Star 😃 I so love them 😃 😳
Those bits of songs were perfectly chosen Avi 😃 Haathi 😆 He was adorable wid kids 😳 Both the Khurana brothers love kids n r impressing their respective ladies wid the adorable charm 😉
Loved the way u expressed Naintara's emptiness, her dream of having a perfect family n to have simplest of joys in her life. As usual gr8 job Avi 👏
I knew one of the brother is going to get a slap, so its Dev then 😆 😆
I loved some lines lyk Her sneezing was like a CD stuck in repeat 😆. 😆 loved Dev's confidence on himself of resisting Naintara 😳 😆

First Dinner ❤️
Starting with Geet n her self talks 😆
But Maan had benefits of his own wid that eye infection 😉 with those eyes hid beneath glasses, she must have missed gazing in those love filled mast mast do nains 😉 n she also realized what he had alwayz felt when she kept averting her gaze from him 😳
Pinky's scrutiny wid Maan proved her true love, protection n bond wid Geet, loved to see her so protective of her 😃 Maan's sincere n honest answer to her were gr8 👏
His inner feelings that he couldn't spoke loud were so pure n loved ❤️
The dinner was lovely 😃 actually the cake n the serving scene was more adorable n dreamy 😳 The bike ride was jhakaas 😉 😆