Maneet FF: Lost, Part 4, pg 32 on July 28 - Page 20

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Cherishh thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww...thanks for commenting dear

will reply in the noon, gotta go now😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome yar... :-)
Read all the 3 parts...
It's really very interesting...
Nice concept n different too :-)
Could feel maan's lost state well...
N geets .. Actually bit confused... Tat y she is feeling so lost...
Wen she herself says tat she got everything... Love , nice parents n all...
Thn wat is tat .. Tat she is missing in her life n feeling lost... ???
Finally maaneet met... In an unexpected way... ;-)
Continue soon... Looking forward for more yar :-)
N thanks for the pm dear... N sorry too thoda late ho gayi... Was bit busy ..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

part 2


awww geet's intro and her pov is so nice. Loved it a lot but confused thinking what will be her past that made her like this. Her friends are just awesome, atleast because of them she is out from her work load and is able to smile. loved their friendship and their cute fights, awww so adorable. About geet's family, everything seems good but not that good too. so she dont like her sis and loves her bro to the core. Why she dont like her parents, waiting eagerly to know about it.

Going to read part 3 😊


hey...finally I am here😛😆

glad u liked her Geet's intro yaar. As I said, its going to be simple story and mostly Geet's pov in prologue says it all😳...at least I hope so for now😆

glad u liked her frnds...that was the first time I was trying to write something in the form of convo and i tell u I really was not able to do it, but finally got thru it somewho😛😉...yes happy that she has frnds who respect her feelings and love her.

yep u got it right about the family😳

will try to do for sure😃

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

part 3


So KC got the project and maan is in mumbai. Frankly after reading this part i am in a shock. Till now i thought maan and geet are together in past and got seperated. When you told that its their first meet i was like 😲But happy that maan liked geet at first meet though he is angry lol... and geet i am confused.. Hope to see their meets more and more. I like arjun yaar.. Continue soon anu. Love ya 🤗


😆😆 glad I could surprise u dere...yes its their first meet

Well can't forget the angry Maan😉

yep trying to make them meet soon, but at least for the 1 or 2 updates I don't think they will meet...just trying to lay a base to my story. U like arjun...cool.

thanks a lot for the comments and like Jyothi🤗 and congrats for the job👍🏼

luv ya❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SweetestPari

Awesome yar... :-)


thank you

Read all the 3 parts...
It's really very interesting...
Nice concept n different too :-)

thanks for taking out time for it and liking it...happy u liked the concept...all I can say is its going to be a simple story😳

Could feel maan's lost state well...

really...me happy that you could understand it

N geets .. Actually bit confused... Tat y she is feeling so lost...
Wen she herself says tat she got everything... Love , nice parents n all...
Thn wat is tat .. Tat she is missing in her life n feeling lost... ???

yeah it is...u need to wait to know more about her

Finally maaneet met... In an unexpected way... ;-)

yes they did, though its small..but it gonna bond and connect them in its own way

Continue soon... Looking forward for more yar :-)

will try to update this week

N thanks for the pm dear... N sorry too thoda late ho gayi... Was bit busy ..

no probs yaar...happy that u read😃...hope u like it ahead too😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
part-3

omg... i thought both had a past and something happened in their past that's y both get separated...
but here u showed us their first meeting... and he liked her...
what is happening here yaar?
me so confused... kya karu...
why they were sad in starting...?
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 3
nice part dear...
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats dear for new ss
i know im late to wish to u lol
awesome dear
loved the way maan narrating his life n also telling abt him n his family
his 2 siblings are different
y maan is like this is it becz of geet
y maan hates his mom
loved geet n her frnds very much
loved their bonding
y geet doesnt like their parents togetherness?
loved geet small family
loved maneet meeting
will b waiting for next part
continue soon
thanks for writing such awesome ss
awesome banner loved it yaar
finally read and comment this ss too lol
love
meena😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congo bhanu awesome different concept nice work n I loved first time MSK has Dadu hehe all FF ss oly Dadi but here dadu there
Good continue dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the next update
update soon!!!!!!

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