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The scene at the neem tree gave me hope that now might be they will let down their guard and embrace each other to soothe the ache within, will give into their pain & desire for the other but then it all came tumbling down. She was sorry to invade his place, but in actuality it was their place and hideout where they shared themselves & lived those happy moments. Shows how hazy she has become to herself now, running away from all. She asked him to let go, stood loosing the warmth, knowing what she had lost. So symbolic I felt that she lost his warmth & touch going away from him so far that someone else was able to touch her tainting her soul deeply with unhealing bruises. And he let go of her to later regret that he actually let her walk into a nightmare that will haunt him more to let her live through it even when her Husband was there in the vicinity.

I had dreaded this very thing form the time she had confessed and the time you revealed her new secret lonely hideout - the rooftop. I had feared someone taking advantage of her inability to voice out as none would believe as she had already wrongly accused someone before. Vikas I knew was upto something but this was so horrible, I had a fearful inkling that he would do the most heinous crime in the blind of his own misdeeds & revenge. Even after having thought so when it really was happening while reading I felt a tight noose around me tightening with each scene of that brutality. There was so much glumness & suffocation in me that I wanted to breathe in gulps of air to calm myself down and read further on with trembling hands & shiver passing me. I didn't cry or felt numb, but acutely pained while reading. What adrenaline pumping words & kudos to your ability to make us feel it all just by words.👏👏

You know I'm a very calm & collected person, hardly get enraged but today while reading that rooftop scene of that Vikas torturing & molesting Geet trying to rape her I was on fire, I felt a suppressed rage bubbling wanting to do something to such good for nothing Men. You made me aware of this side of me. Thank goodness it's a fiction and that while reading I was off any emergency. Vikas while approaching her said he Loved her. LOVED!! My foot. What a shame he is tarnishing the word love while in the same sentence called her names. And then you showed his true inner demon that while almost trying to rape her after brutally physically manhandling her he said he hates her.😡😡 How inhuman! When he was slapping her, making her bleed tearing her clothes shearing her soul I actually painfully whispered a NO, wanting Arjun to rescue her.

Arjun actually saved her but this is going to be a nightmare for her, bruised beyond repair, far away from feeling anymore. Vikas deserved that beating, trashing and more but yes Arjun doesn't need to dirty his hands with his blood as Geet said.

The way she clung to him lifeless and he tried to soothe her and internally faulting him for it all, was splendid description. I remembered the earlier part when she had questioned him what would he have done if he had seen her in place of the girl Yadu bans molested. He actually lived seeing her bruised now. So painful ti must be for him and he must be regretting to have let go of her earlier at the neem tree where she was a beauty to be held in his embrace while now she was a beauty marred by blood, twisted in pain, attempted to be raped. She clung to him lifeless driving strength from him while he soothed her & himself. His Baby & Jaan brike her wall of pain leading to whimpers.

The dressing part was so well put together. It spoke of the strong Geet that though almost torn apart & is state of undress yet she held on to her dignity. She couldn't bear his pity. I feel she doesn't want him to touch her tainted self as she feels now she doesn't deserve him, that more than all this emotional & physical abuse staying away from him is what she deserves as a punishment. Su has said she will live... but now I feel she will be no longer living but dead from within numb towards all. As she might not even be able to take refuge in him as he in his anger squashed it all that she had to blurt out her truth ... "Because I don't have anyone else..." and he questioning her cry of his name in help made her withdraw even him from her never to ask for him even if it's her end.

Dia came face-face with her position in his life that he found her an outsider even though she was a girl who could help Geet change but he had that right on Geet. Geets' protest hurt him but I feel now its too late as both are broken.

What I question now is ??? what now? Vikas? With Su leaving who will be there for Geet? And what will others react to it all. I will really want a liberty toi punch anyone if they now even speaks ill of her saying ki she deserved it or that now she will know how it feels being molested, or on those lines. Reet you have made me violent girl.😆😆

What will be now ahead for Geet & Arjun. ??? What will Anant do now? ??

Geet's broken state, and self punishment , longing for might to end & craving for her love & Arjun to soothe her now reminds me of a song

Do naino mein aasoon bhare hai...

Nindeeyaa kaise samaaye.

Ddobe doobe aakhon mein, sapnon ke saaye

Raatbhar apne hai, din mein paraaye

Kaise nainon mein nindeeya samaaye

Do naino mein aasoon bhare hai...

Nindeeyaa kaise samaaye.

Jhotte teer waadon pe baras bitaaye

Jindagi to kaate, ye raat kat jaaye

Kaise nainon mein nindeeya samaaye

Do naino mein aasoon bhare hai...

Nindeeyaa kaise samaaye.

Finally I could remove it all here, Now I can be at peace... phew. Going to sleep now.

Continue soon. 😊

Originally posted by: palindrome

Finally It happened..I was dreading this since I came to know about Geet's new den at Library rooftoop..I have mentioned about this fear of mine in last comment[in pps] too but I was not hoping that it would come true in the next chapter only😭..!!! and I wasn't expecting "Vikas" to do this..He is indeed a worm.😡

I did not cry reading this part but I felt extremely scared..Even my fingers are trembling on keyboard to type all this..I am in dilemma whether i should praise you or not but as i go provided,geet is a fictional character and this all is not real,I really admire you the way you have written the entire sequence on rooftop.Visions that your words have created,stirred my insides and I literally cringed with fear..You are master of evoking extreme emotions in your readers,reet..whether its love,anger or fear...!!!!👏.👏👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏

I released the breath that i was holding since geet had come to rooftop,when Arjun came..and His helplessness,his tears,his anger ,his regret and his inability to present his concern and love through words {I think,he has always failed in it and his and geet's relation is not so matured yet to read the silence,specially from geet's side..} broke my heart...!!!💔 I am extremely sad for both of them..Its not only Geet,but arjun is also punished...!!! I can't put in words why geet reacted that way but my heart understands her reaction..May be it was because she had heard Arjun and Dia's conversation..She had heard how Arjun felt in his words when he found what Geet had blamed him for...!!! Sometimes I feel,Geet wants to punish herself by keeping herself away from Arjun..Her heart knows whatever Arjun is doing for her is not "pity" but she wants to punish herself more...!!! and this distance from Arjun is the biggest punishment for her,may be bigger than this "Rape attempt" too...!!!!!😭

There is alot to write about this chapter reet,specially the initial parts but last part has affected me so much that I am unable to put my thoughts for the previous two parts{union room and neem tree}..Neem tree part was "melancholy and pain" personified..I can feel what geet would have felt when su had told her about her father's concern.Its like snatching the last piece of ground beneath you feet..You will surely fall after that and Geet did...!!!!

And union room part,I want to applaude Dia and Su for supporting Geet with their sharp words..Dia,I really want to be like her..She is strong enough to state the truth and bear her love changing his love's dress...and In this part,I again want to sing your praises reet...!!! If I was at your place{means writing that part},I would have forgot completely about Dia's reaction in this state..Priority was Maaneet and that dress in that sequence but You did not forget to mention what Dia felt in such a situation...Kudos to you reet...I think,my words are not enough to praise your writing talent and I am no one to do this...!!!!👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.

Song sequences and your descriptions{specially in raat akeli} were beyond perfection...!!!!

On a different note,I want to ask you ,are you a doctor or somehow related to Medical field..??? Only a doctor would use verbs like "asphyxiated" and only a doctor would call collar bone "clavicle"...!!! you have used "clavicle"in one of the intimate sequence between Maaneet,,!!!!😛😆

Now I am scared as well as curious to know what would happen next..How "self claimed jury"members are going to react on this real "rape attempt",,,Sometimes I wonder,Geet is enduring more than Arjun because She is a girl..!!! Our so called society's perspective would always differ towards a female and male...!!!!

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

Now coming to The Union room part.

The situation is really confusing.What shud Arjun do coz he wants to help Geet as he is still burdened with guilt of not telling the truth to Geet and simply because he cant see her suffer,suffer alone.And though Geet denied to help but she cant abandon her college in a crisis tho they didnt left a stone unturned to humuiliate her,hurt her.

Then when she walked past Arjun and Dia,it was sheer painful.

The neem tree part was most painful.And again you chose one of my fav. song fm Parinita.My fav. lines-
" andhera Pagal hain
kitna ghanera hain
chubhta hain, dasta hain
phir bhi woh mera hain
uski hi godi main
sir rakhke sona hain
uski hi baahon main
chupke se rona hain
ankhon se kajal ban
behta andhera aaj"

I m short of words I felt while reading the portion.It was like my heart wud jmp out of my ribs,when Geet was sining that with cracked voice.

And then everytime Arjun called her name,then held her hand,I thot they wud talk it out now.
But Geet told to let go and Arjun did the gravest mistake of his life by letting her go and disarter struck.

You stir all kind of emotions within my heart and I jst cant stop imagining how you do it.

Originally posted by: palindrome

I forgot to mention about your wonderful one liners...!!!!

"Because I don't have anyone else..."

Geet{actually Reet} said it all in only six words...!!!!👏

Originally posted by: sweetsampa39

According to my understanding,I can divide the update in three parts.The union room part,The neem tree part and the library roof part.
But the last part was so impactful that it shook me badly.I was dreading this only that after the whole incident of Geet filing false allegation,who wud believe her if smthng really happens to her.And that WORM Vikas knew it too well and used it fully to his advantage.Oh God even I wanted Maan to kill him,but that wud end Arjun's life too.
The way you described the incident,to tell you the truth-"Atma tak kaap gayi meri".it reminded me the pain of the girls who have faced this inhuman act.


Thank God that Arjun came at right time,the time he was cradling her in her lap,tears cant be stopped fm my eyes.The pain of both Arjun and Geet was unbearable.The way she was clutching his Vest,the way he was calling her 'baby','jaan',uff,
Kya iss raat ki koi subah hai?????

Dont even say anything about Vikas.But Dia she proved to be a real "girl".



And about Geet's reaction,in that traumatised condition,anything can be expected fm her.Tho I was also lil taken aback when she protested Arjun to change her,but this time Arjun need to be more mature.This time he jst cant leave her alone coz Geet said so.I can understand how painful it is to go thru the heart break again and again but there no other way because "His Geet has nobody else except Him"
He has to be there for her.

What a commendable Update Reet.U are genious and Kudos to Avi,Onir and all of them who help you.

kamaal kar ditta.