my teacher (II) c index for (III) - Page 5

According to my understanding,I can divide the update in three parts.The union room part,The neem tree part and the library roof part.
But the last part was so impactful that it shook me badly.I was dreading this only that after the whole incident of Geet filing false allegation,who wud believe her if smthng really happens to her.And that WORM Vikas knew it too well and used it fully to his advantage.Oh God even I wanted Maan to kill him,but that wud end Arjun's life too.
The way you described the incident,to tell you the truth-"Atma tak kaap gayi meri".it reminded me the pain of the girls who have faced this inhuman act.
Thank God that Arjun came at right time,the time he was cradling her in her lap,tears cant be stopped fm my eyes.The pain of both Arjun and Geet was unbearable.The way she was clutching his Vest,the way he was calling her 'baby','jaan',uff,
Kya iss raat ki koi subah hai?????

Dont even say anything about Vikas.But Dia she proved to be a real "girl".



And about Geet's reaction,in that traumatised condition,anything can be expected fm her.Tho I was also lil taken aback when she protested Arjun to change her,but this time Arjun need to be more mature.This time he jst cant leave her alone coz Geet said so.I can understand how painful it is to go thru the heart break again and again but there no other way because "His Geet has nobody else except Him"
He has to be there for her.

What a commendable Update Reet.U are genious and Kudos to Avi,Onir and all of them who help you.

kamaal kar ditta.

her pain was numbing ..not only to her ..but to the entire darkness around her .she sat lost in the lap of mother nature singing lullaby to the sinister .. she listened and enveloped geet as she pacified her only friend left , the night ..

trust me at this point only one thought came to my mind that how can reet write so beautifully???

Because I don't have anyone else.. .

It was the softest of a murmur ..

But it stabbed him . right on the chest .

god this line not only stabbed arjun but also each & every reader who read this update.geet is ,i actually don't know how to describe this character.she is one of a kind.she is defeated by life,by every single thing but still she does not need pity.in the worst form of hers she is standing up with her pride.she has so many flaws but still she is flawless to me.

about arjun god this guy will he ever say anything?he is actually a riddle.i just hope he will now understand that his geet has no one else than him & he needs to treasure his woman.

Now coming to The Union room part.

The situation is really confusing.What shud Arjun do coz he wants to help Geet as he is still burdened with guilt of not telling the truth to Geet and simply because he cant see her suffer,suffer alone.And though Geet denied to help but she cant abandon her college in a crisis tho they didnt left a stone unturned to humuiliate her,hurt her.

Then when she walked past Arjun and Dia,it was sheer painful.

The neem tree part was most painful.And again you chose one of my fav. song fm Parinita.My fav. lines-
" andhera Pagal hain
kitna ghanera hain
chubhta hain, dasta hain
phir bhi woh mera hain
uski hi godi main
sir rakhke sona hain
uski hi baahon main
chupke se rona hain
ankhon se kajal ban
behta andhera aaj"

I m short of words I felt while reading the portion.It was like my heart wud jmp out of my ribs,when Geet was sining that with cracked voice.

And then everytime Arjun called her name,then held her hand,I thot they wud talk it out now.
But Geet told to let go and Arjun did the gravest mistake of his life by letting her go and disarter struck.

You stir all kind of emotions within my heart and I jst cant stop imagining how you do it.

Finally It happened..I was dreading this since I came to know about Geet's new den at Library rooftoop..I have mentioned about this fear of mine in last comment[in pps] too but I was not hoping that it would come true in the next chapter only😭..!!! and I wasn't expecting "Vikas" to do this..He is indeed a worm.😡

I forgot to mention about your wonderful one liners...!!!!

Originally posted by: palindrome

Finally It happened..I was dreading this since I came to know about Geet's new den at Library rooftoop..I have mentioned about this fear of mine in last comment too but I was not hoping that it would come true in the next chapter only😭..!!! and I wasn't expecting "Vikas" to do this..He is indeed a worm.😡

I did not cry reading this part but I felt extremely scared..Even my fingers are trembling on keyboard to type all this..I am in dilemma whether i should praise you or not but as i go provided,geet is a fictional character and this all is not real,I really admire you the way you have written the entire sequence on rooftop.Visions that your words have created,stirred my insides and I literally cringed with fear..You are master of evoking extreme emotions in your readers,reet..whether its love,anger or fear...!!!!👏.👏👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏

I released the breath that i was holding since geet had come to rooftop,when Arjun came..and His helplessness,his tears,his anger ,his regret and his inability to present his concern and love through words {I think,he has always failed in it and his and geet's relation is not so matured yet to read the silence,specially from geet's side..} broke my heart...!!!💔 I am extremely sad for both of them..Its not only Geet,but arjun is also punished...!!! I can't put in words why geet reacted that way but my heart understands her reaction..May be it was because she had heard Arjun and Dia's conversation..She had heard how Arjun felt in his words when he found what Geet had blamed him for...!!! Sometimes I feel,Geet wants to punish herself by keeping herself away from Arjun..Her heart knows whatever Arjun is doing for her is not "pity" but she wants to punish herself more...!!! and this distance from Arjun is the biggest punishment for her,may be bigger than this "Rape attempt" too...!!!!!😭

There is alot to write about this chapter reet,specially the initial parts but last part has affected me so much that I am unable to put my thoughts for the previous two parts{union room and neem tree}..Neem tree part was "melancholy and pain" personified..I can feel what geet would have felt when su had told her about her father's concern.Its like snatching the last piece of ground beneath you feet..You will surely fall after that and Geet did...!!!!

And union room part,I want to applaude Dia and Su for supporting Geet with their sharp words..Dia,I really want to be like her..She is strong enough to state the truth and bear her love changing his love's dress...and In this part,I again want to sing your praises reet...!!! If I was at your place{means writing that part},I would have forgot completely about Dia's reaction in this state..Priority was Maaneet and that dress in that sequence but You did not forget to mention what Dia felt in such a situation...Kudos to you reet...I think,my words are not enough to praise your writing talent and I am no one to do this...!!!!👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.

Song sequences and your descriptions{specially in raat akeli} were beyond perfection...!!!!

On a different note,I want to ask you ,are you a doctor or somehow related to Medical field..??? Only a doctor would use verbs like "asphyxiated" and only a doctor would call collar bone "clavicle"...!!! you have used "clavicle"in one of the intimate sequence between Maaneet,,!!!!😛😆

Now I am scared as well as curious to know what would happen next..How "self claimed jury"members are going to react on this real "rape attempt",,,Sometimes I wonder,Geet is enduring more than Arjun because She is a girl..!!! Our so called society's perspective would always differ towards a female and male...!!!!

Applaud for ur commet coz you said everything I wanted to say but cudnt put my thots to appropriate words.But you jst did so.The roof top part was scary,hell scary.

ohh awesome part...i dint want it to end at all...thanku for updating

i really like this story very much...
its like a movie is played in front of mine eyes, really ,the way u write, the way u describe the story , i can feel the pain, helplessness, agony, n in the last update, i felt something wet on my cheeks, ya , i was crying!!!!!!!, my mum asked, wat happened??? r u crazy?? it is just a story!!!

u r such a brilliant writer!!!!!! n this story is one of my favr8 !!!!!!!!!!

congrats on new thread