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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: farie1209

feeling very bad for Geet...poor girl is suffering so much...now with Su gone...she is feeling more lonely...sitting under the Neem tree and crying her heart out...and now after Vikas's deed the girl is broken beyond repair...the girl is broken yet strong and courageous...now, more than Geet, it is the testing time for maan that how he will bring her back...poor girl is suffering for accepting her fault and telling the truth...both the songs beautifully showcase their emotions...had Arjun stopped Geet under the Neem tree..then probably that Vikas fiasco won't have happened...good that Arjun beat him black and blue...

I have really started liking Dia...hope she doesn't change in future...she was right in saying that Geet is very strong girl...Geet want Arjun's love and care,not his pity...these lines were so emotional..
no ..

no'

u wanted me to be punished ..

I m getting punished .

See ..she pointed at herself ..

I m getting punished in every way possible .


I sinned ..

And here I m ..

getting raped ..

Are you not satisfied yet ..


I DON'T NEED YOU SAVING ME

I don't need you ..i don't need your pity ..stop pitying me arjun sir ..!!

Geet broke down totally ..

Haan !'I did ..

I did ..damnit .

I shouted for you ..

Because ..

Because .. because.. her voice lowered down . she closed her eyes defeated by life ..and finally let herself utter

Because I don't have anyone else.. .

Really Reet...you are a gem of a writer...I love every line written by you...


I think its high time Arjun tells Geet about his identity...


Waiting to read your more awesome pieces of writing...

continue soon...


Thanks for all the trouble which you take for giving us these beautiful updates...love you...







thank you dear ..
i loved ur comment before..loved this one too.

thank you for appreciating

Edited by Amour_Reet - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
"I have no one except you"

This one line made me fall for her. If Arjun don't take her back I am as well trying my pursuing skills on Geet. Buck up Arjun. You have a competition now 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
all theese days when i used to give loong long commments you never replied to all the comments, now when i stopped commenting u r giving reply to each comment... my bad luck
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
comment from cherub about the chap 23


first of all a very imp qtn...mind u very important...

HOW ON THIS EARTH IS ONCE SUPPOSE TO WAIT FOR NEXT UPDATE AFTER U GIVE US SUCH A BLASTING UPDATE...PLZZZ PLZZZ TEMME COZ ITS NOT IN ME TO BE SIT CHUP CHAP THINKING AAGE KYA HOGA...WHEN WILL REET UPDATE...THE ANTICIPATION IS LIKE SLOW POISON...SACCHIII

coming to the update...kya bolne ka samaj nahi aata...waise na samaj aana aajkal ki baat nahi hai but fir b...

arjun gave them the only available solution for the situation they were stuck in...geet without efforts understood it was his idea...can relate very well to geets outburst when she questioned him what he wants for and from her...even dis questioned him abt the same...the scene where arjun realises that she is not affected by dis touching him was woahhh scene ... the current can be felt... she came back for her college...they all abandoned her but she couldn't do the same to her college ... so geet like... like arjun cannot see or wish bad for her even aftr the past and the present blunders she too cannot let anything wrong happen with her college reputation... loved sunandas outburst to all the no life only comment ppl in the crowd...she addressed them individually reminding them wat geet did for them and what they are doing to her...

the neem tree scene was heart wrenching...i had the song playing in BG when i read the part...arjun couldnt hold himself anymore and called for her name...her trance was broken and she gave the most natural reaction...the hand holding scene had something in it...i cant put my hands on it...but there was some undercurrent ...

coming to VIKAS...he is once piece of shit...and much more...he only proved it today...he is a certified b****** ...he claimed that he loved her...love my foot ! i felt goosebumps reading that part...i could feel geets pain creeping in me...poor thing...in other circumstances she would have played strong but the numb feeling thinking abt the rape thing and the fiasco she was helpless scarred and numb...loved how she called fr the beholder of her heart for her rescue...and there he came...i loved how he attended geet first ...that shows his maturity ...someone else would have taken care of vikas frst and dem geets whimpers would have made him realize why he is beating the crap out of the person ...etc..etc...i guess thode jyada bollywood movies ka asar ho gaya hai mujhpe...😆

arjun consoling geet was so heart wrenching ... he forgot everything when he saw her in that vulnerable state...all he saw was his love broken and defeated...geets realization that she is his jaan...his life and always was...mahn dat was one hell of a scene...arjuns helplessness to revive her off her trance was felt very well...i liked dis too...well i have been liking her since past may updates so nthng new...i can understand her feelings too seeing them together...

the pain is itched too deep in geet ...i could see that in the last part where she relates everything to her punishment...she has taken her punishment little too seriously that even in that state all she could think abt was wat she dis wat she deserves and her punishment...tht was heartbreaking...arjun was shocked with her sir even aftr all that happened ...but couldn't do anything but get frustrated ...he ran to kill vikas...loved geets concern there...she knows her man well..she knew he would kill arjun...she askd dis to stop him who realizes why geet was so desperate to stop him...

i felt real bad for geet when she realized her only support also wont be there from tomm...but can relate to sunandas dads pov too...

will comment on hostel part...i.e the last part after it is continued in the next part

eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: honeygrape

all theese days when i used to give loong long commments you never replied to all the comments, now when i stopped commenting u r giving reply to each comment... my bad luck




hahahha!

baby ...r u jealous ..!

then let me tell u i love ur sweet comments ..its just that they give so much introspect to the stories ..brainstrom ..i need to acknowledge them !
and i dont regularly reply everyone ..i cant ..!
i can either write update or reply ..but i read each one of them

and u my dear ...most committed reader i have got ..i see u always present when i m to update .
i see u always to like within hours ..
u r dear one hell of a reader not to acknowledge

u dont need to be like them u r ur best in ur own ways

i love u for what u do to me!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
update probably tomorrow .

i will little irregular from monday ! as my duties changed i cant manage time this regularly ..but before i go home i will complete this fic ..intend to do so
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
was listening to songs .. this song came by and all i could think abt was geet...it felt like it came straight from her

Tu Aaja
Tu aaja

Mujhko meri sazaa toh suna jaa
Woh aahein haan woh aansu...
mere hisse ke mujhko rula jaa


sapne tere saare jinme main rehti thi
tukde ban ke mere
Zakhm seene me kar gaye ho

maine mere jaana kyun nahi jaana
ishq tera, dard tera
Maine Mere Jaana Kyun Nahi Jaana

Ishq Tera, Dard Tera
Akeli akeli
reh gayi bin tere yun akeli
main tadpoo'n ya taarsoo'n
Ya chali aau'n main paas tere
itni tanhai hai zindagi kho gayi


baatein karne saari aa rahi hoon tujhse hi
maine mere jaana ab hai jaana...
ishq tera dard tera haaye
maine mere jaaana ab hai jaana
ishq tera dard tera

tu jo gaya...
haal ye mera rehta hai
dil ye mera aaa..aaa...
khud se hi tanha rehta hai

and i feel too lonely yeah...
thats a better place than this
:Emptiness


and I'm too lonely
thats a better place than this
:Emptiness

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=FKER4jMSYyQ[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by CherubNoor - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
dunno what to write...I have tried to feel both of their pain and anguish and I kind of succeeded...but now after this update am sorry but I will be biased this time...
when MAAN had come back for GEET Anant didn't let him meet her...he was aware Anant despised him and yet he blamed Geet...when his mother died he blamed Geet for that why???If he was not ready to forget her inspite of his mother's continuous request what was Geet's fault in that???his mother's time had come if not this way then any other way she would have left this world...yet he came back with the intention of revenge though he couldn't continue with it but still as Avi said before he did come with that intention...
now coming to the allegation part...when he had decided he won't take any revenge then what was he waiting for to reveal that he is her Maan???when Geet came to him to clarify with him he didn't want to say that he was buying ring for her fine but why didn't he tell her that "Geet no whatever you have heard is not true I did no such thing" it means he did not have trust in her love because after allegation and confession he did think what if "he had denied would she have believed me" wasn't he questioning and doubting her love when she was the one who confessed first???
when Geet complained she was not in the right state of mind right???
to be honest when she had done that there was still no hatred for him in her eyes...whatever Arjun had to endure it was 24 hours but after Geet confessed she had to endure the humiliation more than 24 hours...she wasn't allowed to eat to study...
I hate Arjun (I am sorry I am being biased) because he saw that she complained against him but didn't he see that at the end she confessed without really thinking of the consequences...has he forgotten that she is a kid a kid without her parents shouldn't he have given her assurance...he can see her faults but cannot see his own faults...
he cannot forget and forgive her then why the hell is he making everything easy for her???in one moment he is saying I cannot see her suffer like this and then in another moment he is saying he cannot forget the incident and cannot forgive her...such contradictory...all the misunderstandings happened coz of Dia and yet he is not even trying to avoid her on personal front???I am a very possessive person whether it be a friend or family...I haven't gotten my someone special yet but I feel if am so possessive regarding my friends and family what will happen when he comes to my life...so when I read the part where Geet saw Dia's hand touching Arjun...I was wondering if I was in Geet's place I would have died thousand deaths in that moment...he doesn't know what he wants and then says why does everything turns opposite of what he wants ..huh...he knows that everything started with him and Dia being alone in Kanpur yet I don't see him maintaining a distance with her...he is complicated and makes everything around him complicated...
one thing I really laugh at is he said he can never forget the incident and can never forgive her... this one incident with her and puff every thought vanished in thin air all pravachan of not forgiving her vanished in thin air...if Geet is at fault then even Arjun is equally at fault...
am sorry am sounding biased and now I don't even know what I have written is even making sense but yes all this frustration cam out because may be I cannot see Geet in this state anymore...she doesn''t deserve this not at all...and yes I was really surprised with Geet's reaction post the incident didn't really expect her to react that way...as Palin wrote I think may be that was coz of the conversation that she heard between Dia and Arjun...
however nice Dia may be but I really don't like her coming to Arjun again and again...😒 couldn't she talk to Arjun without touching him...stupid female😡
see the impact your writing has on me...my blood is actually boiling...😡
please keep up the good work...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: CherubNoor

was listening to songs .. this song came by and all i could think abt was geet...it felt like it came straight from her


Tu Aaja
Tu aaja

Mujhko meri sazaa toh suna jaa
Woh aahein haan woh aansu...
mere hisse ke mujhko rula jaa


sapne tere saare jinme main rehti thi
tukde ban ke mere
Zakhm seene me kar gaye ho

maine mere jaana kyun nahi jaana
ishq tera, dard tera
Maine Mere Jaana Kyun Nahi Jaana

Ishq Tera, Dard Tera
Akeli akeli
reh gayi bin tere yun akeli
main tadpoo'n ya taarsoo'n
Ya chali aau'n main paas tere
itni tanhai hai zindagi kho gayi


baatein karne saari aa rahi hoon tujhse hi
maine mere jaana ab hai jaana...
ishq tera dard tera haaye
maine mere jaaana ab hai jaana
ishq tera dard tera

tu jo gaya...
haal ye mera rehta hai
dil ye mera aaa..aaa...
khud se hi tanha rehta hai

and i feel too lonely yeah...
thats a better place than this
:Emptiness


and I'm too lonely
thats a better place than this
:Emptiness

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=FKER4jMSYyQ[/YOUTUBE]



cherub ...
i m gonna kill u ..go study ..! please !

and yeah i loved the song i m downloading it now
check last page !😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Oh Reet what have you done with this part... I simply can't get this out of my mind. It is like a flowing scene running in my mind... I had thought it will be done with if I type it but No, it keeps coming back to me. Love you for this!

The rooftop scene was so vividly imprinted in my mind that it keeps coming each small intricacies marveling me about your writing.

It was dreadful & painful. I still can feel goosebumps recalling it... I am afraid for both Geet & Arjun will he be able to restore her Mann for her.

The whole scene where he was hammering Vikas soothed me that this is what should happen to all these low life. He was like a Machine made to kill that leech. But yet though blinded in pain & rage he could be stopped just by the painful whisper of his love... STOP. Oh I loved it. Even how much both are broken only they have the strength to renew each other. His soothing her comforting self was splendid. (You knwo I have a weakness for Maan in his black Vest..😳.) She was numb even to his Baby. She responded when he called her JAAN. Yes when she knew he feels her as life, she woke up. And then the dam broke open. 👏 Perfect emotions in imperfect love as perfection is in embracing even the imperfectness of your love then its love and not a passe.

What must have torn Arjun was her addressing him SIR even when so much transpired. She even addressed him SIR when talking to Dia to stop him from the killing spree he was going to be in. That shows her HURT but I know he will conquer it as for him Love is Geet. I loved the line "He didn't know anything about love ... except love meant one word Geet." ❤️ ❤️ Oh that summarizes all.


And when she knew deep down she means his life and he knew that somewhere she's coming back to him even in her brokenness there was the break of dawn... Wow! The darkness that engulfed her from the time Su's departure dawned on her was enlightened by the breaking Dawn... a promise for the future for the hope that even if there's none they will be sufficient for each other. They will here onward heal each other & build a stronger foundation for their bond that even in a dark cloud they will find their silver lining and will soon see the arrival of dawn in their lives as two renewed whole people.

You know what also strikes me after a bit of calming is are you planning for Dia and Satya? 😉 The way he was appreciating her stand even against her competitor.

Also will Su remain with her now to support her in this time?

Oh please update soon... or else I will be stuck here forever... 😊 😉



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